高中英語(yǔ)高考寫作之寫好建議信.ppt

1、Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read book

2、s, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you

3、 learn Chinese. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes, Li Hua,How to write a letter for advice,如何算是一篇好文章？ 覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn) 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，行文連貫，條理清楚。 全卷整潔美觀，書寫端正,要點(diǎn)全,詞匯,句型 （高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）語(yǔ)言地道,連接詞,寫作攻略 1.建議信是向收信人對(duì)某事提出寫信人的建議和忠告。 2建議信有可能是寫給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)

4、，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。 3建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語(yǔ)氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。,常用句式,A建議信開頭常用句式(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖) 1After I read your letter, I am sorry to know that 2I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter 3.I am writing to you for the purpose of - 4. You have asked me for my adv

5、ice with onand Ill try to make some suggestions. 5.I am writing to express my views concerning.,B. 表達(dá)建議（body） 1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that 3. If I were you, I would 4. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 5.I s

6、uggest that 6. You would better do/ not do 7. You may consider doing first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the endfinallyMeanwhile, whats more,C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式,1. I believe you will take my advice into account /consideration. 2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful

7、. 3. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容： 首段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己，注意語(yǔ)氣。 主體段落：應(yīng)該首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對(duì)具體情況提出具體建議或忠告。 結(jié)尾段：對(duì)提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)，要注意有禮貌使讀者容易接受。 注意事項(xiàng)：語(yǔ)言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對(duì)方感受。,Dear Bob, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主題). Here are a few sug

8、gestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建議) As to , I suggest (有時(shí)根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面). In addition, (其他建議). Im sure (預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心). Im looking forward to (表達(dá)愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua,Dear_, You have asked me f

9、or my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙見), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you. Y

10、ours, XXX,假如你朋友Jim是多年的煙民，現(xiàn)身體不適，所以你想寫一封給他建議他戒煙。,Task 1,1.首段：寫信的目的,After reading your letter, I am sorry to know you are not well these days and that you still have trouble in giving up smoking.So I am writing to express my views on how to quit smoking.,2.主體：關(guān)于如何戒煙的建議,主題句 + 建議：意志； 參與有益活動(dòng), 遠(yuǎn)離煙友,2.關(guān)于如何戒

11、煙的建議,主題句： In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _. About how to stop smoking ,here are a few suggestions . In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.,I have read many books and also have searched some information about how to quit smoking. Here are some a

12、dvice I found for you, hoping they may be helpful. Firstly,to give up smoking,you must have strong will. you have to inform yourself again and again that smoking not only does harm to your health, but also does harm to your families. Secondly,I think you can take part in some healthy activities such

13、 as swiming, reading newspapers and magzines,listening to the music. Only if you have much to do, will you forget to smoke. Thirdly,I think it would be more beneficial if you could stay away from other smokers because they may have a bad influence on you.,3.結(jié)尾,I hope youll find these proposals usefu

14、l and I wish you lead a healthy life and be happy everyday.,Dear Jim， After reading your letter, I am sorry to know you are not well these days and that you still have trouble in giving up smoking.So I am writing to express my views on how to quit smoking. I have read many books and also have search

15、ed some information about how to quit smoking. Here are some advice I found for you, hoping they may be helpful. Firstly,to give up smoking,you must have strong will. you have to inform yourself again and again that smoking not only does harm to your health, but also does harm to your families.,Seco

16、ndly,I think you can take part in some healthy activities such as swiming, reading newspapers and magzines,listening to the music. Only if you have much to do, will you forget to smoke. Thirdly,I think it would be more beneficial if you could stay away from other smokers because they may have a bad

17、influence on you. I hope youll find these proposals useful and I wish you lead a healthy life and be happy everyday. yours sincerely, XXX,假如你是營(yíng)養(yǎng)師Mr. Li,李華向你寫信咨詢有關(guān)如何保持健康的建議： 1.健康的重要性 2.如何保持健康,Task 2,Dear Li hua, How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like

18、 to give you some advice. As the proverb says, “No one knows the value of health until he loses it”. In other words, nothing is more important than health. Good health is beneficial to your work and study. But how to keep healthy? Here I want to give you some advice. First, you should have a regular

19、 life: go to bed and get up early. Second, keep a healthy and balanced diet: eat more vegetables and fruits and other food full of energy and fiber; eat as little sugar and oily food as possible. Dont eat food which has gone bad. Third, get rid of the bad habits such as smoking, drinking or staying

20、up too late. Physical exercise can make your body strong, so we should exercise every day. In a word, health is more valuable than anything else. We should do everything we can to keep us healthy. yours,Dear Li hua, How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would

21、 like to give you some advice. As we all know, health is very important for everyone . Without health, its more difficult for us to enjoy a happy life. However, in our life, not everyone can have a healthy lifestyle. To be healthy, we should take proper exercise and have a balanced diet. Besides, ha

22、ving a scientific timetable is also very necessary. In addition, wed better develop some good habits in our daily life and keep away from alcohol and drugs. Whats more, as students, we should not be addicted to addictive computer games, which will distract us from study. In a word, its a good idea f

23、or us to keep fit. Only in this way can we live a positive life. yours,Dear Li hua, How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice. As we know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods,such as fish fruit and vegetables. You should not eat too much meat or too many sweets. Also, you should take physical exercise regularly instead of stud