Module3寫作課教學(xué)案例.ppt

寫作,Designed by Yuan Hao,1、知識目標(biāo) 通過學(xué)習(xí)本模塊的詞匯和短語進行寫作，能續(xù)寫本模塊的課文，能熟練地使用本模塊所學(xué)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)進行表達，能寫一篇與一位朋友發(fā)展友誼的過程的課文。 2、教學(xué)重難點 教師幫助學(xué)生理解難句，并能準(zhǔn)確運用，提高學(xué)生的寫作能力。 3、教法與學(xué)法 演繹法；自主學(xué)習(xí)法；小組合作法,Module 3 Interpersonal Relationships-Friendship,The Fifth Period-Writing,Writing,書面表達的質(zhì)量要求： （1）要點全面、表達準(zhǔn)確、語句連貫。 (2）能用書寫體熟練清楚地書寫，格式、連筆、詞距、標(biāo)點正確。 （3）書寫格式、行文及禮貌用語等無嚴(yán)重錯誤。 （4）基本語法和常用句型無嚴(yán)重錯誤，意思表達清楚。 （5）鼓勵使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，新穎詞匯和順暢連接。所謂復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)包括定語從句、強調(diào)句型、倒裝、被動、虛擬、非謂語短語、sothat、和with加復(fù)合賓語等。,注意： （1）仔細(xì)審題，看清題目要求與注意事項。 （2）確定文章類型，如是記敘文，一般用過去時，如是說明文，主要用現(xiàn)在時。 （3）看全內(nèi)容要點，主要內(nèi)容缺一不可。 （4）盡量寫草稿，實在沒時間也要寫一個簡略題綱。 （5）用你見過的句型來寫，不生造中國式的英文。 （6）寫好首句尾句，注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞語的使用。 （7）記敘文注意 who, what, where, when, which, why, how （8）議論文注意論點論據(jù)。 （9）可適當(dāng)使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)和新穎詞匯，但應(yīng)以準(zhǔn) 確傳達意思為第一原則。 （10）書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔也要重視。,高分答卷的主要特征： 1. 要點齊全； 2. 豐富的詞匯 ； 3. 較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)； 4. 較復(fù)雜句式； 5. 語句間的連接成分； 6. 書寫規(guī)范, 卷面整潔。,書面表達常見錯誤：,1. 審題能力差，抓不住要點。,2. 拼寫錯誤、用詞不當(dāng)、搭配不當(dāng)。,3. 對動詞時態(tài)、語態(tài)、詞形變化掌握較差。,4. 句子成分不全。,5. 受母語影響,寫出中式英語。,6. 不能恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂镁渥娱g的連接詞語, 致使篇章結(jié)構(gòu)松散。,寫作步驟： 一、審題：讀懂提示語 高考英語寫作試題一般由內(nèi)容情景和注意兩部分組織。寫作要符合題意，就要對試題展現(xiàn)的各個部分作準(zhǔn)確、全面地審讀和理解，要審清題材和體裁，內(nèi)容要點、人稱、時態(tài)。 二、列提綱：包括選用的單詞或短語 三、組句（用哪些句式，各種從句等） 四、連接成分（連接詞或短語） 五、檢查（包括時態(tài)、拼寫等）,選詞謹(jǐn)記,寧長勿短 talk/ communicate 寧繁勿簡deep effect / profound effect 寧新勿舊 take part in/ participate in 寧細(xì)勿粗 feel sad / feel frustrated,常見錯誤:,1.Give you some advise 2.I just provide you my own suggests. 3. Yesterday fell a heavy rain. 4. Our country has taken place many great changes. 5. Many students against the plan. 6. I will be graduated from the school. 7. There are ninety percent people oppose the idea.,問題:,8. They very like the school. 9. I hope our country will make measures to protect the tigers.,二. 使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔,三. 巧用倒裝增強句子表現(xiàn)力,四. 嘗試多樣化表達方式,一.使用較高級詞匯使文章增加吸引力,強調(diào)句,With短語復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu),定語從句,名詞性從句(主賓表同從句),各種狀語從句,被動語態(tài),作文如何得高分,It 常用句式 It is obvious that 2. It is high time that sb did sth. 3. It is said /reported/believed/ hoped/ suggested/ considered that 4. It is a pity that 5. It is well-known that 6. It +be +time + before + 主語謂語 7. There be 句式,1. Many people want to visit the stadium . 2. The stadium is useful.,Many people are dying to visit the stadium.,The stadium is of great value.,一.使用較高級詞匯使文章增加吸引力,The 29th Olympic Games were successfully ended. It left many stadiums unused,The 29th Olympic Games were successfully ended, leaving many stadiums unused.,二. 使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔,1.we can let stadium make sense only when we make full use of the stadium 2. The stadiums can be rented to the physical company to create more economic profits. They can be the places to appeal visitors to pay a visit.,Only when we make full use of the stadium can we let stadium make sense,Not only can the stadiums be rented to the physical company to create more economic profits, but also they can be the places to appeal visitors to pay a visit.,三. 巧用倒裝增強句子表現(xiàn)力,We should take the Olympic stadiums into consideration after Beijing hosted the games successfully. The 29th Olympic Games were ended successfully. we start talking about how to use the stadiums properly for our daily lives,It is the Olympic stadiums that we should take into consideration after Beijing hosted the games successfully.,With the 29th Olympic Games ended successfully, we,四. 嘗試多樣化表達方式,1.強調(diào)句,2.With短語復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu),You can open them for the public. The stadiums can be used to take exercise.,You can open the stadiums which can be used to take exercise for the public.,四. 嘗試多樣化表達方式,3.定語從句,4.各種狀語從句,我們鍛煉的越多，我們就越健康。,The more exercises we take, the healthier we will become.,5.被動語態(tài),We should pay more attention to the sports.,More attention should be paid to the sports.,6.分詞短語、不定式短語、由with或without引導(dǎo)的短語 Compared with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient. 7.省略句 While you are crossing the street, you should be careful. While crossing the street, you should be careful. 8. 改變句子的開頭方式,使句子開頭多樣化,可以把狀語置于句首,或用分詞作狀語等. Of all my teachers, Mr Chen is the one who impresses me most.,9. 短句拉長 We will graduate from the beautiful school in a month. To our sadness, well graduate from the beautiful school in a month, where we have been studying and playing for 3 years.,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞： 排序關(guān)系 first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least 并列關(guān)系 as well as; along with; together with 舉例關(guān)系 for example; for instance; like; such as; 轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 but; however; while; though; on the contrary，nevertheless, in spite of , 因果關(guān)系 because; since; thanks to; as a result /consequence (of); thus; therefore,because of, thus, for this reason,歸納總結(jié) in a word; in short; to sum up; in conclusion, on the whole, in general, in one word, in all, in brief 遞進關(guān)系 whats more; besides; to make matters worse; whats worse; worse still; in addition; furthermore; moreover,考生作文示例 (五檔),考生作文示例 (三檔),考生作文示例 (二檔),Tips for Writing,Who Where When What Why How,Your friend The place where you met your friend The time when you met your friend What kind of person he / she is Why you like him or her How to develop your friendship,Writing,be kind be honest ready to help considerate easy-going outgoing always smile respect others be a good listener,How do you make friends easily?,Task,假如你叫李華,你的朋友Jessica因為父母工作調(diào)動不得不轉(zhuǎn)到一所新的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。在陌生的環(huán)境中，她因為沒有朋友而深感苦惱，因而給你寫信求助。請你用英語寫一封回信，就如何結(jié)交新朋友給她提供一些建議。 注意： 信件內(nèi)容要連貫完整，條理清楚； 信的開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)； 詞數(shù)：100左右 Dear Jessica, Ive received your letter, knowing that you are upset at having no friends. Here Ill give you some good advice. ,學(xué)生在本篇寫作中出現(xiàn)的錯誤類型 1.單詞拼寫錯誤或用錯 2.時態(tài)語態(tài)的錯誤 3.雙謂語句子 4.短語搭配錯誤 5.漢語式英語 6. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整,作文講評,1. Its time to make some effective measures. 2.The approach to teach is important. 3.Please train the language points which we often make mistakes. 4. I hope that these advices can help us. 5. I think the number of homework should reduce to guarantee the quality. 6. We are supposed to strengthen the points which are important and easy to wrong again and again.,take,teaching,where,advice,be,be reduced,Excellent Sentences,1. We will appreciate it if you can offer us some methods. （王穎） 2. We all consider it effective to train the knowledge points where we often make mistakes. (信佳男） 3. Moreover, teaching method should be paid attention to. （姜雁） 4. Homework reduced, we can do it better and more carefully. （劉松） 5. Only when we spend enough time doing our homework can we make progress. （姜雁）,Sample,Dear Jessica, Ive received your letter, knowing that you are upset at hav