高三短文改錯(cuò)、寫(xiě)作公開(kāi).ppt

Error correction & Composition,Zhundong Middle School Tony Chen,Although nobody wishes to experience failure, failure play an important role on the way to success. Sometime, failure can benefit us a lot. When I failed my English exam three years before, I felt upset at first, but then I made up my mind to work even hard. That failure motivated me put more time and energy into learning English. After find out my problem was a lack of vocabulary and I was poorly in grammar, I changed my learning methods. I learnt a lot from past mistake. Finally I made a great progress in English. Failure really helped you to get closer to success.,短文改錯(cuò)考查點(diǎn),1,1,1,1,1,1,2,2,Although nobody wishes to experience failure, failure play an important role on the way to success. Sometime, failure can benefit us a lot. When I failed my English exam three years before, I felt upset at first, but then I made up my mind to work even hard. That failure motivated me put more time and energy into learning English. After find out my problem was a lack of vocabulary and I was poorly in grammar, I changed my learning methods. I learnt a lot from past mistake. Finally I made a great progress in English. Failure really helped you to get closer to success.,Although nobody wishes to experience failure, failure plays an important role on the way to success. Sometimes, failure can benefit us a lot. When I failed my English exam three years ago, I felt upset at first, but then I made up my mind to work even harder. That failure motivated me to put more time and energy into learning English. After finding out my problem was a lack of vocabulary and I was poor in grammar, I changed my learning methods. I learnt a lot from past mistakes. Finally I made a great progress in English. Failure really helped me to get closer to success.,play sometime before hard motivated me put find poorly mistake made a great progress you,plays sometimes ago harder motivated me to put finding poor mistakes made great progress me,時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)主謂一致,連接詞,介詞,副詞形容詞,介詞,非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞,副詞形容詞,名詞單復(fù)數(shù),冠詞,代詞,8,1,1,Although most people have a family, in their darkest moments many will turn to nobody they consider “a true friend” for support and advice. But what make someone “a true friend”, rather than just a good friend? A true friend will always try harder help. They will be sensitive to their feelings and will not criticize you. They will offer help without being asking and will never expect anything in return. A true friend will put aside whichever they are doing to come and see you if you are in seriously trouble. They will offer their support in your need, as if everyone else in the world is against you. If you dont have many friends, but you have one true friend, and you are very lucky. But remember, if you have a true friend, you have to be his true friend too. True friend give as well as take.,Although most people have a family, in their darkest moments many will turn to somebody they consider “a true friend” for support and advice. But what makes someone “a true friend”, rather than just a good friend? A true friend will always try harder to help. They will be sensitive to your feelings and will not criticize you. They will offer help without being asked and will never expect anything in return. A true friend will put aside whatever they are doing to come and see you if you are in serious trouble. They will offer their support in your need, even if everyone else in the world is against you. If you dont have many friends, but you have one true friend, and you are very lucky. But remember, if you have a true friend, you have to be his true friend too. True friends give as well as take.,8,1,1,Dear Sir, I am Li Hua. I am born in 1992 and I am going to graduate in senior high school. I am willing to be a volunteer in your charity after graduate. I am out-going and warm-hearted boy. I have many hobby. I can also do good in communicating with other. The reason why that I want to be a volunteer is that I can practice myself from the work and I love help others. This job can give him a chance to make my dreams come true. I need such experience. best wishes, Li Hua,Dear Sir, I am Li Hua. I was born in 1992 and I am going to graduate from senior high school. I am willing to be a volunteer in your charity after graduating. I am an out-going and warm-hearted boy. I have many hobbies. I can also do well in communicating with others. The reason why I want to be a volunteer is that I can practice myself from the work and I love helping others. This job can give me a chance to make my dream come true. I need such experience. best wishes, Li Hua,9,1,1,較好拿到的分?jǐn)?shù)有： 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)/形容詞副詞/冠詞/代詞,做題時(shí)應(yīng)注意： 敘事性文章首抓全文時(shí)態(tài)，以免理解有誤； 論述性文章首抓名詞形容詞冠詞代詞錯(cuò)誤,小結(jié),Composition,假如你是李華，即將高中畢業(yè)，打算畢業(yè)后利用假期時(shí)間去一家慈善機(jī)構(gòu)做一名義工?，F(xiàn)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一封信介紹你自己，希望成為一名志愿者。 1.1992年出生 2.熱情開(kāi)朗，興趣廣泛，擅長(zhǎng)溝通，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力強(qiáng) 3.請(qǐng)陳述你想成為志愿者的理由,Dear Sir, I am Li Hua. I was born in 1992 and I am going to graduate from senior high school. I am willing to be a volunteer in your charity after graduating. I am an out-going and warm-hearted boy. I have many hobbies. I can also do well in communicating with others. The reason why I want to be a volunteer is that I can practice myself from the work and I love helping others. This job can give me a chance to make my dream come true. I need such experience. best wishes, Li Hua,17,小練習(xí),當(dāng)前不少文學(xué)作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請(qǐng)你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文： 1、 看電影：省時(shí)、有趣、易懂 2、 讀原著：細(xì)節(jié)更多、語(yǔ)言?xún)?yōu)美 3、 我的看法及理由 注意：1、詞數(shù)：100-120 文章題目和開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。 2、參考詞匯： original work 或 book in the original （原著）,關(guān)于人們有不同的觀點(diǎn)。一些人認(rèn)為 There are different opinions (among people) as to _ .Some people suggest that _. as to:就而言，至于,任何事物都是有兩面性，也不