高考英語書面表達對比類寫作訓練.doc

高考英語書面表達對比類寫作訓練高考對比類寫作一般分為以下兩種：一 過去與現(xiàn)在對比文章結構1、點題 （現(xiàn)在完成時）2 正文：過去 一般過去時現(xiàn)在 一般現(xiàn)在時為主3 收尾寫作套語1. 開頭常用句型(1) Great changes have taken place 如： Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five years. Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.(2) Things have begun to improve since自從以來，事情有了好轉/改善。如：Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.2. 對比常用句型: (1)used to, but now 過去常，但是現(xiàn)在(2) in the past, but now 在過去，但是現(xiàn)在(3) once, but now 曾經(jīng).，但是現(xiàn)在(4) Things are different now. 情況已大不同了(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是現(xiàn)在全變了表達對比和變化的經(jīng)典句子：1 過去父母們主要通過寫信彼此聯(lián)系，但是現(xiàn)在我們可以在家打長途電話。 In the past my parents contacted others mainly by sending letters，but now we call long distance at home.2 過去我們甚至在周末還要上課，寫沒完沒了的作業(yè)。現(xiàn)在我不再熬夜，大約10點睡覺。We used to have to attend classes even at weekends and do endless homework as well. I no longer stay up late, on the contrary, I go to bed at 10 pm.3 在過去的20多年里，我們的生活發(fā)生了很大的變化。In the past 20 years, great changes have taken place in our life4 我很高興告訴你自從減負我們 生活的變化。Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has been reduced.5 總之，自從學校減負以來，有了很大的變化。In a word, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.6 總之，過去20多年的變化使我們的生活更舒服方便。In short, changes in our life in the past 20 years have brought us comfort and convenience.（change, improve, become, turn into）例如：請根據(jù)下面六幅圖的提示和所提供的主題句，寫一篇題為“Changes in Our Life” 的英文短文。詞數(shù) 100 左右。（2004年北京市春季高考寫作）開頭已為你寫好：Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example.范文： Changes In Our Life Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example. My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home. And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV. Another big change is in the housing conditions. When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment. In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.二 正反觀點對比 （包括說明利弊題型）常用的結構：1引入2有一些人認為 另一些人認為 3我的看法（根據(jù)題目要求來）時態(tài)：通常用一般現(xiàn)在時A. 表示觀點對比類寫作套語總起:Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whetherRecently we have made a survey about weatherDifferent people hold different opinions. Opinions are divided. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem.People take different views on this question.表達觀點一:of them hold the opinion that of them are in favor of the idea thatPeople who are for/against the idea think 表達不同觀點之間的銜接:However, of them hold a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion. People who are against it dont think so. However, each coin has two sides. Different from those., people think .結構示例：Our class has recently held a heated discussion about the “Super Girls” phenomenon. The students show their different opinions about it.62% of the students support it. They think However, 38% of the students are against it. They believe that In my opinion, 文章示例：Failure is the mother of successWe middle school students have had many tests or exams. We have both achieved success and suffered from failure. Different students take different attitudes to failure. Some fall in low spirits when they dont do well in the exams. They usually lose heart and no longer study hard as before. But most students take an active attitude towards failure. They encourage themselves to be self-confident. They found out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes. I agree with those with active attitudes. As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Even great men have failed many times before they succeeded. So we must deal with our failure correctly.例如：最近，你校同學正在參加某英文報組織的一場討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票？請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給報社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。60%的同學認為40%的同學認為1、不應收門票2、公園是公眾休閑的地方3、如收票，需建大門、圍墻，會影響城市形象1、應收門票，但票價不宜高2、支付園林工人工資3、購新花木注意： 1、信的開頭已為你寫好。 2、詞數(shù)：100左右。3、參考詞匯：門票：entrance fee。Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. Whats more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly, Li Hua說明利弊題型 這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對比事物本身的利弊，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度1 說明事物現(xiàn)狀 2 事物本身的優(yōu)缺點3 你對現(xiàn)狀的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First -(的優(yōu)點之一). Besides -（的優(yōu)點之二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that -(的第一個缺點)To make matters worse,-(的第二個缺點) Through the above analys