高一英語寫作指導.doc

【寫作情景】假若你是某高中學生李華，進入高中后， 你覺得學英語的方式與初中有很大的不同。 你給自己的英語老師寫了一封信，講述自己的英語學習情況。請你根據(jù)下面的提示補全此信。 【寫作內容】1. 開始學習高中英語時，覺得學習英語有很多困難，難得讓他幾乎喪失信心；2. 后來逐漸意識到英語的重要性；3. 每天努力學習英語，例如多讀書，多背誦英語課文等；4. 向老師和同學請教更好的學習英語的方法；5. 他們的幫助和您的鼓勵使我取得了很大的進步，現(xiàn)在對英語越來越感興趣。 【寫作要求】字數(shù)在100字左右。參考詞匯：背誦：recite 高級的: seniorDear Mr. Li,Im glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student._ Thank you so much for your great help in your class. Wish you all the best. Yours, Li HuaDear Mr. Li, Im glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student.When I started to learn senior English in the beginning, I had much difficulty in learning English. I found it so difficult that I almost lost heart. Later, I gradually realized the importance of English, as a result, I worked hard every day, such as reading and reciting English texts as often as possible. I also went to ask my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English. It is their help and your encouragement that help me make great progress in my English. And now Im getting more and more interested in it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class. Wish you all the best. Yours, Li Hua 基礎寫作（共15分）請根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇英語短文，簡單描述一下1923年發(fā)生在日本的地震。1. 地震于1923年發(fā)生在日本橫濱市(Yokohama)；2. 當時人們正在睡覺，并不知道地震發(fā)生；3. 大量的房屋、建筑物倒塌，水電供應中斷；4. 有140,000多人喪生，還有很多受傷者和無家可歸者；5. 是歷史上最嚴重的地震之一。要求：1. 短文必須包括要點中的所有內容；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使內容連貫；3. 詞數(shù)：100左右。(One possible version)In 1923, a big earthquake hit/struck/occurred in/happened in/took place in the city of Yokohama, a city in Japan. It happened at night when most people were sleeping. When the earthquake happened/ occurred /took place, it seemed that the world was at an end. Houses and tall buildings fell down. Water and electricity were cut off. There were fires and smoke everywhere. In a few seconds the whole city was almost destroyed and lay in ruins. The number of people who were killed reached more than 140,000. Besides, a large number of people were injured and lost their homes. It was one of the biggest earthquakes in history.寫作（25分）按照中文大意寫成語言規(guī)范,前后連貫的文章：汶川過去是一個不知名的小城市，它距離成都159公里。就在2008年5月12日約下午兩點半，汶川發(fā)生了一次強烈地震。許多房屋倒塌，成千上萬的人無家可歸。一些老師和家長為了救孩子犧牲了。全國都關心汶川，送來了救援人員。人們相信汶川有更美好的未來。Wenchuan used to be an unknown small city, which is 159 kilometres away from Chengdu. It was at about 2:30 pm on May 12, 2008 that a strong earthquake struck Wenchuan. So many houses fell down that thousands of people became homeless. Some teachers and parents lost their lives in order to save the children. However, the whole nation was concerned about Wenchuan, so they sent rescue workers. Generally, people believed/believe that Wenchuan would/will have a great future.第二部分、如何提升句子I. 討論下面習作并對比兩篇范文：請根據(jù)以下的情景說明, 使用5個規(guī)范的英語句子描述全部所給的信息內容。標題為 My English Learning【情景說明】我學英語已經(jīng)六年了，在英語學習上有了一定的進步，但總是覺得英語難學，尤其是英語中的一些習慣用法。自己今后一定要努力學習這門有用的外語， 爭取早日掌握這門語言。 范文1 My English LearningI have been learning English for over 6 years. I have made some progress in my English. But I always feel English is hard to learn, especially some English idioms are difficult. I will work hard at this useful foreign language. I will try hard to grasp this foreign language.范文2 My English Learning It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in English. But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms. Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.III. Here are 3 ways to make sentences:A. 巧妙運用短語，寫出規(guī)范的簡單句：1)借助名詞短語做同位語如：李立，男，19歲，1986年生；籍貫：廣東。Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986.2)借助介詞短語做定語如：李飛，男，10歲，棕色短發(fā)，身穿白色茄克。Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket.3)借助介詞短語做狀語如：有了Tom的幫助，我們很快就找到了他們的村子。With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.4)借助非謂語動詞短語做定語或狀語如：他們站在大樹下，等待著總統(tǒng)的到來。They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president.B. 巧用連接詞，寫出規(guī)范的并列句：如：他給我錢，我不要。He gave me a lot money but I refused. 如：我剛到拐角處，就見到你啦。I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.C. 用好從句和引導詞，寫出規(guī)范的復合句：2) 定語從句如：中國，地處亞洲東部；特點：地大物博、人口眾多。China, which