英語四六級寫作新話題范文

1、姓名：_ 班級：_ 學(xué)號：_-密-封 -線- 英語四六級寫作新話題范文考試時間：120分鐘 考試總分：100分題號一二三四五總分分數(shù)遵守考場紀(jì)律，維護知識尊嚴(yán)，杜絕違紀(jì)行為，確?？荚嚱Y(jié)果公正。the world expo in 世博會）the world expo in 大學(xué)校園內(nèi)出現(xiàn)考證熱2）產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因3）你的看法certificate craze on campus_行文思路：本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點要求談?wù)勎覍υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述近幾年大學(xué)校園

2、內(nèi)的考證熱；分析越來越多的大學(xué)生熱衷考取各種證書的主要原因；闡述我對大學(xué)生考證熱的看法。高分范文：certificate craze on campusin recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. 1just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing fo

3、r a certificate of some kind. why does this craze appear？there are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. first, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. with the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition

4、 in the job market. how can one make himself more competitive？ more certificates at hand, maybe. second, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability. in order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run

5、from one exam to another.from my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. being crazy in getting certifications blindly is 10nothing but wasting time. to conclude, we should focus on improving our ability 10but

6、 not getting a certificate of no practical value.亮點點評：1祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。randomly意為隨意地，隨機地。限定詞使用恰當(dāng)，使文章表達更嚴(yán)謹，增強了說服力。that引導(dǎo)同位語從句，修飾the idea.設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。強調(diào)句型，此處是強調(diào)主語。which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，充當(dāng)介詞賓語。用于引出我的觀點。當(dāng)談到或提及時。since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為既然。10只是，僅僅。而不是。佳句臨摩：1.佳句：you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for

7、 a certificate of some kind.臨摩：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭的事實。2.佳句：diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability.臨摩： 在過去的三十年，發(fā)展中國家在許多方面都取得了很大的進步，其中包括健康水平的提高。3.佳句：from my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates.臨摩：我認為，對于

8、我們來說，更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得的證書。directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic students pursuit for famous brands. you should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in chinese） below:1）現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生都喜歡追求名牌2）產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么3）你如何看待這一現(xiàn)象s

9、tudents pursuit for famous brands_行文思路：本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點要求談?wù)勎覍υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述目前熱衷于大學(xué)生追求名牌的現(xiàn)象；分析大學(xué)生熱衷名牌的原因;闡述我對大學(xué)生追求名牌的看法并提出建議。高分范文：students pursuit for famous brandsnowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. from clothes to

10、 mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they 1are inclined to buy famous brands. moreover, many students from poor families begin to follow this consumption trend as well. this phenomenon has aroused wide attention.the following reasons can account for college stud

11、ents preference for famous brands. above all, in many college students eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. they expect others to admire their high class and good taste. whats more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which has a great attra

12、ction to young college students. besides, parents spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.as far as i am concerned, it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. after all, most of famous brands are far beyond their consumption ability. besides, it is not famo

13、us brands but a persons noble character that really makes him high class. therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.亮點點評：1有傾向。過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、意義連貫。 follow表示跟隨，追求（趨勢或時尚）用于引出原因。which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。 it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。遠遠超出他們的消費

14、能力。beyond表示超出范圍。強調(diào)句型，此處是強調(diào)主語。notbut連接并列成分。而不是。佳句臨?。?. 佳句：it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.臨摹：對大學(xué)生來說，了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。2. 佳句：in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.臨?。涸谑澜缟匣蛟S沒有什么游戲像賭博的那么有害

15、和危險了，它經(jīng)常會導(dǎo)致一個人破產(chǎn)，還會玷污人的心靈。3. 佳句：therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.臨?。汉芏嗤瑢W(xué)經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費時間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter applying for a bank loan. you should

16、 write at least 120 words following the outline given below in chinese：1）簡單介紹個人情況2）說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額3）保證會合理利用貸款并表明還款的決心a letter applying for a bank loan_行文思路：本題屬于情景式命題，要求寫一封申請信。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：簡單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請助學(xué)貸款；說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額;保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。高分范文：a letter applying for a bank loansep 12th,

17、 2008to whom it may concern,i am a freshman of lianhe university, 1majoring in applied physics. i am writing in the hope that i may obtain a bank loan to support my study in applied physics for the following four years.my parents are both laid-off workers, so its beyond their power to finance me thr

18、ough the college education. to make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. therefore, with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, i am compelled to apply a rmb20,000 bank loan.i give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. meanwhile, ill spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. i would be greatly obliged if my applica