備考高考英語寫作專題指導(dǎo)及技法大全

1、備考2014高考寫作備考2010高考寫作：記敘文重點(diǎn)詮釋：1記敘文是以敘述人物的經(jīng)歷或事物的發(fā)展變化的過程為主的一種文體。2在記敘文體的高考書面表達(dá)中，命題形式主要是提綱式或圖表式。3通常要求考生以第一人稱或第三人稱來寫作，第一人稱主要是寫自己的經(jīng)歷，第三人稱主要是寫他人的經(jīng)歷或事跡。4由于記敘文敘述的事情通常發(fā)生在過去，因而，其時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過去時(shí)。5記敘文通常是按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序來表達(dá)內(nèi)容的。寫作典例：請(qǐng)仔細(xì)看一下下面的圖畫，注意圖畫中的細(xì)節(jié)：假設(shè)你是李華，在美國(guó)探親。2000年2月8日清晨，你的目擊一起交通事故。警察局讓你寫一份材料，報(bào)告當(dāng)時(shí)所見情況。根據(jù)下列圖畫寫出報(bào)告。注意：1、

2、目擊者應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)確報(bào)告事實(shí)； 2、詞數(shù)100左右； 3、結(jié)尾已為你寫好剖析：本題圖文結(jié)合，審題時(shí)要重視細(xì)節(jié)。1明確寫作要求：本題要求寫一篇目擊者的報(bào)告，用第一人稱寫；2認(rèn)真審圖，確認(rèn)全部信息要點(diǎn)：圖中的環(huán)境條件；人物位置（此點(diǎn)對(duì)完成本題十分重要）；人物活動(dòng)；人物表情；空間結(jié)構(gòu)；圖中的全部附加文字（英語和漢語）。3確定內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：時(shí)間：2000年2月8日早晨7點(diǎn)15分；地點(diǎn)：公園路公園門前；我正沿公園路向東走；一輛汽車從第3街向右拐，駛?cè)牍珗@路時(shí)撞倒了一位過街的老人；汽車未停，沿公園路向西開走；汽車是黃色的，車牌號(hào)是ac864，司機(jī)是一位女性。one possible version:it was 7

3、 : 15 on the morning of february 8, 2000.i was walking along park road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. then i saw a yellow car drive up third street and make a right turn into park road. the next moment the car hit the man while he was cross

4、ing the road. he fell with a cry. the car didnt stop but drove off at great speed heading west. i noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was ac864.about two minutes later i stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.針對(duì)訓(xùn)練：1請(qǐng)仔細(xì)看一下下面的圖畫，注意圖畫中的細(xì)節(jié)：pollution does

5、 harm to us all!a chemical factory lies near my home. the manager was criticized by the government because the factory gave out lots of harmful smoke every day, but he paid no attention. then the factory was forced to stop production and the manager said angrily, “is there any evidence to show that

6、we did harm to peoples health? in fact, we havent.” just then, a doctor came, with the result of the medical exam, saying the manager was suffering a lung cancer. it is very clear that the pollution has harmed not only the people around the factory but also the manager himself. the manager regretted

7、 having caused so much pollution. now he has realized the importance of keeping the air clean.2根據(jù)圖畫寫一篇短文，敘述某天小明與其媽媽發(fā)生的故事。one day, xiao ming saw a little girl fall over. he wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “dont do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knock

8、ed her down.” another day, the mother was shocked to see xiao ming just let the fallen oil bottle be. and xiao ming said to his mother, “if i had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that i did it.”i disagree with what the mother did in the story. i think parents should set a good exam

9、ple to their minds. they should not only care for their childrens health, but their minds. they should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. we live in the society which is a big family for all of us.everyone should do something good to build up our society, rig

10、ht?3高考是全社會(huì)關(guān)注的大事，學(xué)校和家庭表現(xiàn)尤為突出。家庭成員對(duì)考生從學(xué)習(xí)到生活給予無微不至的”關(guān)懷”，結(jié)果卻給考生帶來負(fù)面影響。根據(jù)圖畫所描述的內(nèi)容寫一篇文章,并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)(夾敘夾議)。詞數(shù)120左右。as the college entrance examination is drawing near，_as the college entrance examination is drawing near, the situation is getting worse and worse. from the picture, we can see that li ming is “s

11、tudying hard”. there are many books for him to read and many papers for him to do. how poor he is! at the same time, all his family are also busy working for him.nowadays, many parents expect too much of their sons or daughters. they hope that their sons or daughters study hard in order to be admitt

12、ed to an ideal college or a key university. it is for this reason that parents are strict with their children. however, they dont realize what they have become a heavy burden or a great pressure. it is the hard work or the great pressure that changes their children that much.so i hope parents provid

13、e a proper environment for their children. only in this way, will they try their best and succeed at last!本文是夾敘夾議類的文章，主要反映家庭對(duì)考生的特別”關(guān)注”給他們帶來負(fù)面影響。在寫作過程中，對(duì)主題要審準(zhǔn)、審清，對(duì)發(fā)展過程和結(jié)果進(jìn)行敘述。4下列圖畫描述的是你的一段親身經(jīng)歷，請(qǐng)據(jù)此為一家中學(xué)生英文報(bào)的故事專欄寫一篇短文。注意：1. 短文必須包括圖畫所表現(xiàn)的主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，使其連貫、完整；2. 敘述必須用第一人稱；3. 詞數(shù)100左右。 生詞：違章者offender n. 十字

14、路口crossroads n.the other day my brother and i went to the cinema by bicycle. my brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. as we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. “weve found you at long last,” they said. but we didnt know them. pointing to a policeman

15、 not far away, the young man explained, “he stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. so come on, stand here. hope you dont have to wait as long as we did. good luck.”5下面四幅圖描述了你班同學(xué)上周的一次研究性活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文,在某英語刊物上介紹這次活動(dòng)情況last week, we did research into how laid-off wor

16、kers get their new jobs. we had a discussion in three groups and then began our research separately.group one surfed on the internet and learned that most of the laid-off workers had already got their new jobs. in the vocational training centre, the students in group two were told that there were fi

17、ve training courses for laid-off workers. after training, they began working as repairers, cooks, typists, household workers and salespersons. the other students interviewed some laid-off workers who had got new jobs. a woman said, “with the help of the city government, ive found my job.”what a grea

18、t deal weve learned through the research!6下面六幅圖畫描述了你和同學(xué)們2月8日去學(xué)校附近的湖上滑冰的情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇日記。注意：1.日記必須包括所有圖畫的內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使短文連貫。2.詞數(shù)100左右。【參考范文】february 8th,sundayfineit was cold today. my classmates and i went skating on the lake. as soon as we got there, we began to skate happily. while enjoying myself

19、, i suddenly noticed something unusual. the moment i warned xiao ming to take care, the ice broke and he slipped into the water.i was too frightened to know what to do. i anxiously ran to school to call my teacher for help. hearing my cry, mr. zhang rushed over, telling us to phone 120 to call for d

20、octors, and jumped into the lake to save xiao ming, who was struggling in the cold water. at last, he was saved and no sooner had doctors arrived than he was sent to hospital. it was not long before xiao mings parents came. they expressed their thanks to mr. zhang.what a respectable teacher he is!7提

21、示：花園里有許多缸（vats）。 一群孩子在玩耍。突然一個(gè)孩子不小心掉進(jìn)缸里，除了8歲的司馬光外，其他的孩子都跑開了。司馬光急中生智，用石頭擊破了缸，把那個(gè)孩子救了出來。long ago, a group of boys were playing happily in the garden where there were many water vats. suddenly a boy fell into a vat.all the boys ran away except a small one, whose name was sima guang , eight years old. he

22、 thought he should help the boy, so he hurried towards the large vat, and broke it with a big stone. finally, the boy was saved.備考2010高考寫作：議論文重點(diǎn)詮釋：1議論文是以議論為主要表達(dá)方式的一種文體，它通過擺事實(shí)，講道理的方式來辯明是非曲折，從而表達(dá)出作者的觀點(diǎn)。它常由論點(diǎn)，論據(jù)和論證三部分構(gòu)成。2在近幾年的高考書面表達(dá)中，其主要命題形式是以表格式和提綱式來呈現(xiàn)寫作材料的。3它要求語言必須簡(jiǎn)練，準(zhǔn)確，要盡可能避免使用口語，多用書面語，可適當(dāng)使用名言警句；以議論

23、為主，輔之以敘述，說明和描寫等手法。4寫作時(shí)要圍繞中心論點(diǎn)展開議論，即論據(jù)和論證要圍繞論點(diǎn)展開。根據(jù)題目要求，有時(shí)需要從正反兩面來論述，可增強(qiáng)論證的力度。最后，可得出結(jié)論，照應(yīng)開頭，形成一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體。5寫作時(shí)常以三段式的形式展開議論。寫作典例：暑假即將來臨，你班同學(xué)就假期計(jì)劃進(jìn)行討論，提出了不同看法，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇英語短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn)呆在家中花費(fèi)少，舒適方便不能親自了解外界外出旅游增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，開闊眼界?；ㄙM(fèi)多，旅途不便注意：1。詞數(shù)120左右（不含已寫好部分）2短文必須包括表中所列要點(diǎn)，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容分段表述；3可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；4參考詞匯：眼界horizon(view)

24、案例分析這是一篇典型的議論文體的寫作，它以表格的形式提出了論點(diǎn)（呆在家中的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)以及外出旅游的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)）和論據(jù)，還以文字提示形式提出了話題（假期計(jì)劃）及需要考生自由發(fā)揮的部分（你的看法），自己的看法可選擇上述中的任何一種，并就此發(fā)表個(gè)人的見解。本文的重點(diǎn)是表格中兩種方式的優(yōu)，缺點(diǎn)，根據(jù)題目的特點(diǎn)，以三段式的形式來寫作比較好。根據(jù)內(nèi)容，盡管討論已經(jīng)發(fā)生，但它是就一般的暑假假期計(jì)劃而進(jìn)行的討論，沒有特定的時(shí)間界定，因而考生應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主。相當(dāng)一部分考生用一般過去時(shí)進(jìn)行論述，這會(huì)失掉較多的分?jǐn)?shù)。從題目所給的開頭可知應(yīng)用第一人稱來寫。范文：the summer holiday i

25、s coming. our class have a discussion about what to do during the holiday.some are in favor of staying at home. they think its both convenient and comfortable. whats more, they can save money for other purposes. but they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. however, others pref

26、er to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. but they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.in my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for i can do what i like, such as reading books, watching tv, and helping my

27、parents with the housework.針對(duì)練習(xí)12002年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)英語統(tǒng)一考試書面表達(dá)試題最近，你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)組織的一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為 40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為1、不應(yīng)收門票2、公園是公眾休閑的地方3、如收票，需建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象 1、應(yīng)收門票，但票價(jià)不宜高2、支付園林工人工資3、購新花木注意：1、信的開頭已為你寫好。 2、詞數(shù)：100左右。 3、參考詞匯：門票：entrance feeone possible version:dear editor,im

28、 writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. they believed a public park should be free of charge. people need a place where they can rest

29、and enjoy themselves. charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. what is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.on the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other

30、 workers and to buy plants and young trees. they suggest, however, fees should be charged low.yours truly,li hua.浙江卷2當(dāng)前不少文學(xué)作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請(qǐng)你以“film or book, which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語短文：1、 看電影：省時(shí)、有趣、易懂2、 讀原著：細(xì)節(jié)更多、語言優(yōu)美3、 我的看法及理由注意：1、詞數(shù)：100-120 文章題目和開頭已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。2、參考詞匯： original wor

31、k 或 book in the original （原著）film or book, which do you prefer?some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.one possible versionsome of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. the reason is that it takes less time

32、to understand the whole story. besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.some others have just the opposite opinion. they think that they can get more detailed information from the original. meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.per

33、sonally, i agree with the second view. actually i have more reasons for it. i think i can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, i am able to better understand the authors ideas. in a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.3如今世界糧食短

34、缺，價(jià)格飛漲，給部分地區(qū)造成社會(huì)動(dòng)蕩。假設(shè)在你校開展的研究性學(xué)習(xí)中，你們小組以“world food crisis”為題進(jìn)行研究，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你代表你們小組向全體同學(xué)簡(jiǎn)要介紹你們的研究成果。主要內(nèi)容如下：造成的原因 1. 氣候變化，造成糧食減產(chǎn)2. 工業(yè)發(fā)展，城市化加速，耕地減少3. 世界能源價(jià)格上漲，使用糧食生產(chǎn)生物燃料應(yīng)對(duì)的措施 1. 注重環(huán)保，改善生態(tài)2. 嚴(yán)格保護(hù)耕地3. 富國(guó)支持窮國(guó)，促進(jìn)世界和諧你如何做出自己的貢獻(xiàn) 1 2注意：1. 內(nèi)容包括以上要點(diǎn)，但不要逐句翻譯2. 字?jǐn)?shù)150左右，文章開頭已提供，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)3. 參考詞匯：城市化 urbanization 生物燃料 biofuel

35、shello, everyone,now ill tell you something about our research project the world food crisis on behalf of our group. as you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas. _【命題方向與寫作提示】這是一篇提綱式的議論文寫作素材，探討國(guó)計(jì)民生的社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題：糧食價(jià)格上漲。寫作時(shí)要注意避免逐句翻譯，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文

36、連貫。范文 (one possible version)hello, everyone,now ill tell you something about our research project the world food crisis on behalf of our group. as you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas. but who is responsible for the current world f

37、ood crisis? first, annual world grains output has declined because of climate change. then lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization. besides, faced with the rising energy prices, people have turned to the production of biofuels, which has worsened the

38、severe situation.then what should we do to deal with the problem? on one hand, we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology. on the other hand, strict measures should be taken to protect farmland. of course, to build a harmonious world the developed countries should take t

39、heir responsibilities to help the poor ones experiencing food shortage.as for me, i will call on the people around me to live thriftily. and for the moment, i think, we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future.2007高考英語作文范文4 最近，你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)組織的一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是：公園要

40、不要收門票?請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。60的同學(xué)認(rèn)為 1不應(yīng)該收門票 2.公園是公眾休閑的地方 3.如收門票，需建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象40的同學(xué)認(rèn)為 1應(yīng)收門票，但票價(jià)不要太高 2支付園林工人工資 3購新花木注意：1信的開頭已為你寫好。2詞數(shù)：100左右。3參考詞匯：門票-entrance feedear editorim writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parksdear e

41、ditor,im writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be chargedfor parks.60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet peoples expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not bus

42、y either at home or at work. if an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. in the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. the mone

43、y from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.with regard to myself, i think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. do we share the same opinion, dear editor?yours truly,5誠實(shí)有益(it pays to be honest)1 當(dāng)

44、前社會(huì)上存在許多不誠實(shí)的現(xiàn)象。2 誠實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠實(shí)。這是一篇論說文，從題目看，應(yīng)從正面論證誠實(shí)的益處。第一段，舉例說明在社會(huì)上存在的諸多不誠實(shí)現(xiàn)象，給社會(huì)和個(gè)人都造成了極大的傷害。第二段，從正面說明誠實(shí)既利人又利己，通過舉例說明做人應(yīng)該誠實(shí)。參考范文：as society and economy develop, dishonesty is no longer a stranger to us. manufacturers and businessmen may promise more than their products can guarantee so as to make

45、more profit. doctors and nurses may lie to their patients for their patients benefit. students may cheat on exams for better scores. as a matter of fact, dishonesty has become so widespread that wherever you are you find cases of dishonesty.however, it is honesty that brings benefit both to yourself

46、 and to others. by being honest, manufacturers and businessmen build up mutual trust between themselves and customers, which in the long run generates more profit. by telling patients the truth about their conditions so that they can make their own decisions, doctors and nurses enhance their own cre

47、dibility and honor their profession. by giving honest answers to questions, not only can students themselves learn about their own strengths and weaknesses, but they help their teachers evaluate the quality of their instruction as well. therefore, it pays to be honest and everybody must learn to be

48、honest.6my opinion on cheating in examinations(我對(duì)考試作弊的看法) 整理目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬對(duì)此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題是“my opinion on cheating in examinations”。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：主要原因考試偏多、偏難不用功、懶惰取悅父母、老師個(gè)人看法作弊不對(duì)，違反校規(guī)要誠實(shí)，努力學(xué)習(xí)（其他看法）注意：1短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3詞數(shù)：100左右。4參考詞匯：作弊 cheat（v.）my opinion on

49、 cheating in examinationsit is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.my opinion on cheating in examinationsit is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at schoolas students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinatio

50、ns which are too difficult for us. on the other hand, some of us are lazy and dont work hard at our lessons. so when taking examinations, some students sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.in my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it b

51、reak the rules of schools. we students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. whats more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations. (121 words)我對(duì)考試作弊的看法大家都知道一些學(xué)生考試作弊。作為學(xué)生我們經(jīng)常參加各種考試。有時(shí)有些考試對(duì)我們來說太難了。另一方面，我們中有些

52、人學(xué)習(xí)不用功，所以當(dāng)他們參加考試時(shí)，他們?yōu)槟酶叻秩ト偢改负屠蠋熡袝r(shí)就會(huì)作弊。依我看，作弊不對(duì)，違反校規(guī)。我們學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)誠實(shí)，用努力學(xué)習(xí)采取得好成績(jī)，而不是依靠作弊。還有我們要改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法，為考試做好充足準(zhǔn)備。7 the most important thing in the world / money is everythingdirections：a）title：the most important thing in the worldb）提示：有人認(rèn)為，世界上最重要的東西是“錢”。許多人不同意這個(gè)看法。請(qǐng)就這個(gè)問題談?wù)勀愕囊庖姟）time limit：30minutesd）word li

53、mit：150200wordse）your composition must be written clearly on the composition sheet.the most important thing in the worldin my opinion，the most important thing in the world is time. however, long one may live，his life consists of a certain number of years，and a year has only12months，a month30days and

54、 one day24hours.once you waste one hour，you can not get it back no matter how much you would pay for it.even though you are the richest person in the world，you can not afford to waste your time，because it means that you are wasting your life. even though you are the most powerful person in the world

55、，one hour has60minutes for you just as for everyone else who struggles at the bottom of the society.some people think that the most important thing in the world is money. in their opinion，if you have enough money，you will have everything you want. i would like to ask them a simple question：can you b

56、uy time？the only thing with which we can win more time is efficiency. if you work with high efficiency，you can do more in a certain period of time than other people.8人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的看法。贊成的理由反對(duì)的理由你的看法1廣交朋友2可自由表達(dá)思想3利于外語學(xué)習(xí)1浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2影響學(xué)習(xí)3可能上當(dāng)受騙？留意：1文章必須包括表中的全部?jī)?nèi)容。2詞數(shù)為100左右。3參考詞匯： 網(wǎng)絡(luò)朋友on-line friend(s)，上當(dāng)受騙to be cheated開頭：should students make friends on line ? 展開：some people say yes. the internet helps make many friends. chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help w