專題11 外貌性格描寫-2021年高考書面表達(dá)讀后續(xù)寫精講精煉課件

1、讀后續(xù)寫微技能（11）外貌性格描寫 -2- 讀后續(xù)寫微技能（11）外貌性格描寫 一、外貌性格描寫 1.外貌描寫重點(diǎn)在于五官與體型描寫 在描寫人物外貌時(shí),要注意學(xué)會(huì)用不同的表達(dá),對(duì)人物進(jìn)行“從上 到下”的細(xì)致刻畫,包括臉部表情,發(fā)型裝扮,身體狀況,手腳情況,年 齡狀態(tài)等等,例如: Looking at his weather-worn face, I was surprised. She is of medium height, very slim, but her face is as white as snow. 分析:句中的weather-worn face表示“飽經(jīng)風(fēng)霜的臉”;句中 me

2、dium height說明“中等身高”,as white as snow來說明“臉色慘白”。 這兩句中,通過擴(kuò)展對(duì)具體人物外貌的修飾,達(dá)到了增加描寫的作 用。 -3- 2.性格描寫要細(xì)致突出人物的情緒 對(duì)于人物的性格描寫,一定要突出人物的個(gè)性,盡量避免用過于 籠統(tǒng)的詞,而應(yīng)該采用相對(duì)比較細(xì)致入微的詞匯或句式,來對(duì)人物 進(jìn)行“個(gè)性化”描寫,例如: He is good-time Charlie, feeling no worries and anxieties.他是樂 天派,從不擔(dān)憂。 Jerry is a self-possessed man, whose face never betrays

3、 his emotions.Jerry處事冷靜,從不喜形于色。 分析:句中,用good-time Charlie來描述他的樂觀,用詞要比 optimistic更加形象;而句中,用self-possessed和never betrays his emotions來細(xì)致描述Jerry的個(gè)性,體現(xiàn)細(xì)節(jié)描寫對(duì)人物個(gè)性的刻畫。 -4- 3.外貌性格描寫時(shí),可以多采用并列式表達(dá) 在進(jìn)行人物外貌描寫時(shí),不一定是單一性的描寫,而更多的可以 采用并列式或遞進(jìn)式的表達(dá)方式。如: The light showed a pale, square-jawed face with keen eyes, and a lit

4、tle white scar near his left eyebrow. 分析:本句在描寫人物外貌時(shí),采用了with和and的并列或伴隨結(jié) 構(gòu),使得表達(dá)更加豐富。 -5- 二、外貌性格的素材 1.與“外貌”相關(guān)的詞塊 handsome英俊的,good-looking好看的,athletic健康的,muscular壯 實(shí)的,pretty漂亮的,beautiful美麗的,attractive迷人的,plain相貌平平 的,slim苗條的,thin瘦的,fat胖的,overweight肥胖的,skinny瘦骨嶙峋 的,cool酷的,lively活潑的,lovely可愛的,strong強(qiáng)壯的,a g

5、irl with bright big eyes有大而明亮的眼睛的女孩,a boy with glasses戴眼鏡 的男孩,be in ones mid-40s四十幾歲,be somewhere between 25 and 30 years old 25-30歲之間,be of medium height/of average height/about 5 feet tall中等身高/平均身高/五英尺高, have short hair/medium length hair/long hair/long wavy dark hair/long and straight hair/short

6、and curly hair短發(fā)/中等長(zhǎng)度的頭發(fā)/長(zhǎng)發(fā)/長(zhǎng)卷黑 發(fā)/長(zhǎng)直發(fā)/短卷發(fā), have got a baby face /round face/an intelligent face娃娃臉/圓臉/聰明的臉, high/broad/rounded/flat/narrow forehead 前額高/寬/圓/平/窄,big/bright/dark/attractive eyes眼睛大/亮/黑/迷 人,hooked nose and a square chin鷹鉤鼻和平下巴 -6- 2.與“性格”等相關(guān)的詞塊 正面描寫:confident自信的, modest謙虛的, brave勇敢的, ch

7、eerful開 朗的, kind善良的, friendly友好的, generous大方的, honest誠(chéng)實(shí)的, independent獨(dú)立的, reliable可靠的, patient耐心的, outgoing外向的, sensitive敏感的, decisive果斷的, ambitious雄心勃勃的, punctual守 時(shí)的, sociable善于交際的, easygoing隨和的, gentle溫和的, considerate善解人意的, thoughtful體貼的, understanding理解的, optimistic樂觀的, frank坦率的, straightforward

8、直截了當(dāng)?shù)?helpful樂 于助人的,humorous幽默的,careful仔細(xì)的,energetic 精力充沛 的,brave勇敢的,honest誠(chéng)實(shí)的,warm-hearted熱心腸的,easy-going容 易相處的 -7- 負(fù)面描寫:big-headed令人頭疼的, bad-tempered脾氣很壞的, boring 乏味的, bossy專橫的, dull遲鈍的, dishonest不誠(chéng)實(shí)的, envious嫉妒 的, fussy挑剔的, impatient不耐煩的, jealous嫉妒的, lazy懶惰的, rude粗魯?shù)? mean吝嗇的, selfish自私的, shy害羞的,

9、 timid膽怯的, stubborn固執(zhí)的, careless粗心的, clumsy笨拙的, greedy貪婪的, conceited自負(fù)的, pessimistic悲觀的,aggressive有攻擊性的, cruel殘 酷的, chickenhearted膽小的 -8- 【遷移應(yīng)用四】 It was Mothers Day and I was shopping at the local supermarket with my son who is five years old, Tenyson.As we were leaving after finishing our shopping,

10、we realized that only minutes earlier an elderly woman had fallen over at the entrance and hit her head on the ground badly.Her husband was with her,but there was blood everywhere and the woman was embarrassed and clearly in shock.Fortunately,a lot of people stopped to help out. -9- While we were wa

11、lking towards the scene,Tenyson became very worried about what had happened to the elderly couple.He said to me,“Mom,its not much fun falling over in front of everyone.”Seeing that there was a flower stall(攤位) at the front of the supermarket,he added,“Why shouldnt we buy the lady a flower?It will ma

12、ke her feel better.” I was amazed that hed come up with this sweet idea who was only a five-year-old boy.So we went over and told the flower seller what we wanted.“Just take it,”she replied.“I cant take your money for such a wonderful deed.” -10- By now medical staff had arrived,and were looking aft

13、er the injured woman.There we saw the old man was also in great horror,but he tried to comfort his wife and held her hands tightly to encourage her to be strong.We gave the flower to the womans husband and I told him it was from my son.Hearing that,the old man started to cry and said,“Thank you very

14、 much.”He then turned to me,“You have a wonderful son.Happy Mothers Day to you.” The man bent down and gave his wife the flower,telling her who it was from.Regardless of being badly hurt,the old lady looked up at Tenyson with love and appreciation in her eyes and gave him a little smile.And my son w

15、ent down his body to the injured lady and tenderly said,“Happy Mothers Day to you,too.” -11- Paragraph 1: After a moment,the elderly lady was taken into an ambulance by medical staff and was sent to hospital. Paragraph 2: One year later, -12- After a moment,the elderly lady was taken into an ambulan

16、ce by medical staff and was sent to hospital.The crowd gradually scattered.Tenyson and I went home.On our way home,he asked me worriedly,“Mom,will the elderly lady be OK since she was too old and sick and she had badly fallen over?”I looked at him patiently and said,“The elderly lady would be fine s

17、ince there were so many kind people coming to help her.And you did a wonderful deed,my boy.” One year later,it was Mothers Day again.As last year,I went shopping,at the local supermarket with Tenyson.Suddenly,Tenyson said excitedly,“Look,Mom.It is that old woman.”I looked that way and saw the elderl

18、y lady and her husband.Although, she began to feel rigid in her legs, it seemed that she had recovered from her injury.We walked towards them and they were happy to meet us,too.The elderly lady hugged my son and whispered to him.“I will never forget the flower you give me,my sweet boy.” -13- 讀后續(xù)寫微技能

19、五環(huán)境細(xì)節(jié)描寫 一、環(huán)境描寫的角度 環(huán)境描寫分為客觀和主觀兩種角度:客觀描寫從環(huán)境事物本身入 手,主觀描寫則從觀察者角度描寫。通常在描寫時(shí)主客觀交替進(jìn)行, 原則上,主觀描寫比重可以稍大一點(diǎn)。 1.客觀環(huán)境描寫 客觀環(huán)境的描寫,常從環(huán)境本身入手,盡量突出“感官體驗(yàn)”,如強(qiáng) 調(diào)“風(fēng)雨雷電”或“花鳥蟲魚”等自然界所存在的事物本身,以及它們 給人們帶來的感受,如聲音、氣味、顏色、感覺、味道等等。例如: A cold breeze blew through my hair. The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking gla

20、ss-clear surface. -14- 分析:句中的“冷風(fēng)吹拂過我的頭發(fā)”,描述的是風(fēng)給我?guī)淼母?覺;句中“水是深藍(lán)色的,陽(yáng)光在仿若透明的玻璃表面閃閃發(fā)光”則 是視覺上的感受。 -15- 2.主觀環(huán)境描寫 主觀環(huán)境描寫則從觀察者角度入手,表達(dá)“景物給人帶來何種感 受”,所以在表達(dá)上常是“我覺得”;“我看到”,例如: The beautiful scenery in the countryside kept me spellbound. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring

21、 in the sky. 分析:句中的“景物使我如此陶醉”,描述的是美景給我的感 受;句中“我抬起頭,望見兩只紅色的風(fēng)箏,帶著長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的藍(lán)色尾巴, 在天空中冉冉升起”也是從觀察者的角度來寫環(huán)境。 -16- 二、環(huán)境描寫的素材 the blue sky藍(lán)天,the songs of birds鳥鳴,the thundering clouds電閃 雷鳴,the fragile flowers嬌嫩的花,the dark, raining evening 雨夜,the green grass青草,the fragrant roses芬芳的玫瑰,the setting/rising sun落 日/冉冉升起的

22、太陽(yáng),a gust of wind一陣風(fēng),the drooping branches of the weeping willow彎柳的低垂枝條,the soft and cold wind輕柔卻寒 冷的風(fēng) -17- 【遷移應(yīng)用五】 In downtown New York, at a somewhat trashy(垃圾似的)apartment, there lived a man named Howard.He was a young man, in his mid- twenties, and had a terrible fear of cockroaches(蟑螂).Well if y

23、ouve been to New York, and maybe live or stay in a trashy hotel, you know how many cockroaches there are.Too many to count! -18- Howard had just come home from work and was looking for a bit of relaxation.All he wanted to do was get a bowl of ice cream, sit down and read the newspaper.He started to

24、try to look for a bowl and a spoon in the messy cabinets(壁櫥).He found the bowl, got out the ice cream and opened a drawer to get the spoon when, surprise! Out jumped a big juicy cockroach.After jumping twenty feet in the air and grabbing a spoon out of the drawer, he sat down to calm himself.“God ki

25、ll the cockroaches!” he yelled, while slowing his heartbeat, just as another cockroach climbed between his feet.“Theres got to be something I can do to get rid of them.” Just then, as he was getting his ice cream and reading ads in the paper, one specific ad caught his eye.“Got Roaches? We have a so

26、lution! Come down to Sams Pet Club today and get yourself the natural enemy of the cockroaches, a gecko(壁虎)!” -19- “What in the world?” Howard thought.He read on: “Thats right!A gecko! Follow the directions below to get your very own live cockroach eliminator(消除器)! Then ask our friendly staff how to

27、 care for and what to do to get rid of your cockroaches.”“Well.That gecko will probably eat me while I sleep,” he said as yet another cockroach escaped across the floor.He felt sick.He thought it was worth a try, so the very next day he followed the directions on the ad to the pet store. There staff

28、 told him what to do with a gecko and how much they were and, soon enough, he was driving home with his very own gecko. -20- Paragraph 1: He thought,“Yet another little creature is going to be wandering around in my house.” Paragraph 2: With fewer and fewer cockroaches, slowly he didnt like the gecko running around his house all the time. -21- He thought “Yet another little creature is going to be wandering around in my house.”O(jiān)n arriving at his dirty, trashy apartment,Howard p