2021-2022學(xué)年上學(xué)期初中英語(yǔ)外研新版八年級(jí)同步經(jīng)典題精練之書面表達(dá)

1、2021-2022學(xué)年上學(xué)期初中英語(yǔ)外研新版八年級(jí)同步經(jīng)典題精練之書面表達(dá)一書面表達(dá)（共11小題）1（2021春肇源縣期末）假設(shè)你叫王浩，英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)很棒，請(qǐng)以 How to learn English 為題，給大家一些學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的建議內(nèi)容包括：1要認(rèn)真聽(tīng)老師講課，課上盡量講英語(yǔ)；每天記住 810 個(gè)單詞2課后經(jīng)常聽(tīng)英文歌曲，讀英文報(bào)紙，看英文電影，并且和同學(xué)用英語(yǔ)交談；有問(wèn)題請(qǐng)教老 師3把錯(cuò)題寫在你的筆記本上注意：1詞數(shù)：不少于 60；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 2假如你叫李明，你的筆友張磊寫信給你，告訴你他在用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行交流和英語(yǔ)寫作方面遇到了困難，希望得到你的幫助要求：1 80詞左右2 信的

2、開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)3信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名（參考詞匯：first of all， next， then，finally， Whats more， however， as you/we know， as a result， on the other hand，for example， above all， ）Dear Zhang Lei，Im very glad to write to youI am looking forward to hearing from you soonYours， Lingling3你的家鄉(xiāng)在什么地方？有多少人口？和北京、上海等城市相比，你的家鄉(xiāng)有什

3、么不同？它以什么而聞名？請(qǐng)以My hometown為題，寫一篇60詞左右的短文，介紹一下你的家鄉(xiāng)4假設(shè)你是李華，住在昆明你的澳大利亞筆友 Eric 來(lái)信談到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)的情況請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一封回信回信需包括下表中的內(nèi)容：人口600 多萬(wàn)位置中國(guó)的西南部特點(diǎn)以花卉聞名于世，環(huán)境優(yōu)美，四季如春Dear Eric， Its very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city Yours， Li Hua5（2017秋冠縣期中）許多人喜歡打籃球假如你最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是打籃球，請(qǐng)描述一下這項(xiàng)體育

4、運(yùn)動(dòng)，包括它的特點(diǎn)以及你喜歡它的原因詞數(shù)80左右6學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站就My favourite sport為題進(jìn)行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文進(jìn)行 投稿1介紹你最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目；2喜歡這一運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目的理由；3最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)員（player） 要求：1語(yǔ)句通順、要點(diǎn)全面，可適當(dāng)拓展；2.70 詞左右提示： exciting， popular， healthyMy favourite sport_7假如你是 Lingling， 你的美國(guó)朋友 Betty 要來(lái)中國(guó)旅游，她需要你的幫助下面是 Betty 寫給你的一 封信，請(qǐng)根據(jù)信的內(nèi)容給她回一封信，80 詞左右，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

5、Dear Lingling， Im preparing for a trip to China， and Im making a list of things for my trip， but I dont know what I should take Im leaving at the end of August Im going to stay there for three weeks What clothes should I take？ Which places of interest can I visit？ What else should I pay attention to

6、？ Can you give me someadvice？Yours，BettyDear Betty， Im very happy that you can come to China for a trip Yours，Lingling8（2018春蓬江區(qū)校級(jí)期末）假設(shè)你在一次英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)大賽中獲獎(jiǎng)有一家英文報(bào)刊邀請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文，介紹你如何練習(xí)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)，并給其他同學(xué)提供1、2點(diǎn)建議請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下寫作要點(diǎn)和寫作要求，寫一篇你將要發(fā)表的英語(yǔ)短文要點(diǎn)提示1英語(yǔ)是世界上最重要的語(yǔ)言之一2每天記錄一些好的句子或文段，收看英文節(jié)目3經(jīng)常用英語(yǔ)給外國(guó)朋友介紹江門的名勝以及美食4我的建議【寫作要求】1詞數(shù)不少于70單

7、詞；2短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3文中需包括所有寫作要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)加入過(guò)渡語(yǔ)句，使短文通順、連貫； I am very glad to share my experience on practicing spoken English with you_9校園英文雜志正在舉辦主題為我的家鄉(xiāng)的征文活動(dòng)請(qǐng)以My home townFoshan為題寫一篇 80 詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文寫作要點(diǎn)：1佛山的地理位置和人口（大約 700 萬(wàn)）2和過(guò)去相比，佛山的天氣、街道、建筑物等發(fā)生了怎樣的變化3佛山的特色4你對(duì)佛山的感想寫作要求：1不能逐句翻譯，不得在文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生真實(shí)的姓名2

8、文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)My home townFoshan Hello!My name is Li Hua and I am from Foshan Welcome all of you to visit Foshan!10（2018秋岳池縣期中）請(qǐng)你介紹一下有關(guān)你們學(xué)校開(kāi)展體育活動(dòng)的情況，以及你是如何進(jìn)行體育鍛煉的根據(jù)提示寫一篇80字作文提示：1同學(xué)們通常早上跑步，課間做眼保健操，課后打籃球或踢足球2學(xué)校每年秋季舉辦運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，去年運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)上你獲得跳遠(yuǎn)第一名3介紹你最喜歡參加和觀看的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目11假如你是Tina，要給Mary寫一封電子郵件，告訴她你和你的同學(xué)上周日去泰山（Mount T

9、ai）旅游了，要求用到下面的提示提示：classmate，meet，6：30 in the morning，by bus，at the foot of the mountain，have a party，play games，the top of，excited 2021-2022學(xué)年上學(xué)期初中英語(yǔ)外研新版八年級(jí)同步經(jīng)典題精練之書面表達(dá)參考答案與試題解析一書面表達(dá)（共11小題）1（2021春肇源縣期末）假設(shè)你叫王浩，英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)很棒，請(qǐng)以 How to learn English 為題，給大家一些學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的建議內(nèi)容包括：1要認(rèn)真聽(tīng)老師講課，課上盡量講英語(yǔ)；每天記住 810 個(gè)單詞2課后經(jīng)常聽(tīng)英文歌

10、曲，讀英文報(bào)紙，看英文電影，并且和同學(xué)用英語(yǔ)交談；有問(wèn)題請(qǐng)教老 師3把錯(cuò)題寫在你的筆記本上注意：1詞數(shù)：不少于 60；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 【考點(diǎn)】提綱作文菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】【高分句型一】 First，we should listen carefully in class and we should speak English as much as possible首先，我們應(yīng)該在課堂上仔細(xì)聽(tīng)講，我們應(yīng)該盡量多說(shuō)英語(yǔ)speak English as much as possible盡量多說(shuō)英語(yǔ)【高分句型二】When we have problems，we can also ask

11、 our teacher for help當(dāng)我們有問(wèn)題時(shí)，我們也可以向老師求助when當(dāng)時(shí)候，引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，ask sb for help向某人求助【解答】How to learn EnglishMy name is Wang HaoIm good at EnglishHere is some advice on how to learn EnglishFirst，we should listen carefully in class and we should speak English as much as possible【高分句型一】We can try to remember e

12、ight to ten new words every day（要認(rèn)真聽(tīng)老師講課，課上盡量講英語(yǔ)；每天記住 810 個(gè)單詞）Second，we can listen to English songs，watch English movies and read English newspapers after classThey are great ways to learn EnglishAnd we can talk about them with our classmates in EnglishWhen we have problems，we can also ask our teach

13、er for help【高分句型二】（課后經(jīng)常聽(tīng)英文歌曲，讀英文報(bào)紙，看英文電影，并且和同學(xué)用英語(yǔ)交談；有問(wèn)題請(qǐng)教老師）Last but not least，we can write down our mistakes in our notebooksThen we can write down the correct answers next to them（把錯(cuò)題寫在筆記本上） I hope my advice is useful to you（希望）【點(diǎn)評(píng)】在解答寫作這類試題時(shí)，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開(kāi)頭、展開(kāi)和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個(gè)承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下，形成提綱，

14、寫時(shí)切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散，廢話連篇，嚴(yán)重跑題2假如你叫李明，你的筆友張磊寫信給你，告訴你他在用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行交流和英語(yǔ)寫作方面遇到了困難，希望得到你的幫助要求：1 80詞左右2 信的開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)3信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名（參考詞匯：first of all， next， then，finally， Whats more， however， as you/we know， as a result， on the other hand，for example， above all， ）Dear Zhang Lei，Im very glad to write to youI am lookin

15、g forward to hearing from you soonYours， Lingling【考點(diǎn)】提綱作文菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】【高分句型一】Firstly， youd better remember as many words as possible， which can make it easy to understand the English passage 首先，你最好記住盡可能多的單詞，可以使它容易理解英語(yǔ)短文had better do sth最好做某事；which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句【高分句型二】I am looking forward to hearing from you s

16、oon我期待著很快收到你的來(lái)信look forward to doing sth盼望著做某事【解答】Dear Zhang Lei，Im very glad to write to youIm sorry to hear that you are having trouble in learning English in high school Here are some tips that may help you（點(diǎn)題）Firstly， youd better remember as many words as possible， which can make it easy to unde

17、rstand the English passage 【高分句型一】Because any language learning is based on vocabulary Secondly， it is beneficial to you to listen to the teacher carefully， who can help you better understand English and teach you some language points about English Last but not the least， afterclass reading is also

18、beneficial to your English study， for example， you can read some English magazines and newspapers and watch some English movies， through which you can know more about foreign culture（方法建議）I am looking forward to hearing from you soon【高分句型二】（期待）Yours， Lingling【點(diǎn)評(píng)】能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型

19、等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)3你的家鄉(xiāng)在什么地方？有多少人口？和北京、上海等城市相比，你的家鄉(xiāng)有什么不同？它以什么而聞名？請(qǐng)以My hometown為題，寫一篇60詞左右的短文，介紹一下你的家鄉(xiāng)【考點(diǎn)】提綱作文菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】高分句型一：Now Im glad to tell you something about our hometownbe glad to do sth很高興做某事這句話意為：現(xiàn)在我很高興告訴你關(guān)于我的家鄉(xiāng)的事情高分句型二：It is very suitable for you to travel in Spring since the weathe

20、r is the bestIt is +adj+for sb to do sth對(duì)于某人來(lái)說(shuō)做是的這句話意為：因?yàn)榇禾焯鞖馐亲畎舻?，所以很適合在春天旅行【解答】My hometown Now Im glad to tell you something about our hometown （高分句型一）（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)明題意） My hometown HeFei lies in the southeast of our Anhui provinceIt has around 8，000，000 populationHere the weather is very hot in summer and c

21、old in winterIt is very suitable for you to travel in Spring since the weather is the best（高分句型二）There are a lot of famous attractionssuch as Chaohu Lake，Zipeng MountainThere are many buses to reach thereYou also can take a taxi at any timeCompared with big cities such as Beijing and Shanghai，it har

22、dly has traffic jam（介紹我的家鄉(xiāng)） Do you like my hometown，what about your hometown？（提出問(wèn)題）【點(diǎn)評(píng)】在解答寫作這類試題時(shí)，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開(kāi)頭、展開(kāi)和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個(gè)承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下，形成提綱，寫時(shí)切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散，廢話連篇，嚴(yán)重跑題4假設(shè)你是李華，住在昆明你的澳大利亞筆友 Eric 來(lái)信談到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)的情況請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一封回信回信需包括下表中的內(nèi)容：人口600 多萬(wàn)位置中國(guó)的西南部特點(diǎn)以花卉聞名于世，環(huán)境優(yōu)美，四季如春Dear Eric， Its very ki

23、nd of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city Yours， Li Hua【考點(diǎn)】圖表作文菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】高分句型一 Its a beautiful city with a long history此句是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的陳述句運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)with a long history 擁有悠久歷史，此句可翻譯為這是一座有著悠久歷史的美麗城市高分句型二Every year lots of people from different countries come to my home town for a trip此句是一

24、般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的陳述句運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)from different countries 來(lái)自不同國(guó)家，短語(yǔ)for a trip 為一次旅游，此句可翻譯為每年都有很多來(lái)自不同國(guó)家的人來(lái)我的家鄉(xiāng)旅游【解答】Dear Eric， Its very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city（要點(diǎn)一，回信感謝朋友的來(lái)信）Now let me tell you something about my home townMy home town is KunmingIts in the southwest of China an

25、d it is the capital of Yunnan ProvinceIts a beautiful city with a long history（高分句型一）（要點(diǎn)二，介紹家鄉(xiāng)的地理位置） Its not too hot or too cold all the year roundThere are over six million people in KunmingIts flowers are famous all over the world（要點(diǎn)三，介紹家鄉(xiāng)的人口及優(yōu)美的環(huán)境） Every year lots of people from different countri

26、es come to my home town for a trip（高分句型二）（要點(diǎn)四，介紹有不同國(guó)家的人來(lái)我家鄉(xiāng)參觀旅游） Yours Li Hua【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本題是圖表作文，寫作時(shí)能夠根據(jù)圖表提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)5（2017秋冠縣期中）許多人喜歡打籃球假如你最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是打籃球，請(qǐng)描述一下這項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)，包括它的特點(diǎn)以及你喜歡它的原因詞數(shù)80左右【考點(diǎn)】提綱作文菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】【高分句型一】I think nothing is more exciting than playing basketb

27、all我認(rèn)為沒(méi)有什么比打籃球更令人興奮的了I think+賓語(yǔ)從句【高分句型二】Playing basketball makes me strong，healthy and bright打籃球使我強(qiáng)壯，健康和聰明本句是動(dòng)名詞Playing basketball作主語(yǔ)make sb+形容詞，使某人【解答】My favourite sport is playing basketball（點(diǎn)題，我最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)）Basketball is popular among teenagersAs a boy，I like it very muchI play basketball with my frien

28、ds and my classmates at weekends or on holidaysSome people think playing basketball is more dangerous than some other sportsI agreeSometimes I hurt my legs or armsBut its an exciting sport（籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)的特點(diǎn)）I think nothing is more exciting than playing basketball【高分句型一】Playing basketball makes me strong，healt

29、hy and bright【高分句型二】（我喜歡的原因）【點(diǎn)評(píng)】能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)6學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站就My favourite sport為題進(jìn)行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文進(jìn)行 投稿1介紹你最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目；2喜歡這一運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目的理由；3最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)員（player） 要求：1語(yǔ)句通順、要點(diǎn)全面，可適當(dāng)拓展；2.70 詞左右提示： exciting， popular， healthyMy favourite sport_【考點(diǎn)】提綱作文菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】【高分句型一】 I thi

30、nk it is easy for me我覺(jué)得這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)很容易be easy for sb對(duì)某人容易【高分句型二】Playing basketball can keep me healthy and strong打籃球能使我保持健康和強(qiáng)壯Playing basketball 動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)，keep me healthy and strong使我保持健康和強(qiáng)壯，keep +n/pron+adj 使得某人保持【解答】 My favourite sport I like sports very much and basketball is my favourite sport（喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目） I

31、often play basketball with my friends on Sunday I can throw the basketball into the net I think it is easy for me【高分句型一】 I also watch basketball games on TV I like it because it is exciting and its popular all around the world Playing basketball can keep me healthy and strong【高分句型二】（喜歡的理由） My favour

32、ite player is Yao Ming （最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)員）I want to be a basketball player， too【點(diǎn)評(píng)】在解答寫作這類試題時(shí)，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開(kāi)頭、展開(kāi)和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個(gè)承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下，形成提綱，寫時(shí)切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散，廢話連篇，嚴(yán)重跑題7假如你是 Lingling， 你的美國(guó)朋友 Betty 要來(lái)中國(guó)旅游，她需要你的幫助下面是 Betty 寫給你的一 封信，請(qǐng)根據(jù)信的內(nèi)容給她回一封信，80 詞左右，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear Lingling， Im preparing for a trip to C

33、hina， and Im making a list of things for my trip， but I dont know what I should take Im leaving at the end of August Im going to stay there for three weeks What clothes should I take？ Which places of interest can I visit？ What else should I pay attention to？ Can you give me someadvice？Yours，BettyDea

34、r Betty， Im very happy that you can come to China for a trip Yours，Lingling【考點(diǎn)】提綱作文菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】【高分句型一】 So I think youd better take a pair of sunglasses所以我想你最好帶一副太陽(yáng)鏡had better do sth 最好做某事【高分句型二】 Its a good idea to bring an umbrella because it often rains in this month in China帶把傘是個(gè)好主意，因?yàn)檫@個(gè)月經(jīng)常下雨 Its a

35、 good idea to do sth 做某事是一個(gè)好主意【解答】Dear Betty，Im very happy that you can come to China for a tripThe weather will be sunny and hot in China in August（八月份的天氣情況） So I think youd better take a pair of sunglasses【高分句型一】（帶上太陽(yáng)鏡） Its a good idea to bring an umbrella because it often rains in this month in C

36、hina【高分句型二】（帶上雨傘） As for the clothes， shorts are good， or you can wear trousers But dont forget to take a coat or thicker clothes because in September the weather begins to get cooler（需要帶的衣服） Beijing is a good place to visit There are many places of interest， such as the Great Wall， the Summer Palac

37、e， the Palace Museum and so on You can visit them at any time But you should get everything ready early It will be exciting to visit these places（參觀的地方及其他注意事項(xiàng)）Have a good trip!Yours，Lingling【點(diǎn)評(píng)】在解答寫作這類試題時(shí)，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開(kāi)頭、展開(kāi)和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個(gè)承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下，形成提綱，寫時(shí)切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散，廢話連篇，嚴(yán)重跑題8（2018春蓬江區(qū)校級(jí)期末）假設(shè)你在一次英

38、語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)大賽中獲獎(jiǎng)有一家英文報(bào)刊邀請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文，介紹你如何練習(xí)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)，并給其他同學(xué)提供1、2點(diǎn)建議請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下寫作要點(diǎn)和寫作要求，寫一篇你將要發(fā)表的英語(yǔ)短文要點(diǎn)提示1英語(yǔ)是世界上最重要的語(yǔ)言之一2每天記錄一些好的句子或文段，收看英文節(jié)目3經(jīng)常用英語(yǔ)給外國(guó)朋友介紹江門的名勝以及美食4我的建議【寫作要求】1詞數(shù)不少于70單詞；2短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3文中需包括所有寫作要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)加入過(guò)渡語(yǔ)句，使短文通順、連貫； I am very glad to share my experience on practicing spoken English with you_【考點(diǎn)】

39、提綱作文菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】【高分句型一】I think English is one of the most important languages in the world我認(rèn)為英語(yǔ)是世界上最重要的語(yǔ)言之一I think+賓語(yǔ)從句；one of the+形容詞最高級(jí)+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，表示最之一【高分句型二】If you want to speak English well，you must take any chance to practice it如果你想說(shuō)好英語(yǔ)，你必須抓住任何機(jī)會(huì)去練習(xí)它if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句【解答】I am very glad to share my experience

40、 on practicing spoken English with you（點(diǎn)題） I think English is one of the most important languages in the world【高分句型一】（英語(yǔ)是世界上最重要的語(yǔ)言之一） To improve my spoken English，I take down some excellent sentences and passages every dayI also watch English programs on TV and on the InternetBesides，I often introdu

41、ce the places of interest and delicious food of Jiangmen to my foreign friends in English（我的學(xué)習(xí)方法） If you want to speak English well，you must take any chance to practice it 【高分句型二】Dont be shyJust try to use more English in our daily life（建議）Try your best and I am sure you will make great progress in

42、your spoken English soon（希望）【點(diǎn)評(píng)】能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)9校園英文雜志正在舉辦主題為我的家鄉(xiāng)的征文活動(dòng)請(qǐng)以My home townFoshan為題寫一篇 80 詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文寫作要點(diǎn)：1佛山的地理位置和人口（大約 700 萬(wàn)）2和過(guò)去相比，佛山的天氣、街道、建筑物等發(fā)生了怎樣的變化3佛山的特色4你對(duì)佛山的感想寫作要求：1不能逐句翻譯，不得在文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生真實(shí)的姓名2文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)My home townFoshan Hello!My

43、 name is Li Hua and I am from Foshan Welcome all of you to visit Foshan!【考點(diǎn)】提綱作文菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】高分句型一It has a population of about 7 million此句是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的陳述句運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)a population of 的人口，此句可翻譯為它有大約700萬(wàn)人口高分句型二 My home town is becoming better and better此句是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的陳述句運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)become better and better 變得越來(lái)越好，此句可翻譯為我的家鄉(xiāng)變得越來(lái)越好【解

44、答】My home townFoshanHello!My name is Li Hua and I am from Foshan（要點(diǎn)一，介紹我的家鄉(xiāng)在佛山）Foshan is in the south of ChinaIt has a population of about 7 million（高分句型一）（要點(diǎn)二，介紹佛山的地理位置及人口） The weather is nicer than beforeIts neither very hot in summer nor very cold in winterItsstreets are much wider and cleaner th

45、an beforeThe buildings in Foshan are much taller tooFoshan is famous for its fruit and vegetablesMany people come to buy them every dayMy home town is becoming better and better（高分句型二）（要點(diǎn)三，介紹佛山和過(guò)去相比，佛山的天氣、街道、建筑物等發(fā)生了巨大的變化及佛山的特點(diǎn)） I love my home townWelcome all of you to visit Foshan!（要點(diǎn)四，我對(duì)佛山的感想）【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本

46、題是提綱作文，寫作時(shí)能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)10（2018秋岳池縣期中）請(qǐng)你介紹一下有關(guān)你們學(xué)校開(kāi)展體育活動(dòng)的情況，以及你是如何進(jìn)行體育鍛煉的根據(jù)提示寫一篇80字作文提示：1同學(xué)們通常早上跑步，課間做眼保健操，課后打籃球或踢足球2學(xué)校每年秋季舉辦運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，去年運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)上你獲得跳遠(yuǎn)第一名3介紹你最喜歡參加和觀看的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目【考點(diǎn)】提綱作文菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】【高分句型一】 My favorite sport is football 我最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是足球favorite最喜歡的【高分句型二】 I think

47、 doing sports is good for our health我認(rèn)為做運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)我們的健康有好處 I think+賓語(yǔ)從句；be good for對(duì)有好處【解答】My classmates like sports very much We usually run in the early morning We do eye exercises in the break Sometimes we play basketball or football after class （早上，課間和課下的活動(dòng)）Our school holds a sports meeting every autum

48、n I won the first prize in the long jump last year（關(guān)于運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)） My favorite sport is football 【高分句型一】Sometimes I play football with my classmates after school I often watch football matches on TV on Sundays（我最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)） I think doing sports is good for our health【高分句型二】 I will take more exercise to keep fit（感

49、受）【點(diǎn)評(píng)】能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)11假如你是Tina，要給Mary寫一封電子郵件，告訴她你和你的同學(xué)上周日去泰山（Mount Tai）旅游了，要求用到下面的提示提示：classmate，meet，6：30 in the morning，by bus，at the foot of the mountain，have a party，play games，the top of，excited 【考點(diǎn)】提綱作文菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】【高分句型一】We went there by bus，because

50、 it was cheap and comfortable我們乘公共汽車去那里，因?yàn)榧缺阋擞质孢mbecause引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句【高分句型二】It took us about two hours to get there我們花了大約兩個(gè)小時(shí)到達(dá)那里It takes sb some time to do sth花費(fèi)某人多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間做某事【解答】Dear Mary，Last Sunday I went to Mount Tai with my classmates（去了哪里） We met at the school gate at 6：30 in the morning，then we left fr

51、om our school（出發(fā)時(shí)間） We went there by bus，because it was cheap and comfortable【高分句型一】 It took us about two hours to get there【高分句型二】（交通方式） At the foot of the mountain，we had a party and played gamesWe spent about three hours there In the afternoon，we climbed to the top of it（活動(dòng)） It was wonderful We w

52、ere very happy（感受）Love，Tina【點(diǎn)評(píng)】能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)考點(diǎn)卡片1提綱作文【概念】提綱作文是近幾年中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)的熱點(diǎn)題型命題者通常把提綱作文與其他常用文體形式（如書信、報(bào)道、通知、日記等）有機(jī)結(jié)合在一起進(jìn)行考查，使該類書面表達(dá)試題綜合性越來(lái)越強(qiáng)1提綱作文的特點(diǎn)提綱作文就是把文章的情景和內(nèi)容要求分成塊，以條目的形式列出，請(qǐng)考生據(jù)此進(jìn)行寫作這實(shí)際上是對(duì)考生思路和文章寫作范圍所作的明確限定因此，提綱中所列舉的要點(diǎn)要全部涉及到，一個(gè)也不能遺漏2思維空間靈活、開(kāi)放為了提高文章檔次，考生應(yīng)在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全的同時(shí)進(jìn)行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮因此，該類型的書面表達(dá)具有一定的靈活性，能較好地體現(xiàn)考生的英語(yǔ)思維能力3提綱作文的寫作步驟一般分為：審題，明確文體形式；構(gòu)思，根據(jù)提綱全面構(gòu)思文章內(nèi)容，根據(jù)內(nèi)容構(gòu)思詞語(yǔ)和句型結(jié)構(gòu)；寫作完稿，根據(jù)構(gòu)思的詞語(yǔ)和句型結(jié)構(gòu)，按照合理的順序和語(yǔ)言要求，連句成文注意句子間的正確聯(lián)系，注意詞語(yǔ)的豐富和句型的多樣【寫作舉例】假定你們學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)社征集以我最感激的人媽媽為主題的英語(yǔ)作文，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)要求寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕膵寢屢c(diǎn)：1、簡(jiǎn)單介紹媽媽2、感激媽媽的理由3