歷年高考英語作文樣本

1、 歷年高考學生作文樣本2007 假設你就是信中的ari，父親在你出生的時候寫了這封信。今天是父親50歲生日，你準備以寫信的方式，祝賀他的生日。以下是信的內容(信的開頭和結尾已經為你寫好)：1以約30個詞概括父親在他信中對你的期望；2以約120個詞表達你對父親的感恩，并包括如下要點：(1)讀信后的感受；(2)以你自己成長的經歷說明你的感受；(3)表達你對父親的感激和祝福。2008學校最近組織了一次中美學生交流活動，你參加其中的“大學校園生活”討論。聽完mike的發(fā)言之后，你準備寫一份發(fā)言稿，題目是“preparing myself for college life”，內容要點包括：1. 以約30

2、個詞概括mike的發(fā)言要點；2. 然后以約120個詞談談你理想的大學生活，內容包括： (1) 對中學生活的感受； (2) 理想的大學生活； (3) 中學生活和大學生活的差別，以及你打算如何適應。20091以約30個詞概括這段短文的內容；2然后以約120個詞就“該不該禁止游客和動物拍照”進行議論，內容包括： (1)人們在參觀動物園時為什么喜歡和動物拍照； (2)假如你處在那些動物的處境，你會有什么反應； (3)你認為是否應該禁止游客和動物拍照。1.5+2020101.以約30詞概括上文的主要內容。2.以約120詞對用金錢鼓勵孩子學習的現(xiàn)象進行議論，內容包括：(1)你對用金錢鼓勵孩子學習的看法：(

3、2)你的父母（或其他親人）是如何鼓勵你學習的；(3)你認為怎樣才能更好地鼓勵孩子學習_w w.k*s*5 u.co m考試院公布答案：概要應包括以下要點：1）ethan used money to encourage her son but fail 2) kids are happy3) teachers and psychologists are upset. ethan, a boy addicted to tv, quit watching tv and got paid from his mother , with which he purchased a tv. recently

4、many schools pay the kids for good performances . school kids are satisfied with it while some other adults worry about its bad effects. the authors classmate who was addicted to tv used the mother his mother rewarded him to buy a new tv. there is a debate about rewarding kids with cash. teachers an

5、d kids admire it while adults and psychologists show their concern. 專家們的點評2010版高考作文如何抓住評卷老師的心1以約30個詞概括這段短文的內容；2然后以約120個詞就“該不該禁止游客和動物拍照”進行議論，內容包括： (1)人們在參觀動物園時為什么喜歡和動物拍照； (2)假如你處在那些動物的處境，你會有什么反應； (3)你認為是否應該禁止游客和動物拍照。15分“should ban the tourists take photos with the animals”?the passage tells us that a

6、ll the koalas are easily unhappy and complaining with the reason is that many tourists are hugged and photographed them, which lead to they cant sleep.different people will offer quite different ideas. some people think that they should take photos with the animals when they go to visit them, so, we

7、 shouldnt ban it. however, others believe that we can not affect the animals sleep and they also have the freedom of sleep, so, they think should ban it.some may proclaim that it is a pleasure to take photos with the animals and it is also a nice memory thing. in the contrary, the objectors think th

8、at we should respect the animals idea and do well with them.in my opinion, i think we should ban the tourists take photos with the animals. if i were animal, i must hate others affect my sleep.no matter what we do, we should always get along well with all animals. animals is our friends. （1+14）點評：得分

9、點： 基本能表達出個人觀點（雖然語言結構出錯）：i think we should ban the tourists take photos with the animals； 大致都涉及到題目要求的三方面的內容； 嘗試運用高級的詞匯，如proclaim，和多樣的語言結構，如it is a pleasure to take photos.; no matter what we do等。失分點：1概括部分：過分概括，把澳大利亞某些動物園里考拉的情況說成是所有考拉的情況：all the koalas are easily unhappy；只有一句話的概括，語言表達錯漏百出：with the rea

10、son is that.這是run-on sentence，要拆開兩句話來寫；many tourists are hugged and photographed them這一句主動、被動不分；which lead to they cant sleep這里lead要用單數(shù)形式leads；介詞to后不能直接加句子；此外，概括也不夠全面，沒有提及政府部門的態(tài)度，因此，概括部分1分。2寫作部分：（1）標題不規(guī)范，為什么要用引號？問號也不應該寫在引號之外；標題的句子表達不正確，沒有主語，也不能說ban sb. do sth.；（2）語言結構出錯較多，除了在概括部分提到的之外，第二段so的使用，不能前后逗

11、號；they think should ban it 從句沒有主語，多個謂語堆在一起，根本沒有英語句子的概念；第三段in the contrary應改為：on the contrary。第四段都是“run-on sentence”（句子堆在一起表達）：we should ban the tourists take photos., i must hate others affect my sleep. 另外，in my opinion和i think是意義上的重復，只用其一即可；（3）不注意使用冠詞、名詞的單復數(shù)等，并且，隨心所欲地堆砌詞語表達，讀起來沒有英語的語感，感覺是生硬的中文式英語，例

12、如第三段a nice memory thing，if i were animal, animals is our friends.（4）照套固有的模板（different people have different ideas. some think.others think.i think.），沒有按題目要求的內容要點展開寫作，而是寫了些無關的內容。第二段開始different people will offer quite different ideas. 令讀者不明白，因為上文并沒有提到任何話題，不同的人到底對什么提出不同的觀點呢？接下來寫一些人認為應該拍照，一些人認為不應該拍照，這都沒

13、有根據(jù)題目的內容要點去寫；接下來第三段其實是第二段的重復：一些人認為拍照好，反對者認為要尊重動物?？忌皇窃诘谒亩尾盘岢鲎约旱挠^點，但沒有展開應有的討論。啟示與提升：（1）題目沒有要求，不必自擬標題；（2）多朗讀英語文章，培養(yǎng)語感，尤其要留意冠詞、名詞的單復數(shù)、動詞的正確形式等。英語的表達不是簡單的單詞堆砌；（3）切不可不顧實際而生硬套用事先背好的寫作模板，尤其是那些三段論，平常的訓練不要只是用一種模式，要切合題目實際，靈活運用各種寫作的方式。2011年廣州“一?！钡诹栁恼?011年廣州“一?！被A寫作： p62“ on one hand, some students suggested t

14、hat we should drive private cars less by sharing a car with others more often . on the other hand.these solutions are beneficial as they are money-saving , time saving as well as envrionmentally friendly.審題： 假設你是英語周報的編輯big paul, 你準備給劉軍回信，以下是信的內容（信的開頭和結尾已經為你寫好）：1 以約30詞概括上文小華面臨的困難。2 以約120個詞談談你對所概括的困難提

15、出自己的看法， 并包括如下要點：（1） 你讀完這封信后的感受；（2） 你對小華面臨這些困難的建議或看法；（3） 表達你對小華的評價和祝福。dear liu jun i am glad to receive your letter._學生樣本：“ according to the passage, lixua had trouble with others. ”“after reading your letter, i feel sympathy for you. you are so kind-hearted and broad minded but you are often laughed

16、 by others. ”09佛山二模閱讀下而的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。 if you got 100,000 dollars by chance，how would you spend it? here are some answers of our readers：elizabeth stahl：i would donate it to an arts program for young boys and girlsthe decrease in the creative arts programs such as music，art and drama in th

17、e schools have left many young artists out in the cold in academicsmuch like sports，art in any form，can and does make a difference in young peoples lives marjorie c：although i agree with elizabeth stahl 100，id give my money to each of my children to ensure the very best of educations for my two gran

18、ddaughters. clark：with one hundred thousand dollars1 would distribute it among those whom i know that are in need and ask that they inturn then share half of what theyve received with others that they personally know are in needcarol wilson：first, i would take care of all my debts and gain good cred

19、it again，and then i would spend the rest on a new carafter all said and done，take a nice long vacation寫作內容 美國某網站的論壇就 “how would you spend 100,000 dollars?” 為主題進行調查。上文是一些網友的回復，你閱讀了上文后，準備就該主題發(fā)表白己的觀點，內容要點包括： 1以約30個詞概括上述網友的觀點； 2然后以約120個詞談談你的觀點，并包括以下要點： (a) 你想用這筆錢做的一件或幾件事情； (b) 說明你這樣做的原因。summary : _?參考答案

20、：people would spend 100,000 dollars in different ways if they got it by chancesome would donate it to charity for various purposes while some others would take care of their own business with the moneyi decided to divide the money into 3 parts. first of all, i will deposit half of it to pay for my t

21、uition. secondly i will give some to my parents .last but not least , i will donate the rest to the affected area, helping the children in wen chuan.the reason why i donated it is that most of children are suffering from the hardship. 2009屆六校聯(lián)考：就“態(tài)度決定一切”這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，至少包含以下的內容要點，該部分的字數(shù)大約120詞左右。1 你從三兄弟的

22、故事中得到什么啟示？2 你對“態(tài)度決定一切”如何理解？3 舉一對比事例說明不同的學習態(tài)度產生不同的結果。 in our daily life, we should take positive attitude towards the trouble we meet. only with active attitude can we beat the difficulties. for example, i found it hard to improve my english at the beginning of senior 3. i didnt lose heart but worked

23、 harder than before. with my great effort, i got no.1 in the final exam.英語周報35期：if you put a buzzard in a pen six feet square and open at the top, the bird (in spite of his ability to fly) will be an absolute prisoner. when a buzzard begins a flight from the ground, he always starts with a run of te

24、n or twelve feet. without space to run, he will not even attempt to fly, but will remain a prisoner for life in a small cage with no top. the ordinary bat cannot take off from a level place. if a bat is placed on the floor or flat ground, all it knows to do is shuffle about helplessly until it reach

25、es some slight elevation from which it can throw itself into the air. then, at once, it takes off like a flash. a bumblebee, if dropped into an empty drinking glass, will be there until it dies unless it is taken out. it never sees the means of escape at the top, but persists in trying to find some

26、way out through the sides near the bottom. it will seek a way where none exists, until it is completely exhausted and dies. in many ways, there are a number of people that feel like the buzzard, the bat, the bee and the flea. they are struggling about through life, feeling trapped with all their pro

27、blems and frustrations, not realizing that the answer is right there “above” them.（寫作內容）1 以大約30個詞概括以上文中第三段的內容；2 以執(zhí)信中學2010屆高三第一學期期中考試閱讀下列短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。 dear patti, im writing to you for some advice on my studies. as you know, football is a very popular sport in the world and i am attracted

28、to it and i have fallen in deep love with it, which makes me feel so crazy. i have been spending lots of time doing many things related to it, like watching football matches, reading newspapers and magazines, and searching the web for more information about football. as a result, it has certainly di

29、sturbed my normal study. though i know to be a football fan is my hobby and my major objective is to learn more knowledge in school, i cant concentrate on my lessons and gradually i am tired of them. i am still a senior two middle school students, and ill have my own business even when i grow up, so

30、 i am not likely to do a job in the field of football. but now i cant stop myself from getting involved further with football. so i feel very depressed and want to know how to deal with the contradiction (矛盾) between my studies and hobbies. sincerely yours, li ming寫作內容 假如你是李明的筆友patti,請根據(jù)他信中所訴說的苦惱回封信

31、。以下是回信的內容（信的開頭和結尾已經為你寫好）：以約30個詞概括李明的苦惱；以約120個詞發(fā)表你的看法，并包括如下要點：你認為李明應該如何處理好他的學習和業(yè)余愛好的關系；以自己的事例說明你的理由；表達你對他的希望?！緦懽饕蟆靠梢允褂脤嵗蚱渌撌龇椒ㄖС帜愕挠^點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；1. 信中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學習名稱。dear li ming, thank you for your letter. from your letter, ive known something about your situation. sincerely yours, pa

32、tti參考答案也跑題了？why?dear li ming, thank you for your letter. from your letter, ive known something about your situation. you are very depressed because of the contradiction that you cant tear yourself away from football, which has been disturbing you so much that you cant concentrate on you lessons. hob

33、bies are very important to a person, without which life wont be as colorful as it should be. they can cheer you up and improve your comprehensive abilities, but they also require time and devotion. you are still a student, whose main task should be gaining knowledge, so you must know which is more i

34、mportant thing to do in different life periods. otherwise, you would regret having been too much addicted to that in the future. a hobby is like gold under the ground, and it will not come to you unless you dig it out yourself. if you can treat study as one of your hobbies, it will be more enjoyable

35、. i hope you can find yourself in the right place and have fun from your study. sincerely yours, patti基礎寫作目的：考察學生整理信息、并用適當?shù)脑~語、句型和語言手段產出的篇章能力。要求：只能用5句話表達全部信息。常規(guī)題型：信息整理+信息呈現(xiàn)（08-2010年）；信息聽取+信息呈現(xiàn)（07年）預期的語言手段：同位語手段、關于主題的呈現(xiàn)手段、呈現(xiàn)某人觀點、比例的表達、排位的表達、建議的表達、 提示的表達（很多學生只是翻譯，但信息不一定是字對字的，決定因素是所掌握的語言手段。）反思：基礎寫作的技巧？

36、上周，我們以“誰是你的偶像”為題，在2600名學生中進行了一次調查(survey)。以下是調查數(shù)據(jù)：.寫作內容 根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù)，寫一篇短文，包括以下內容： 1調查時間、調查問題以及調查對象； 2男女生在以明星為偶像方面的差異； 3“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差異； 4男女生在以偉人為偶像方面的異同； 5你的偶像及理由。last week , we did a survey among 2,600 students on the “ who is your idol “ the survey shows that half of the girls choose film and tv stars

37、 as idols , while 48% of the boys figure sports stars . as the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls , but the for the boys. however , the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. as for myself, thomas edison is my idol because his inventions h

38、ave greatly changed our life.你很榮幸地成為2008北京奧運會的一名志愿者，負責編寫奧運比賽項目的英語介紹。寫作內容請根據(jù)以下中文提綱，編寫射擊項目的英語介紹：背景：射擊最初只是生存工具，19世紀末才發(fā)展成為一項體育運動。1896：第一次成為奧運項目1904：中斷1928：中斷1932：重回奧運會1968：第一次允許婦女參加奧運射擊比賽現(xiàn)狀：穩(wěn)步發(fā)展，1896奧運會只有三項射擊項目，現(xiàn)今有17項。寫作要求只能使用5個句子表達全部內容shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport

39、only in the late 19th century. the sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 games. the sport returned to the olympics in 1932. women were first allowed to compete in the olympic shooting in 1968. the sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 olympics, and now there are seventeen vents in all.2009你是校報小記者，最近進行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況： 時間：上周末 對象：眼科醫(yī)生(eye-doctor)王教授 主題：我國中小學生近視(short-sightedness)問題 基本信息：(1)發(fā)生率：略高于50 (2)人數(shù)：世界第一 專家解讀：(1)原因：很復雜 (2)治療：沒有哪一種藥物能治愈近視 (3)建議：不要過度用眼；多參加戶外活動 (4)特別提示：如何握