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1、 Unit16 Communication workshop Unit 16 communication workshop- Writing:events in my life My interpretation consists of five parts. Part 1:Analysis of the teaching material1) The status and function This unit is about stories, which are interesting and appeal to students. It includes the following pa

2、rts: Warming up, reading, listening, Communication Workshop, Language awareness, Culture Corner and Bulletin Board. Writing is essential for eachEnglish-learner,and also plays an important role in the College Entrance Examination. So in this Period , I will help the students revise and apply writing

3、 strategies learnt in the past to improve their writing skills. 2) Teaching goals: According to the Principles of Course Design for Language Teaching, its objectives cover knowledge objective, ability objective and emotion objective.1.Knowledge objective 1)To help the students to write about a memor

4、able day or event in their life.2)To master useful words and expressions: remind awkward applause competition come last go wrong in his loud voice the instant it came as no surprise that 2. Ability objective1) To improve the students ability of writing.2) To improve the students ability of enjoying

5、English by describing an event.3. Moral objective 1)To let the Ss enjoy the beauty of English through the writing 2)To help the Ss learn to enjoy writing3)To build up the Ss confidence of learning English.3) Teaching important and difficult points:1)To let the Ss master the useful writing skills.2)T

6、o help the Ss learn to enjoy writing.Part 2 :Methods of teaching and learning1) Teaching methods： A. Task-based teaching method - assign tasks According the Ss level and learn step by step . B. Discussion to help the Ss solve questions by themselves- divide the whole class into nine groups according

7、 to their English level.2)Learning methods To enjoy the beauty of English by themselves with three drafts of a students composition on the topic A Day When everything went wrong. To study independently ,cooperatively and competitively. To taste the joy of success , be confident and have more enthusi

8、asm in learning English.3)Teaching Aids Multi-media computer; software: Power pointPart 3 :Analysis of the students In order that the students can make progress in English and have interest in writing, we mainly talk about the useful writing skills. In class, I will let the students know about the t

9、opic A Day When Everything Went Wrong and encourage them to describe what they saw and happened in their lives. Describing the events in their lives is also a good kind way of writing. Based on over a year of senior English study, the students have adapted themselves to English learning through a va

10、riety of activities, and they have acquired some independent andcooperative learning abilities. However, in the countryside there is no environment to learn English, so they should have morechances to practise.Besides, because this lesson is about writing, it must be helpful for the students to impr

11、ove their skills. Part 4 :Teaching Procedure Step1.Reading three drafts of a students composition. Step2.Discussion Step3.PracticeCommunication workshop Writing Events in my life 靈寶一高靈寶一高 周東軍周東軍Draft C is the most interesting May 24, 2005 will live in my mind forever. The day startedto go wrong the

12、instant I left home. Normally, the school busarrives at 7:30, but that day it didnt arrive at all! After waiting forages , I decided to walk. This was a big mistake! The sunwas already boiling hot and you can imagine how I felt by the time I arrived at school. But the trouble was only just beginning

13、 . As I climbed up the stairs to the classroom, I heard a booming voice behind me . It was Mr Fan, the English teacher, calling out my name . “Good luck in the poetry reading competition this Afternoon,” said Mr Fan as he quickly passed me. Step1.Read the three drafts of a student compositionOn the

14、topic A Day When Everything Went WrongStep2. Discussion Decide which one is the most interesting.Of course,I had forgotten all about competition. I tried and failed- to practise during the lunch break. The result? I couldnt remember any of the poems and had to keep looking down at my book. The more

15、I looked down , the redder my face became.I felt tense and dizzy. When I left the stage people didnt applaud very loudly and it came as no surprise that I was last in the competition. And so the day went on , until finally I climbed , tired and ashamed , into bed. Even then, My troubles were not ove

16、r. As I got into bed, my hand knocked over the glass of water on the bedside table. Water spilled all over my pillow. What a clumsy end to an awful day!In draft c ,use more colorful language and vivid description in details1.vivid description in details waiting for ages boiling hot booming voice cal

17、ling out tired and ashamed clumsy awful2.Advanced structure and vocabulary the instant by the time as I climbed as he quickly passed as I get into bed when I left it came as no surprise that the more . the redder live in my mind go wrong call out keep look down feel tense and dizzy How to write a go

18、od article?Step 3 Practice （一）復(fù)習(xí)整理詞匯，（一）復(fù)習(xí)整理詞匯，做好語言準(zhǔn)備做好語言準(zhǔn)備（二）好作文的（二）好作文的5要素要素1. 1. 生動、具體（有細節(jié)支撐）生動、具體（有細節(jié)支撐）2. 2. 恰當(dāng)使用高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯恰當(dāng)使用高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯3. 3. 語篇的連貫性與語言的邏輯性語篇的連貫性與語言的邏輯性4. 4. 頭尾呼應(yīng)（結(jié)尾升華）頭尾呼應(yīng)（結(jié)尾升華）5. 5. 交際語言得體（根據(jù)題材選擇語言）交際語言得體（根據(jù)題材選擇語言）好作文的好作文的5要素要素 生動、具體生動、具體 （有細節(jié)支撐）（有細節(jié)支撐） The animal ran at his prey(獵

19、物獵物). With a great roar, the tiger dashed through the jungle toward its prey.The woman ate the food and liked it.With her eyes fixed on the broiled chicken (燒雞燒雞), the thin, middle-aged lady enjoyed each mouthful. After supper, the man went to his bedroom.After a rich meal, the fat man slowly made h

20、is way to his bedroom. The girl is always happy.The cheerful girl always wears a happy smile on her face.鏈接高考（鏈接高考（2007全國卷全國卷 I）：）： 假定你是李華，希望通過外籍教師假定你是李華，希望通過外籍教師Peter找一個英語筆友。請寫一封短信，描述一下找一個英語筆友。請寫一封短信，描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣你理想中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣的筆友。具體條件包括：的筆友。具體條件包括：1 年齡；年齡；2 性別；性別；3 愛好（旅游、運動、寵物等）。愛好（

21、旅游、運動、寵物等）。鏈接高考（鏈接高考（2007全國卷全國卷 I）：）： 愛好（旅游、運動、寵物等）愛好（旅游、運動、寵物等）I want to have a pen friend who is interested in traveling, sports and keeping pets.要點齊全、語言正確要點齊全、語言正確 Improve it!I am a healthy boy full of energy so I like sports very much, such as basketball and football. 愛好運動愛好運動I am a healthy boy

22、full of energy so I like sports very much, especially outdoor activities. Whenever I have time, Ill go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates. Improve it!I like to seek a pen pal who is interested in travelling just like me. If possible, we can travel together or share traveling experiences

23、in our e-mails.愛好旅游愛好旅游 Improve it! I have another hobby that is keeping pets. I have kept a lovely dog named Bei Bei for 3 years.喜歡養(yǎng)寵物喜歡養(yǎng)寵物好作文的好作文的5要素要素2.2.恰當(dāng)運用高級結(jié)構(gòu)和高級詞匯恰當(dāng)運用高級結(jié)構(gòu)和高級詞匯After supper, I used to take a walk along the river bank.使用習(xí)語（短語、成語）使語言更有文采使用習(xí)語（短語、成語）使語言更有文采（1）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯

24、Only when everyone can do something for the environmental protection, will we have a clean environment. 倒裝句倒裝句（1）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯My hometown is a beautiful village surrounded by mountains.My hometown is a beautiful village with mountains around it. （1）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯A new railway is being

25、 built in my hometown.A new railway is under construction in my hometown.（1）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯As soon as we arrived, we started working at once.Upon arrival, we started working at once.（1）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯Although we met with a lot of difficulties, we accomplished our task on time.In spite of

26、 a lot of difficulties, we accomplished our task on time. 介詞結(jié)構(gòu)介詞結(jié)構(gòu)（1）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯我喜歡在晴朗的夜晚躺在草地上看天上一我喜歡在晴朗的夜晚躺在草地上看天上一眨一眨的星星。眨一眨的星星。I enjoy lying on grass on a clear night, watching twinkling stars in the sky. 非謂語動詞非謂語動詞簡捷、生動，富有內(nèi)涵簡捷、生動，富有內(nèi)涵（1）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯我們積極參加各種活動，這些活動對我們我們積極參加各種活動

27、，這些活動對我們成長非常有好處。成長非常有好處。We take an active part in a variety of activities, which are very beneficial to our growth. 各種復(fù)合句各種復(fù)合句（1）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯學(xué)校開展的各種活動使我們的生活豐富多學(xué)校開展的各種活動使我們的生活豐富多彩。彩。It is a variety of school activities that make our life colorful. 強調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)強調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)（1）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯）什么是高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯（2）恰當(dāng)使用高級結(jié)構(gòu)和

28、詞匯）恰當(dāng)使用高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯實例實例1我給你找到一處房子，我給你找到一處房子，25平米一居室的單平米一居室的單元房，帶衛(wèi)生間和廚房。元房，帶衛(wèi)生間和廚房。I have found a flat, covering an area of 25 square meters, which includes a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen. I have found a flat for you, as big as 25 square meters with a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen. （2）恰當(dāng)使用高級結(jié)構(gòu)和

29、詞匯）恰當(dāng)使用高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯實例實例2I dug holes in the ground, Li Ming was in charge of planting trees and Wang Ping was responsible for watering them. （Homework 國際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國學(xué)生參加國際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國學(xué)生參加的的“和平，友愛和平，友愛”夏令營活動，要求報名者提交英夏令營活動，要求報名者提交英文個人簡介。假設(shè)你是王珊，請根據(jù)下列信息寫一文個人簡介。假設(shè)你是王珊，請根據(jù)下列信息寫一篇個人簡介。篇個人簡介。姓名：王珊姓名：王珊 性別：女性別

30、：女年齡：年齡：16歲歲 學(xué)校：北京陽光中學(xué)學(xué)校：北京陽光中學(xué)其他：愛好音樂，攝影；善于與人交流，樂于助其他：愛好音樂，攝影；善于與人交流，樂于助人；熱愛自然，熱愛和平人；熱愛自然，熱愛和平參加夏令營的目的：結(jié)交朋友，了解外國文化參加夏令營的目的：結(jié)交朋友，了解外國文化姓名姓名: 王珊王珊 性別：女性別：女 年齡：年齡：16 學(xué)校：北京陽光中學(xué)學(xué)校：北京陽光中學(xué)I am Wang Shan. I am a girl of 16 years old. I study in Beijing YangGuang Middle School. Im Wang Shan, a girl of sixte

31、en, studying in Beijing Sunshine Middle School. 表述精練，結(jié)構(gòu)高級表述精練，結(jié)構(gòu)高級愛好音樂，攝影愛好音樂，攝影I love music and taking photos. (6w) Listening to the music and taking photos are my favorite things to do in my spare time. (17w)詞匯豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)高級詞匯豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)高級善于與人交流，樂于助人善于與人交流，樂于助人I love nature and peace. (5w) Im good at communica

32、ting with others and always ready to help other people. (13w)語言準(zhǔn)確，達意性語言準(zhǔn)確，達意性強強熱愛自然，熱愛和平熱愛自然，熱愛和平I love nature and peace. (5w)I love nature. Whenever Im free, Ill travel to beautiful natural attractions to experience natural wonders with my family. In addition, I love peace, for I hope all nations i

33、n the world can live in a peaceful environment and lead a happy life. (43w) 除要點外，有豐富的細節(jié)支撐除要點外，有豐富的細節(jié)支撐參加夏令營的目的：結(jié)交朋友，了解外國文化參加夏令營的目的：結(jié)交朋友，了解外國文化In order to make more friends and know more about foreign cultures I want to join in the summer camp. The purpose of my intending to join the camp is to make more friends from foreign countries, and to seize the chance to know more about foreign cultures .詞匯豐富，