讀后續(xù)寫The Hidden Treasure(公開課)優(yōu)秀課件

1、.1Continuation Writing讀后續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫.2Treasurepositive attitudefriendshipmoneyjewelryloveknowledge.3 1. What was the hidden treasure?2. How was it discovered?.4Fast reading4.What is the message conveyed in the passage?2. Who are the characters involved? 1. Whats the style of the context?3. Whats the hidde

2、n treasure? .5Fast reading2. Who are the characters involved? 1. Whats the style of the context? A. Narration B. Argumentation C. Exposition Old Man Donovan, Ann and I, and his family.Narration （記敘文）（記敘文） （議論文）（議論文） (說明文說明文).63. Whats the hidden treasure? The sweet, kind heart.4.What is the message

3、conveyed in the passage?Dont judge a heart until you know it.71. What is the first treasure mentioned?2. What did children do about his treasure?3. What did Donovan do to the children who stole his fruit?Read for comprehensionPara. 1-34. What was our attitude to him?.8Read for comprehension1. What i

4、s the first treasure mentioned?2. What did children do about his treasure?His beautiful fruit.They, drawn by the fruit, stole it.93. What did Donovan do to the children who stole his fruit?He threw rocks and even shot at them.We were influenced by the _.4. What was our attitude to him?rumorsnegative

5、We held a _ attitude to him. .101. How did we go back home that day?2. How did we feel when he stopped us?Para. 4-53. How did we feel when he offered us apples?.111. How did we go back home that day?We went home through his farm.2. How did we feel when he stopped us?We were extremely _. frightened3.

6、 How did we feel when he offered us apples?We felt quite _.surprised.12Para. 61. What did we do together as time went on?(1) He kept on (2) We talked to him for hours.We were impressed with him by_.communication.13werumorsmisunderstoodexperiencegot to knowcommunicationunderstoodWe took a _ attitude

7、towards Old Man Donovan.positive.14 Which of the following sentences can best convey the theme? A. A faithful friend is hard to find. B. Wisdom is more to be envied than riches. C. A human being can alter his life by altering attitudes.Critical thinking C. A human being can alter his life by alterin

8、g attitudes.D. The man proposes, the God disposes. .15Unfortunately, his family never seemed to enjoy our company. They never smiled or welcomed us in.negativeIt can be inferred that his family had a _ attitude towards us.16PredictionAdvice: The ending should be positive.Would the family change thei

9、r attitude towards us as we altered our attitude to old man?How? .17Paragraph7:Every summer, we would visit Mr. Donovan and talk to him._Continuation writingMr. DonovanWe His familyillnessParagraph8:The next winter, word got around that Old Man Donovan had died. _attitudeAdvice: make sure the story

10、develops logically and reasonably.18Possible version Every summer, we would visit Mr. Donovan and talk to him. He told us different kinds of stories we were fond of. But one summer, we heard that he was hospitalized because he was sick with his throat. Finding out that he was discharged from the hos

11、pital, we went to visit him right away. The family received us. When asked about his illness, they told us not to worry too much. When we were to leave , surprisingly, they offered us some luscious fruit and asked us to visit him as usual.19Paragraph8:The next winter, word got around that Old Man Do

12、novan had died. _weWe His familysadnessattitude.20Possible versionThe next winter, word got around that Old Man Donovan had died. Hearing the bad news, Ann and I couldnt hold back our tears. We were heartbroken and decided to go to the funeral. When we got to the funeral, we saw a lot of familiar fa

13、ces from the neighborhood. The family kindly greeted us and said they were so glad we had come. At the moment when we had to say goodbye to Mr. Donovan, our old friend, forever, we all wept mournfully, but our wonderful memories of him comforted us.21A successful storymessage(positive)development(reasonable)(picturesque)language.22sadnessWe couldnt hold back our tears. we all wept mournfully.止不住眼淚止不住眼淚悲傷的哭泣悲傷的哭泣我們的心像我們的心像針扎一樣痛針扎一樣痛We had pains of needles stabbing our hearts.Advice: tell on