14 讀后續(xù)寫：三個(gè)萬能情感句

1、讀后續(xù)寫三個(gè)的萬能情感句parti：第一個(gè)情感萬能句-1-part2：第二個(gè)情感萬能句 -2-part3：第三個(gè)情感萬能句-3-part4：素材日積月累-4-partl：第一個(gè)情感萬能句to one，s +情緒名詞，主句這個(gè)句式，非常簡單。屬于入門級(jí)的情感描述句。主句是用來描述情緒產(chǎn)生的原 因。首先我們來看例句：to my surprise,tom won the first prize in the english speech contest.令我驚訝的是 tom居然獲得了英語演講比賽的第一名。要想這個(gè)句子學(xué)好，必須積累情緒名詞，比如：【正態(tài)度】amazement 驚奇,delight 高

2、興,joy 高興,satisfaction 滿足,excitement 興奮，【負(fù)態(tài)度 j annoyance 煩惱，disappointment 失望，horror 恐怖，shame,羞恥 sorrow 悲傷，中性態(tài)度】puzzlement 迷惑，regret 后悔,relief 欣慰，surprise/ amazement 驚訝下面我們把這個(gè)簡單句型，進(jìn)行升級(jí)。【升級(jí)1】加強(qiáng)情緒的語氣比如我想要表達(dá)的是:非常令我吃驚的是，湯姆在英語演講比賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。你可以這樣寫：much / greatly to my surprise, tom won the first prize in the

3、 englishspeech contest.也就是在to前面加上much, greatly,或者在名詞前面添加great這個(gè)形容詞:to my great surprise, tom won the first prize in the english speech contest-【升級(jí)2】to the +情緒名詞+ of sb （名詞或者代詞），比如我想要表達(dá)的是： 令他的父母感到吃驚的是，他在英語演講比賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。to the surprise f his parents, he won the first prize in the english speech contest.

4、 這里把to my surprise改成了 to the surprise f his parents ,本質(zhì)上，是兩種所有 格的變換。【升級(jí)3】情緒名詞疊加使用。比如我要表達(dá)：令他驚訝和高興的是，他在英語演講比賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)to his surprise and joy, he won the first prize in the english speech contest.【升級(jí)4】:“to one's +情緒名詞”位置可變換這個(gè)短語的位置可以句首，句中，句末。請(qǐng)看下面例句:l to my surprise, found that tom won the first prize

5、 in the english speech contestpart2：第二個(gè)情感萬能句what+情緒動(dòng)詞+sb +was +that從句what主語從句描述情緒，that表語從句描述情緒產(chǎn)生的原因，在續(xù)寫里通?？梢员磉_(dá)故事 發(fā)展情節(jié)?！九e例】讓我驚訝的是tom居然獲得了英語演講比賽的第一名。what suiprised me was that tom won the first prize in the english speech contest.【歸納整理】【高興類】delight, please, excite, cheer, amuse, satisfy,【生氣類】annoy, up

6、set【驚訝類】surprise, astonish, shock, amaze,【害怕類】frighten, scare, terrify,【失望類】depress, disappoint, discourage, bore【憂慮類】worry, concern,【其他類】puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impresspart3：第三個(gè)情感萬能句sb. felt a great sense of + 情緒名詞 + welling up in sb's heart and surging through

7、 sb.這句話表示：“某人感到一股強(qiáng)烈的在內(nèi)心升騰、奔涌?！边@個(gè)萬能句也可以用來描寫情緒和心理，比句式結(jié)構(gòu)比前兩個(gè)句子要復(fù)雜，表現(xiàn) 力也要更豐富。well up表示“涌出”，我們可以這樣記憶：well表示“好”以外，還 可以表示“井”?！坝砍觥笔怯玫搅恕熬边@個(gè)含義。surge表示“洶涌”。這個(gè)句子的亮 點(diǎn)是后半句welling up in sb9s heart and surging through sb.,把情緒的描寫形象化, 具體化了。我們先來看兩個(gè)例句：舉例：jane感到一股強(qiáng)烈的恐懼,在她心中升騰，奔涌。jane felt a great sense of horror wellin

8、g up in her heart and surging through her.舉例2： jane感到一股強(qiáng)烈的嫉姮，在她心中升騰，奔涌。jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.（jealous嫉妒的，jealousy是"嫉妒”的名詞形式。）我們?cè)賮砜纯?，這個(gè)句型還可以如何拓展升級(jí)。非常簡單，就是加上非謂語動(dòng)詞， 在不同的位置，發(fā)揮的作用不同。升級(jí)一：句首可以加上doingsth,表示這種情緒產(chǎn)生的原因。舉例：看到丈夫再跟一個(gè)漂亮的女孩聊天，sunny感

9、到一股強(qiáng)烈的恐懼在內(nèi)心 升騰，奔涌seeing his husband chatting with a beautiful gjrl . jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.升級(jí)二:句尾可以加上doing sth,表示這種情緒產(chǎn)生后的結(jié)果。請(qǐng)看下面的例句：簡感到一種強(qiáng)烈的嫉妒感在她心中涌出來，把書扔向女孩。jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through

10、her .throwing the book at the girl.part4：素材日積月累人物情緒描寫之一：開心（通過心理、表情、動(dòng)作來表達(dá)）平庸版：he was happy.進(jìn)階版:1. her eyes shone/glittered/sparkled /twinkled with joy.2. her face lit up with pleasure.（容光煥發(fā)）3. her heart was pounding with excitement.（砰砰直跳）4. happiness/joy/pleasure/delight took hold of him.（極度開心）5. she

11、 was overflowing with happiness/joy/pleasure/delight.（幸福洋溢）6. he shed tears of joy.（流下開心的淚水）例句：1. his eyes twinkled with pleasure when he saw the news.當(dāng)他看到新聞，他的眼里閃耀著快樂。2. he grinned with delight when he saw us.當(dāng)他看到我們，咧開嘴開心地笑了。3. the smile on her face shone like a diamond.她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃耀。4. i couldn

12、9;t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.我抑制不住內(nèi)心的喜悅，蹦蹦跳跳地進(jìn)了家門。5. he cast us a look/glance,with his face wearing a broad/wide/radiant/warm smile. 她看向我們，面帶燦爛/溫暖的笑容。6. when his mother kissed him on the cheek,it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world.當(dāng)媽媽親吻他的臉頰時(shí)，小嬰兒開心極了。人物情緒描寫之二：傷心（心理、表情

13、、動(dòng)作）平庸版：he was sad.進(jìn)階表達(dá)：不同的哭：cry哭（泛指，哭出聲）sob嗚咽，啜泣 wail嚎啕大哭 weep 小聲/無聲流淚burst into tears放聲大哭fight back tears抑制住淚水be close to tears / be on the verge of tears 快要哭了be in tears 含淚her eyes were wet with tears例句：1. he sighed with disappointment.他失望地嘆了口氣。2. he struggled to fight back his tears.他試圖控制住自己的淚水。

14、3. his eyes brimmed with tears of sorrow.他的眼里。禽滿了悲傷的淚水。4. he stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他靜靜地站著，眼淚流下他的臉頰。5. i feel like i am floating in an ocean of sadness.我感覺自己漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。6. i saw an old lady wailing with fist beating her chest in the street comer. 我看至!j一 個(gè)老奶奶在街角捶胸痛哭。7. when he embr