《中考英語總復(fù)習(xí)》68 各地中考真題再現(xiàn)04 2021年中考英語書面表達高分作文攻略（全國通用版）

1、68 各地中考真題再現(xiàn)04 2021年中考英語書面表達高分作文攻略（全國通用版） （一）學(xué)校是否有必要設(shè)立“無作業(yè)日”？對此，你在班中進行了調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文在英語課上交流，并闡述你的觀點和理由。 opinionsreasonsmost studentsyeshave free timefeel relaxedsome studentsnowaste timeget bad gradesi注意：短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)； 詞數(shù)：80-100； 短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：無作業(yè)日 homework-free day短文首句：i've do

2、ne a survey about whether it is necessary to have homework-free day. here are the results._【寫作思路】這是一篇材料類作文。著重通過調(diào)查對“無作業(yè)日"學(xué)生的看法：贊成與反對及理由。主要以第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作中應(yīng)適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏切關(guān)系?！緟⒖挤段摹縤've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have homework-free day. here are the results. most stude

3、nts think it necessary to have homework-free day so that they will have more free time to do what they like, such as reading their favorite books, going swimming and so on. they will also feel relaxed and join their friends in playing different games.some students, however, don't like it. they&#

4、39;re afraid that they may waste time or even get bad grades. they prefer to do homework as usual.in my view, homework-free day will certainly help a lot. i can choose to watch some interesting english programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills.【名師點評】文章中使用了非常好的短語或句子會給文章增色。suc

5、h as ，例如； homework-free day ，無作業(yè)日；prefer to do sth.更喜歡做某事。i've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have homework-free day. （介詞后接賓語從句）；most students think it necessary to have homework-free day so that they will have more free time to do what they like.（賓語從句；不定式做主語和結(jié)果狀語從句）；i can choose

6、 to watch some interesting english programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. （非限制性定語從句）。 還運用了or， however 等使上下文銜接的更好。（二）現(xiàn)在越來越多的學(xué)生使用“作業(yè)幫”這個app 來搜查他們不會做的題目。對此，不同的人有不同的看法。請根據(jù)以下文字的提示，并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點，寫一篇英語短文。優(yōu)點1. 及時幫助學(xué)生解決在學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的困難；2. 在家就能學(xué)習(xí)，簡單，方便；3. 可以選擇自己喜歡的老師，學(xué)習(xí)興趣更濃。缺點1. 有的學(xué)生假裝學(xué)習(xí)，事實

7、上在玩游戲；2. 有的學(xué)生不想獨立思考，直接照抄答案，他們根本不關(guān)心自己的學(xué)習(xí)，只是虛度光陰。你的建議聯(lián)系實際，給出自己合理的建議。要求：1. 80100 詞。（開頭的首句已給出，不計算在詞數(shù)內(nèi)）2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱及其他相關(guān)信息，否則，不予評分。參考詞匯：convenient方便的，便利的 pretend to do.假裝做 think independently獨立思考today, more and more students are using the app zuoyebang. however, different people have different

8、ideas about it. some people think _【寫作思路】這篇作文要求我們對介紹不同人對“作業(yè)幫”這個應(yīng)用軟件的看法，并聯(lián)系實際，發(fā)表自己的觀點。題目中利用表格的形式，列出了寫作的主要內(nèi)容，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括以下幾個部分：作業(yè)幫的優(yōu)點、缺點以及個人觀點?？梢苑譃槿畏謩e進行敘述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈現(xiàn)，學(xué)生們需要用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達出來。最后一部分內(nèi)容則需要學(xué)生們聯(lián)系自己的實際生活，發(fā)揮想象力，自己來補充適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容。文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時、第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先要將題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容都包括在作文中，不能遺漏要點?？梢愿鶕?jù)表達需要適當(dāng)發(fā)

9、揮，使文章內(nèi)容更加充實、完整，但需要注意合理性，要緊貼題目要求和文章主旨。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯表格內(nèi)容，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然。【參考范文】today, more and more students are using the app zuoyebang. different people have different ideas about it. some people think its useful. the app

10、zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. its easy and convenient for them.they can study at home. they can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying. however, others dont think so. they think some students just pretend to st

11、udy, in fact they play games. they dont want to think independently, but only copy the answers. they dont care about their studying at all. its a waste of time. i think its good for students who are hard-working. they can study better. but for students who dont want to study, its very bad.【名師點評】這是一篇

12、優(yōu)秀是作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，把人們對“作業(yè)幫”這個應(yīng)用軟件的不同看法進行了介紹，并在最后發(fā)表了自己的觀點。短文有以下幾個特點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點。各部分內(nèi)容之間層次清晰，敘述有條理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的主題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，語言得體。句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。除簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)外，短文里還使用了and連接的并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句、定語從句等復(fù)合句，以及動詞不定式、動名詞等非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型有the app zuoyebang can help students to so

13、lve difficulties in their studying in time.、they can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.、they think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games.、i think its good for students who are hard-working等。（三）禮貌從我做起，從現(xiàn)在開始，從點滴小事做起。請根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，以 “

14、when to say thank you”為題，寫一篇短文。提示：1) when should we say “thank you” at home? 2) when are we supposed to say “thank you” at school? 3) .要求：1) 短文須包括提示中的兩個要點和一個補充要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 2) 短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。 3) 詞數(shù)80個左右。(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))參考詞匯：wash, encourage, openwhen to say thank youits polite to say “thank you” when o

15、thers help us or say something kind to us. _【寫作思路】這是一篇要求介紹我們在家和在學(xué)校怎么做個有禮貌的人。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。重點短語和句型：say"thank you"to sb 對某人說"謝謝"，it's+形容詞+for sb to do sth 做某事對

16、某人來說怎么樣，help sb do sth幫助某人做某事，as often as possible盡可能經(jīng)常的?！緟⒖挤段摹縲hen to say thank youit's polite to say "thank you" when others help us or say something kind to us. being polite is a good tradition in our country. nobody likes a person who is impolite. it's important for us to be po

17、lite. we should say "thank you" to parents when they cook for us. we should say "thank you" when they wash clothes for us. we should also be polite at school. when the teachers help us work out questions, we should say "thank you" to them. when we get bad grades and the

18、 teachers and classmates encourage us, we should say "thank you". when someone opens the door for us, we should say "thank you". we should say "thank you"as often as possible. if everyone is polite to others, the world will be more and more beautiful.【名師點評】如果想在寫作方面拿到高分，

19、請大家關(guān)注以下幾個方面：1. 務(wù)必保持卷面整潔，書寫清晰，閱卷老師的第一印象極為重要。2. 認真審題（確定體裁，格式，人稱，時態(tài)）-列出提綱（把所要表達的內(nèi)容按一定順序列成若干條。）-打草稿-修改-定稿的寫作流程。3. 學(xué)會用英語思維表達，適當(dāng)使用增強連貫性的連接詞，好詞、好句的積累，擴句練習(xí)和改錯練習(xí)，學(xué)以致用。4. 加強練習(xí)，多寫多練，學(xué)會升級詞匯，不用重復(fù)句型，注重從句的使用，使句子在寫對的基礎(chǔ)上，再寫好、寫優(yōu)美。（四）write a review（評論） of the following story in about 120 words the review has to includ

20、e the following points（閱讀下面的故事，請根據(jù)下面的提示，寫出一篇約120詞的評論）（1）the title of your review（你撰寫的評論的標題）（2）your idea（s）， examples and the reason（s） for unhappiness and happiness in the story（你歸納的關(guān)于故事中幸福和不幸福的觀點，舉例子并說明原因）（3）your idea（s） of happiness， examples for happiness in your daily life（歸納你在日常生活中關(guān)于幸福的觀點，并舉例說明

21、）（4）your conclusion about happiness（關(guān)于幸福的結(jié)論）（5）the words you may use（你可能用到的詞） be satisfied with（對滿意） desire n欲望 contentment 知足 the key（關(guān)鍵） to happinessa long time ago， in a rich and beautiful country， there lived an unhappy king he slept badly and didn't feel like eating he often cried for no re

22、ason this made the queen and his people worried so they called a doctor to examine himbut he found nothing wrong with his bodyhe said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy person to wearthat would make him happythe prime minister was called to the palace but when they explained the king'

23、s situation to him， he said，"although i have a lot of power， it doesn't make me happy i'm always worried about losing my power"then the king's banker came to say， i'm afraid i'm not happy either i have a lot of wealth， but i'm always worried about losing money someo

24、ne tries to steal my money next， the palace singer was called to say， "i'm famous but i'm not happy because i'm worried about being followed by others i can't be free"finally， the top general was told to go out to find a happy man he searched and searched but couldn't f

25、ind anyone everyone seemed to have their own problems， and no one was truly happy just as he wanted to give up he saw a poor man on the street he was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself the general went to him and said，"what makes you so happy？ you have no power， money， or fame

26、" the man said，"i have everything i want and i don't want what i can't have so i'm happy， and my song comes from the happiness in my heart ""can you give your shirt to me， i need it， "said the general"what shirt？ i don' t have any shirts"answered th

27、e man_【寫作思路】這是一篇要求寫評論的文章，根據(jù)下面的故事中的相關(guān)信息寫出一篇約120詞的評論。所提供的材料中列舉了撰寫的評論的標題。主要從：（1）歸納的關(guān)于故事中幸福和不幸福的觀點，舉例子并說明原因。（2）歸納你在日常生活中關(guān)于幸福的觀點，并舉例說明；（3）關(guān)于幸福的結(jié)論。這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱。注意評論中必須包含材料上的故事情節(jié)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性?！緟⒖挤段摹縨y

28、 thoughts about happinesspower, wealth, and fame can't always make people happy. for example, the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have. what can always make me happy？happiness is

29、always in my heart and is easy to find if i pay more attention to what i have. for instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a glass of water from mother when i am studying, getting help from my friends when i am in trouble and so on. these are the moments when i am happy

30、.all in all, don't think about what you can't have. contentment is the key to happiness.【名師點評】（1）高分句型一 for example，the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.例如，富人不快樂，因為他們害怕失去錢，

31、而窮人真正快樂是因為他對自己所擁有的感到滿足。句子because they are afraid of losing money是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。（2）高分句型二 all in all, dont think about what you can't have. 總之，不要想你不能擁有的東西。句子what you can't have.作think about的賓語。（五）近年來，學(xué)生意外傷害事故頻發(fā)，給許多家庭帶來永久的傷痛。作為中學(xué)生，我們該如何有效的自我保護，免受傷害呢? 我市正在舉行以“how to keep safe”為題的中學(xué)生安全知識英語征文比

32、賽，請你根據(jù)下表提示，寫一篇短文參賽吧。how to keep safetraffictraffic lights, electric bikes（電動車）swimmingrivers, swimming poolinternetid number, code(密碼）, unhealthy websites要求：1.短文必須包含提示中所有內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)：80-100（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。how to keep safedo you know that many dangerous

33、things will happen if we are not careful enough? as a student, how to keep safe is very important._after all, life is very important. we should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.【寫作思路】近年來，學(xué)生意外傷害事故頻發(fā)，給許多家庭帶來永久的傷痛。作為中學(xué)生，我們該如何有效的自我保護，免受傷害呢? 我市正在舉行以“how to keep safe”為題的中學(xué)生安全知識英語征文比賽，給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注