5月6日托福寫作真題解析

1、5月 6日托福寫作真題解析2021年 05月 06日托福寫作考題回憶閱讀：美國(guó)的一種叫 auklet 的海鳥(niǎo)出現(xiàn)了 die-off 的情況。1. 可能是由于在發(fā)生 die-off 之前的夏天， auklet 的數(shù)量激增，導(dǎo)致對(duì)于食物的競(jìng) 爭(zhēng)加強(qiáng)，有些 auklet 就餓死了。2. Auklet可能接觸sea stars的時(shí)候，感染了 sea stars病毒，導(dǎo)致 Auklet死亡。3. 海水溫度升高，導(dǎo)致 zooplankton 的質(zhì)量下降，而 Auklet 是以 zooplankton 為食 的，所以受到了影響。聽(tīng)力：以上列舉的沒(méi)有一個(gè)能夠解釋 auklet 的 die-off.1競(jìng)爭(zhēng)可能會(huì)

2、導(dǎo)致一些 auklet的數(shù)量減少，但是不會(huì)導(dǎo)致這么多auklet的死亡， 并且食物和 auklet 之前的平衡沒(méi)有方法修復(fù)。2.如果是少了病毒感染的話，那么 auklet 會(huì)帶有相應(yīng)的病毒，但是研究發(fā)現(xiàn)，死 去的 auklet 上面并沒(méi)有病毒存在。3.其他的一些以 zooplankton 為食的動(dòng)物沒(méi)有發(fā)生死亡現(xiàn)象。 為什么只有 auklet 出 現(xiàn)了這個(gè)情況，這說(shuō)不通。Sample Answer:The writer presents three reasons to explain why auklets in America died off. However, the professo

3、r demonstrates a different idea that these reasons are all unconvincing.To question the first reason presented in the passage that auklets might die from starvation because of their large population and the relative little food, the professor points out that the balance between the number of a speci

4、es and the food availability could actually be balanced. Therefore, even we assume that auklets would need to compete with each other for food because the number of them had increased in the previous summer and some of them didn ' t win that competition and died, the food then would be enough fo

5、r those auklets that had remained alive. In this case, they would not completely die out.Another important point showed in the reading material is that auklets might be infected by some deadly virus from sea stars. But the professor presents a conflicting idea that scientist didn't find this kin

6、d of virus in auklets ' body. It is strange that they got infected by virus but didn' t had any in their body. The second reason in the reading passage is wrong again.Finally, the professor states that zooplankton still could not be the reason for auklets' die-off. Because there are othe

7、r sea animals that also feed on zooplankton but they are not affected. This challenges the third theory made by the writer who says that the drop of zooplankton 's quality caused the die-off of auklets.(248 words)獨(dú)立Do you agree or disagree: It is impossible to always be completely honest with yo

8、ur friends?Sample Answer:題目分析：同意不同意類中的單一論述題。話題與朋友相關(guān)，但是關(guān)鍵詞除了friends之外impossible, always和hon est都提示我們這個(gè)題目屬于一個(gè)抽象類題 目。所以我們采用抽象題目具體化的方式展開(kāi)思路。先確定總觀點(diǎn)：同意No matter in the past or at present, it is undeniable that people keep making friends through their life time. A large proportion of them hold a viewpoint t

9、hat in order to maintain long-standing friendship with others, we should always be honest with them.This is understandable and in most cases, commendable. However, after careful consideration about friendship, being completely honest with friends is definitely impossible. Here are some reasons and e

10、xamples to support my view.此題目與 4 月 15 號(hào)的獨(dú)立題目屬于同一話題，所以開(kāi)頭段第一句和第二句可以 有所借鑒。如果是不同的題目，第三句跟在普遍或是別人的觀點(diǎn)之后，也可以有 所保存。 在表達(dá)總觀點(diǎn)上， 添加確定性的副詞增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣。 開(kāi)頭段末尾加上過(guò)渡句First, for the sake of maintaining friendship with others, being honest unconditionally is the last thing in the world we should choose. For example, when a fr

11、iend is in preparation for a really important English speech competition, it is meaningless to point out that he is not going to win that competition and he is wasting time if he spends time on it, even the truth is that he speaks terrible English and has no logic in writing his speech draft. As fri

12、ends, we should not and cannot say so when we are given such situation. If you do choose being honest in this case, this friendship will possibly be over and that friend's feelings will be hurt so badly that he may blame you. Alternatively, you can help him practice his oral English and together

13、 with him correct the mistakes in his speech draft, rather than being so honest that sacrifice your friendship with him.本段的分論點(diǎn)是為了維護(hù)友誼，不能一直完全老實(shí)。但是因?yàn)榇朔终擖c(diǎn)也較為抽 象，所以論證局部全部用的舉例。在分論點(diǎn)的道理比擬顯而易見(jiàn)或者是不好說(shuō)理 論證的時(shí)候，全部舉例不失為一種好方法。Second, considering the characteristic of friendship, sometimes we cannot be completely h

14、onest with friends in terms of our own issues. For example, the password of our bank account should be avoided to tell friends. And the financial situation is not something we ought to be honest with them. What is more illustrating, the fact that you hate your boss cannot be shared with your friends

15、 from work and you think someone you and your friend both know is not a kind person cannot be shared with that friend. The former may very much likely get you be fired and the latter may possibly lead that two people to defriend with you. Similarly, when your break up with your girlfriend, it is unn

16、ecessary to be honest with your friends about the reason. And when you are sick or bankrupt, you cannot tell any friend that you need help. Doing so will only make your friends leave you unless they are bosom ones who are willing to sacrifice time and their hard-earned money to help you out. As we c

17、an see from above explanation, it is impossible and not beneficial to always be completely honest with friends.本段的分論點(diǎn)自身的某些事情，不應(yīng)該也不能夠?qū)ε笥淹耆蠈?shí)。跟上段一樣， 論述局部是舉例，但是為了跟上一個(gè)主體段的論述方法區(qū)別開(kāi)來(lái)，采用了歸納法 中的舉例方式，也就是用一些相關(guān)相似的小事實(shí)，得出分論點(diǎn)的結(jié)論，而非具體 舉例了。But I am not saying that we should not be honest with friends. Being honest i

18、s respectable and may also bring some benefits to both of the two friends and contributes to the friendship sometimes. For example, if you points out the shortage of your friend honestly, he may overcome that shortage and become a better man, which in turn, will enhance your friendship with him since he will appreciate you for this. Unfortunately, things will not always going like this, especially when you have embarrassed him while being honest with your friend. And regarding personal issues, being completely honest with friends sometimes is showing trust and intimacy; neve