記敘文概要寫作

1、優(yōu)點(diǎn)英語(yǔ)1 記敘文概要寫作i.真題再現(xiàn)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60 詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。1 that cold january night, i was growing sick of my life in san francisco. there i was, walking home at one in the morning after a tiring practice at the theatre. with opening night only a week away, i was still learning my lines. i was having trouble de

2、aling with my part-time job at the bank and my acting at night at the same time. as i walked, i thought seriously about giving up both acting and san francisco. city life had become too much for me. 2 as i walked down empty streets under tall buildings, i felt very small and cold. i began running, b

3、oth to keep warm and to keep away from any possible robbers. very few people were still out except a few sad-looking homeless people under blankets. 3 about a block from my apartment, i heard a sound behind me. i turned quickly, half expecting to see someone with a knife or a gun. the street was emp

4、ty. all i saw was a shining streetlight. still, the noise had made me nervous, so i started to run faster. not until i reached my apartment building and unlocked the door did i realize what the noise had been. it had been my wallet falling to the sidewalk （人行道） . 4 suddenly i wasn t cold or tired an

5、ymore. i ran out of the door and back to where i d heard the noise. although i searched the sidewalk anxiously for fifteen minutes, my wallet was nowhere to be found. 5 just as i was about to give up the search, i heard the garbage truck pull up to the sidewalk next to me. when a voice called from t

6、he inside, “ alisa camacho?” i thought i was dreaming. how could this man know my name? the door opened, and out jumped a small red-haired man with an amused look in his eye. “ is this what you re looking for?” he asked, holding up a small square shape. 6 it was nearly 3 a.m. by the time i got into

7、bed. i wouldn t get much sleep that night, but i had gotten my wallet back. i also had gotten back some enjoyment of city life. i realized that the city couldn t be a bad place as long as people were willing to help each other. step 1: read for text type and structure 1)the text is a(n) narration （記

8、敘文） . 2)structure: 六要素： time, place, character, cause（起因） , process（經(jīng)過(guò)） and outcome（結(jié)果） +主題（ theme）step 2: find out the elements of the narrationtime one cold january night 優(yōu)點(diǎn)英語(yǔ)2 place empty streets in san francisco character i, a small red-haired man cause para. 1 i was walking home at one in the m

9、orning after a tiring practice at the theatre. as i walked, i thought seriously about giving up both acting and san francisco. process para. 2 i began running to keep warm and to keep away from any possible robbers. para. 3 i heard a noise which made me nervous and run faster, which was actually the

10、 sound of my wallet falling. para. 4 i ran back but my wallet was nowhere to found. outcome para. 5 just as i was about to give up the search, a garbage truck driver returned the wallet to me. theme para. 6 i realized that the city couldn t be a bad place as long as people are willing to help each o

11、ther. step 4: link the sentences by conjunctions（連詞） if necessary : one cold january night, i was walking home, thinking about giving up both acting and her tiring life in san francisco. to keep warm and to keep away from any possible robbers, i began running and didn t realize my wallet had been lo

12、st until i got home. therefore, i ran back but failed to find it. just as i was about to give up the search, a garbage truck driver returned the wallet to me. moved by this, i realized that the city couldn t be a bad place as long as people are willing to help each other. step 3: restate/ rewrite to

13、 make it shorter one cold january night, i was walking home, thinking about giving up both acting and her tiring life in san francisco. to keep warm and to avoid any possible robbery, i began running and didn t realize my wallet had been lost until i got home. therefore, i ran back but failed to fin

14、d it. unexpectedly, a garbage truck driver returned it to me. moved by this, i regain faith in city life and would probably stay on. step 5: check and revise step 6: copy your draft ii.實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練i received a call today asking if i would be ready to bring food to a family in need. the mother was having a m

15、ajor operation and would be lying down for several weeks. of course, i responded with an immediate “ yes! ” . as i planned the meal in my head, i reflected on how many times over the years i had been asked to prepare food. i have done so countless times with a very open heart. but the truly amazing

16、thing is that i have received double over the course of my life. when my mother passed away, our house was filled with fresh dinners for weeks. a woman from the church of our community stopped by each evening with some food. the gift of food was her small way of trying to relieve our pain. 優(yōu)點(diǎn)英語(yǔ)3 lat

17、er in my life, when i was on bed rest during my pregnancy with twins, men of the church again stepped in to help. they arranged babysitting for my two-year-old daughter, and brought lovely dinners to our house. even when i was put in the hospital, my husband would bring cooked meals to my hospital r

18、oom. how we relied on these dinners to feed my tired husband and young daughter. food is all about comfort. it feeds our bodies, but it can also feed our souls. when you hear people talking about their favorite holidays, it usually includes their feelings connected with sharing food. i know that i will have many more opportunities in my lifetime to prepare food for others. it is truly a gift i want to prepare and deliver to someone in need. 參考答案：one day i receiv