《中考英語總復(fù)習》熱點04 網(wǎng)購-2020中考英語作文熱點素材+精彩范文

1、熱點04 網(wǎng)購 網(wǎng)購無疑是今年的火爆熱點之一，它為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2020年中考英語寫作預(yù)測話題是：網(wǎng)購?！绢A(yù)測題目】（一）你喜歡網(wǎng)上購物嗎？你對“網(wǎng)購”這一現(xiàn)象有何看法？請寫一篇短文，從購物的時效性、安全性、商品的品種、質(zhì)量、價格等方面說說“網(wǎng)購”相對于傳統(tǒng)購物方式的優(yōu)勢與劣勢。_【參考范文】with the development of the internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the internet has become a commonplace in our life. her

2、e consumers can buy almost everything they need.shopping on the internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. people don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. this is

3、 especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. the goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the internet. all they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. the commodities they order will be delivered to them pr

4、omptly. however, shopping on the internet also has its disadvantages. the first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. the second disadvantage is that some shops on th

5、e internet are not registered. they will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.【解析】試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是網(wǎng)上購物的優(yōu)缺點。要求中只給出了要點，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動筆先應(yīng)先認真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。

6、內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣?？键c：命題作文的寫作點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。（二）“雙11”電商銷售旺季即將到來，伴隨現(xiàn)如今已然成為時尚的“網(wǎng)購”熱潮，越來起多的學生也進入到網(wǎng)購的群體當中，校學生會就網(wǎng)購這一熱點問題作了問卷調(diào)查，觀點如下:優(yōu)點足不出戶；節(jié)約時間，避免擁擠，勞累價格通常更便宜可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多缺點只看到圖片，看不到商品本身容易購買大量不大需要的東西，造成浪費注意：詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；文中不得透露個人姓名和學

7、校名稱及其他相關(guān)信息參考詞匯：網(wǎng)購 shopping online 避免做某事 avoid doing sth. 商品 goodswith the development of the internet, many students are used to shopping online._【參考范文】with the development of the internet, many students are used to shopping online. shopping on the internet has become a commonplace in our life. here

8、 consumers can buy almost everything they need.shopping on the internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. people don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. this is

9、especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. the goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the internet. all they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. the commodities they order will be delivered to them pro

10、mptly.however, shopping on the internet also has its disadvantages. the first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. the second disadvantage is that some shops on the

11、internet are not registered. they will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第三人稱，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中

12、適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！玖咙c說明】這篇短文使用了大量的復(fù)合句為文章增色不少.如: people don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.人們不必浪費了很多的精力和寶貴的時間去從一個商店到另一個選擇他們喜歡的商品。sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen o

13、n the computer.有時候，真正的貨物可能與他們在計算機上看到的不一樣。學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.（一）假如你們班將在本周舉行一次關(guān)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物利弊的辯論賽。請你根據(jù)以下提示信息寫一篇90詞左右的短文談?wù)勀銓W(wǎng)購的看法。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。提示：好處 網(wǎng)購能幫助我們節(jié)省時間，我們只要把我們的信息發(fā)送給賣方（seller）, 不久他們就會把東西送到我們的家，網(wǎng)購能幫助使我們的生活更加輕松。害處 有些賣家會通過欺騙我們來獲取錢財，另外長時間上網(wǎng)購物對眼睛有害.建議 小心、安全地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)來購物now it is p

14、opular for young people to do shopping on the internet. it can help _【參考范文】now it is popular for young people to do shopping on the internet. it can help make our life easier. if we want to buy something from the internet, we can send our information to the seller and then the seller will send the t

15、hings to us soon. it can help us save much time.however, the internet is not perfect because it may sometimes do harm to us. some sellers may get money by cheating us. and it will be bad for our eyes if we spend much time doing shopping on the internet. the internet can change our lives for the bett

16、er, but we had better use it carefully and safely.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如do shopping，on the internet，help make our life easier，want to do，send to help us save much time，do harm to，be bad for，spend much time doing shopping，the sea of clouds，a nice place to visit等。而if we want to bu

17、y something from the internet, we can send our information to the seller and then the seller will send the things to us soon. / and it will be bad for our eyes if we spend much time doing shopping on the internet.等復(fù)雜條件狀語從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。（二）假如你是英語俱樂部的cathy,上周五你們收到了外教angel為同學們網(wǎng)購的英文書籍。俱樂部

18、的同學們很喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書這種便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流讀書后的感受。請你根據(jù)以下信息, 給angel寫一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂部的活動情況，并說說網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。寫作要點：1表達收到圖書后的喜悅與感激之情。2介紹活動的情況：（l）上周五，俱樂部成員們一起讀英文書。（2）本周五的下午3點，大家將共同交流讀書的體會。（3）同學們將在下個月網(wǎng)購其他的英文書。3說一說網(wǎng)上購書有什么好處。寫作要求：1不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。2可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。3字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰。4至少80詞。dear angel,how are you doing? _best wish

19、es!yours,cathy【參考范文】dear angel,how are you doing? im writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. we are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。last friday，we had a reading party, which was held on friday in our reading room. then we are going to hold an activity to s

20、hare the feeling with others at 3:00 on friday afternoon. all of us are fond of buying books on the internet. we are going to buy some books on the internet next month. as far as i am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. on the other hand, th

21、ere are all kinds of books, so we neednt go from one bookstore to another .best wishes!yours,cathy【解析】本文屬于材料作文，向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會的活動，并且告訴外教同學們現(xiàn)在喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書并闡述網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be go

22、ing to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as i am concerned, on the one hand.on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on friday in our reading room中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，

23、我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（三）現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢，二網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的

24、焦點，請參考下面的信息，并結(jié)合就的觀點些一短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?.方便，可以在家買東西，不受時間限制。2.有很大的商品信息，可以買到當?shù)貨]有的商品。價格較便宜。3.買貨容易退貨難；實物和圖片有差距。4.網(wǎng)絡(luò)支付不安全。 _【參考范文】now internet shopping is more and more popular in the world.its a new way of shopping. it has lots of advantages. the most important is convenient. you can shop whenever you like beca

25、use the online shops are open 24 hours a day. it is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you cant buy in the shop. and they are cheaper. besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.every coin has two sides. so is internet shopping. you cant see the material objects

26、 or check their quality. usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. so when we get the goods and dont like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. whats more, its not safe to pay through the internet. we should be careful when we shop on the internet.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要寫一篇小議論文，主題是網(wǎng)上購物

27、，需要討論到網(wǎng)上購物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，可以先總起陳述，然后用一段來描述優(yōu)點，再用一段描述劣勢和不足，最后一段收尾，這樣的作文就會條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。具體來說，每個觀點在陳述的時候要注意表達準確。寫作亮點：首段總起介紹，挑明這篇作文的主題internet shopping。第二段開始描述優(yōu)勢，這里用到了“無論什么時候你喜歡/想要”（whenever you like）結(jié)構(gòu)，在表達“.是開放的”也很準確，用了“be open”。比較級的應(yīng)用也相對準確，例如cheaper。連詞的使用也是亮點，besides意為“除此之外”。在談到劣勢的時候引用了俗語“every coin h

28、as two sides.”，是個亮點?！皐hats more”也被合理使用到了，意為“此外”，避免與besides重復(fù)，體現(xiàn)了文章語言的多樣性?？傮w來說要點均被提及，語言準確富有活力。（四）隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展，人們消費觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變，購物方式也在悄然地發(fā)生變化?！熬W(wǎng)購”成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也正加入到網(wǎng)購群體當中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。注意：1. 所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面；2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分；3. 詞數(shù)：80 詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購:shopping on line, 避免做

29、某事:avoid doing sth, 商品:goods, 導(dǎo)致:causewith the development of the internet, many people are used to shopping on line. _【參考范文】with the development of the internet, many people are used to shopping on line. it has become a fashion in our daily life. some of us students also join the group.shopping on

30、line has many advantages. just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what youre interested in without going outdoors. you can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. when shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are genera

31、lly lower.every coin has two sides. its disadvantages are obvious, too. on one hand, its very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the internet. on the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. thats a waste of money.all in all,

32、 i love shopping on line.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如with the development of the internet，be used to doing，on line，in our daily life，join the group，avoid doing，be interested in，every coin has two sides，on one hand，on the internet，on the other hand，all in all等。而with the development of

33、the internet, many people are used to shopping on line./ shopping on line has many advantages. / on the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.等多種非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)和綜合句式的運用，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。

34、所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。1. with the development of the internet, many people are used to shopping on line.2. on the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.3. shopping on line has many advantages. 4. every coin has two s

35、ides. 5. thats a waste of money.6. all in all, i love shopping on line.7. we had a reading party,which was held on friday in our reading room8. as far as i am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. 9. and it will be bad for our eyes if we spend

36、 much time doing shopping on the internet.10. the internet is not perfect because it may sometimes do harm to us. 11. people don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.12. sometimes, the real goods may not be the

37、 same as what they have seen on the computer.13. with the development of the internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the internet has become a commonplace in our life.14. the second disadvantage is that some shops on the internet are not registered. 15. the second disadvantage is t

38、hat some shops on the internet are not registered.the topic of -（主題）is becoming more and more popular recently. there are two sides of opinions about it. some people say a is their favorite. they hold their view for the reason of -（支持a的理由一）what is more, -理由二). moreover, -(理由三).while others thin

39、k that b is a better choice in the following three reasons. firstly,-(支持b的理由一). secondly (besides),-（理由二）. thirdly (finally),-(理由三).from my point of view, i think -（我的觀點）. the reason is that -(原因). as a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. for me, the former is surely a

40、 wise choice .（一）2014年雙十一（11月11日）天貓交易額突破571億，遠超去年同期水平。12月12日，由于阿里巴巴股價上漲，馬云超過李嘉誠成為亞洲首富。由此引發(fā)人們開始搜索自己的支付寶賬單，追憶自己的網(wǎng)購歷史, 再次掀起了關(guān)于“網(wǎng)購”的話題。網(wǎng)購有利也有弊，請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇關(guān)于“網(wǎng)購”的文章。優(yōu)點（至少兩項）節(jié)約時間；缺點（至少兩項）只看到圖片，看不到商品本身你的觀點注意1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，書寫工整，卷面整齊2. 表格信息補充完整，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，適當運用連詞3. 文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。提示詞匯： 網(wǎng)購shopping online； 商品 goods

41、；with the development of the internet, many people are used to shopping online._ _【參考范文】with the development of the internet, many people are used to shopping on line.just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. you needn't step out of the room. it seems ea

42、sy and quick. but there's always a trap online. if you are careless, it will bring you some trouble. you may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big. if you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online. onceyou put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will fi