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1、怎樣使句子多樣化一篇好文章的條件很多。除了內(nèi)容豐富和組織緊密之外,詞匯的運(yùn)用和句子的處 理,也起著決定性作用。 句子可長(zhǎng)可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表達(dá)。如果句子清一色是簡(jiǎn)單句,文 章必定很單調(diào)乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長(zhǎng)的復(fù)雜句,讀起來也很費(fèi)力。最好的方法是以 簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ),配合適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)雜句。簡(jiǎn)單句可長(zhǎng)可短,通常要加些附屬成分,如分詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、副詞短語(yǔ)、不定式動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ),以及節(jié)縮成分。 總之,作者可根據(jù)情況,使句子多樣化,使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個(gè)句子的基本概念一樣,但是句式不同,內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)也有些差別: (1) The goats grazed peacefully in the
2、 farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2) (2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (現(xiàn)在分語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)+簡(jiǎn)單句) (3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副詞短語(yǔ)+并列分句(1)-(2) ) (4) There were goats grazing p
3、eacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (簡(jiǎn)單句+形容語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)) (5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副詞從句+主句) (1)和(5)的句式最常見;如果加上其他三種互相交替,句子不是更多樣化嗎? 最后,看看這兩個(gè)句子要如何多樣化呢? (6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training. (7) He felt
4、very uneasy. (a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy. (b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training. (c) The young pilot's first overseas training made him feel very uneasy. (d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas
5、training. (e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy. (f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. (g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. (h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and fe
6、lt very uneasy. (i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy. (j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas trainging, he felt very uneasy. (k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. (l) The young pilot was on his first overs
7、eas training, so that he felt very uneasy. 在上述12個(gè)句子中,(a)-(g)是簡(jiǎn)單句;(h)是并列句;(i)-(l)是復(fù)雜句。簡(jiǎn)單句 除(b)和(g)之外,其他五樣,用的人并不多。人們最喜歡采用復(fù)雜句,尤其是(j)和(k)這兩款;接著便是并列句(h)。如果大多數(shù)人的句子只限于(b),(g), (h), (j)和(k)這五種,而其他的則棄如敝屣,不是很可惜嗎? 增強(qiáng)英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)句表現(xiàn)力的有效方法 一、避免使用語(yǔ)意弱的“be”動(dòng)詞。 1、把句中的表語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)換為不同的修飾語(yǔ)。例如: Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is bro
8、wn. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (轉(zhuǎn)換為前置定 語(yǔ)) Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (轉(zhuǎn)換為并列 結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語(yǔ)) 2、將作表語(yǔ)用的形容詞或名詞變?yōu)樾袨閯?dòng)詞。例如: 1) Weak: The team members are good players. Revision: The team members play well. 2) Weak: One
9、worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness. Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness. 3、在以“here”或“there”開頭的句子中,把“be”動(dòng)詞后的名詞代詞變成改寫句的主語(yǔ)。例如: 1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion. Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists. 2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered. Revision
10、: The books you ordered have arrived.二、多用語(yǔ)意具體的動(dòng)詞,保持句意簡(jiǎn)潔明了。例如: 1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk. Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk. 2、Poor: She is a careful shopper. Better: She compares prices and quality. 三、盡量運(yùn)用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。例如: 1、Weak: The organization has been supported
11、by charity. Better: Charity has supported the organization. 2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate. Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate. 四、防止使用語(yǔ)意冗長(zhǎng)累贅的詞語(yǔ)。例如: 1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk. Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk. 2、Wordy: We
12、are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations. Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation. 3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire. Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterda
13、y when our chemistry laboratory caught fire. 4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores. Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores. 五、杜絕濫用陳舊詞語(yǔ)或難懂的專業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ)。例如: 1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form. Improved: The
14、y will not agree to any of his proposals. 2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall. Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.IELTS作文必背詞匯和句型總結(jié)IELTS作文詞匯和句型總結(jié)不同意 I would certainly oppose changing the system + i
15、ng form of verb She's opposed to religious education in schools.-be opposed to sth to disagree -with a principle or plan:- Are you for or against my proposal He objects to the label 'magician' which he is often given. Her objection to/against the plan is based on incorrect fac
16、ts 同意 Have they assented to (= agreed to) the terms of the contract?Formal She advocates taking a more long-term view.+ ing form of verb He advocates the return of capital punishment. I think you were quite justified in complaininghaving a good reason for something I generally favour trav
17、elling by night, when the roads are quiet. But the federal Training Minister disputes crisis calls from employers, 問題出現(xiàn) One of the disquieting facts stemming from this is that plastic bags can become serial killers This has resulted in a ban on plastic bags being imposed there early in 2002.
18、160;an increasingly crowded curriculum, maths is being sidelined. township hospitals are running at a loss or are on the verge of collapse. The world's tropical forests continue to disappear with disheartening speed from September through to December airborne pollen from olive blossom
19、s is contributing to asthma and hay fever problems But recently a new trend has been evident - one person living in a house the rise and rise of the single person household. 問題原因 This could be due to the fact that HDPE bags can not be put out for collection with other household recyclables The probl
20、em arises partly because charities have outposts in areas of conflict: Another cause for concern,the use of (DU), may also be less of a problem than many fear Another current concern about China is that 。 The PCAU has found that even though bombs, troop movements and landmines caused awfu
21、l problems in Afghanistan, the most serious long-term consequences have resulted from the uncontrolled use of resources, particularly the cutting of t says the drain is symptomatic of a maths crisis that has its origins in the classroom. But that had more to do with the collapse of invest
22、ment in America than with the rise in China The pact of 2000 owed more to Nelson Mandela's patient mediation than to the Burundian elite's own desire for peace 解決問題 the world woke up to the issue Different countries have adopted a range of approaches to discourage the use of plastic bags in an attempt to cut down on the number of bags finding their way into the environment the government has implemented new regulations that will see only thicker, more durable plastic bags produced. Recycling your plastic shopping bags is one of the most obvious co
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