專題二短文改錯(cuò)與書面表達(dá)

1、2016年高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)及書面表達(dá)備考探索 -肇慶市英語(yǔ)學(xué)科委員會(huì)Dear Wendy, How are you these days? I miss you very much. I had showed great interested in English learning since you taught me English last term. Thanks to your help, we have made a great progress in my English. Both of my parents are pleased with that. However, I

2、am still weak at English grammar and often make some grammatical mistake. Meanwhile, I find difficult to write an English letter well. But I sincerely hope that you can give me some advise on how to learn grammar and improve my writing. looking forward to hear from you. Yours, GarvinDear Wendy, How

3、are you these days? I miss you very much. I had showed great interested in English learning since you taught me English last term. Thanks to your help, we have made a great progress in my English. Both of my parents are pleased with that. However, I am still weak at English grammar and often make so

4、me grammatical mistake. Meanwhile, I find difficult to write an English letter well. But I sincerely hope that you can give me some advise on how to learn grammar and improve my writing. looking forward to hear from you. 動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)have非謂語(yǔ)非謂語(yǔ)interest名詞名詞(不可數(shù)不可數(shù))名詞復(fù)數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)mistakes連詞連詞So詞性詞性advice非謂語(yǔ)非謂語(yǔ)hea

5、ring形式賓語(yǔ)形式賓語(yǔ) it介詞介詞 in代詞代詞 IGarvin Yours, Dear Wendy, How are you these days? I miss you very much. I have showed great interest in English learning since you taught me English last term. Thanks to your help,I have made great progress in my English. Both of my parents are pleased with that. However,

6、 I am still weak in English grammar and often make some grammatical mistakes. Meanwhile, I find it difficult to write an English letter well. So I sincerely hope that you can give me some advice on how to learn grammar and improve my writing. looking forward to hearing from you. Garvin Yours, Whats

7、the main trouble when correcting a short passage?1. 看不出句子有錯(cuò)，越讀越覺得對(duì)。2. 看出句子出錯(cuò)的地方, 但無(wú)法改正。3. 知道改正句子錯(cuò)誤的地方, 但答案不正確。 How to correct?How to Do Proof-readingHow to Do Proof-reading 如何做短文改錯(cuò)題？短文改錯(cuò)的9個(gè)一致性入手！一、動(dòng)詞形一、動(dòng)詞形注意動(dòng)詞的注意動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)和和語(yǔ)態(tài)是否一致語(yǔ)態(tài)是否一致。One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door

8、 come by to help. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cupswithout handles. The responsibility of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English, answering their questions, and helping organize activity. camedrunkresponsibilities時(shí)態(tài)一致 短文中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)與上下文，特定語(yǔ)言環(huán)境及該句的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)應(yīng)保持呼應(yīng)與一致。1)

9、 Today, it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past. 2) When I was a pupil, my teacher told me that the earth turned around the sun.was turns1）One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.2）Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong主謂一致主謂一致 werePlayin

10、g平行一致eitheror, neithernor ,not onlybutalso, 及and, but, or等并列連詞或詞組連接的結(jié)構(gòu)可稱為平行結(jié)構(gòu)。在平行結(jié)構(gòu)中,詞性時(shí)態(tài)等形式須保持前后一致。1) Playing football not only makesbut also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.2) Therefore, I feed her, gave her a bath and changed her clothes.givesfed二、名詞數(shù)二、名詞數(shù)1) Your knowledges of Greece

11、 can help the whole class.2) He is tall, with broad shoulder.3) For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour.4) But soon, she came back with a bottle of pill.5)You should try to memorize the useful sentences as much as possible.6) Soon many help was given to the girl.knowledge shouldershou

12、rs 注意注意名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式、可數(shù)還是不可數(shù)名詞、可數(shù)還是不可數(shù)名詞,同時(shí)注意修飾詞同時(shí)注意修飾詞pillsmuchmanyWe are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost. He didnt look happily. We should work hardly to achieve our goals.注意注意形容詞和副詞形容詞和副詞在句子中的在句子中的作用和具體用法作用和具體用法。形容詞形容詞修飾修飾 n.; 副詞主要副詞主要修飾修飾 v./ adj./ adv.三、還要注意形和副三、還要注意形和副wonderfulhappy

13、hard四、非謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)辨別四、非謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)辨別細(xì)辨是用細(xì)辨是用 to do, doing 還是還是done, 注意注意分詞拼寫分詞拼寫。He isnt good at talk but he gets on well with others.The applicant is required be a native speaker of English who can speak fluent Chinese.talking toIt is one of the funniest things finding on the Internet.found五五、 代詞代詞格，格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟細(xì)領(lǐng)悟I wa

14、s happy when the toys worked, but whenthings went wrong, I got angry and broke it.themTomsJust at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!myselfTom parents invited I to spend two wonderful weeks in Qingdao with themme注意注意 上下文上下文 以及以及各種代詞格各種代詞格的用法。的用法。指代一致 用于指代的各類代詞應(yīng)在數(shù)，格，性上與上下文保持一致。1) And every

15、 year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own.2) It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to . 3) What is more, you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him.themtheirwe catch a sight of as the whole lose my heart 表灰心表灰心 late on in hurry by the

16、price of 10 in Sunday afternoon in this weekend express us It is so a beautiful place! such many people My car needs wash. 主要考查固定短語(yǔ)、習(xí)慣搭配、習(xí)慣用法，主要考查固定短語(yǔ)、習(xí)慣搭配、習(xí)慣用法，其錯(cuò)誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：其錯(cuò)誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：多詞、少詞和慣多詞、少詞和慣用法或搭配錯(cuò)誤。用法或搭配錯(cuò)誤。aonourselvesso六、介詞冠詞常?？?，習(xí)慣用法要記六、介詞冠詞常?？?，習(xí)慣用法要記住住alateratsuchwashing Have tea in the

17、 afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. Havingwhich八、邏輯連詞須關(guān)注八、邏輯連詞須關(guān)注1. 句子的上下文句子的上下文是否一致是否一致, 有無(wú)有無(wú)張冠李戴張冠李戴,甚至相矛盾甚至相矛盾；2. 連詞連詞but， and， or和和so等的用法等的用法3. 過渡詞過渡詞25 cents each piece. But Nick has brought the priceup to 10 cents a piece. A

18、passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset. downandI opened the wallet, tying to find out whose it was. Therefore, I found nothing but 300 yuan in it.However3 steps 3 steps 解解題題三步三步驟驟 Go through the whole passage to get a general idea . (瀏覽全文，掌握大意）瀏覽全文，掌握大意）2. Read the pass

19、age sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.(分句閱讀分句閱讀,逐行找錯(cuò)逐行找錯(cuò))3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.（檢查核對(duì)，攻克難點(diǎn)）（檢查核對(duì)，攻克難點(diǎn)）高考短文改錯(cuò)常見錯(cuò)誤and, or, but誤用；誤用； 2. books/ a book等名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用；等名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用； 3. 人稱代詞人稱代詞he, she, I等誤用；等誤用； 4. 動(dòng)詞的含義用反，例如動(dòng)詞的含義用反，例如go和和co

20、me誤用；誤用； 5. 第三人稱單數(shù)用錯(cuò)，例如第三人稱單數(shù)用錯(cuò)，例如he work； 6. 時(shí)態(tài)的誤用，例如上下文均為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，卻出現(xiàn)時(shí)態(tài)的誤用，例如上下文均為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，卻出現(xiàn)worked； 7. so.that結(jié)構(gòu)誤用；結(jié)構(gòu)誤用； 8. 定語(yǔ)從句中定語(yǔ)從句中which與與where誤用；誤用； 9. neither.nor結(jié)構(gòu)誤用；結(jié)構(gòu)誤用； 10. because, though同時(shí)出現(xiàn)；同時(shí)出現(xiàn)； 11. fortunately, unfortunately等詞義用反也多次出現(xiàn)；等詞義用反也多次出現(xiàn)； 12. 性別指代錯(cuò)誤；性別指代錯(cuò)誤； In addition to the con

21、venient public transportation, our own car can also bring them to some places of interest.13. 不定代詞誤用；不定代詞誤用； 14. a與與the誤用；誤用； 15. 主動(dòng)、被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)誤用；主動(dòng)、被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)誤用； 16. 主謂一致錯(cuò)誤；主謂一致錯(cuò)誤； 17. what與與that誤用；誤用； 18. as與與like誤用；誤用；19. when與與while誤用；誤用； 20. ago與與before誤用；誤用； 21. 比較級(jí)誤用比較級(jí)誤用tall與與taller； 22. 介詞介詞in, at, of,

22、 to, from誤用；誤用； 23. 省略結(jié)構(gòu)的錯(cuò)誤；省略結(jié)構(gòu)的錯(cuò)誤； 24. 一些常見的語(yǔ)法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤，如一些常見的語(yǔ)法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤，如I want go/ make sb. to do/ be afraid of go/ with與與without區(qū)別區(qū)別/ because of等。等。高考短文改錯(cuò)常見錯(cuò)誤Longshine Tips（短文改錯(cuò)解題口訣短文改錯(cuò)解題口訣）名詞數(shù)，動(dòng)詞形名詞數(shù)，動(dòng)詞形謂語(yǔ)、非謂在一起謂語(yǔ)、非謂在一起你一定要把它分清你一定要把它分清時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)主謂賓時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)主謂賓代詞三格要分明代詞三格要分明請(qǐng)你做題處處留心請(qǐng)你做題處處留心冠詞、介詞雖然微小冠詞、介詞雖然微小亂用可不

23、行亂用可不行形容詞的級(jí)別形容詞的級(jí)別請(qǐng)你千萬(wàn)要理清請(qǐng)你千萬(wàn)要理清副詞經(jīng)常修飾句子還有副詞經(jīng)常修飾句子還有動(dòng)形動(dòng)形改錯(cuò)?？紕?dòng)形名副介連改錯(cuò)?？紕?dòng)形名副介連代冠代冠短文改錯(cuò)確實(shí)不容易短文改錯(cuò)確實(shí)不容易加強(qiáng)練習(xí)會(huì)有驚喜加強(qiáng)練習(xí)會(huì)有驚喜多積累詞匯和固定搭配多積累詞匯和固定搭配就一定會(huì)有突破就一定會(huì)有突破用小蘋果的歌唱出來(lái)！用小蘋果的歌唱出來(lái)！我絕不嫁給你！高考：I will never marry you!大學(xué)四級(jí)：You are the last man I am willing to marry.大學(xué)六級(jí)： Under no condition will I marry you.雅思： If yo

24、u were the last man in the world, I will definitely remain single.1234高考評(píng)分細(xì)則高考評(píng)分細(xì)則廣州一模審題廣州一模審題書面表達(dá)增分技巧書面表達(dá)增分技巧近幾年的全國(guó)卷書面表達(dá)近幾年的全國(guó)卷書面表達(dá)考查分析考查分析年號(hào)年號(hào)命題形式命題形式文體文體內(nèi)容內(nèi)容2012文字提綱文字提綱電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加國(guó)際中學(xué)生新加坡夏令營(yíng) 2013文字提綱文字提綱書信希望筆友為自己前往美國(guó)的叔叔接機(jī)20142014卷卷I I英文廣告英文廣告圖示圖示+ +提示提示書信書信詢問廣告內(nèi)容詢問廣告內(nèi)容相關(guān)情況相關(guān)情況20152015卷卷I I文字提綱文字提綱書

25、信書信 向美國(guó)筆友向美國(guó)筆友“約稿約稿”近幾年書面表達(dá)分析2016年高考考綱樣題作文分析說明年高考考綱樣題作文分析說明1、寫作的基本要求是切題、連貫、準(zhǔn)確。切題、連貫、準(zhǔn)確。2、作文首先要切題，考生要、作文首先要切題，考生要仔細(xì)審題。仔細(xì)審題。3、在抓住內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的基礎(chǔ)上，一篇好的短文還需要連貫表達(dá)。動(dòng)筆前整體構(gòu)思，按照一定的條理，把各要點(diǎn)合乎邏輯地組織起來(lái)。4、短文的切題和連貫是以語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確為基礎(chǔ)的，特別注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，適當(dāng)顧及表達(dá)的多樣性。5、考生還應(yīng)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)氣恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)氣，得體地運(yùn)用禮貌用語(yǔ)得體地運(yùn)用禮貌用語(yǔ)及句式。及句式。1、少于80詞或多于120詞的，從總分中減去2分。2、拼寫

26、與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。3、如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。4、第五檔、第五檔21-25：完全完成完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 1） 覆蓋了所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。 2） 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。 3） 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡量使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力 4） 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成份，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。 高考評(píng)分部分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)廣州一模 假定你是李華，你要完成一項(xiàng)關(guān)于中英學(xué)生寒假生活的調(diào)查。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)筆友Bill寫一封信，交流相關(guān)信息。要點(diǎn)如下： 1、寫

27、信的原因。 2、介紹中國(guó)學(xué)生的寒假生活； 1）時(shí)長(zhǎng)：約20天 2）活動(dòng) 3、詢問英國(guó)學(xué)生的寒假生活。 1、信息點(diǎn)/寫作內(nèi)容： 1）“主人公”李華要告訴Bill一些信息；同時(shí)，也要詢問對(duì)方的信息，因此，題中所隱含的雙向要求說明這是一封既有介紹特征也有咨詢意向的綜合型書信。 2）需注意題干說明是對(duì)中學(xué)生寒假生活的調(diào)查，因此不要誤將自己的行為代替所有中學(xué)生的行為。 3）信息非常少，而且既有的信息也只是空泛的概念。 審題：文體、寫作對(duì)象、人稱、時(shí)審題：文體、寫作對(duì)象、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、寫作要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格。態(tài)、寫作要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格。一、審題1234開門見山明意圖主體要通暢內(nèi)容充實(shí)要適度選詞造句要斟酌結(jié)尾照應(yīng)開頭

28、和主題二、謀篇-開門見山明意圖結(jié)尾照應(yīng)開頭和主題求職信 Im writing to apply for the position as.或 learning from.,Id like to apply for the postI would be grateful if you could consider my application. 或I hope to have the opportunity of an interview.建議信 Im writing to express my view concerning.In the end, I will be very glad if

29、you find my suggestions useful/ practical.邀請(qǐng)信 Im writing to inform you of you something about.Would you like to .?Im longing to hear from you. 感謝信 Im writing to express my thanks for .或 Id like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for .I must thank you again for your generous help. Please accept my

30、gratitude ,now and always .咨詢信 Im writing to enquire/ ask for some information about.I am waiting for your early reply./Id like to /Please let us投訴信 Im writing to complain about .Id appreciate it if you .as soon as possible.二、謀篇-開門見山明意圖、結(jié)尾照應(yīng)開頭和主題二、謀篇-主體要通暢1、內(nèi)容充實(shí)要適度 寫作要求中提到：要覆蓋全部的要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)100左右，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，

31、使行文連貫。要使文章更具可讀性，就要在合乎所給情節(jié)的前提下，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)展。 例如：表示“感謝”用“I truly appreciate what you have done for me during my stay in your country.就可以了，但是增加一句“Its nice and generous of you to do all this.”可以使“感謝”更加真誠(chéng)，符合英語(yǔ)感謝場(chǎng)景。2. 語(yǔ)域選擇要合適 書信的語(yǔ)言要符合人物特征，要自然，平實(shí)、簡(jiǎn)潔，注重交際性原則，不要太正式，也不能太隨意。 一般來(lái)說： 非正式的語(yǔ)言：感謝信、邀請(qǐng)信、道歉信朋友之間的 正式的語(yǔ)言：求職信、

32、推薦信、投訴信正式的場(chǎng)合3、用詞選句要恰當(dāng) 例如： 1）關(guān)于about (完全可以） concerning, as to (更合適、高級(jí)) 2）大多數(shù)most 更符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣 the majority of (更高級(jí)) 3）完成finish （常用）complete, bring an end to (正式） 二、謀篇-語(yǔ)域選擇 2015年新課標(biāo)全國(guó)卷年新課標(biāo)全國(guó)卷 1 要求給美國(guó)朋友要求給美國(guó)朋友Peter 寫信寫信約稿。請(qǐng)比較以下兩種表達(dá)，哪種更適合：約稿。請(qǐng)比較以下兩種表達(dá)，哪種更適合：A: “Would you please write something about the cult

33、ure in your part of the United States?”B:“I really appreciate it if you can spare some of your valuable time to write an article concerning the culture of the United States.” A:“Could we have your article before June 28th?” B:“I cant thank you more if we have your article before June 28 . 技 巧一1. 使用較

34、高級(jí)的詞匯3. 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝 。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫一篇有“英語(yǔ)味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。2. 使用較豐富的句式2、使用較為高級(jí)地道的短語(yǔ)：You can find my house easily. 謀 篇Youll have no trouble finding my house. 1、巧用代詞：、巧用代詞：Your article should be neither too long nor too short-400 words would b

35、e appropriate -and it must be handed in before June 28. 1）. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail. （使用介詞（使用介詞+V-ing形式）形式）2）. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) On his arriving, please give me an e-mail. 3）.You can understand it only afte

36、r I explain it to you.(用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)) It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. Only after I explain it to you can you understand it.3、使用較豐富的句式、使用較豐富的句式4）.I wont believe what he says. （使用狀語(yǔ)從句）No matter what he says, I wont believe him. 3、使用較豐富的句式、使用較豐富的句式5）、

37、使用）、使用with和和without復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)：復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)：【漢語(yǔ)漢語(yǔ)】由于期末考試臨近，所有學(xué)生都在忙于復(fù)習(xí)。由于期末考試臨近，所有學(xué)生都在忙于復(fù)習(xí)。一般一般As the final term is drawing near, all the students are occupied with their revision.高級(jí)高級(jí)With the final term drawing near, all the students are occupied with their revision. 1）、使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞：）、使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞： On one side of the road

38、 there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library. As far as I know, many students often do some reading in it. Whats more, we can surf the Internet to find some useful information. However, we are not allowed to play comp

39、uter games.2）、文章段落的排列邏輯？句與句之間意義、邏輯的連接。）、文章段落的排列邏輯？句與句之間意義、邏輯的連接。 2015年全國(guó)卷范文欣賞：年全國(guó)卷范文欣賞：4、連接、過渡與文章結(jié)構(gòu)的緊湊、連接、過渡與文章結(jié)構(gòu)的緊湊Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. In the newspaper, the “Foreign Cultures” section draws many students attention in that the article

40、s are not only interesting, but also instructive. The section covers such topics as American festivals, customs and students daily life in the US. So there are also what you are going to write about. You can write anything relevant on these topics. Your article should be neither too long nor too sho

41、rt-400 words would beappropriate -and it must be handed in before June 28. Is that OK for you? I am really looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 技 巧二1.肯定不如否定好3.主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧修辭的使用在書面表達(dá)中算作很大的亮點(diǎn)。雙重否定也是種修辭。閱卷老師喜歡看到的高級(jí)語(yǔ)法共有五種：倒裝，強(qiáng)調(diào)，從句，獨(dú)立主格和分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，以及虛擬語(yǔ)氣。倒裝是一種最簡(jiǎn)單易行的呈現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)的方法。使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣，如果能將整個(gè)文章中兩個(gè)句子變

42、成被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，就會(huì)呈現(xiàn)句型的變化，使整個(gè)文章句型豐富。2.陳述不如倒裝妙1.“郵遞員天天準(zhǔn)時(shí)到”（雙重否定）The postman never fails to come on time.2. “圖書館位于學(xué)校的中央”（倒裝）In the center of our school lies our library.3. “我們每次可以借五本書最多借十天”（被動(dòng)）At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.4、我們永遠(yuǎn)也不用忘記這個(gè)教訓(xùn)。（被動(dòng)）The lesson will be f

43、irmly rooted in our minds.典型例句分享典型例句分享選詞的高級(jí)與地道性difficult- important-beautiful- certainly- sad- very important/difficult/useful/helpful/harmful/valuable/significant=challengingvital/essential/significantappealing/attractive/charming/fascinatingobviously/undoubtedly/evidentlydiscouraged/depressed/down

44、hearted/ low-spirited/be in low spiritsbe of great importance1、注意所選詞語(yǔ)的使用語(yǔ)境或正式程度：deliver a speech很正式。2、選詞的意義要正確： watch TV, see a film, read newspaper, visit the doctor讓“詞”動(dòng)起來(lái)、讓詞具體化、多樣化1、I go to school by bike every day.2、When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed.3、Mrs. Wang is a good teacher.I ride to school every day.Mrs. Wang is a kind, patient and knowledgeable teacher.When I reached home, I felt tired, so I took up a book and went to bed.恰到使用一些程度副詞、修飾語(yǔ)usually/recently/badly/terribly/extreme