浙江奉化市2016高考英語短文改錯基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練8及答案

1、differe nt浙江奉化市 2016 高考英語短文改錯基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練（8）及答案短文改錯。假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共 有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。My father is a farmer. He had only received five years of

2、 educati on in school but he can also gain a lot of infield work for his diligenee.Last December, I went home for vacation. I learned that his father had suffered great losses in breed ingduckli ngs because of a unknown disease and pla nting watermel ons that were rotted due to the heavy rain fall.F

3、ather sighed,“ You can n ever cha nge so un expected bad luck.I did nt argue. The next day I went dow ntow n and brought some agricultural guida nee book back home.While scanned one of the books after my strong recommendation, father says ,“ God ifonly I had known this ! ”Since the n, father has hel

4、d a differe nee attitude toward books. He succeeded. Kno wledge cha nges badluck!【參考答案】My father is a farmer. He had only received five years of education in school but he can alsohasgain a lot of in field work for his diligenee.Last December, I went home for vacation. I learned that his father had

5、suffered great losses inmybreeding ducklings because of a unknown disease and planting watermelons that were rottedAandue to the heavy rain fall. Father sighed,suchI did nt argue. The next day I went dow ntow n and brought some agricultural guida nee bookbooksback home. While scanned one of the book

6、s after my strong recommendation, father says,“Godsea nningsaidif only I had known this ! ”away“ You caio nunexpecteglebadluck.Since then, father has held a difference attitude toward books. He succeeded. Knowledgecha nges bad luck!假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單

7、詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（人），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。The first time when I went on a plane was when I went to Hong Kong with my Dad.When I saw the pla ne, I thought it was very big. But whe n there was a lot of passe nger

8、s seat ingon the plane, it wasn t very bigeariycoold carry lots of people and baggages. That wasso amazed! When the plane flew up into sky, my ears started to hurt. It hurt me very muchthat I wan ted to cry. I said to myself, “ Don t cry. I can t cry. ” But I ccfrotn my t hold back tears. If youchew

9、ed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm, ” dad said. When I heard that my dadsaid, I chewed a piece of gum.【參考答案】4.The first time when I went on a plane was when I went to Hong Kong with my Dad.Whe n I saw the pla ne, I thought it was very big. But whe n there was a lot of passe ngers seat ingseate

10、dt very big any more. It could carry lots of peopilaggages. That wasbaggageso amazed! When the plane flew up intoAsky, my ears started to hurt. It hurt me very, muchamaz ingthesothat I wan ted to cry. I said to myself,“Dont cry. I cant cry.”But I codim- myt hold backwereon the pla ne, it wasnIf ybew

11、ed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm, ” dad said. When I heard that my dadchew said, I chewed a piece of gum.短文改錯。假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共 有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改 10 處

12、，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。I visited my aunt in the coun tryside n ear the city last week. I was surpris ing to see that great cha nges hadbee n take n place in the coun tryside. Take my aun ts family for example. We supply precious trees and flowersto the stores in the city and have ten workers worki ng for

13、themselves. Their familys in come reached as much 100,000 yua n last year. Not only did they have a house, a car and computers, they can also afford a trip abroad everyyear. Whe n ask ing what else they n eeded most, they said that they wan ted to lear n a few En glish so that theycould do bus in es

14、s with foreig ners directly. To their delighted, my cousin can use that he has learned fromuniversity to help them with overseas trade.【參考答案】：I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city last week. I wassurprising to see that greatsurprisedcha nges had bee n take n place in the coun tryside. T

15、ake my aun ts family for example. WeTheysupply precioustrees and flowers to the stores in the city and have ten workers working for themselves.themTheir familys in come reached as muchA100, 000 yua n last year. Not only did they have aasdohouse, a car and computers, they can also afford a trip abroa

16、d every year. When asking what elseaskedthey n eeded most, they said that they wan ted to lear n a few En glish so that they could do bus in esslittlewith foreigners directly. To their delighted , my cousin can use that he has learned from universitydelightwhatto help them with overseas trade.短文改錯。t

17、ears.what假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（人），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意： 1每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。2只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is， the

18、y areshort-sighted As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight But do you know how toprotect your eyesight? First, don t kweeoprkyfourraelyoensg time You d betterhave rest after you have studied an hour or so Second, pay much attention to the following Don t read underthe s

19、un or in a poor light; dont to read in bed or in Tahmirdo,vdeod ebyues-exerciseevery dayIt will also help you keep good eyesight And last, you should have enough sleep Only you obeythe rules above can you prevent your eyesight from become short-sighted 【參考答案】 6.1 students 后（加 who 或去 are ）2 which （改 it ）3 work （改 working ） 4 have 后（加 a）5under （改 in） 6don tot （去掉 to ）7 moved （ moving ） 8 eye-exercise （改 eye-exercises） 9 Only 后（加 if）10become （改 becoming ）短文改錯。How nice to hear you again. You want to k