2020-2021年中考英語書面表達專題復(fù)習(xí)

1、2020-2021年中考英語書面表達專題復(fù)習(xí)一、中考英語書面表達（含答案詳細解析）1 .假如你是班長李華，今天你們班對即將到來的暑假計劃進行了討論。你們班的外教David對此很感興趣。請你根據(jù)以下信息，給 David寫一封電子郵件，告訴他討論的情況及 你自己本人的計劃及原因。比例計劃原因50%去國內(nèi)外旅游1.放松;2.欣賞美景30%多讀一些書1.增長知識；2.培養(yǎng)興趣20%參加社會實踐1.鍛煉自己；2.結(jié)識朋友你的計劃?（至少一個）?（請你補充）汪思：（1）郵件應(yīng)包含所有要點（2）詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；（3）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分注： 社會實踐

2、 social practice activitiesDear DavidI'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidI'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the s

3、tudents plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social prac

4、tice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如 how to do, spend a meaningfu

5、l summer vacation , half of, plan to do , travel at home and abroad , enjoy the beautiful scenery , take part in , social practice activities , make new friends 等。而斗£謂語動 詞結(jié)構(gòu) The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart a

6、nd develop interests.和賓語從句 They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。 在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏 輯性，也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要 盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分數(shù)。2.假定彳是David,來自美國

7、，你的 QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他來 信向你了解有關(guān)這方面的情況。請認真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和實際用英語 回復(fù)，可以有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。To: davidwoodlandschoolFrom: limingsunshineschoolSubject: VolunteeringDear David,about it.I ' m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I interested in it very much. I

8、' m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know littleCould you help me answer the following questions? Why do you want to be a volunteer? What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? Do you have any problems with volunteering? If my parents don ' t allow me to do so, what

9、sdo?ld II ' m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishes,Li Ming注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右。回復(fù)信的開頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)2 .回復(fù)中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. L

10、ooking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【答案】 Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting act

11、ivities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.It s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can balance my study and work. If your parents don t allow y

12、ou to volunteer, you should have a goodtalk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給好友Li Ming 回信，介紹暑假做志愿者的情況。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： I&

13、#39;m glad;-we can； It ' sOK to , If your parents don ' t allow you tyou should-. ,-1 hope 等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭為你想要成為一名志愿者而感到高興，接下來介紹我們可以從事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作帶來的一些問題，最后我希望你喜歡志愿者工作。此處 would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look a

14、fter, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。3 書面表達李華所在的國際學(xué)校正在開展"My Favourite Traditional Festival交流活劭，假定你是李華，請你向來自不同國家的同學(xué)介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日一一端午節(jié)，內(nèi)容包括：1 .今年慶祝時間（6月18日）2 .節(jié)日由來：紀念（be in memory of）屈原3 .吃粽子，賽龍舟，掛菖蒲和艾草（ calamus and Ay Tsa0 4 .歡迎大家一起體驗這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日注意：1.詞數(shù)80100;5 .可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，

15、以使行文連貫；6 .文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；7 .開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear fellows,The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.【答案】Dear fellows,The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth

16、day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragon-boat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragon-boat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat

17、 Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the day.We welcome to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，向來自不同國家的同學(xué)介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日一一端午節(jié)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié) 構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：People celebrate;People hold ； We can watc

18、h , We welcome to等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時間，接下來介紹端午節(jié)的 由來以及慶?；顒?，最后歡迎大家一起體驗這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。此處 according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, welcome to do sth, all over the world 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不 少。8 .書面表達根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文。基本情況張陽，陽光中學(xué)九年級二班學(xué)生興趣愛好1 .喜歡閱讀。每周花

19、七個多小時閱讀各種類型的書，因為2 .喜歡觀鳥。每年統(tǒng)計兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面 的變化。優(yōu)秀事跡上個月把零花錢捐給了希望工程木米夢想1 .希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2 .每個人為保護環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。如：.（舉1例）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Suns

20、hine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket

21、money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like reading , mo

22、re than , all kinds of, spend time doing , enjoy doing , the number of , twice a year, be the chief engineer of 等。而 He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的綜合

23、運用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣 化，是本文的最大亮點?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分數(shù)。5.書面表達初三的學(xué)習(xí)生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水，也有進步、喜悅。請根據(jù)表格提示，寫一篇題為Our school life in Grade Nine的短文，介紹九年級的學(xué)校生活，并提出希望和建議。在校老師工作認真負責(zé)，充滿愛心學(xué)生（至少發(fā)揮兩點）周末作業(yè)作業(yè)多.舍棄愛好其它活動鍛煉，電

24、視愿望（發(fā)揮一到兩點）要求：1 .所寫內(nèi)容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：2 .文章不少于90詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3 .語意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than h

25、alf a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for stud

26、ents, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I

27、 feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短 語， 例如 at school, work hard , mo

28、st of, patient enough , help sb. with sth. , all kinds of problems , in our life , as a result, as for students , listen to , be busy doing , try to do , spend a lot of time doing , not any more , play basketball 等。而 It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more car

29、efully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多種特殊比較級句式結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達 多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容 經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要 點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu) 以便得到較高的分數(shù)。6.書面表達同學(xué)們，中考后就會迎來漫長的暑假了，班會課上老師組織大家討論假期學(xué)習(xí)和生活計 劃。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示

30、用英語向同學(xué)們匯報一下你的計劃。內(nèi)容提示：暑假計劃學(xué)習(xí)博覽群書；學(xué)習(xí)技能（或自擬一點）生活健康飲食；堅持鍛煉（或自擬一點）其它熱愛公益；親近自然（或自擬一點）汪思：1 .表達中必須包括所給要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2 .詞數(shù)90左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。3 .表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.s all. Thank you.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That 【答案】D

31、ear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I'm interested in cookin

32、g, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be

33、kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know un

34、healthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如I'd like to do ， help me open my mind ， at least ， be interested in ， during theholiday ， plan to do ， join in ， be kind

35、to someone in need ， pay more attention to ， be close to nature ， search the Internet 等。而 First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someo

36、ne in need. 等表順序詞和綜合句式的運用，既使 短文層次清晰，又豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu) 以便得到較高的分數(shù)。7 書面表達假如你是李明，彳的英國筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。請你按照以下提示給他回一封e-mail 。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識到霧霾天

37、氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。參考詞匯：霧霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze.Yours,Li Ming【答案】 Dea

38、r Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. NowI d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the

39、 doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for m

40、e, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protectthe environ ment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。題目中列出了三個要點，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點提示，來組織語言，充實內(nèi)容。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴重；

41、然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎么做。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個內(nèi)容一段。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語句式表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句；語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達流暢。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含

42、了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達需要使用了一般過去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，動詞形式變化準確，語法規(guī)范。短文中語言得體，句式表達符合英語的習(xí)慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 People all over the

43、country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 The government suggests that people go towork or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. 等。8. 美麗的瓊海我的家，人人都要保護她 ”。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的 改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動

44、，讓人點贊的文明行為隨處可見。作為一名中學(xué)生，請你寫 一篇短文號召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動中來。廣be polite,.should Y_ _ 一_clean upJ/ create tlie civilized and vlZJIfl_-houldn*t ymake noise.+,IJ要求：1 .語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2 .必須包含所給提示，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗? .行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4 .詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city,

45、 our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,Let ' s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】 Since the government created civil

46、ized and healthy city, our living environment hasimproved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be politeto others and try to behave well. It'

47、 s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can helpclean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep offgrass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn ' t do. We shouldn ' t make a lot ofnoise loudly in the public. We can&#

48、39; t spit anywhere and we shouldn' t throw rubbish everywhere.At the same time, we shouldn ' t break traffic rules.Let s take action now. Our actions can make a differecne and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進行 “雙創(chuàng) ”活動，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。這篇作文要求我們用英語寫一篇短文，號召中學(xué)生們都參加到 “雙創(chuàng)

49、”活動中來。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。通過審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個方面來敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。根據(jù)這個內(nèi)容，寫作時，把短文分成兩個層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。整篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱we 來敘述。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先英語的表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，

50、向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號召，共同參與到城市 “雙創(chuàng) ” 活動中來。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表，補充了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，從應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的兩個方面，對中學(xué)生的日常行為提出了要求。文章條理清晰，有層次。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，語言準確，語句通順，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級句式，語句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如 We should be polite to others andtry to behave well. 、 It s kind of you to help people in need、.

51、Meanwhile, We can help clean upour city in order to make it clearer and tidier. 、 We can t spit anywhere and we shouldn t throwrubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn' t breOk traffic rules.9 假如你叫李華，最近你班里的美國交換生Lucy 想要感受中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。周末你和父母商議后，打算邀請她去老舍茶館。你通過微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何時何地見面。提示詞語： Laosh

52、e Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問題： Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?kucyHi, Iuq;11軀ar 】口h t限 Chines traiiiQnai ensure.【答案】 Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to LaosheTeahouse this Saturday morni

53、ng. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy PekingOpera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinesetraditional culture there. Let' s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時何地見面。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要

54、考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I wantto , We are going to , -We can , Let ' s meet at 等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代 詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想要邀請你去老舍茶館，接下來介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁?，最后指出我們要在何時何地見面。此處 want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb dosth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。10 .書面表達假如你是英語俱樂部的 Cathy