上課用高考短文改錯(cuò)公開(kāi)課課件

1、Proof Reading短文改錯(cuò)短文改錯(cuò)生活中，人人都會(huì)犯錯(cuò)，有錯(cuò)就知改。生活中，人人都會(huì)犯錯(cuò)，有錯(cuò)就知改。寫(xiě)作中，人人也會(huì)犯錯(cuò)，有錯(cuò)也要改。寫(xiě)作中，人人也會(huì)犯錯(cuò)，有錯(cuò)也要改。Play a gameFind the wrong words and correct them.Be strict at sbBe responsible with sb/sthBe in businessHave sth on commonHave an effect in sbLose the heartMake a great progressThe war was broke outThe accident

2、was happenedIn the hurryShare sth for sbA pair of shoeA lot of equipments General speakingAs soon as possiblywithforoninonthethea awaswaswaswasawithShoesequipmentGenerallypossibleWhat is proof reading?知短文改錯(cuò)知短文改錯(cuò) 則百戰(zhàn)不殆則百戰(zhàn)不殆1. correct some grammar mistakes2. connection between sentences3. the main ide

3、a of the whole passage設(shè)錯(cuò)方式？設(shè)錯(cuò)方式？改錯(cuò)格式？改錯(cuò)格式？ 假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有共有10處錯(cuò)誤處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。的增加、刪除或修改。 增加增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。 刪除刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)()劃掉劃掉。 修改修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞在錯(cuò)的詞

4、下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意：注意： 1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞僅限一詞； 2只允許修改只允許修改10處處，多者，多者(從第從第11處起處起)不計(jì)分。不計(jì)分。改錯(cuò)步驟改錯(cuò)步驟1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）瀏覽全文，掌握大意）2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the grammar mistakes.（分句閱讀，逐行（分句閱讀，逐行找錯(cuò)）找錯(cuò)）3. Read the passage again,

5、 check your answers.（檢查核對(duì)，敲定終稿）（檢查核對(duì)，敲定終稿）6 I often dream of a teacher. I dream of standing on the _ platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys . _ and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them . _ growing up. I am always young when I was staying . _ with them. I know there

6、is not easy to be a teacher. You . _ have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges . _ you can never learn well. What is more, you have to be . _ friends with your pupils and take good care of him. . _ Only in this way can you are a good teacher and win _ respect from them. Though I am

7、a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true. _beinggivingandamitknowledgeteachthembeHomework-Check your answers How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?Proof Reading動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞名詞名詞冠詞冠詞代詞代詞連詞連詞介詞介詞形容形容.副詞副詞近近5年全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷短文改錯(cuò)題考點(diǎn)一覽表年

8、全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷短文改錯(cuò)題考點(diǎn)一覽表 考查內(nèi)容時(shí)間動(dòng)動(dòng)詞詞名名詞詞介介詞詞連詞冠詞代詞形容形容詞詞副副詞詞2010年312111012011年322110102012年312102012013年322110102014年11111023小組合作，討論學(xué)案中小組合作，討論學(xué)案中的突破考點(diǎn)內(nèi)容的突破考點(diǎn)內(nèi)容3minutesQuickly! 小試牛刀小試牛刀1.(2010全國(guó)）全國(guó)）On the box was a card say “ 25 cents each”2.The Great Wall of China is one of the largest constructionprojects e

9、ver complete.3.(2012全國(guó)全國(guó)) I win a national prize for painting last week.4.(2013全國(guó)全國(guó)) Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.5.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.6.Among the parks trees there are a science hall, an art centre,a gym,andsayingwondrunkcomplete

10、dholdis 歸納總結(jié)歸納總結(jié)錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、主謂一致、動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、主謂一致、動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞（非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞（to do/ doing/ done） 小試牛刀小試牛刀1.(2010全國(guó)全國(guó)) If they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize.2.(13全國(guó)全國(guó)) In fact, my grandfather even scared my classmatesaway during they came over to play or do homework with me

11、.3.I will be very glad whether I can work with you.whatwhenififwhether如果如果 條件狀語(yǔ)從句條件狀語(yǔ)從句是否是否 及物動(dòng)詞后的賓語(yǔ)從句且沒(méi)有及物動(dòng)詞后的賓語(yǔ)從句且沒(méi)有or not是否是否 通常引導(dǎo)名詞性從句通常引導(dǎo)名詞性從句 小試牛刀小試牛刀 歸納總結(jié)歸納總結(jié)錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在 并列連詞和從屬連詞的漏用和錯(cuò)用，并列連詞和從屬連詞的漏用和錯(cuò)用，上下文邏輯關(guān)系理解錯(cuò)用上下文邏輯關(guān)系理解錯(cuò)用4.(2011全國(guó)全國(guó)) I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag

12、from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.5.I received my mothers call telling me she would come, but I had to cancel the appointments with you.andso 小試牛刀小試牛刀1.(2011全國(guó)全國(guó))It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.2.(2014全國(guó)全國(guó)) When tea got popular in Britain, there was a

13、crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.3.After learning English for several years, I have made agreat progress.4.If I choose to take a next bus, I would have to wait foranother 30 minutes. 5.All in all, Joey is a very special dog because he has overcome unpleasant start in life

14、.luggagecupsthean名詞錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在名詞錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在 單復(fù)數(shù)；可數(shù)與不可數(shù)；單復(fù)數(shù)；可數(shù)與不可數(shù)； 歸納總結(jié)歸納總結(jié)冠詞錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在冠詞錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在 泛指與特指；泛指與特指；a.an.the 混用混用漏用和多用漏用和多用 小試牛刀小試牛刀1.(2012全國(guó)全國(guó)) My father was so pleasing that he suggestedI go to England for a holiday.2.(2014全國(guó)全國(guó)) The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.3.(2014全國(guó)全國(guó)) We are growi

15、ng wonderfully tomatoes at no cost.pleasedtasty4.Being a member of the Students Union makes me capable of organizing various activities. However, I am convinced that I can keep the class organized and lively.Therefore5.We gave our thanks to our teachers who had been educating us patient.patientlywon

16、derful 歸納總結(jié)歸納總結(jié)錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在 詞性錯(cuò)用，副詞混用；詞性錯(cuò)用，副詞混用； 原級(jí)、比較級(jí)原級(jí)、比較級(jí)最高級(jí)的混用最高級(jí)的混用 小試牛刀小試牛刀1.(2010全國(guó)全國(guó))Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him.2.To make my dream come true, I have told me over and overagain that Ill concentrate more on studies.3. Every year more and more people st

17、art a stamp collection of your own . 歸納總結(jié)歸納總結(jié)錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在 hermyself指代錯(cuò)誤；人稱(chēng)代詞和反身代詞的誤用；指代錯(cuò)誤；人稱(chēng)代詞和反身代詞的誤用；主格賓格；關(guān)系代詞和連接代詞（復(fù)合主格賓格；關(guān)系代詞和連接代詞（復(fù)合句，名詞性、定語(yǔ)從句）句，名詞性、定語(yǔ)從句）their 小試牛刀小試牛刀1.(2011全國(guó)全國(guó))Luckily I had all my money on my pocket.2.(2014全國(guó)全國(guó)) Nearly five years ago and with the help by our father, my sist

18、er and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden. 歸納總結(jié)歸納總結(jié) 錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在 inof固定搭配固定搭配聚沙成塔聚沙成塔-Summary動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)和和語(yǔ)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)主謂一致主謂一致勿忘記勿忘記還要注意還要注意非謂語(yǔ)非謂語(yǔ)名詞名詞多考多考單復(fù)數(shù)單復(fù)數(shù)連詞連詞并列并列和和從屬?gòu)膶偕舷逻壿嬌舷逻壿嬕宄宄稳莞痹~形容副詞看看詞性詞性代詞代詞前后要前后要一致一致介詞介詞搭配搭配要記牢要記牢還有還有冠詞冠詞a/an/the改完改完復(fù)查復(fù)查敲定稿敲定稿做完能力提升中的單句做完能力提升中的單句改錯(cuò)和短文改錯(cuò)改錯(cuò)和短文改錯(cuò)1.

19、 My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US, which was very interested.2. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.3. Since thenfor all these yearswe had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please.4. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living near m

20、y house, who was a very much famous writer.abuyinghasainteresting5. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.6. For a while my parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening.7. How many times have you walked out of a

21、 room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there?flewleftwhatMy dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They arethree lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For exa