高中英語(yǔ)-短文改錯(cuò)

1、短文改錯(cuò)假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌中間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：把缺詞處叫個(gè)婁子符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。 刪除： 把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。 注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was

2、 only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and

3、 powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.短文改錯(cuò)解題步驟1. 通讀全文，掌握大意2.整句理解， 上下兼顧3.復(fù)讀全文，檢查驗(yàn)證 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I wa

4、s only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong an

5、d powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.我?guī)缀跤洸黄鹞业哪棠塘?，她過(guò)去常常把我抱在她的膝蓋上并唱著古老的歌謠，她去世的時(shí)候我才四歲。此刻，對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)，奶奶僅僅是一個(gè)遙遠(yuǎn)的記憶，我很清楚地記得我的爺爺。他個(gè)子很高，有著寬闊的肩膀和隨著年齡漸長(zhǎng)由黑變灰的胡子。他有著低沉的嗓音，這讓他在我們校長(zhǎng)里脫穎而出，他強(qiáng)壯有力。事

6、實(shí)上，他甚至還會(huì)把那些來(lái)找我做功課或者玩耍的小伙伴嚇跑。然而，他是我所認(rèn)識(shí)的最溫文爾雅的人。1. I hardly remember my grandmother. 2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.3. I was only four when she passes away. 4. She is just a distant memory for me now.5. I remember my grandfather very much. 6. He was tall, with broad shoulder

7、 and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. 8. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gent

8、lest man I have never known.I hardly remember my grandmother. 1.Hardly： 幾乎不，幾乎沒(méi)有（表否定，修飾名詞時(shí)，名詞前經(jīng)常加有any，修飾動(dòng)詞時(shí)，動(dòng)詞前經(jīng)常加有ever）Eg. There is hardly any tea left. It hardly ever snowed in Washington in the winter 用于can或could之后，主要?jiǎng)釉~前，強(qiáng)調(diào)做某事很難Eg. I could hardly believe it when I read the letter 剛剛，才Eg. We had h

9、adly sat down to supper when the telephone rang. hardly 置于句首時(shí)要倒裝， 在hardly.when結(jié)構(gòu)中，hardly置于句首時(shí)，倒裝在主句Eg. Hardly have I heard from him recently. Hardly had I reached the bus stop when the bus started.1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （）2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.3. I w

10、as only four when she passes away. 4. She is just a distant memory for me now.5. I remember my grandfather very much. 6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he w

11、as strong and powerful. 8. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. hold1.注意區(qū)分used to do sth. be/get used to sth/doing sth和be used

12、to do 這三個(gè)搭配的用法used to do sth. 過(guò)去常常做某事be/get used to sth./doing sth. 習(xí)慣于某事/做某事be used to do sth. 被用來(lái)做某事句型區(qū)分：I used to get up early. I am used to getting up early.I used to travel by air. I am used to traveling by air.The robot can be used to do some dangerous work.The knife is used to cut fruits.2.ho

13、ldheldheld抱住，托住，拿著，抓住Eg. The girl held her fathers hand tightly.容納，包含Eg. The plane holds about 300 passegers懷有，持有（信念，意見(jiàn)）Eg. He holds strange views on education.舉行，召開(kāi)Eg. Hold a meeting Hold on 等著，停住Eg.Hold on! This isnt the right road.3.Knee 膝蓋bring sb. to their knees（尤指戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)中）打敗某人，使某人屈膝投降bring sth.to i

14、ts knees 摧毀某物，使（組織等）癱瘓或崩潰1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （）2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. hold3. I was only four when she passes away. 4. She is just a distant memory for me now.5. I remember my grandfather very much. 6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard t

15、hat turned from black toward gray over the years. 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. 8. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I hav

16、e never known. I was only four when she passes away. passed1.Pass away 去世 終止，結(jié)束 Eg. All this trouble will pass away2.Pass the time =kill the time 消磨時(shí)間 Eg. We killed the time playing cards 1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （）2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. hold 3. I was

17、only four when she passes away. passed4. She is just a distant memory for me now. 5. I remember my grandfather very much. 6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town,

18、he was strong and powerful. 8. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.She is just a distant memory for me now.1.A distant memory 一個(gè)遙遠(yuǎn)的記憶Eg. The history was a distant memory for me.2.In

19、memory of 作為對(duì)某人的紀(jì)念Eg. He founded the charity in memory of his late wife 1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （）2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. hold3. I was only four when she passes away. passed4. She is just a distant memory for me now.（）5. I remember my grandfather very

20、much. 6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. 8. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do home

21、work with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.I remember my grandfather very much. well1.考查副詞：此處需要修飾的是前面的動(dòng)詞remember，所以要用副詞well1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （）2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. hold3. I was only four when she passes away. passed4.

22、 She is just a distant memory for me now.（）5. I remember my grandfather very much. well6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. 8. In a

23、 fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned shoulders from black toward gray over the years. into/to1.Shoulder 考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，shoulder意思是肩膀，一般作

24、復(fù)數(shù)形式承擔(dān)，擔(dān)負(fù)Eg. To shoulder the responsibility for sth.2.考查介詞，此處用to與前面的from構(gòu)成短語(yǔ)“from.to.”意為“從.到.” turn from .to/into為固定用法，意為從變?yōu)?1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （）2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. hold3. I was only four when she passes away. passed4. She is just a distant m

25、emory for me now.（）5. I remember my grandfather very much. well6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned shouldersfrom black toward gray over the years. to /into 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. 8. In a fact,

26、 he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in him our small town, he was strong and powerful. and1.考查人稱(chēng)代詞，這句話(huà)為非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主語(yǔ)是which指代a deep voice

27、,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為set，賓語(yǔ)可直接用名詞的賓格，并且voice不予set構(gòu)成人稱(chēng)上的反身關(guān)系，不能用反身代詞himself?；蛘吖潭ù钆洌簊et sb. apart from.使某人脫穎而出Eg.His accent sets him apart.2.考查并列連詞1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （）2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. hold3. I was only four when she passes away. passed4. She is just a dist

28、ant memory for me now.（）5. I remember my grandfather very much. well6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned shouldersfrom black toward gray over the years. to /into 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in himour small town, he was strong and powerful. and 8

29、. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 1.考查固定搭配，in fact為“事實(shí)上，實(shí)際上”2.考查從屬連詞，during為“在

30、.期間”，when為“在時(shí)候”3.Sacare sb. away 把嚇跑Eg. They managed to scared the bears away.However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.考查副詞，never“從不”，ever“曾經(jīng)，在任何時(shí)候”I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her holdknees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is pa

31、ssedjust a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from well shouldersblack toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set to/intohimself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and andpowerful. In a fact he even scared my classmates away during they whencame over to play or do homework with me