初中英語建議信模版課件

1、應用文寫作書信類建議、倡議類 寫作攻略：1.建議信是向收信人對某事提出寫信人的建議和忠告。2建議信有可能是寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法和觀點；也可能是寫給某個組織和機構(gòu)，就改進其服務提出建議或忠告。3建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當先。因此建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。建議信寫作的注意事項： a這類文章一定要符合英語信件的基本格式。 b這類文章的基本時態(tài)多用現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。 c. 掌握建議信的語言特點：語氣要誠懇，有禮貌；建議內(nèi)容要詳盡具體，不能含糊其辭；可提供的建議通常是多個，因此要注意各個建議

2、之間的銜接。 d. 熟悉建議信的常用句型。常用套語A建議信開頭常用句式(照應材料,表明寫作意圖)1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to3. I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter.4. I am writing to you in reply to .5. You have asked me for my advice on how toand I

3、ll try to make some suggestions.6. I am writing to express my views on/ concerningB. 表達建議（Body正文）1. Have you considered doing./ So why not do.?2. I think it would be more beneficial if you could 3. I would like to suggest that you should4. If I were you, I would5. In my opinion, it would be wise to

4、take the following action.6. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can7. Youd better do./ Its better for you to do.8. The best way to do sth is to do / There is no better way to do sth than to do sth .C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式 1. I believe you will take my advice into consideration.2

5、. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/ helpful.3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard(在這一點上).4. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.5. In the end, I will be glad if you find these ideas useful.6. I would be ready to further discuss this matter.7.

6、Please inform me when you have made a decision.8. I am looking forward to your early reply.9. Lets keep in touch. I do hope to hear good news from you. D. 常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞表示并列的過渡詞或短語as well; or; too; also; as well as; and ;not onlybut also ; both and;either or ; neithernorFirst；Second; ThirdFor one thing; For

7、another (thing)2. 表示遞進的過渡詞或短語Moreover ; Whats more; Besides; in addition;Whats worse; 3. 表轉(zhuǎn)折對比的過渡詞:but; however; instead of; on the contrary; although; different from; despite; in spite of;On the one hand,; On the other hand, ;Some . Others;4. 表原因的過渡詞:because; because of; since; as; for; now that; t

8、hanks to; due to（由于）; as a result of;5.表結(jié)果的過渡詞:so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, 6.表條件的過渡詞:if, unless , as long as7.表時間的過渡詞:recently, at the same time, finally, at last, from now on, 8.表特定的順序關(guān)系的過渡詞: first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next,

9、 finally, in the end, at last9.表換一種方式表達的過渡詞:in other words, that is (to say)10.表進行舉例說明的過渡詞:for instance, for example, such as11.表陳述事實的過渡詞:In fact, To tell you the truth, To be honest12.表目的的過渡詞：for this reason, for this purpose, so that,in order to, so as to, with the purpose of13.表總結(jié)的過渡詞:in a word(總

10、之，簡言之), in short(總之), To sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary 假設你是某報社編輯，最近收到讀者李華的一封來信。信中李華提到自己在學習英語的過程中遇到了困難，這讓他很苦惱。請根據(jù)以上提示，寫一篇回給李華的建議信，幫他解決困難，促進學習。 建議內(nèi)容： 1. 不要灰心，保持良好心態(tài)； 2. 掌握學習方法； 3. 培養(yǎng)對英語的興趣愛好。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右； 2. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)； 3. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 建議信寫作范例第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習慣。雖然基礎(chǔ)寫作題是

11、半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談談如何審題：思考的問題樣題分析第幾人稱？（person）文章的體裁是什么？要寫的文章主題是什么 (topic)怎樣安排信息點的順序？ (order)動作是什么時候發(fā)生的？(時態(tài)) (when)第一人稱書信對英語學習給出建議說理的邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時第二步：構(gòu)思-建議信結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容要點三段式：第一段： 點明主題：表明寫作意圖，（有時要簡單介紹自己）。第二段： 陳述事實，提出建議，給出理由 （是什么，為什么，怎么樣）第三段：總結(jié)全文，表明希望草稿修改謄寫建議信重點第二段： 說明建議的內(nèi)容；（是什么） 提出具體建議的原因；（為什么） 指出采納建議的益處。（怎

12、么樣）注意事項：語言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對方感受。適當運用模板 Dear Li Hua, Ive received your letter, saying+ 你碰到的問題. Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, _, because_. Secondly, youd better_, because_. Thirdly, youd better _. Only in this way can you _. Whats more, _. I h

13、ope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours, xxx Dear Li Hua, Ive received your letter, saying you have some difficulties in learning English. Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. My suggestions ar

14、e as follows. Firstly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. Whats

15、 more, the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours,xxx 范文其他模板Dear_, You have asked me for my advice on how to . , and Ill try to make some suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise

16、 to take the following actions: First, . If you do this, . Second, . This way, . And last, . By doing this, . I hope youll find these ideas useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you. Yours, XXX Dear _,Im glad to receive your letter asking for

17、my advice on how to (引出主題). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建議)As to , I suggest (有時根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面). In addition, (其他建議). Im sure (預測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動的信心和決心).Im looking forward to (表達愿望). Sincer

18、ely yours, Li HuaDear_, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _./ I know that _ from_. Backgrounds and problems Here are a few suggestions/ Here is some advice that/ on_. First, it is important to _. Then/ Second/ Also, _. Besides/ In addition/ Furthermore, it should be a goo

19、d idea to _. I am sure that/ I hope that_. Suggestions, thanks and hope Thanks for your consideration. Im looking forward to/ Look forward to _. Yours, _ Signature寫作訓練假設你是的李華，最近你發(fā)現(xiàn)學校里的浪費現(xiàn)象非常嚴重。請給英語讀寫園地（English Reading and Writing Space)的編輯投稿反映該現(xiàn)象，并提出自己的建議。注意：詞數(shù)100左右；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連

20、貫。參考詞匯：美德virtue;提倡advocateDear editors, I am Li Hua, a student in class One, Grade One. _ I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, LihuaDear editors, I am Li Hua, a student in Class One, Grade One. Recently, I have found that the waste on our campus is getting serious, such as the waste

21、of water, food and electrical energy. Faced with these phenomena（現(xiàn)象）, I really feel worried. So here is some advice I hope will help. English Reading and Writing Space is a good medium to advocate（倡議） that saving is a traditional virtue. So would you publish more instructive articles on this topic f

22、irst. Then, some activities such as holding debates or seeing movies about the phenomenon will help students get aware of the harm of wasting and realize the importance of saving. Do you agree with me? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua精華點評 建議信的寫作關(guān)鍵在于作者給出建議的語氣委婉而中肯, 使對方容易接受。很多學生習慣使用祈使

23、句或者You should的句型表示建議, 這樣比較生硬，因此應轉(zhuǎn)換不同的句型使語言豐富, 如使用you should., you had better., remember to do等句型。在最后祝愿對方成功的時候, 可以用簡明扼要的句型, 如wish you good luck / wish you success / may you succeed, 使文章長短句結(jié)合得當。附：請求信模板Dear_, I am writing to formally request to_(請求的內(nèi)容) The reason for_ is that_(給出原因). I_, so I_(給出細節(jié)) I

24、would also like to request_(提出進一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at _(電話號碼). I look forward to a favorable reply. Yours sincerely， Li MingHomework 假設你是學生李華，你的英國朋友Tom目前正在努力學習

25、漢語，但在學習中遇到了一些困難，因此他在幾天前給你發(fā)電子郵件求助，詢問怎樣才能學好漢語。請根據(jù)以下要點給他回復一封郵件： 1感謝他之前對你英語學習的建議和幫助； 2介紹漢語語言的特點以及學習漢語的方法； 3邀請他暑假期間來中國，交流語言學習經(jīng)驗。注意： 1詞數(shù)：120左右; 2可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Tom, Im so glad to receive your last letter. I cant thank you enough for your advice and help in my English study, due to which Ive made great progress in learning English. As f