寫作強(qiáng)化2 內(nèi)容 學(xué)案 2022屆上海高考英語(yǔ)二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)

1、寫作(內(nèi)容)審題.明確文體：高考書面表達(dá)的體裁一般有三大類：記敘文、說(shuō)明文和應(yīng)用文，具體形式有便 條，日記，通知，書信，看圖作文及圖表寫作等。.定人稱、時(shí)態(tài)：一般說(shuō)來(lái)，說(shuō)明文、議論文多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，記日記多用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，記 敘文多用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)。但很多時(shí)候同一篇文章含有幾種不同的時(shí)態(tài)，如看圖作 文，描圖用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，論述時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。.列要點(diǎn)：弄清題目設(shè)置的情景或提供的要點(diǎn)，便能緊扣題意，確定寫什么不寫什么，做到 心中有數(shù)，避免隨心所欲，文不對(duì)題。謀篇布局.注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，合理布局開始部分(Opening paragraph )說(shuō)出文中的要點(diǎn)、核心問(wèn)題。正文部分(Body parag

2、mphs)-圍繞主題開展敘述、討論。結(jié)尾部分(Concluding paragraph)-對(duì)全文的總結(jié)和概括。要做到全文中心突出、段落之間必須是有機(jī)地聯(lián)系，內(nèi)容完整、連貫。前后呼應(yīng)，去除 與主題無(wú)關(guān)的內(nèi)容。.確定主題句主題句是對(duì)全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“畫龍點(diǎn)睛”的作用。通常主題 句出現(xiàn)在一篇文章的開頭，而后，全文對(duì)主題句所提出的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行解釋，擴(kuò)展。寫主題句應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：歸納出你要寫的文章的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)提煉出一句具有概括性的話主題句應(yīng)具有可讀性，抓住、吸引讀者?！菊n堂精講】(A)你班將組隊(duì)參加學(xué)校組織的集體舞比賽(group dancing competition),班長(zhǎng)希望大

3、家積 極參加。對(duì)此談?wù)勀愕目捶āＤ愕奈恼卤仨毎ㄒ韵聝?nèi)容：.你是否會(huì)參加比賽.你做出該決定的具體理由【思路點(diǎn)撥】審題.文體：議論文.人稱與時(shí)態(tài)：第一人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).要點(diǎn)：確定參加還是不參加；決定的理由謀篇布局Version 1Paragraph 1: describe the activity and state your opinion: take part in the competitionParagraph 2: state the reasons for your decisiona good opportunity to relaxa good opportunity to sh

4、ow my dancing skills and make some contributions to the classa way to strengthen class cohesivenessParagraph 3: conclusionVersion 2Paragraph 1: describe the activity and state your opinion: not take part in the competition Paragraph 2: state the reasons for your decisiona poor dancerfeel nervous in

5、front of a large audiencecant afford to spend so much time on training and rehearsal.Paragraph 3: conclusionOne possible versionA group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whe

6、ther to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, w

7、hich clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.For the two reasons mentioned above, i

8、t is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.【隨堂檢測(cè)】Directions: Write an English composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively in 120 -150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.有人認(rèn)為讀書要有選擇；.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)博覽群書；.我的看法?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】審題.文體：議論文.人稱與時(shí)態(tài)：第

9、一、三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).要點(diǎn)：人們對(duì)于讀書的不同觀點(diǎn)；我的看法謀篇布局Paragraph 1: describe the phenomenon of reading: heated discussion about how to readParagraph 2: peoples opinion 1: read selectively: time is limited; not all books are of good quality Paragraph 3: peoples opinion 2: read extensively: enrich knowledge; expand horiz

10、onParagraph 4: my opinion and conclusion: read both selectively and extensively: learn to judge and chooseOne possible versionPeople all know that reading is very important. But when it comes to how to read, a heated discussion has arisen as to whether we should read selectively or extensively.Peopl

11、e who are in favor of the idea of reading selectively believe that it is not how much one reads but what he reads that really counts. For one thing, living in an age when much time has to be taken up by work and other activities, people have no enough time to read extensively even if they intend to.

12、 For another, some books are harmful, such as pornographic books and magazines sold at the street book vendors. Lack of intelligent discrimination in this matter may cultivate ones bad taste. Therefore, the choice of books can never be overlooked.However, those who insist on reading extensively argu

13、e that it is through reading extensively that we obtain most of our knowledge. Only when one goes beyond his own field and experience and reads widely can he really make remarkable achievements in his study. Thus a man reading extensively has rich lives while a man with reading only a selected numbe

14、r of books walks this earth with a blindfold.In my opinion, we should read both selectively and extensively. That is to say, upon reading, we have to exercise extreme care in distinguishing good books from indecent books, but the significance of good reading cannot be overvalued. Whatever the purpos

15、e in reading, our contact with good books should never fail to give us enjoyment and satisfaction and there is no such thing as too many in reading good books.【課堂精講】(B)請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列圖表及文字說(shuō)明用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括中美高中生零花錢的主要 來(lái)源、比例、差異及原因，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。要求：1.12。詞左右；2,可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。studentsstudents【思路點(diǎn)撥】審題.文體：圖表說(shuō)明文.人稱

16、與時(shí)態(tài)：第一、三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).要點(diǎn)：描述圖表并分析美高中生零花錢的主要來(lái)源、比例；分析差異產(chǎn)生的原因；自己的 看法謀篇布局Paragraph 1: describe the rate, difference of the pocket money between American and Chinese studentsParagraph 2: state the reasonAmerican students have more opportunity to gain scholarship and take part-time jobAmerican students are less

17、 dependent on their parentsParagraph 3: my opinion and conclusion: we should learn to be more independentOne possible versionPocket Money Sources for High School StudentsThe pocket money sources for the American and Chinese high students come almost the same way: money from their parents, income fro

18、m part-time jobs and scholarships they can get, but the percentage of each is quite different. As can be seen from the picture, half of the American students9 pocket money is from their parents, 35% from part-time jobs and 15% from scholarships. By contrast, the Chinese students get most of their po

19、cket money from their parents, up to 90%. And at the same time the other sources, including part-time jobs and scholarships, only accounts for 10%.It seems that there are two reasons for this difference. There seems to be various causes for this difference, two of which, I think are more obvious. On

20、e is that the American students have more opportunities to do part-time jobs and are offered scholarships than the Chinese students. The other is that American families attach more importance to individual independence so the American students rely less on their parents than the Chinese students.As

21、far as I am concerned, we high school students should depend more on ourselves rather than parents. For instance, we can grasp the opportunity to do part-time jobs, which not only reduces the burden of our parents, but also broadens our view.【隨堂檢測(cè)】最近在成年人中展開了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于影響孩子成功因素的調(diào)查。請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面的調(diào)查結(jié)果，談 談你自己的觀點(diǎn)與想法。Sk

22、ills for successSkills that adults say are most important for kids to succeed:Source Pew Research Center survey of 5,154adults【思路點(diǎn)撥】審題.文體：圖表說(shuō)明文.人稱與時(shí)態(tài)：第一、三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).要點(diǎn)：描述圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果；自己的看法謀篇布局Paragraph 1: describe the result of the surveyParagraph 2: state your opinion: teamwork is essentialreason 1: help

23、 us learn ourselves better and achieve successreason 2: enhance communicating skills and promote friendship Paragraph 3: my opinion and conclusion: we should develop the spirit of teamworkOne possible versionRecently, a poll on skills for success among adults shows that teamwork, chosen by 90% of th

24、e adults, is the most important for kids to succeed, which is followed by reading skills. By contrast, writing skills are considered to be the least important among the five skills.As far as I am concerned, I share the same opinion with most of the adults that teamwork is the most powerful skills fo

25、r us to achieve success. Teamwork, a type of group activity, requires unity and cooperation. Teamwork can not only help children know their own merits and demerits so that they can get well along with others; but also it is beneficial to enhance childrens ability to communicate with others and impro

26、ve the efficiency of study. Therefore, teamwork plays an important part in childrens success.That is why I emphasize the importance of teamwork despite the necessity of the other four skills. If we want to be successful, we should develop and cherish our ability to work with others.【課堂精講】(C) 請(qǐng)以“Misu

27、nderstanding”為主題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括： 1 .簡(jiǎn)要描述右圖內(nèi)容2 .結(jié)合生活談?wù)勀愕母邢搿舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】審題.文體：漫畫類作文，描述+議論.人稱與時(shí)態(tài)：第一、三人稱、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)與一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).要點(diǎn)：描述圖片；結(jié)合生活談感想謀篇布局Paragraph 1: describe the pictureParagraph 2: some examples like this in daily life and their effectsParagraph 3: my understanding: lack of communication and different background &

28、 culture lead to misunderstandingParagraph 4: my suggestion and conclusion: express our requirement clearly and try to look at the problems from others positionOne possible versionEveryone hopes that when Christmas comes Santa Clause will give us a prepared gift which may bring us happiness. But if

29、what is shown in the picture actually happens, do we really need the gift? In this picture, a person is almost drowned and asking for help with one hand stretching out of the water. Just at this moment, a Father Christmas with a large pack on his shoulder comes near the bank and presents a gift to h

30、im, at which we must be shocked for we know that there is a misunderstanding between them. The former wants someone to save his life, while the latter takes it for granted that anyone extending their hands to him just wants a gift. Misunderstanding there is like poisons, deadly.In our daily life exi

31、st so many misunderstandings which may not be as serious as the one described above, but can still result in many terrible consequences, such as the friendship break-up; couples divorce; cooperation unreached among companies and so on. Why are there so many misunderstandings?As far as I am concerned

32、, lack of communication mainly leads to misunderstanding. Sometimes people have no time or no opportunities to express their feelings or meanings clearly. Meanwhile the same expressions may have different meanings under different circumstances, just as the hand appearing in the picture above: ifs fb

33、r life not fbr gift.So, in order to reduce misunderstanding and achieve an environment where the information can be exchanged efficiently and accurately, people need to express their meanings clearly by words, by gesturing, by writing, even by a smile or by an eye contact.【隨堂檢測(cè)】請(qǐng)認(rèn)真觀察下面的漫畫，然后簡(jiǎn)要描述漫畫內(nèi)容，并根據(jù)你對(duì)該漫畫的理解，談?wù)勛约?的思考和看法。參考詞匯：缸：vat； 漏出來(lái)：leak out； 漏洞：loophole【思路點(diǎn)撥】審題.文體：漫畫類作文，描述+議論.人稱與時(shí)態(tài)：第一、三人稱、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)