基礎(chǔ)寫作指導(dǎo)：Discription+of+People

1、基礎(chǔ)寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)語言、內(nèi)容、連貫高分原則寫作步驟人物簡(jiǎn)介以第一次階段考為例小試牛刀介紹你的好友李平目錄信息、詞匯、句型、 關(guān)聯(lián)詞、準(zhǔn)確78分語言56分34分12分0分語言運(yùn)用能力，語法和句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，詞匯使用很好，準(zhǔn)確性高，只有少許錯(cuò)誤較好，準(zhǔn)確性較好，有錯(cuò)，但不影響理解一般，基本準(zhǔn)確，有錯(cuò)，但不影響理解較差，基本不夠準(zhǔn)確，錯(cuò)誤影響理解很差，錯(cuò)誤很多，無法理解句子意義注意：每多寫或少些一個(gè)句子，扣一分5分內(nèi)容4分3分2分1分信息量包括了所有信息包括大部分信息包括基本信息包括小部分信息包括少許信息注意：沒有包括多提供的信息內(nèi)容，0分。 2分連貫1.5分1分0分注意內(nèi)容連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊內(nèi)容連貫，

2、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊內(nèi)容連貫性較好，結(jié)構(gòu)比較緊湊內(nèi)容連貫性較差，結(jié)構(gòu)不夠緊湊內(nèi)容缺乏連貫性，結(jié)構(gòu)松散文不對(duì)題，不給分高分原則詞匯原則：措辭準(zhǔn)確，詞匯豐富句型原則：5個(gè)“1”關(guān)聯(lián)詞原則：保持上下文連貫信息原則：全面、準(zhǔn)確12345語法原則：規(guī)范詞匯、句型，確保信息準(zhǔn)確1簡(jiǎn)單句，1并列句，1復(fù)合句，1特殊句型，1非謂語v.句型寫作步驟1234 認(rèn)真審題，確定需要表達(dá)的信息內(nèi)容把信息點(diǎn)寫成簡(jiǎn)要的英語短語或簡(jiǎn)單句信息重組，確定5句話的信息內(nèi)容和次序潤(rùn)色單詞和句型，添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使上下文連貫家庭住址廣州幸福路308張華就讀學(xué)校廣州育英中學(xué)愛好廣泛，尤愛足球和集郵學(xué)習(xí)各科都不錯(cuò)， 尤善英語性格善良，誠實(shí)，大家都喜歡他性

3、別男出生1992年5月21日身高1米81：確定信息live inBuilding308, Xinfu Road, GZZhang Huastudy at Yuying Middle Schoolhobbiesall kinds of，esp. play footballcollect stampsdo well inall the subjects，esp. EnglishCharacterkind，honesteveryone likes him性別a boywas born onMay 21st, 1992tall/height1.8 metres tallwith a height of

4、 1.8m2：英文短語 Zhang Hua is a boy.He was born on May 21st, 1992. He is 1.8 metres tall. He is kind and honest. Everyone likes him. He does well in all the subjects, especialy English.He lives in Building308, Xinfu Road, Guangzhou. He studies at Yuying Middle School. He has got all kinds of hobbies, esp

5、ecialy playingfootbal and collecting stamps.1. 合并：_、_、_2. 排序：_、_、_、 _ 、_.3:信息重組 Zhang Hua, a boy who is 1.8 metres tall,. was born on May 21st, 1992. Since he is kind and honest, everyone likes him. He does well in all the subjects, especialy English. He lives in Building308, Xinfu Road, Guangzhou,

6、and studies at Yuying Middle School . He has got all kinds of hobbies, especialy playingfootbal and collecting stamps.4:潤(rùn)色He has got all kinds of hobbies, among which playing football and collecting stamps are his favourite.Moreover Zhang Hua, a boy who is 1.8 metres tall,. was born on May 21st, 199

7、2. He live in Building308, Xinfu Road, Guangzhou, and studies at Yuying Middle School. He has got all kinds of hobbies, among which playing football and collecting stamps are his favourite. Moreover, he does well in all the subjects, especially English. Since he is kind and honest, everyone is fond of him.范文特點(diǎn)聰明我的好朋友：李平共同經(jīng)歷1暑假