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1、 . . 34/34高校英語四級(jí)寫作部分的規(guī)定與要求 日期： HYPERLINK :/ /Chapter 15 TEM-4英語寫作是高校英語專業(yè)學(xué)習(xí)者一項(xiàng)非常重要的基本技能。要想在考試中寫出好作文、取得好成績(jī)，首先必須了解考試大綱對(duì)此部分的規(guī)定和要求，做到知己知彼，有的放矢。高校英語專業(yè)四級(jí)考試大綱（2004年新版）對(duì)寫作部分的規(guī)定和要求一測(cè)試要求：（a）作文：能根據(jù)所給的作文題目、提綱或圖表、數(shù)據(jù)等，寫一篇200個(gè)單詞左右的作文。能做到容切題、完整，條理清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，語確，語言通順，表達(dá)得體?？荚嚂r(shí)間35分鐘。（b）便條能根據(jù)所給提示寫50 至60個(gè)單詞的便條、通知、請(qǐng)?zhí)?。能做到格式正確

2、，語言得體?？荚嚂r(shí)間10分鐘。二測(cè)試形式：本部分為主觀試題，分兩節(jié)：Section A和Section B。Section A: Composition本節(jié)是命題作文，文章題材主要屬于說明文、議論文或記敘文的圍。Section B: Note-writing本節(jié)是寫便條。三測(cè)試目的：按照大綱的要求測(cè)試學(xué)生書面表達(dá)的能力。四值得一提的是，與2000年的舊大綱相比，新大綱的以下變化值得關(guān)注：短文寫作的字?jǐn)?shù)由原來的150字增加到200字；便條寫作的分值由原來的5分增至10分；寫作部分的總分值由原來的20分增至25分。由此可見新大綱更加重視對(duì)考生英語寫作能力尤其是英語實(shí)用寫作能力的考察，這應(yīng)當(dāng)引起考生

3、的注意。此新大綱已由2005年4月開始執(zhí)行。2008年高校英語專業(yè)四級(jí)考試（TEM4）寫作部分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（一） 作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)專業(yè)四級(jí)考試（TEM4）的作文評(píng)分一般采用總體評(píng)分（Global Scoring）的方法。閱卷人就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分（Award Scores），而不是按語言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。滿分為15分，9分為與格線。（1415分）語言流暢，容充實(shí)，詞匯豐富，觀點(diǎn)明確，條理清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)正確，字?jǐn)?shù)在180250之間。（1213 分）語言流暢，容充實(shí)，詞匯豐富，觀點(diǎn)明確，條理清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)正確，但有少量的語法錯(cuò)誤。（1011分）觀點(diǎn)清晰，條理清楚，語言流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)正確。但語言簡(jiǎn)單，有一些語法與拼寫錯(cuò)

4、誤或有部分跑題。（89分）文章基本切題，語言較通暢，有觀點(diǎn)。但語法錯(cuò)誤多，隨意，拼寫錯(cuò)誤較多或句間邏輯推理不夠明確或跑題。（67分）文章基本切題，結(jié)構(gòu)不符合要求（Introduction, body, ending比例不當(dāng)）；語言不夠流暢，語法錯(cuò)誤很多，句間邏輯推理不夠明確或跑題。 = 1 * GB2 作文以“我”或“我們”來寫，屬切題； = 2 * GB2 一部分以“我”或“我們”，另一部分以“社會(huì)”來寫，屬部分跑題。（最高11分） = 3 * GB2 都以“社會(huì)”來寫，屬全部跑題。（最高8分）自擬題目不管正確與否都不扣分?？瞻拙泶?分。字?jǐn)?shù)少于170或大于250，扣1分；大于300扣2分。

5、字?jǐn)?shù)字體要寫清楚，并寫在框。此外，閱卷老師的評(píng)分還會(huì)受到其他一些因素的影響，例如：是否有具體的事例、名言警句等？文章觀點(diǎn)是否新穎、合乎邏輯？用詞是否豐富？書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔等等。（二）便條寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)從2005年5月起，便條寫作分值由原來的5分提高為10分。以2008年考題為例，便條寫作評(píng)分主要從以下三方面考慮：Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:Jane, your classmate, is thinking of subscribing to

6、an English-language newspaper. And you would like to recommend one to her. Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describing two features of the paper.格式 （2分）主要包括日期、稱呼和結(jié)尾三部分，每部分完全正確得1分，出現(xiàn)任何錯(cuò)誤都不得分。分?jǐn)?shù)扣完為止，不倒扣。（1）日期（Date）：正確形式：April 20, 2008; April 20th, 2008; April 20; 20 April 2008; 4/20

7、/2008; 20/4/2008（Apr. 也可以，任何一個(gè)日期都可以）位置應(yīng)在右上角或左上角。具體日期不限。（2）稱呼（Heading）：正確形式：Dear Jane,（或Jane,）位置應(yīng)在日期下一行左側(cè)頂頭。（3）結(jié)尾（Ending）：正確形式：Yours sincerely,/Yours truly,/ Sincerely yours,/ Yours, /Sincerely, Mary （或其他人名）位置在便條結(jié)尾的右下方。凡不符合上述正確格式或表達(dá)有誤均要扣分。（4）格式需前后一致，如全左或全右，若不符合，扣1分。容（2分）該便條須包括以下幾項(xiàng)容：英語報(bào)紙的名稱（1分）只要出現(xiàn)報(bào)紙名

8、字就給分，不論名字真實(shí)與否。名字沒有出現(xiàn)扣1分。報(bào)紙的兩個(gè)特點(diǎn)或者讀者的兩點(diǎn)收獲（1分）如果只寫了一個(gè)特點(diǎn)，不得分。如果寫的兩個(gè)特點(diǎn)屬于同一性質(zhì)，如“包括國(guó)際新聞和國(guó)新聞”，不得分。語言（6分） = 1 * GB2 首句需用自己正確的語言表達(dá)，若完全抄提示“youre thinking of subscribing to an English-language newspaper”，扣1分。 = 2 * GB2 如果格式容得滿分，但語言較差，最多6分。評(píng)分總體要求（1） 語言沒有嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤，格式正確，容完整，語言得體，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求（50 80），可給910分。（2） 便條總字?jǐn)?shù)（包括三部分格式在

9、）要求約50 60 字，不足50字或超過80字（10行或10行以上）扣1分。（3） 便條總分為10分，6分為與格線。TEM 4 COMPOSITION MARKING SCHEMEBANDSCOREDESCRIPTION515-13EFFECTIVE COMMUNICATION WITH ACCURACIESThe writing effectively addresses the writing task. It demonstrates a well developed logical organizational structure with clearly stated main id

10、eas and sufficient supporting details. It has almost no errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, and it displays an adequate ability to use the language with appropriateness. No difficulty is experienced by the reader. 412-10GOOD COMMUNICATION WITH A FEW INACCURACIESThe writing adequat

11、ely addresses almost all the writing task, though it deals with some parts more effectively than others. It demonstrates a generally well developed logical organizational structure with clearly stated main ideas and sufficient supporting details. It has relatively few significant errors of vocabular

12、y, spelling, punctuation or syntax, and it displays an ability to use the language with appropriateness. Very little difficulty is experienced by the reader. 39-7PASSABLE COMMUNICATION WITH SOME INACCURACIESThe writing adequately addresses most of the writing task. On the whole, it demonstrates an a

13、dequately developed logical organizational structure, though there may occasionally be a lack of relevance, clarity, consistency or support. It has some errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, which may, from time to time, obscure meaning, and for the most part it displays some abilit

14、y to use the language with appropriateness. Occasional difficulty is experienced by the reader. 2 6-4PROBLEMATIC COGG PROBLEMATIC COMMUNICATION WITH FREQUENT INACCURACIESThe writing only addresses some of the writing task. It demonstrates an inadequate organizational structure, and there may quite o

15、ften be a lack of relevance, clarity, consistency or support. It has frequent errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, and it displays a limited ability to use the language with appropriateness. Some difficulty is experienced by the reader. 1 3-0ALMOST NO COMMUNICATIONThe writing almos

16、t completely fails to address the writing task. It has neither an organizational structure nor coherence. Almost all sentences contain errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, and it displays no ability to use the language with appropriateness. Even after considerable effort on the par

17、t of the reader, the text is largely incomprehensible.Sample Analysis2007 SECTION A COMPOSITION (35 MIN) Nowadays, the Internet has become part of peoples life, and millions of young people have made friends online. Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: I

18、s It Wise to Make Friends Online?You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your view is. In the second part, support your view with one or two reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for cont

19、ent, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.Sample 1 (14 Points)Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? With the Internet becoming an indispensable part of modern peoples life, making friends online enjoys its great popularity, especial

20、ly among young people. However, is it wise to make friends online, as many parents and teachers are worrying about? As far as I am concerned, I strongly oppose being addicted to making friends online.Firstly, too much attention to online friends distracts your concerns to the true friends and famili

21、es in the real world. If we look around, we often find a lot of young people staying online and chatting with online friends all day long. By the same time, the communication between them and the friends around them are becoming less and less. Therefore, they feel lonelier in real life and spend mor

22、e time on Internet.Besides, online friends are often disguised. A large number of cases have proved that many criminals make use of Internet to cheat of money or love. Even if they are not cheaters, they tend to be totally different persons when you get in actual contact with them. Theres always a g

23、ap between the real world and the imaginary one.Nevertheless, it is unwise to make friends online. Those who are indulging in Internet should cast your eyesight to the friendship and kinship in the real life. What you should do is to seek solution, but not to escape.AnalysisThis is a well-organized

24、essay with a high mark. In the first part, the writer introduces the topic and clearly presents his/her view in the thesis statement“I strongly oppose being addicted to making friends online.”In the second part, the writer supports his/her opinion with two specific points, which are expressed in two

25、 topic sentences. And solid evidence is provided with details to clarify the points. The thesis is reinforced in the last part“it is unwise to make friends online.”After that, the writer also gives suggestion to those who are indulging in Internet, which makes the conclusion strong and convincing.Th

26、e organization is clear with proper transitions, such as firstly, besides, nevertheless. The essay demonstrates a well developed logical organizational structure with clearly stated main idea and sufficient supporting details.It has almost no errors of vocabulary, spelling and grammar. This writing

27、effectively addresses the writing task.Note: The words in italics are either wrong or not used properly.Sample 2 (12 Points)Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?Nowadays, it has been a fashion to make friends online, and more and more teenagers, college students and even many adults will spend a lot of

28、 time chatting with people on the Internet. ButI dont think it is wise to make friends online.Firstly, most of people will not reveal their identity on the Internet, which will not enable you to make true friends. Just imagine, a young lady you are talking with may be an old man, and Im sure we will

29、 feel very bad when we are exposed to the truth. Besides, the friends online can bring bad effect to people, especially for teenagers. The unhealthy stuff will both physically and psychologically influence young people and, in a certain degree, can lead an unproper way to their whole life. At last,

30、making friends online can do bad to the relationship between you and your family and friends in real life. Being addicted to the Internet makes you ignore the reality. You will be angry about your parents persuading and after a long time, maybe you will find you have lost the abilityof how to commun

31、icate with others properly.In a word, it is not wise to make friends online. I hope everyone can focus on the reality instead of wasting too much time making friends on the Internet. AnalysisThis is an essay in band 4. The author has a clear and definite view on the topic. Yet the thesis is presente

32、d abruptly without the sound logic with the previous sentence. The three supporting points are clearly stated but not well developed. For example, the second point the friends online can bring bad effect to people, especially for teenagers” is only a generalization without any example or supporting

33、details to prove it.On the whole, the organization is clear and the language in the writing is quite smooth. There are some problems with plural forms, personal pronouns and point of view, but they dont affect the understanding too much. The writing adequately addresses most of the writing task.Samp

34、le 3 (9 Points)Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?There is a tendency we cant deny that most of us have access to Internet. Subsequently, making friends online has become a common thing. Some may argue that making friends online isnt a good choice, however, personally, I hold the idea that it is wise

35、r to make friends online.On one hand, its a kind of company. When we live in our apartment, we seldom communicate to the neighbors, esp. that our family members are outside, the sense of feel lonely overcome us.Therefore, in order to get rid of this, we need to find someone to talk with. Then making

36、 friends online is a good way to solve this problem. Meanwhile, we can not only gain friendship, but also exchange our minds. In this way, we obtain a sense of satisfaction from talking with a stranger who will tend to say beautiful words toward us.On the other hand, making friends online help us en

37、rich our sight. We make friends, coming from different areas, accordingly, we obtain a lot of information that we cant get from our limited knowledge.Sometimes, friends online encourage us to read helpful books where will be able to learn more.All in all, from my point of view, making friends is hel

38、pful for enriching our knowledge and helping us encourage with others, hence, it is advisable to make friends online as long as we use it properly.AnalysisCompared with previous two samples, this one has more problems on expression, grammar and diction. The writer presents his/her idea quite clearly

39、 in the first part, but it is not appropriate to say “wiser” since there is nothing else to compare with. So it is a big mistake in the thesis and there is also a problem of comma splices in this sentence.Although the organization is clear, the content of body paragraphs is not good as support. Tran

40、sitions are not used properly here to link two points of the body as “on one hand on the other hand” should be used to introduce two aspects of different opinions. Besides, two supporting points are very weak without convincing details. Worst of all, many sentences are of grammatical mistakes and va

41、gue expressions, which cause occasional difficulties for the readers understanding. But anyway, for most part the essay still displays some ability to use the language with appropriateness.Sample 4 (7 Points)Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?People would like to make the best of Internet to broaden

42、their minds, they can get large information, they can play interesting games, even they can mak friends online. While a question has been arisen: “Is it wise to make friends on line?”The Internet is not reality, you can not trust a person through the Internet. Now I would not like to talk about the

43、advantages of the Internet, while the disadvantages you can not deny is existing.Many people make the most of it to do bad things, such as trick you that he is need of money eagerly and wise you would help him as a friend, or character as your friend to inform your family that you are in danger and

44、need money to save you, etc. All the things can be seen on the newspapers magazines, etc. So it is unwise to trust a so called online friend.I can Jump to the conclude that it is unwise to make friends online, because it is not reality, also we can not trust others without knowing the person well. S

45、o lets do utmost to make the base use of the advantages of the Internet. Cherish the friends around us!AnalysisThis writing is just of a passing mark. On the whole, the language in this writing sounds choppy and there are many vague sentences with lots of grammatical mistakes.The writer does not pre

46、sent a clear view in the first part but just raises a question, which confuses the reader a lot. Although there are three parts, the organization is not clear since nearly no transitions are used to connect paragraphs and sentences. There are obvious gaps in the logic. The second part, which is supp

47、osed to provide good support for the main idea, is composed of many vague sentences and sentences with mistakes on grammar, spelling, collocation, part of speech, etc. The reader will experience some difficulty in reading the essay.Sample 5 (5 Points)Is It wise to make friends online?I think it is w

48、ise to make friends online. First, now jobs pressure more and more.Everyone cannt better talk face to face. Second, friends online may speak everything of them.Third, friends online may help something of them and solve some problem.The forth, friends online may gain more knowledge and information.Al

49、l in all, make friends online is wise in the society. Make friends online cannt change a 潮流. Everyone may enjoy everyone with his friends online!AnalysisThis essay is poorly written. First, the essay only has the point but no support. The writer presents his/her opinion at the very beginning, but af

50、ter that he/she just makes a list of four points which are very obscure and lacking in supporting details.Second, almost all sentences contain errors of grammar, vocabulary, punctuation or syntax. Even the title is not capitalized. Generally, the essay is composed of Chenglish, even Chinese characte

51、rs. Besides, the number of words is less than what is required in the test. In addition, this writing has neither an organizational structure nor coherence. All the sentences are arranged at random. Therefore, even after considerable effort on the part of the reader, the text is largely incomprehens

52、ible.Original Tests of Compositions2001 SECTION A COMPOSITION (35 MIN)Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come to know the significance of travel through our experience.Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:TRAVEL BROADENS THE MINDYou are to write

53、 in three paragraphs:In the first part, state what the topic actually means to you.In the second part, give one or two examples to illustrate your ideas.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and app

54、ropriateness. Failure to follow these instructions may result in the loss of marks.SampleTravel Broadens the MindThe title reminds me the famous saying that read thousands of books is not better than travel thousands of miles. Our ancestors realized the importance of traveling to different places to

55、 broaden the mind in ancient times. By traveling, we can meet various people and different kinds of things and we will be filled with wonder seeing the rich diversity of our world. In this sense, travel enriches our knowledge and broadens our mind. When I feel tired and bored with my routine life, I

56、 would choose to go traveling. And the best place is the seaside. Whenever I am facing the vast seas, I cant help wondering how extensive and profound the sea is. The sight of the magnificent sea broadens my mind and makes me free from all the worries and vexations in life. By traveling, we can also

57、 accumulate all kinds of knowledge. We will learn the custom,religious belief, tradition, history and life style of different places and regions. Surely, our knowledge is enriched.So when traveling, we are surely to experience something new. Not only is our knowledge enriched, but also our mind is b

58、roadened. 2002 SECTION A COMPOSITION (35 MIN)Nowadays people are becoming increasingly aware of the importance of health. And they have different ways to stay healthy. For example, some exercise everyday; others try to keep a balanced diet. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?Write on

59、ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:THE BEST WAY TO STAY HEALTHYYou are to write in three paragraphs:In the first part, state what you think is the best way.In the second part, support your view with one or two reasons.In the last part, bring what you have writte

60、n to a natural conclusion or summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow these instructions may result in the loss of marks.SampleThe Best Way to Stay HealthyNowadays with the improvement of living standard, people are not just satisfied wi