2020年高考英語作文滿分指導資料

1、2020 年高考英語作文滿分指導（最全面）（最適用）第一部分錘煉作文的詞語英語書面表達第五檔作文中提到：語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致。換句話說，如果考生使用高級詞匯或句型，即使犯了少量或輕微的語言錯誤，也可不扣分，文章還是屬于最高檔次。因此，為了讓文章檔次高，首先要學會使用高級詞匯。高級詞匯的使用能夠給文章增添色彩和畫面感。它會大大提升文章的檔次，從而幫助考生獲得高分。要做到準確使用高級詞匯，應該注意以下幾個方面：一、使用亮點詞匯的4 種方法1標新立異“語 ”眾不同在寫作時，恰當?shù)厥褂靡恍﹦e人可能想不到的詞匯或表達，會體現(xiàn)出自己的高水平。(1)Great

2、 changes have taken place in our school in the last few years.And the news came that a short film will be shown in our school. (2018 全國卷 n 書面表達)*Our school has witnessed great changes in the last few years.And word came that a short film willbe shown in our school. (2018 全國卷 n 書面表達)2)I bmusy with my

3、 lessons now， for the College Entrance Examination ， which is very important to me， is near.I m occupied with my lessons now， for the College Entrance Examination ， which is of great importance to me, is around the corner.(2017 天津高考書面表達 )3)Our team， besidesregular training ， will join in a variety o

4、f activities.* Our team, apart/aside from regular training , will join in a variety of activities. (2017 全國卷 ID書面表達 )(4)Several days later， when the video was played on the graduation ceremony ， it was very popular . Several days later， when the video was played on the graduation ceremony ， it was w

5、ellreceived.(2017北京高考書面表達)多樣表達避免重復在寫作時，應盡量避免重復使用相同的單詞或短語，要盡量用貼切多樣的詞語來展示自己的水平。用詞不同、表達方式迥異，也是高級用法。(1)Moreover ， we will build a new stadium and with the stadium built， a wide range of sports events are able to be held.Moreover ， we will build a new stadium and with the stadium set up， a wide range of

6、sports events are able to be held.(2018 全國卷 m 書面表達)2)The team will hold many activities ， some of which will appeal to you ， including many matches.The team will hold a range of activities ， some of which will appeal to you ， including many matches.(2017全國卷出書面表達)(3)We may have different opinions in

7、organizing class activities.We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have various ways to dealwith such a situation. （浙江高考書面表達）單詞短語短語優(yōu)先當單詞和短語表示同一個意思時，優(yōu)先使用短語。恰當使用短語，一方面能使文章更加生動，另一方面也能展示出學生扎實的語言功底。（1）Hopefully ， these

8、 suggestions would be helpful/beneficial to you.Hopefully , these suggestions would be of great help/benefit to you.（2018 全國卷 I 書面表達）（2）To learn more about the development of our school ， all the students are welcome to watch the short film Growing Together.With the aim of learning more about the de

9、velopment of our school ， all the students are welcome to watch the short film Growing Together.（2018全國卷n書面表達）（3）There is no doubt that you should know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.（2

10、017全國卷I書面表達）（4）Firstly， the final exam of this term is coming so I am busy preparing for it.To begin with， the final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparing for it. （2017天津高考書面表達）用高級詞匯取代簡單詞匯為了表現(xiàn)自己的語言功底，顯示出自己的寫作水平，應避免反復使用低年級學過的簡單詞匯，盡量使用高中階段學到的詞匯來代替。（1）If you take my advice you a

11、re sure to have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.So long as you take my advice you are bound to have the most unforgettable experience duringyour college in Beijing. （2018 北京高考書面表達）（2）Second， I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning

12、 my position.Second， I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position. （2017天津高考書面表達）（3）I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I should make an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Frid

13、ay afternoon.（2016全國卷出書面表達）二、使用亮點詞匯的2 點注意 注意增加亮詞的“ 出鏡率 ” ，變消極詞匯為積極詞匯閱讀中能認識但寫作中不會用的詞匯屬于消極詞匯，寫作中能運用自如的詞匯為積極詞匯，也就是平常所說的“第一反應詞”。 積極詞匯量的多少直接決定著英語作文表達水平的高低?，F(xiàn)在很多考生的困難是，頭腦中的很多詞匯介于積極詞匯與消極詞匯之間；另外，很多背過的消極詞匯如果較長時間不接觸就會變成陌生詞匯。因此在備考過程中，考生要做的事情就是迅速擴大消極詞匯量并且保持接觸的頻度，力爭使其變成積極詞匯。很多考生作文駐足不前的一個重要原因是反復使用初中學過的簡單詞匯，背了大量的亮詞

14、妙語而不用。建議大家在想到一個表達時，務必要想一想還有沒有更好的表達方式，這就是我們平時常講的“頭腦風暴法”。例如想表達“美麗的”這個含義，大家首先想到的是“beautiful ，那么在下筆 ”時，要想一想還有沒有更出彩的表達，如attractive或charming等。再如表達“困難的時，大家常用“difficult ,那是不是用tough或challenging更與眾不同呢？.注意亮點詞匯使用的場合寫作時，在用詞上不可隨心所欲，決不能為追求“高級”而使用復雜但毫無把握的詞語，也不 能滿篇堆積所謂的“高級”詞匯，否則給人過分炫耀之嫌，得不償失。一般來說，一篇文章能用好 三至五個高級詞匯就可以

15、了。另外，為能更好地“完成規(guī)定的寫作任務”，減少錯誤，特別提醒考生在使用“高級詞匯”時，一定要注意遵循“準確、恰當”的原則，并且要注意使用的場合，難詞和 生僻詞匯并不一定就是高級詞匯，例如：一大早我們買了一些圣誕禮物。Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents.（purchased 太過于書面化，改為 bought 更地道）三、寫作的秘密武器一一24個高級詞匯名詞普通詞匯高級詞匯普通詞匯高級詞匯chanceopportunitychoicealternativeideaopinionpeopleindividualresu

16、ltconsequenceeffectinfluence動詞havepossessreplacesubstitutebearput up withunderstandmake sense ofdeveloppromoteconsidertake into account形容詞enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimportantvital/significantinterestingabsorbing/ appealingdifficultchallenging副詞finallyeventuallyhardlybarelyimmediately

17、in a flashnowadayscurrently連詞sothereforeandas well asIt is of importance for you to understand the content, Tang poetry.It is of importance for you to make sense ofthe content, Tang poetry.It is of importance for you to be aware of the content, Tang poetry.(2017 全國卷 I 書面表達) (2)That s why I think the

18、 trip along the Yangtze River will be a bettechoice.That s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better alternative .(2017 北京高考書 面表達)(3)In the coming three years , our school life will be difficult.In the coming three years , our school life will be challenging.三、寫作的頂級裝備一一27個加分詞匯表達關(guān)

19、注的名詞attention , focus, concern表達爭論的名詞discussion, debate, argument表達現(xiàn)象的名詞phenomenon表達優(yōu)缺點的名詞advantage, disadvantage, strength, weakness表達增長或卜降的動詞increase, accumulate, decrease, decline表達導致后果的動詞短語result in, lead to, bring about, contribute to , give rise to表達支持、反對的動詞短語approve of, be in favor of, object

20、 to表達可能性的形容詞likely表達有好處的形容詞beneficial表達強調(diào)的副詞particularly , especiallyThe picture shows a common phenomenon these days.這幅圖顯示了這些日子的一個常見現(xiàn)象。（2）The Internet has brought about many changes in the workplace.網(wǎng)絡給工作場所帶來了很多變化。（3）Our teacher is likely to get angry when she sees the dirty floor.我們的老師看到地面這么臟時，可能會

21、發(fā)火。綜合演練I .請用高級詞匯替換下列句子中的加黑部分We were so interested in the competition that we formed a group to take part in it.（2018天津高考書面表達）keen onI nvery glad to learn that you are coming in September. （2018 全國卷 I 書面表達）more thanWe are desperately in need of your help.As a result, I sincerely invite you to join us

22、.（2018天津高考書面表達）As_ a_consequenceSo, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty , which will help you prepare for your class.（2017 全國卷 I 書面表達）Therefore : make preparations forThe craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.（2017 全

23、國卷 n 書面表達）various/a range ofIn order to get a better understanding of Tang poetry, I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.（2017 全國卷 I 書面表達）acquireOur class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.（2016 北京高考書面表 達）came up withThe reasons are the follow

24、ing.（2016四川高考書面表達）as followsAt the same time , I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things.（湖南高考書面表達 ）made up my mindAs high school students , we should be neatly dressed when at school.ore supposed ,toThere s no harm in your staying up lateometimesoccasionally/

25、once in a whileThe teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.challenging n .句型轉(zhuǎn)換She didn t listen to what her teacher said in the class.* She turned a deaf ear to what her teacher said in the class.At that time , I realized that she didn t tell the truth.* At that time

26、, it occurred to me that she didn t tell the truth.You should finish your homework before you play football.* You are supposed_to finish your homework before you play football.In my opinion , neither you nor she has met the standard.* As fa as I nconcerned, neither you nor she has met the standard.I

27、 can t bear the way she treats her parents any longer.* I can no. longer put up_with the way she treats her parents.During the mountain climbing , please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.* In the course of the mountain climbing , please help each other and pay special attenti

28、on to your safety.After five hours stoonwork , we were all tired.* After five hours -n(srtop work, we were all worn out .Jack is very clever, who often thinks of new ideas.* Jack is very clever, who often comes up with new ideas.m .請用高級詞匯對下文黑體部分進行提升考生作文Dear Peter,It is a great honor for me to invite

29、 you to 1. take part in the activity “ Build a Civilized Campus this month.We 2.plan to go hand in hand to 3. build our civilized campus where beauty and harmony meet.To achieve the goal, we ll 4ask the school to communicate with each other in polite words.Meanwhile , we 5.should behave ourselves an

30、d obey school rules.As a nice environment 6. is good for us, we l-7. try our best to create a pleasant school environment.All the above is to 8. lead to the good conduct of teachers and students in our school.It would be nice if you could join us.Yours,Li Hua一格作文Dear Peter,It is a great honor for me

31、 to invite you to 1.participate_in the activity “ Build a Civilized Campus this month.We 2.aim to go hand in hand to 3.set up our civilized campus where beauty and harmony meet.To achieve the goal, we ll 4call on.the school to communicate with each other in polite words.Meanwhile , we 5.are supposed

32、 _o behave ourselves and obey school rules.As a nice environment6.is_beneficial_to us , we ll 7spare_no _effort to create a pleasant school environment.All the above is to 8.contribute to-the good conduct of teachers and students in our school.It would be nice if you could join us.Yours,Li Hua第二部分美化

33、作文的句式高考評分標準中的“復雜結(jié)構(gòu)的運用及較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)”就是指句子結(jié)構(gòu)的復合性和句型 的多樣性。不論是復雜結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，如強調(diào)句、倒裝句等句型、含有名詞性從句、定語從句 或狀語從句的復合句，還是較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，如分詞和不定式等非謂語動詞的運用都指向句 式的轉(zhuǎn)換問題。不容置疑，這些復雜結(jié)構(gòu)的運用及較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)會增加文章的表達力度、 提升文章的檔次。句式一： The reason why is / was that此句式在寫作中屬于高級句式，在文章中巧妙地使用此句式能使文章句式復雜多樣，對要點的 表述更加具體、生動、準確和全面，并能突出重點。從而提升了表達的層次，成為增分的亮點。個美句輸入Th

34、e reason why I want to apply for the position is that I want to improve my spoken English and help them have a better understanding of Chinese culture. （2018 浙江高考書面表達）我想申請這個職位的原因是我想提高我的英語口語水平，幫助他們更好地了解中國文化。The reason why I suggest you apply for Peking University is that it is one of the best univers

35、ities in China. （2018北京高考書面表達）我建議你申請北京大學的原因是它是中國最好的大學之一。The reason why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice is that it has many well 一 known sightseeing spots. （2017 北京高考書面表達）我認為長江之行將是一個更好選擇的原因是它有許多著名的觀光景點。今佳句輸出The reason why he_wasn _admitted_into_a_key_ university was that hi

36、s grades were too low.他沒有被重點大學錄取的原因是他的分數(shù)太低。I think the reason why_ you are always angry_is_thoi_you may have high pressure in study.（安徽高考滿分作文）我認為你總是生氣的原因可能是學習上的巨大壓力。The reason why people celebrate. the festival is_ that they believe it is the time when the moon is at its fullest and brightest in the

37、 whole year.（遼寧高考滿分作文 ）人們慶祝這個節(jié)日的原因是，他們相信這時候是月亮一年中最滿、最亮的時候。The reason why he failed the_ Enalish.exam, was_ that he didn t learn it well.他英語考試不及格的原因是他沒學好。The reason why Jack didn二 .arrive on.time, was. that the train was late.杰克沒有按時到達的原因是火車晚點了。句式二：So - that在寫作中，若巧妙利用此句式的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，就會使得文章句式多樣，亮點增多，體現(xiàn)作者的深 厚功

38、底，吸引閱卷老師的眼球，是作文的增分點，從而“加分”多多。美句輸入.陳述語序： Some of my classmates and I are so interested in the competition that we have formed a group to take part in it.倒裝語序： So interested in the competition are some of my classmates and I that we have formed a group to take part in it. （2018 天津高考書面表達）我和我的一些同學對比賽非常感

39、興趣，以至于我們組織了一個小組來參加比賽。. 陳述語序： Paper cutting is so attractive and alive that I think you could be interested in it.倒裝語序：So attractive and alive is paper cutting that I think you could be interested in it. （2017 全 國卷n書面表達）剪紙是如此迷人和生動，以至于我想你可能對它感興趣。.陳述語序： At the beginning , learning English was so diffic

40、ult that I wanted to give up without even trying.（山東高考）倒裝語序： At the beginning , so difficult was learning English that I wanted to give up without even trying.起初，學英語很難，以至于我還沒嘗試就想放棄。刀佳句輸出陳述語序：I was so excited that I_ couldn wait to try wearing them.倒裝語序： So excited was that I_ couldn wait to try wear

41、ing them.我太激動了，迫不及待地想穿上它。（湖南高考書面表達）陳述語序： The dough figurine he made was so beautiful that we_ couldn，wait_to have a try ourselves.倒裝語序： So beautiful_was the dough figurine he made that we_ couldn twait to have a try ourselves.他捏的面人如此漂亮，以至于我們都情不自禁地想要自己嘗試一下。陳述語序： He was so_nervous that_ he _could. hea

42、r his heart beating wildly.倒裝語序：So nervous was he that he could hear his heart beating wildly.他是如此緊張以至于能聽到自己的心在狂跳。陳述語序： The houses in the city are soexpensive_that families with low income can t afford tobuy one.倒裝語序：So expensive are the houses in the city that families with low income can t afford

43、to buy one.城市的房子如此貴，低收入家庭根本買不起。陳述語序： Time is so precious that we can t.afford to waste it.倒裝語序：So precious is time that we can tafford to waste it.時間是如此珍貴，我們浪費不起它。句式三：非限制性定語從句作文中使用非限制性定語從句后，使得文章句式復雜，提升了表達的層次，成為增分的亮點， 從而提升作文檔次。美句輸入During holiday seasons , I will live in the countryside , where air is

44、 fresh and people are friendly.（全國卷n滿分作文）在假期，我會住在鄉(xiāng)下，那里空氣新鮮、人們友好。Tang Poetry, which wins great popularity with Chinese people as an important literary formis what were going to learn the next17全國卷I書面表達）唐詩作為一種重要的文學形式深受中國人喜愛，它也是我們下節(jié)課將要學的內(nèi)容。Paper cutting is a traditional Chinese art with a long history

45、, which is popular among many people.（2017全國卷n書面表達）剪紙是中國傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)，有著悠久的歷史，深受許多人的喜愛。佳句輸出I hope you can help the students in our class to learn more about English and western culture , which can increase understanding and help build good relationships between us .（天津高 考滿分作文）我希望你能幫助我們班的學生更多地了解英國和西方文化，這能增進我們

46、的理解并有助于我們 建立良好的關(guān)系。In addition , you should respect your teachers,who unsefishly help you to_gain much knowledge .（江西高考滿分作文） 另外，你應該尊重那些無私幫助你獲得很多知識的老師們。First of all, the theme of the show is environmental protection ,which二 is ojgreat_importance in_ today society. （2016 全國卷 n 書面表達） 首先，節(jié)目的主題是環(huán)境保護，這在當今社

47、會是非常重要的。Have you seen the film , whose leading _acto5 is world famous?你看過那部電影嗎？它的男主演可是世界聞名的。句式四：What從句寫作中恰當運用 what從句不僅顯得句式多樣，句子活潑，而且讀起來結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，言簡意明。為美句輸入What I want to stress is that you d better bring some gsuch as a book or a Chinese knot.（2018全國卷i書面表達）我想強調(diào)的是你最好帶些禮物，比如一本書或一個中國結(jié)。Compared with the esca

48、ped driver, I am proud of what I did .（湖北高考短文寫作） 與逃跑的司機相比，我為自己所做之事感到非常自豪。He was not conscious of what an important discovery he had made.他沒有意識到自己做出了多么重要的發(fā)現(xiàn)。A佳句輸出What attracts tourists most is the spectacular view of sunrise on the top of it. （2017 d匕京高考 書面表達）最吸引游客的是山頂上壯麗的日出景色。What made Yue_Fei most

49、respectable was that he didn t give up fighting for his nation even when he was wronged by some.（2016 北京高考書面表達）即使被一些人冤枉，岳飛仍然為自己的國家而戰(zhàn)，這是他最值得人們敬佩的地方。What L_am= going to_ tell_ you is about the book donation from our school to your Chineseclass.（天津高考滿分作文）我打算告訴你的是關(guān)于我們學校向你們中文班贈書之事。Only those who spare no

50、 effort can achieve what they long for.（福建高考滿分作文）只有那些不遺余力的人才能取得他們渴望的成就。Today is what we can hold and make use of.（重慶高考滿分作文）今天是我們能夠抓住并利用的。句式五：With復合結(jié)構(gòu)with復合結(jié)構(gòu)的使用可成為作文中一道亮麗的風景線，讓閱卷老師心曠神怡，想不給高分都難 的很啊！上美句輸入Moreover, with the stadium set up, all the students are accessible to the facilities. （2018 全國卷 n書

51、面表達）此外，隨著體育場的建立，所有的學生都可以使用這些設施。For one thing , with almost all of us having access to the Internet and other media sources, such news is within our easy reach.（上海高考書面表達）一方面，隨著幾乎所有的人都能使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和其他媒體資源，這樣的消息很容易得到。With all the work done , we went to the nearby neighbourhood and gave them to the people livi

52、ng there.（2016北京高考書面表達）做完所有的工作后，我們?nèi)チ烁浇纳鐓^(qū)，把它們給了住在那里的人們。佳句輸出The soldier had him stand with his back to his father .士兵讓他背朝著他的父親站在那兒。He stood before his teacher with_ his_ head down .他低著頭站在老師面前。With= so_many people_ to_ help_us , we are sure to finish it in time.有這么多人來幫忙，我們一定能及時完成任務。I sat in my room fo

53、r a few minutes with my一eyes fixed on_the=ceiling.我在房間坐了一會兒，眼睛盯著天花板。句式六：bnly+狀語”放在句首的倒裝句“only狀語”放在句首的倒裝句穿插于寫作中，可令人眼前一亮，好感頓生。力美句輸入Only when you come to China can you experience Chinese food culture. （2018 全國卷 m 書面表 達）只有當你來到中國時，你才能體驗中國的飲食文化。As far as I am concerned , only by studying hard at ordinary

54、time can you succeedeventually.（四 川高考書面表達）就我而言，只有平時努力學習，你才能最終取得成功。Only if we know what we do in our daily life and live a low carbon life can we make a difference.只有我們知道日常生活做什么，過一種低碳生活，我們才能有影響。工佳句輸出Only when one loses二 freedom, does one know its value.一個人只有在失去自由后才知道自由的可貴。The pilot reassured the pass

55、engers.Only then did I realize how dangerous the situation had been.飛機駕駛員要乘客們放心，只有在那時我才明白剛才的情況有多危險。Only in this way can Internet voting make a real difference. （2016 江蘇高考書面表達） 只有這樣，網(wǎng)絡投票才真正有意義。Only by_shouting was he able to make himself heard.他只有叫喊才能讓別人聽到他。句式七：as/though引起的倒裝句as/though引起的倒裝句表轉(zhuǎn)折，常放句首，

56、是英語寫作中的常見表達，也是高級表達的結(jié)構(gòu)之 一，靈活地運用也會讓你的作文與眾不同。美句輸入Busy though/as I am with the lessons, I have managed to find time to hang out with myfriends. （2017天津高考書面表達）盡管忙著上課，我還是設法擠出時間和朋友們出去玩。Teacher though/as he is, he can t know everything.他雖然是老師，但也不可能什么都懂。Hard though/as they tried, they couldn t make her chang

57、e her mind.盡管他們做了很大努力，卻沒法讓她改變主意。比佳句輸出Surrounded as/though we were by the enemy, we managed to march forward.雖然我們被敵人包圍著，但我們還是設法前進了。Tired as he was last night, he sat up late studying.昨晚他雖然很疲倦了，但還是學習到很晚才睡。Unfamiliar though/as some of_ thequestions, seem to, me , they are easy to answer.（四 川高考書面表達）雖然有些

58、問題我似乎不熟悉，但很容易回答。Child as/though he is, he knows to help others.他雖是個孩子，但卻知道幫助別人。Hard as/though it. is_ raining : I m going out for a walk.雖然正在下著大雨，我還是要出去散步。句式八：強調(diào)句型強調(diào)句型是一種修辭，我們恰當運用該句型可以準確表達我們的意愿或情感，使強調(diào)部分給閱 卷老師留下深刻的印象。美句輸入It is believed that it is an excellent opportunity that you mustn t miss.相信這是一個不

59、容錯過的好機會。It was his continuous efforts that caused China to change gradually.（2016 匕京高考書面表達 ）正是他的不懈努力使得中國逐漸發(fā)生變化。It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.（福建高考書面表達）重要的不是故事本身，而是故事中所反映的東西。佳句輸出It was not until his father came back home that he went to bed.直到他父親回到家里他才睡。It

60、was my friend Jim who/that did the experiment in the lab last night.昨晚是我的朋友吉姆在實驗室里做實驗。It is because the book is so useful for my work that I bought it.正因為這本書對我的工作很有用，我才買了它。It was playing computer games that cost the boy a lot of money.電腦游戲花掉了這個孩子許多錢。It was what he_said that surprised me.是他講的話讓我吃驚。句式