大三下學(xué)習(xí)大二上daniel課件lesson12-peer editing of esssays

1、Correction Competition, Transitions, and Peer EditingObviously, these problem are not easy solved.Obviously These problems are not easily solved.These actions contribute to the splendid success of the reforms finally.These actions contributed to the splendid success of the reforms finally.On the one

2、 hand, the policy is inefficient. On the other hand, it is also too costly.The policy is both inefficient and too costly.Even though the student study hard for the English section of the Gaokao, they do not gain the professional knowledge.Even though the students study hard for the English section o

3、f the Gaokao, they do not gain useful English skills.In my opinion, we must make some changes of the one child policy.In my opinion, we The government must make some changes to the one child policy.If the policy is implemented, it will be a disaster, hurting many Chinese. If the policy is implemente

4、d, it will be a disaster, and will hurt many Chinese people.Those who support the undergraduate short-term teaching say it will support the fair.Those who support the undergraduate short-term teaching say it will increase the fairness.Have you seen the prostitution? How disgusting and terrible! Let

5、me tell you why it is wrong. Prostitution is a societal disease and is wrong for several reasons.TransitionsTransitions are incredibly important to help the reader understand when your paper is going from on ideas to anotherThey are important:At the sentence levelAt the paragraph levelSentence Trans

6、itionsFrom background to the thesis“Despite the controversy, the government should”Introducing sub-points“Additionally, physical injuries can be especially disastrous for student athletes.”Introducing quotes“This view is supported by research conducted at Harvard University.”Introducing analysis“Thi

7、s research shows that”Paragraph TransitionsYou dont need transitions at the END of a paragraph. Instead, focus on concluding the point youre making in the paragraph.HOWEVER, you should always have a transition at the beginning.“Guns also lead to accidental deaths.”It can be good to refer to the para

8、graph before.“In addition mental health problems, early start times can cause serious physical health problems for students.”Peer EditingWith a partner, you will now edit each others papers.We will do this over two days, so go slowly. You should not finish more than half of the paper today.While reading their paper, read it out loud to yourself.After you have read and written everything you want on each paragraph, discuss with your partner.Peer EditingFrank-JackChristy-UkeeEason-JessicaJanice-TwinkleDemi-EvonneRachel-ThirdGill-LilyNorma-Nicola