詳解雅思寫作Task1常出現(xiàn)的兩大問題

1、第 PAGE21 頁 共 NUMPAGES21 頁詳解雅思寫作Task1常出現(xiàn)的兩大問題詳解雅思寫作Task1常出現(xiàn)的兩大問題雅思寫作Task1需要注意的主語問題通常我們在Task 1會遇到很多變化類的圖表題，例如表格，柱狀，餅狀圖等。常常需要描繪某數(shù)據(jù)的變化趨勢，以及比照哪些不同，發(fā)表一下簡單的預(yù)測等。我們可以看下面分析p ：WRITING TASK 1 (劍9 Test 4 Task 1)You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below gives information from a 2022 report ab

2、out consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make parisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.通過上述的圖表可以得知，Petrol and Oil這條線是可以很輕易的看得出他的變化趨勢即整體上升，雖然在一開場這個數(shù)據(jù)是存在波動的。于是大多數(shù)考生就會寫出下面的語句：Petrol an

3、d oil increase from 1980 to 2030, despite initial fluctuations.當(dāng)我們看到這樣的語句時(shí)，通常喜歡選擇正確的謂語動詞以及相應(yīng)的趨勢名詞來進(jìn)展描繪其變化，但是關(guān)鍵問題是主語在描繪數(shù)據(jù)變化趨勢時(shí)，廣闊考生一定要擦亮眼睛，并不是所有的名詞都可以作為變化趨勢的主語，比方這道題目中上升或者波動的其實(shí)并不是汽油和石油，而是它們的消耗量。因此本句應(yīng)該是這樣的：The consumption of petrol and oil increases from 1980 to 2030, despite initial fluctuations.雅思寫作

4、Task1需要注意的謂語動詞正確性的問題因此我們在做雅思寫作Task1的時(shí)候，除了要注意我們常規(guī)的語法問題，一定要切記我們的主語問題。這個是很關(guān)鍵的。對考題里面的時(shí)態(tài)沒有進(jìn)展詳細(xì)理解，就直接開場使用時(shí)態(tài)。通常我們在描繪變化趨勢或者數(shù)據(jù)的升降的時(shí)候，一定要注重謂語動詞的正確性。要根據(jù)考題里面提供的時(shí)態(tài)根據(jù)作為標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。以下題為例：WRITING TASK 1 (劍9 Test 2 Task 1)You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in bil

5、lions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2022.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make parisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.在描繪local-fixed line的數(shù)據(jù)變化趨勢時(shí)，一般的考生都可以看到該數(shù)據(jù)呈現(xiàn)先上升在下降的變化趨勢，但是在詳細(xì)書寫時(shí)卻往往容易無視圖表上的時(shí)間是從1995年到202

6、2年，因此本來這里描繪趨勢的語句應(yīng)該選用一般過去時(shí)。因此，他們會寫出下面的語句：The figure for local-fixed line increase from 1995 to 1999 before decreasing between 1999 and 2022.可以看到在雅思寫作Task1的時(shí)候，在描寫變化趨勢時(shí)，主語用的是很恰當(dāng)?shù)模梢灾^語局部“increase”就出錯了。沒有考慮到圖表的時(shí)間是發(fā)生在過去應(yīng)該用“increase”的一般過去時(shí)的形式“increased”。所以上面的句子應(yīng)該改為：The figure for local-fixed line increased

7、 from 1995 to 1999 before decreasing between 1999 and 2022.小作文提分丨如何做好雅思圖表作文題目審題雅思圖表作文題目審題step 1：關(guān)注寫作時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)是一個簡單易錯的語法點(diǎn)，之所以放到審題的第一步，就是我們發(fā)如今大家的寫作過程中，時(shí)態(tài)不出錯的寥寥無幾。小作文做為數(shù)據(jù)說明文，首先強(qiáng)調(diào)的就是準(zhǔn)確度，時(shí)態(tài)對于數(shù)據(jù)描繪的準(zhǔn)確性毋庸置疑，對于時(shí)態(tài)的處理要根據(jù)每個題目提供的時(shí)間信息靈敏處理。1)提供的時(shí)間為過去的時(shí)間，要用過去時(shí)2)沒有給出明確的時(shí)間信息，可以使用一般如今時(shí)3)給出的時(shí)間有過去、如今、獎勵啊，需要詳細(xì)問題詳細(xì)分析p 雅思圖表作文題目

8、審題step 2：數(shù)據(jù)分類對數(shù)據(jù)合理分類是考察數(shù)據(jù)分析p 才能的一個重要方面。在數(shù)據(jù)類圖表的分析p 中，一道題目可以從多個角度進(jìn)展分類，但是合理的分類標(biāo)準(zhǔn)往往從數(shù)據(jù)特征出發(fā)，比方按照數(shù)據(jù)的變化趨勢或數(shù)據(jù)的上下來分類，有時(shí)也會按照題目的既定分類來組織。雅思圖表作文題目審題step 3：數(shù)據(jù)比照分析p 比照是數(shù)據(jù)類作文中最核心的描繪內(nèi)容之一。下面簡單給大家總結(jié)幾點(diǎn)：1. 附屬連詞比照數(shù)值 35% of British people went abroad, while/whereas/although 28% of Australians spent holidays in a different

9、 country.2. 狀語從句省略句式，不可寫做paring 35% of British people went abroad, pared to/with 28% of Australians.3. 一句話排序句式Heating room accounts for the largest proportion of household energy use, followed by heating water (30%), and then other appliances (15%).4. 數(shù)值相等：The figures for America and China were simi

10、lar/equal at 100 tons in 1999.雅思圖表作文題目審題step 4：描繪變化趨勢對于變化趨勢的描繪是數(shù)據(jù)類圖表核心描繪之一，尤其是對于動態(tài)變化類的圖表。描繪變化趨勢的根本要求是準(zhǔn)確性與多樣性。首選是詞匯層次。除了要準(zhǔn)確的使用詞匯來描繪上升與下降之外，變化的幅度(degree)也要描繪準(zhǔn)確。其次是描繪變化趨勢的句式。雅思圖表作文題目審題step 5：點(diǎn)睛總結(jié)綜述是數(shù)據(jù)類寫作的點(diǎn)睛之筆，是考官在判斷一篇文章能否拿到7分的重要衡量標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。在數(shù)據(jù)分析p 中，假如可以對于變化趨勢以及比照明晰地綜述(presents a clear overview of main trends,

11、 differences or stages)，就有時(shí)機(jī)在評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)Task achievement任務(wù)回應(yīng)方面拿到7分。綜述的內(nèi)容為對于數(shù)據(jù)信息進(jìn)展概括，把最主要的變化趨勢或數(shù)據(jù)比照總結(jié)為一句或兩句話，所以不同類型的題目側(cè)重點(diǎn)不同，要詳細(xì)問題詳細(xì)分析p 。補(bǔ)充一些在雅思圖表作文寫作中考生比擬容易犯錯的表達(dá)：had a decrease/ increase：沒有這樣的表達(dá)，一般是saw a decrease/increaseIncreased, decreased, declined 這些上升和下降的詞都沒有被動語態(tài)當(dāng)the number, the amount, the figure， the

12、 proportion做句子的主語的時(shí)候，不能用account forThe amount不能交換the numberremained 后面只能加形容詞，也就是“remain constantly”是錯的，只有“remain constant”在動態(tài)圖里，一般是rose “數(shù)字”-fold，譬如說是”rose fivefold”而不是“rose five times”Doubled(增長一倍)不及物動詞，沒有被動“millions” 或者“thousands”在句子中出現(xiàn)時(shí)不能加復(fù)數(shù)，只有“數(shù)字+million or thousand”的說法動態(tài)圖過分注重?cái)?shù)據(jù)和小的波動，而無視趨勢。趨勢是一個

13、區(qū)間內(nèi)最主要的一個變化靜態(tài)圖過分側(cè)重讀數(shù)據(jù)，沒有將數(shù)據(jù)歸類和歸納(具備類似特征的數(shù)據(jù)要放在一起)圖表作文最好不要出現(xiàn)in addition, moreover這些連接詞Followed by后面要寫名詞，而且這個名詞要和主句的主語性質(zhì)差不多Reach 讀數(shù)據(jù)的時(shí)候不能加to或者at, 直接加數(shù)據(jù)就可以Ratio和rate一般不能替代proportion和percentagePicture 不能交換graph 或者chart不要用定語從句讀數(shù)據(jù)，譬如說 the crime rate in the US was highest, which was 0.3%. 這里的which was 直接省略。

14、說人年齡的時(shí)候應(yīng)該是aged，譬如說people aged from 15 to 24一般不會用過去進(jìn)展時(shí)態(tài)，也就是was increasing/decreasing 是錯的While, whereas一定要連接兩個獨(dú)立的句子，不可以單獨(dú)存在副詞slightly不能修飾名詞，應(yīng)該是slight increase, drop小作文一般用不到minimum這個詞，minimal的意思不是“最小的”，而是“根本上可以忽略不計(jì)的”盡量不要用套句，假如用，要注意不要寫錯，it is worth noting that, it should be noted that圖表作文一般用不到on the con

15、trary, 用in contrast, by contrast即可表示波動可以說fluctuated，不要寫saw a fluctuationReduce和raise這兩個詞小作文用不到，因?yàn)槭羌拔飫釉~;arise也不能替代rise;“ascent/descent”不能用在小作文里。結(jié)尾段不能寫數(shù)據(jù)小作文指南丨雅思圖表作文范文匯總雅思圖表作文之：線性圖雅思圖表作文主題：企業(yè)垃圾The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three panies over a period of 15 years.(本圖來自于劍雅真題)雅思圖表

16、作文范文The line graph pares three panies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2022.這條線圖對三家公司的廢物產(chǎn)出從2000年到2022年進(jìn)展了比擬。It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three panies shown on the graph. While panies A and B saw waste output fall ove

17、r the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by pany C increased considerably.很明顯，圖表上顯示的這三家公司消費(fèi)的垃圾量發(fā)生了重大變化。雖然A公司和B公司在_年的時(shí)間里看到了廢物的產(chǎn)量下降，但C公司消費(fèi)的廢物量卻大幅增加。In 2000, pany A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while panies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the

18、 following 5 years, the waste output of panies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for pany A fell by approximately 1 tonne.2000年，A公司消費(fèi)了12噸廢物，而B公司和C公司分別消費(fèi)了大約8噸和4噸廢料。在接下來的5年里，公司B和C的廢料產(chǎn)量增加了大約2噸，但是公司A的產(chǎn)量下降了大約1噸。From 2022 to 2022, pany A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and pany B r

19、educed its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, pany C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2022, pany Cs waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from panies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonn

20、es.(192 words, band 9)從2022年到2022年，公司將廢物產(chǎn)量減少了大約3噸，公司B減少了大約7噸的垃圾。相比之下，C公司在同樣的10年時(shí)間里，廢物產(chǎn)量增加了大約4噸。到2022年，C公司的廢物產(chǎn)量已升至10噸，而A和B公司的垃圾量已降至8噸，僅為3噸。雅思圖表作文之餅圖雅思圖表作文主題：游客分析p The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.(本圖來自于劍雅真

21、題)雅思圖表作文范文The pie chart pares figures for visitors to four categories of tourist attraction and to five different theme parks in Britain in 1999.這個餅狀圖比擬了1999年英國的四類旅游景點(diǎn)和5個不同主題公園的游客人數(shù)。It is clear that theme parks and museums / galleries were the two most popular types of tourist attraction in that yea

22、r. Blackpool Pleasure Beach received by far the highest proportion of visitors in the theme park sector.很明顯，主題公園和博物館/畫廊是那一年最受歡送的兩種旅游景點(diǎn)。在主題公園中，黑潭快樂海灘獲得的游客比例是最高的。Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 38% of the surveyed visitors went to a theme park, and 37% of them went to a muse

23、um or gallery. By contrast, historic houses and monuments were visited by only 16% of the sle, while wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular of the four types of tourist attraction, with only 9% of visitors.更詳細(xì)地看這些信息，我們可以看到，38%的受訪游客去了一個主題公園，其中37%的人去了博物館或美術(shù)館。相比之下，只有16%的樣本參觀了歷史建筑和紀(jì)念碑，而野生動物公園和動物

24、園那么是這四種旅游景點(diǎn)中最不受歡送的，只有9%的游客。In the theme park sector, almost half of the people surveyed (47%) had been to Blackpool Pleasure Beach. Alton Towers was the second most popular amusement park, with 17% of the sle, followed by Pleasureland in Southport, with 16%. Finally, Chessington World of Adventures

25、and Legoland Windsor had each weled 10% of the surveyed visitors.(181 words, band 9)在主題公園領(lǐng)域，幾乎一半的被調(diào)查者(47%)曾經(jīng)到過布萊克浦的快樂海灘。奧爾頓塔是第二大最受歡送的游樂園，有17%的樣本，其次是在索斯波特的娛樂公園，占16%。最后，查辛頓冒險(xiǎn)世界和樂高和溫莎的游客都?xì)g送10%的游客。雅思圖表作文之餅圖雅思圖表作文主題：各地房價(jià)The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five diffe

26、rent cities between 1990 and 2022 pared with the average house prices in 1989.(本圖來自于劍雅真題)雅思圖表作文范文：The bar chart pares the cost of an average house in five major cities over a period of 13 years from 1989.柱狀圖比擬了從1989年開場的_年里，五個主要城市的平均房價(jià)。We can see that house prices fell overall between 1990 and 1995,

27、but most of the cities saw rising prices between 1996 and 2022. London experienced by far the greatest changes in house prices over the 13-year period.我們可以看到，在1990年至1995年期間，房價(jià)總體下跌，但大多數(shù)城市在1996年至2022年期間房價(jià)上漲。在過去的_年里，倫敦經(jīng)歷了房價(jià)的最大變化。Over the 5 years after 1989, the cost of average homes in Tokyo and London

28、 dropped by around 7%, while New York house prices went down by 5%. By contrast, prices rose by approximately 2% in both Madrid and Frankfurt.在1989年之后的5年里，東京和倫敦的平均房價(jià)下跌了7%，而紐約房價(jià)下跌了5個百分點(diǎn)。相比之下，馬德里和法蘭克福的房價(jià)都上漲了大約2個百分點(diǎn)。Between 1996 and 2022, London house prices jumped to around 12% above the 1989 average.

29、 Homebuyers in New York also had to pay significantly more, with prices rising to 5% above the 1989 average, but homes in Tokyo remained cheaper than they were in 1989. The cost of an average home in Madrid rose by a further 2%, while prices in Frankfurt remained stable.(165 words)從1996年到2022年，倫敦房價(jià)跳

30、漲到比1989年平均程度高出12個百分點(diǎn)。紐約的購房者也不得不支付更高的價(jià)格，房價(jià)比1989年的平均程度高出5%，但東京的房價(jià)仍然低于1989年的程度。在馬德里，平均房價(jià)上漲了2%，而法蘭克福的房價(jià)那么保持穩(wěn)定。雅思圖表作文之表格雅思圖表作文主題：騎車上班The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2022 and 2022.(本圖來自于劍雅真題)雅思圖表作文范文The table pares the numbers

31、of people who cycled to work in twelve areas of the UK in the years 2022 and 2022.這張表格比擬了2022年和2022年在英國12個地區(qū)騎車上班的人的數(shù)量。Overall, the number of UK muters who travelled to work by bicycle rose considerably over the 10-year period. Inner London had by far the highest number of cycling muters in both year

32、s.總的來說，在過去的10年里，騎自行車上班的英國上班族的數(shù)量大幅增加。在這兩年中，倫敦市中心的自行車上班族數(shù)量是最多的。In 2022, well over 43 thousand residents of inner London muted by bicycle, and this figure rose to more than 106 thousand in 2022, an increase of 144%. By contrast, although outer London had the second highest number of cycling muters in e

33、ach year, the percentage change, at only 45%, was the lowest of the twelve areas shown in the table.2022年，倫敦市中心有超過43萬居民騎自行車上下班，2022年這個數(shù)字上升到超過106萬，增長了144%。相比之下，盡管倫敦的自行車上班族每年的出行次數(shù)是第二高的，但這個百分比的變化，只有45%，是表中所顯示的12個區(qū)域中最低的。Brighton and Hove saw the second biggest increase (109%) in the number of residents

34、cycling to work, but Bristol was the UKs second city in terms of total numbers of cycling muters, with 8,108 in 2022 and 15,768 in 2022. Figures for the other eight areas were below the 10 thousand mark in both years.(172 words, band 9)布萊頓和霍夫在騎車上班的人數(shù)中排名第二(109%)，但在自行車上班族的總數(shù)中，布里斯托爾是英國的第二大城市，2022年為8108

35、人，2022年為15768人。其他8個地區(qū)的數(shù)據(jù)在這兩年內(nèi)都低于10萬。雅思圖表作文之混合圖雅思圖表作文主題：水消耗The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.(本圖來自于劍雅真題)雅思圖表作文范文：The charts pare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.這些圖表比擬了世界各地的農(nóng)業(yè)、工業(yè)和家庭用水的數(shù)量，以及巴西和剛果民主共和國的用水情況