GRE寫作：常見問題介紹

1、第 PAGE5 頁 共 NUMPAGES5 頁GRE寫作：常見問題介紹GRE寫作：常見問題介紹第一，不一定能揪出正確的關(guān)鍵字。比方，221“The chief benefit of the study of history is to break down the illusion that people in one period of time are significantly different from people who lived at any other time in history.” 正確的關(guān)鍵字決定了寫作是否會跑題。第二，即使揪出適宜的關(guān)鍵字，在第一反響期內(nèi)也不一定有

2、話可說。比方，130“How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.” 對于理工科的GF來說，平常的教學(xué)中無視此類文科性知識是比擬常見的。如今突然拿到”socialization” “better society“以及”education”，經(jīng)常會出現(xiàn)大腦斷電或短路，接下來的寫作又從何說起?!簡而言之

3、，擔(dān)憂自己對一問題會有看法，但不知道怎么去論證這一看法，更不要說讓我們的論證persuasive, insightful.第三，成人思想，嬰兒表達。即使有話可說，也不一定是ETS想要看到的話，有可能是會出現(xiàn)“成人思想，嬰兒表達”。自己看了都覺得惡心，更不要說讓professors來欣賞了。在ARGUMENT的寫作中，主要擔(dān)憂沒有把握A的邏輯鏈，develop深度不夠，出現(xiàn)“強詞奪理”的場面，而不是“曉之以理，動之以情”。GRE寫作總分值范文賞析ThefollowingistakenfromamemofromtheadvertisingdirectoroftheSilverScreenMovie

4、Productionpany.mentaryThisresponseidentifiesandanalyzessomeimportantflawsintheargument.Althoughthenumberofpointsmentionedisthesameasthatinthesle5paper,thisresponseremainsatthe4scorelevelbecausethepointsofthecritiqueareonlyminimallydevelopedorsupported.Theessayidentifiesfourpoints:-thepublicmightnott

5、rustcritics-themoviessubjectmattermightnotbeappealing-thepublicmightpreferseeingspecialeffectsorbig-namestarsratherthangoodcinematographyorrealisticacting-perhapsimprovementinTVprogrammingorincreaseduseofhomeputershaskeptpeopleawayfrommovietheatersIdeasintheresponseareconveyedwellandclearly;theuseof

6、languageisgenerallystrong.Butthepapers“bare-bones”analysisgivesitalist-likequality.Itisthereforemerelyadequateandmeritsascoreof4.GRE寫作總分值范文賞析ThefollowingistakenfromamemofromtheadvertisingdirectoroftheSilverScreenMovieProductionpany.Theaddirectormentionsthatreviewerslikedspecificfilmsandgavemorefavor

7、ablereviewsthaninthepast.Butheneglectstomentionthespecificnumbers-criticsmayhaveravedabout2moviesandturnedtheirthumbsdownthe10others.Ifthatsthecase,itsnowonderthatviewershiphasdeclined.mentaryThisstrongresponsebeginswithanattackontheadvertisingdirectorofSilverScreenbutquicklyshiftstoidentifyingmajor

8、flawsintheargument.Themainpointsofthecritiquearethat-therealreasonsforadeclineinviewershiphavenotyetbeenidentified;-SilverScreenmaynotproducedifferentkindsofmoviestoappealtodiverseinterests;-thenumberoffavorablyreviewedmoviesmayactuallyhavebeenverylow;andthanhelpthepany.Althoughmorepointsaremadeherethanaremadeinthesle6responseonthistopic,eachofthepointsmadeinthe6paperisdeveloped.Thatisnotthecasehere.Inthisresponse,eachpointissupported(byperhapsanadditionalsentence),butitisnotfurtherdeveloped.Thepaper