作文煉句第46篇譯文老師筆記

1、1- diet詞典釋義：dietda.t verbransitiveto limit the foodand/or drink which you take, espelly inorder to lose weight（尤指為減肥而）節(jié)食，控制飲食You should be able to reduce your weight by careful控制飲食你應該可以減輕體重。dieting.透過外刊例句：Shiseidos recenternational launch of itsnew Body Creator skin gelclaimsmelt 1.1kg ofbody fat in

2、 a month without any need to diet orexercise. （）資生堂最近為其的塑身護膚凝膠舉行了國際發(fā)布會，宣稱其所含的消脂胡椒和葡萄油能讓人在一個月內無需節(jié)食和運動，都能消耗 1.1 千克熱量。替換表達：goes on a diet1.如果一個人通過節(jié)食的方式獲得了一個苗條的身材，那么他們會有一個更好的自我形象，并且會在個人生活和工作中變得更加開朗和自信。Ifrson diets （1.節(jié)食）to achieve a slim figure （2.苗條的身材）then they will have a better self-image（3.自我形象） an

3、d be happier and more confidentheiral and profesal life（4.個人生活和工作）.2- a slim figure詞典釋義：figure6.N-COUNTyour body.可數(shù)名詞 體形;身材Yourfigureis the shof【搭配模式】：with suppTake pride in your heal傲吧。nd yourfigure.為自己的健康和體形感到驕Janet was a natural blonde wi材曼妙。good figure.天生一頭金發(fā)，身外刊例句：Previewing his new albumhis di

4、mly-litSoho basement, he nowcame on likel-pure indie rocker, a slim figure dressed in blackandfled by drums, bass and trumpet. （）在這昏暗的小型預覽其專輯，會覺得他現(xiàn)在就像個十足的小眾搖滾歌手：修長體格配著一身黑衣，伴著架子鼓、和號子。替換表達：a slender figure學生錯誤表達：a slim body點評：body 是指人的身體，身軀，例如：My fingers were numb and my wholebody ached.我手指麻木，渾身疼痛。用 b

5、ody 來指人的身材不夠準確。3- self-image詞典釋義：self-imageselfm.dnouncountable usuallysingularthe wayrson feels about his or her自我形象Having a decent job contributes to a good工作有助于樹立良好的自我形象。self-image.擁有一份體面的外刊例句：Justas some people have a better self-imagen others, so itseems do countries.（）就像某些人的自我形象比其他人的好，國家也如此。4-

6、al and profesal life詞典釋義：profesalprfe.n.ladjectiverelated to work專業(yè)的t needs spel training or education職業(yè)的；Chris, youre a nurse, so can I ask yourprofesalopiniononbandagingles?，你是個護士，能否征求一下你對踝部包扎的意見？Both doctors have bad or unacceptabbeen charged withprofesalmisconduct(=這兩位醫(yī)生都被控瀆職。外刊例句：Sol media may

7、have started as a way to stayouch with friendsand family, but over time is spilledo our profesal lives,too. （）社交可能已變成了維系親朋好友的紐帶，不過久而久之，的工作生活也漸漸融入其中了。替換表達：ones work and privaife / ones profesal and privaifeESSENTIALQ：then 前面不需要加逗號嗎？A：then 前面加不加逗號都可以，看個人的寫作。Q：老師，我看英語常用詞疑難用法手冊說無論是“生命”或“生活”，如果涉及的人是復數(shù)的，l

8、ife 盡管是抽象名詞，但仍常用復數(shù) lives。但是這里的 life仍然是用單數(shù)，是因為 life 指的是具體的生活方式嗎？heiral andprofesal life.老師！A：theiral andprofesal lives 以及 theiral andprofesallife 存在一點區(qū)別，theiral and profesal life 是將他們所有的生活當成一個整體來理解，所以 life 用單數(shù)形式，theiral andprofesallives 則是指他們各自不同的生活，所以 life 用復數(shù)形式。這里由于前面主語是rson，所以建議用 theiral andprofes

9、al life2.越來越多的年輕人過分沉溺于電腦。這導致年輕人養(yǎng)成了一種久坐不動的生活方式，每天坐在電腦前好幾個小時。There has been an increasing number of young people who havee fixated on（1.過分沉溺于）computer games. This has led to a sedentary lifestyle （2.久坐不動的生活方式）where youngsters sit in front of a computer for many hours daily.1- fixated on詞典釋義：fixated能被表

10、示程度的副詞或介詞詞組修飾的形容詞 過分沉溺的;1.ADJ-GRADED過分迷戀的Ifyou accuse someone of beingfixated on aparticularthing, you meant they think about it to an extreme and exBut by then the administration wasnt paying attention,for topoffi為ls werefixatedon Kuwait.但在那之前，并沒有特別注意，因Fixatedis also a combining form.(亦可用于構詞).a pop

11、-fixatedmusic journalist.癡迷于流行樂的音樂外刊例句：It beat rivals who were still fixated on the former colonial routesto andfrom Europe, and captured Asian traffic. （）它擊敗了其他競爭對手，因為它們尚執(zhí)著于那些從前殖家往返歐洲的路線，而它連亞洲各交通路線都已收入懷中。替換表達：be addicted to something學生錯誤表達：too muchaddicted to點評：too much 用于修飾名詞，不可以用來修飾 addicted，這里可以

12、直接改為 be addicted to something/ be fixated on something2- a sedentary lifestyle詞典釋義：sedentaryUKsed.n.triUS-ter.iadjectiveinvolving little exercise or physical activity 缺乏運動的，少活動的asedentaryjob/occupation 久坐的工作職業(yè)My doctor says I should start playing sport because mylifestyleistoosedentary.醫(yī)生說，我應該做些運動，因

13、為生活方式太缺乏運動。外刊例句：east an hour of physical activity a daymay be required to offsetthe harmful effects of sitting at a desk for eighthours, according tothe latest study to highlight the perils of a sedentarylifestyle. （）據強調久坐不動生活方式害處的研究表明，一天起碼要有一小時鍛煉才能緩解坐在桌前八個小時所帶來的危害。替換表達：a deskbound lifestyleQ：從句為什么用

14、 where，這里是指代的久坐的生活方式吧，也就是什么讓年輕人坐在電腦前好幾個小時，可以用 what 或者t 或者 which 么？A：這里是 where 引導的定語從句，先行詞是 lifestyle，where 是關系副詞，在句子里面作為地點狀語，這里不能用 what/t/which 引導This has led to a sedentary lifestyle whereyoungsters sit in front of acomputer for many hours daily.分析本句的主干是 This has led to a sedentary lifestyle，這是一個主謂

15、賓結構，主語是 This，指代上句所說的年輕人沉溺于電腦這種情況，謂語是 hasled to，賓語是 a sedentary lifestyle，其后是 where 引導的定語從句，修飾lifestyle。3.1- home-cooked meals詞典釋義：homecookedEtymologyedithome +cookedAdjectiveedithomecooked (not comparable)Cooked or prepared in a traditional manner aswould be done at home.1994, Vermont Life (volumes

16、49-50, page 7)Dish out lots ofhomecookedfoods like pot roast, meoaf, Maine beansandfrs, homestyle fries, fishder and fresh-baked breads外刊例句：But home-cookedmeals contained slightly more sugarnshought dishes: 2.5% versus2.2% when the same recipes werecompared.（）用自然原料做家常菜在幾代人以前是很常見的，但現(xiàn)在情況變了。人們現(xiàn)在生活很忙，沒有

17、時間去做飯。因為這個原因，很多人被深加工食品的便捷性所吸引，雖然這種食品可以快速簡單地準備好，但它們很不健康。Home-cooked meals （1.家常菜）made from natural ingredients were the norm （2.很常見，很普遍）generations ago, but this is no longer the case. People now live busy lives and have little time to cook meals. For this reason, many are attracted by the convenienc

18、e of highly prosed food （3.深加工食品） t can be prepared quickly and easily but which is very unhealthy.然而，當用同樣的菜譜作為對比時，家常菜的含糖量稍高于商店售賣的菜肴：2.5%比 2.2%。替換表達：home cooking / homemade dishes2- be the norm詞典釋義：the norma situation ortype of behaviourt is expected and consideredto be typical常態(tài)，正常行為One child per f

19、amily is fasting thenormin some countries.每個家庭一個孩子在部分國家正迅速普遍起來。外刊例句：Today, perhaps because part-time work is the norm, womenheNetherlandshave a relatively high labour-force participationrate. （）也許是因為已成常態(tài)，荷蘭女性現(xiàn)在在勞動力中占有相對較高份額。替換表達：be commonplace3- highly prosed food詞典釋義：highlyha.liadverb超過平均水準very,to

20、a large degree, orat a high level非常，極其ahighlypaidjob 高薪工作ahighlyprofitable line of products 利潤非常高的系列產品For our country to remain competitive, we needahighly-skilled,highly-educated workforce.為了使的國家保持競爭力，需要具備高技能、高學歷的勞動力。prosedUKpr.sestUSdescribes foodpr:-adjectivewhich has been treated with chemicalst

21、preserve itive it extra taste or colour（食品）經過特殊加工的；處理過的prosedcheese/meat 加工過的起司肉highlypro經過高度加工的便利食品外刊例句：ABOVE AVERAGEESSENTIALThe ubiquitous phrase artifilstrawberry flavour gives little hofthe chemical wizardry andmanufacturing skillt can makea highlyprosed food tasike astrawberry. （）（）能從廣為人知的“人造草

22、莓味”一詞中稍微領略到神奇的化學工藝和制作技術，它們可以讓深度加工食品吃起來像真草莓一樣。學生錯誤表達：Deep prosedfood點評：“深加工食品”一般說 highlyprosed food，而不說 deepprosed foodQ：魏老師，主語是復數(shù)，賓語可以用單數(shù)，是不是改為 busylives 比較好，People have a busy life？A：這里說 People have a busy life./ People have busy lives. 都可以，因為 a busy life 以及 busy lives 都是泛指“忙碌的生活”。Q：魏老師 but 和 thoug

23、h 連用是否合適？，。 But though they canbeprepared easily and quickly, they are not healthy.A：but 和 though 不要連用，這里可以改為 Though they can be preparedeasily and quickly, they are nothealthy.Home-cooked meals made from naturalingredients were the normgenerations ago, but this is no longer the case.分析本句是一個由 but 連接

24、的并列句。前一分句的主干是 Home-cookedmeals madewere the norm，這是一個主系表結構，其主語部分是Home-cookedmeals made from natural ingredients，中心詞是 meals，其前后分別有 Home-cooked 和 made from natural ingredients 對其修飾限定，該分句最后的 generations ago 是時間狀語。后一分句的主干是 this isnolonger the case，其中 this 指代前一分句提到的情況。4.需要采取一些措施來應對兒童肥胖問題。確保學生餐營養(yǎng)豐富是一個保證兒童

25、每天至少能吃上一頓好飯的有效。食品也能起到作用，它可以減少某些食品的品牌。Measures should be taken to tackle childhood obesity（1.兒童肥胖問題）. Making sure school meals （2.學生餐）are nutritious is an effective way of ensuring children haveeast one good meal per day. Banning junk-food advertising （3.食品）would make an impact by reducing the appeal

26、t certain junk-food brands have.1- childhood obesitychildhood 是名詞作定語修飾 obesity。詞典釋義：childhoodtald.hdnouncountable oruncountablethe time whensomeone is a child童年；孩童時期，孩提時代She had an unhappychildhood.童年很不幸。Childhoodis not always a happy time.童年并不總是的時光。obesityn.（名詞）The condition of being obese; increas

27、ed bodyweight caused byexsive accumulation ot.肥胖：肥胖；由于積累過多脂肪而使體重增加外刊例句：Three years after Mice Obama launched herLets Move!n, the fight against childhoodobesity faticalproblem. （）距發(fā)起其 Lets Move！運動已過去三年了，這場抗擊兒童肥胖IMPROVER的運動著策略性問題。2- school meals詞典釋義：schoolsku:lnounEDUCATION教育countableoruncountableESSENTIALaplace where children go to be educated（中、小）學校Whichschooldo yougo to/attend?你念哪所學校？schoolmeals/uniform 學校餐校服schoolbuildings/fees 校舍學費外刊例句：Jeremy Corbyns announcement of a 1bn plan toroduce a VATtax on priva