高中英語基礎寫作公開課-學會用復合句和非謂語動詞課件

1、Welcome To Our Classwelcome to our English class基礎寫作訓練-學會運用復合句和非謂語動詞2008 廣東高考試題基礎寫作 你很榮幸地成為2008北京奧運會的一名志愿者，負責編寫奧運比賽項目的英語介紹。背景：射擊最初只是生存工具，19世紀末才發(fā)展成為一項體育運動。1896：第一次成為奧運項目1904：中斷 1928：中斷1932：重回奧運會1968：第一次允許婦女參加奧運射擊比賽現(xiàn)狀：穩(wěn)步發(fā)展，1896奧運會只有三項射擊項目，現(xiàn)今有17項。 Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed

2、into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. With the spor

3、t becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.廣東08高考基礎寫作范文：句子表達有何亮點？寫作中非謂語動詞常見的錯誤:1. Most of them think take a nap at noon is beneficial.2. Most of people have the habit of take a nap after lunch.3. While having our dinner,

4、the doorbell rang4.Todowellincollege,goodgradesisessential.5. There are 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols. 6. Having been told many times, but he still couldnt understand it.寫作中非謂語動詞常見的錯誤1.動詞短語作主語/賓語Most of them think take a nap at noon is beneficial.Most of them hold the opin

5、ion/firmly believe that taking a nap at noon is of great benefit.Most of people have the habit of take a nap after lunch. Most of people have the habit of taking a nap after lunch. 2. 邏輯主語不一致1 While having our dinner, the doorbell rang.While having our dinner, we heard the doorbell ringing. Todowell

6、incollege,goodgradesisessential.Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades. 3. 出現(xiàn)兩個謂語。這種情況在“there be”句型中尤為明顯。如：There are 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols. 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols.或There are 50% of the girls choosing film and TV stars as their i

7、dols.4. 狀語和狀語從句混淆【誤】Having been told many times, but he still couldnt understand it.【正】 Although he had been told many times, he still couldnt understand it.【正】He had been told many times, but he still couldnt understand it. 【正】Having been told many times, he still couldnt understand it.使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔

8、高檔Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非謂語動詞)聽到這個消息,他們變的很激動. _the news, they got excited.2. 盡管被告知許多遍,他仍然重復這個錯. _many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀請發(fā)言,你應該在會議上保持沉默. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.Hearing Having been toldinvitedTranslate the following sente

9、nces by using non-predicate (非謂語動詞)1,面對困難時，他從不放棄。2，引入市場后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。3，做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up.Introduced to the market, the product made a great success. Having finished his homework, he returned home.Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings

10、 and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.4.上網(wǎng)聊天可跟同齡人交流,利于外語學習.5. 濰坊位于山東半島中部,總面積1.59萬平方公里, 人口863萬。5. Located in the middle of Shandong Peninsula, Weifang covers an area of 15.9 thousand square kilometers with a population of 8.63 million.寫作中復合句常見的錯誤1.只有從句，沒有主句 1. The keepe

11、r who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm.2. In some parts of the forest where you can find large groups of monkeys, which are jumping up and down.3.Because they are students, most of whom take a nap in the dormitory.3.Because they are students, most of t

12、hem take a nap in the dormitory for the reason of convenience.2. 主句和從句用句號分開Some students support the military training. Because it can make them learn how to fight for difficulties.3.以逗號代替句號,把兩個簡單句當成一個句子 The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face. The hall is different from all ot

13、her buildings , it is made of glass.4.刻意使用從句，表達不自然 There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.你來試試定語從句的運用1.導游對游地講解清晰、生動，增長了我們的見聞。The local tour guide

14、explained everything about the places which we visited in a clear and lively way, which helped us broaden our horizons.2.濰坊氣候宜人，春季風多雨少。2.The climate of Weifang is pleasant and enjoyable, especially in spring when it is windy and has little rain. 訓練重點：名詞性從句的運用1. Tom今天上午沒來上課的消息很快就傳開了；2. 最使我們感到驚訝的是他說他沒

15、來的原因是他沒做完家庭作業(yè)；The news that Tom didnt attend class this morning spread soon.What surprised us most was that the reason that he gave for his absence from school was that he didnt finish his homework.學會運用復合句和非謂語動詞 Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find

16、 it hard to understand her dialect. Kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.用一句話表達學會運用復合句和非謂語動詞 用一句話表達a. It was 18 June, 2006.b. Stephen Hawking was a top world-class scientist from English.c. He gave a speech in the lecture auditorium of the p

17、eoples Great Hall.d. The lecture was titled “the origin of the universe”.On 18 June, 2006, Stephen Hawking, a top world-class scientist from England, gave a speech titled the origin of the Universe in the lecture auditorium of the Peoples Great Hall.不是人人都能學好英語，小學生同時學漢語和英語反而會影響漢語學習。學會運用復合句和非謂語動詞第一步：拆

18、分成幾個簡單句不是人人都能學好英語。小學生同時學漢語和英語。這會影響漢語學習。第二步：分別翻譯這幾個簡單句 Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study. Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school start to learn English

19、 and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子 That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English. Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from

20、 primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子 If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study方法2： because not everyone is good at learning English.學會使用復合句和非謂

21、語動詞你來試試現(xiàn)象學生作文中出現(xiàn)很多錯別字原因1.上網(wǎng)聊天時經(jīng)常使用網(wǎng)絡語言。2.每天有很多作業(yè)做，沒有記住生字。參考詞匯：錯別字: wrongly-written characters網(wǎng)絡語言：web language要求：1. 用兩句話表達表格內(nèi)容 2. 兩句話要有連貫性第一句（兩個信息點）： 1. 學生作文中出現(xiàn)很多錯別字 2.（他們）上網(wǎng)聊天時經(jīng)常使用網(wǎng)絡語言。 There are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions. The reason why there are many wrongly-written

22、 characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.合并句子： They often use web languages when chatting on line. 1. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters第二句:1. 每天有很多作業(yè)做 2. 沒有記住生字。 They have much homework to do

23、 every day.2. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.3. Because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.合并句子： They fail to memorize the new characters. 連接兩句話： The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students compos

24、ition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line. Moreover, they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters. 你是校報小記者，最近進行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況： 時間：上周末 對象：眼科醫(yī)生(eye-doctor)王教授 主題：我國中小學生近視(short-sighredness)問題 基本信息：(1)發(fā)生率：略高于50 (2)人數(shù)：世界第一 專家解讀：(1)原因：很

25、復雜 (2)治療：沒有哪一種藥物能治愈近視 (3)建議：不要過度用眼；多參加戶外活動 (4)特別提示：如何握筆也和近視有關實戰(zhàn)演練：2009廣東高考試題基礎寫作 Exchange and discuss your partners composition, then give each other a score according to the following criteria. Criteria（標準） Mark Content（內(nèi)容） （是否用5句話表達了全文要點） 0 5 分 Language（語言） （句子結構及用詞是否得當） 0 8 分 Coherence（連貫）（是否用了恰當

26、的詞語來銜接句子） 0 2 分Pair workHomework Rewrite the composition and hand it in.The growing rate of short-sightedness among students inspired me to take an interview with an eye-doctor Dr.Wang about short-sightedness among primary and middle school students. From the interview I have learned that the shorte

27、d-sightedness rate is a little higher than 50%, ranking the first place in the world. Experts explained the causes of shorted-sightedness were very complicated and no medicine could cure short-sightedness. It is advised that students should not use their eyes excessively and it could be of great help to take part in outdoo