高中英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)寫作公開課-學(xué)會(huì)用復(fù)合句和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞課件

1、Welcome To Our Classwelcome to our English class基礎(chǔ)寫作訓(xùn)練-學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用復(fù)合句和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞2008 廣東高考試題基礎(chǔ)寫作 你很榮幸地成為2008北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)的一名志愿者，負(fù)責(zé)編寫奧運(yùn)比賽項(xiàng)目的英語(yǔ)介紹。背景：射擊最初只是生存工具，19世紀(jì)末才發(fā)展成為一項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。1896：第一次成為奧運(yùn)項(xiàng)目1904：中斷 1928：中斷1932：重回奧運(yùn)會(huì)1968：第一次允許婦女參加奧運(yùn)射擊比賽現(xiàn)狀：穩(wěn)步發(fā)展，1896奧運(yùn)會(huì)只有三項(xiàng)射擊項(xiàng)目，現(xiàn)今有17項(xiàng)。 Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed

2、into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. With the spor

3、t becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.廣東08高考基礎(chǔ)寫作范文：句子表達(dá)有何亮點(diǎn)？寫作中非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞常見的錯(cuò)誤:1. Most of them think take a nap at noon is beneficial.2. Most of people have the habit of take a nap after lunch.3. While having our dinner,

4、the doorbell rang4.Todowellincollege,goodgradesisessential.5. There are 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols. 6. Having been told many times, but he still couldnt understand it.寫作中非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞常見的錯(cuò)誤1.動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)/賓語(yǔ)Most of them think take a nap at noon is beneficial.Most of them hold the opin

5、ion/firmly believe that taking a nap at noon is of great benefit.Most of people have the habit of take a nap after lunch. Most of people have the habit of taking a nap after lunch. 2. 邏輯主語(yǔ)不一致1 While having our dinner, the doorbell rang.While having our dinner, we heard the doorbell ringing. Todowell

6、incollege,goodgradesisessential.Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades. 3. 出現(xiàn)兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)。這種情況在“there be”句型中尤為明顯。如：There are 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols. 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols.或There are 50% of the girls choosing film and TV stars as their i

7、dols.4. 狀語(yǔ)和狀語(yǔ)從句混淆【誤】Having been told many times, but he still couldnt understand it.【正】 Although he had been told many times, he still couldnt understand it.【正】He had been told many times, but he still couldnt understand it. 【正】Having been told many times, he still couldnt understand it.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔

8、高檔Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)聽到這個(gè)消息,他們變的很激動(dòng). _the news, they got excited.2. 盡管被告知許多遍,他仍然重復(fù)這個(gè)錯(cuò). _many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀請(qǐng)發(fā)言,你應(yīng)該在會(huì)議上保持沉默. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.Hearing Having been toldinvitedTranslate the following sente

9、nces by using non-predicate (非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)1,面對(duì)困難時(shí)，他從不放棄。2，引入市場(chǎng)后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。3，做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up.Introduced to the market, the product made a great success. Having finished his homework, he returned home.Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings

10、 and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.4.上網(wǎng)聊天可跟同齡人交流,利于外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí).5. 濰坊位于山東半島中部,總面積1.59萬(wàn)平方公里, 人口863萬(wàn)。5. Located in the middle of Shandong Peninsula, Weifang covers an area of 15.9 thousand square kilometers with a population of 8.63 million.寫作中復(fù)合句常見的錯(cuò)誤1.只有從句，沒(méi)有主句 1. The keepe

11、r who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm.2. In some parts of the forest where you can find large groups of monkeys, which are jumping up and down.3.Because they are students, most of whom take a nap in the dormitory.3.Because they are students, most of t

12、hem take a nap in the dormitory for the reason of convenience.2. 主句和從句用句號(hào)分開Some students support the military training. Because it can make them learn how to fight for difficulties.3.以逗號(hào)代替句號(hào),把兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句當(dāng)成一個(gè)句子 The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face. The hall is different from all ot

13、her buildings , it is made of glass.4.刻意使用從句，表達(dá)不自然 There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.你來(lái)試試定語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用1.導(dǎo)游對(duì)游地講解清晰、生動(dòng)，增長(zhǎng)了我們的見聞。The local tour guide

14、explained everything about the places which we visited in a clear and lively way, which helped us broaden our horizons.2.濰坊氣候宜人，春季風(fēng)多雨少。2.The climate of Weifang is pleasant and enjoyable, especially in spring when it is windy and has little rain. 訓(xùn)練重點(diǎn)：名詞性從句的運(yùn)用1. Tom今天上午沒(méi)來(lái)上課的消息很快就傳開了；2. 最使我們感到驚訝的是他說(shuō)他沒(méi)

15、來(lái)的原因是他沒(méi)做完家庭作業(yè)；The news that Tom didnt attend class this morning spread soon.What surprised us most was that the reason that he gave for his absence from school was that he didnt finish his homework.學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用復(fù)合句和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞 Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find

16、 it hard to understand her dialect. Kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.用一句話表達(dá)學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用復(fù)合句和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞 用一句話表達(dá)a. It was 18 June, 2006.b. Stephen Hawking was a top world-class scientist from English.c. He gave a speech in the lecture auditorium of the p

17、eoples Great Hall.d. The lecture was titled “the origin of the universe”.On 18 June, 2006, Stephen Hawking, a top world-class scientist from England, gave a speech titled the origin of the Universe in the lecture auditorium of the Peoples Great Hall.不是人人都能學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，小學(xué)生同時(shí)學(xué)漢語(yǔ)和英語(yǔ)反而會(huì)影響漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)。學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用復(fù)合句和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞第一步：拆

18、分成幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句不是人人都能學(xué)好英語(yǔ)。小學(xué)生同時(shí)學(xué)漢語(yǔ)和英語(yǔ)。這會(huì)影響漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)。第二步：分別翻譯這幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句 Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study. Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school start to learn English

19、 and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子 That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English. Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from

20、 primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子 If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study方法2： because not everyone is good at learning English.學(xué)會(huì)使用復(fù)合句和非謂

21、語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞你來(lái)試試現(xiàn)象學(xué)生作文中出現(xiàn)很多錯(cuò)別字原因1.上網(wǎng)聊天時(shí)經(jīng)常使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言。2.每天有很多作業(yè)做，沒(méi)有記住生字。參考詞匯：錯(cuò)別字: wrongly-written characters網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言：web language要求：1. 用兩句話表達(dá)表格內(nèi)容 2. 兩句話要有連貫性第一句（兩個(gè)信息點(diǎn)）： 1. 學(xué)生作文中出現(xiàn)很多錯(cuò)別字 2.（他們）上網(wǎng)聊天時(shí)經(jīng)常使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言。 There are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions. The reason why there are many wrongly-written

22、 characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.合并句子： They often use web languages when chatting on line. 1. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters第二句:1. 每天有很多作業(yè)做 2. 沒(méi)有記住生字。 They have much homework to do

23、 every day.2. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.3. Because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.合并句子： They fail to memorize the new characters. 連接兩句話： The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students compos

24、ition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line. Moreover, they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters. 你是校報(bào)小記者，最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況： 時(shí)間：上周末 對(duì)象：眼科醫(yī)生(eye-doctor)王教授 主題：我國(guó)中小學(xué)生近視(short-sighredness)問(wèn)題 基本信息：(1)發(fā)生率：略高于50 (2)人數(shù)：世界第一 專家解讀：(1)原因：很

25、復(fù)雜 (2)治療：沒(méi)有哪一種藥物能治愈近視 (3)建議：不要過(guò)度用眼；多參加戶外活動(dòng) (4)特別提示：如何握筆也和近視有關(guān)實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：2009廣東高考試題基礎(chǔ)寫作 Exchange and discuss your partners composition, then give each other a score according to the following criteria. Criteria（標(biāo)準(zhǔn)） Mark Content（內(nèi)容） （是否用5句話表達(dá)了全文要點(diǎn)） 0 5 分 Language（語(yǔ)言） （句子結(jié)構(gòu)及用詞是否得當(dāng)） 0 8 分 Coherence（連貫）（是否用了恰當(dāng)

26、的詞語(yǔ)來(lái)銜接句子） 0 2 分Pair workHomework Rewrite the composition and hand it in.The growing rate of short-sightedness among students inspired me to take an interview with an eye-doctor Dr.Wang about short-sightedness among primary and middle school students. From the interview I have learned that the shorte

27、d-sightedness rate is a little higher than 50%, ranking the first place in the world. Experts explained the causes of shorted-sightedness were very complicated and no medicine could cure short-sightedness. It is advised that students should not use their eyes excessively and it could be of great help to take part in outdoo