Unit7TheBadAttitude-完整精講版課件

1、The Bad Attitude虹橋中學(xué) 王萌EEC 九年級(jí)下 Unit 7What is needed if you want to be successful? knowledge hard work many friends cooperationattitude confidenceThe Bad AttitudeWhat lesson can we learn from the story?Bosses are always unfair. Building houses is difficult.A good attitude is important.Listen to the

2、tape and read the passage . Read the passage again and fill in the blanks.The person 1 worked hard his whole life building houses.The carpenterThe place 2 the carpenter worked .In a company.The time 3 he built the houseBefore retiring 4 the boss wanted the carpenter to build.A special house.The reas

3、on 5 the carpenter developed a bad attitudeHe was jealous. 6 the carpenter built the house.He became lazy.He built it carelessly.He bought cheap materials.What the boss gave the carpenter as a reward.The house he built.whowherewhenWhatwhyHowWhat is the style(文體) of the passage?A narration (記敘文）Six f

4、actors of a narration:（記敘文六要素）Who（何人）What（何事）Where （何地）When（何時(shí)）Why （為什么）How（怎樣）Read the passage and find the meaning of every paragraph. Paragraph 1: The carpenter had to _ because of his old age. retirethe course of the story （ 故事起因）Paragraph 2: The boss wanted the carpenter to build a _ house .spe

5、cialThe development of the story (故事發(fā)展)Paragraph 3: The carpenter _ a bad attitude and did a poor job in building the house. developedThe development of the story (故事發(fā)展)Paragraph 4: The house he built was_.poorThe development of the story (故事發(fā)展)Paragraph 5: The boss gave the house to the carpenter a

6、s a _.rewardThe result of the story (故事結(jié)局)Paragraph 6: Having a good _is important in our life. attitude the feelings of the writer (作者感想)Para1: the course of the story（ 故事起因）Para 2: The development of the story (故事發(fā)展)Para 3: The development of the story (故事發(fā)展)Para 4: The development of the story (故

7、事發(fā)展)Para 5: The result of the story (故事結(jié)局)Para 6: the feelings of the writer (作者感想)How many parts are there in the passage?One PartTwo PartsThree partsParagraph 1Paragraph 2Paragraph 3Paragraph 4Paragraph 5Paragraph 6The First Part: Narrate the whole event.（敘述事件）The Second Part :Show feelings.( 發(fā)表感想

8、)Discussion: Can we write a narration(記敘文) like this in our exams?How many parts should a narration have?Three.Paragraph 1Straight to the point（開篇點(diǎn)題）Paragraph 2Narrating events（敘述事件）Paragraph 3Sublimation（ 升華主題）The structure of a narration(記敘文)Writing skillHow to make this passage perfect?Add the fi

9、rst part for the passageParagraph 1Straight to the point（開篇點(diǎn)題）Paragraph1: A good attitude is very important in every walk of life. As the saying goes: “Everything depends on a good attitude.” A bad attitude will make you lose some good chances. Here is a story about a carpenter who had a bad attitud

10、e. Paragraph1: Here is a story about a carpenter who had a bad attitude. A good attitude is very important in every walk of life. As the saying goes: “Everything depends on a good attitude.”用諺語引出本文話題自然過渡，引出下文 A bad attitude will make you lose some good chances.進(jìn)行點(diǎn)題Paragraph 2: Organize the passage w

11、ith the following sentences.Rewrite the story:But he had to retire because of his old age.B. He would live in the poor house for his rest of lifeC. At first, he worked hard as usual, but soon he developed a bad attitude.D. The house he built was very poor.Put the sentences in the right places. Once

12、there was a carpenter who was good at building houses. 1 One day, his boss asked him to build the last house for him, he agreed. 2 He was jealous . So he did a bad job . 3 But to his surprise, the boss gave the house to him as a reward. How regretful he was! 4 . ACDB Once there was a carpenter who w

13、as good at building houses. But he had to retire because of his old age. One day, his boss asked him to build the last house for him, he agreed. At first, he worked hard as usual, but soon he developed a bad attitude. He was jealous . So he did a bad job . The house he built was very poor. But to hi

14、s surprise, the boss gave the house to him as a reward. How regretful he was! He would live in the poor house for his rest of his life.Paragraph 2: From the story we can see how important a good attitude is. If only the carpenter had kept a good attitude and tried his best! So friends, remember: a g

15、ood attitude is always needed no matter what we do.Paragraph 3:表達(dá)感想，升華主題。眾所周知， 一個(gè)人若想成功， 良好的心態(tài)尤為重要，沒有一個(gè)好的心態(tài)，往往會(huì)事與愿違，自食苦果。請(qǐng)你以此為話題，為我們講述一件事情，來告訴我們這一道理吧！要求： 1請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的信息材料和話題(不要逐句翻譯)，寫出結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、條理清晰、語言豐富優(yōu)美、語法準(zhǔn)確、可讀性強(qiáng)的短文。 2至少80詞。 3不得使用真實(shí)姓名、地名和學(xué)校名。 4題目自擬。 書面表達(dá)設(shè)題The Bad Attitude A good attitude is very important

16、in every walk of life. As the saying goes: “Everything depends on a good attitude.” A bad attitude will make you lose some good chances. Here is a story about a carpenter who had a bad attitude. Once there was a carpenter who was good at building houses. But he had to retire because of his old age.

17、One day, his boss asked him to build the last house for him, he agreed. At first, he worked hard as usual, but soon he developed a bad attitude. He was jealous . So he did a bad job . The house he built was very poor. But to his surprise, the boss gave the house to him as a reward. How regretful he

18、was! He would live in the poor house for his rest of life. From the story we can see how important a good attitude is. If only the carpenter had kept a good attitude and tried his best? So friends, remember: a good attitude is always needed no matter what we do.Your acquisition (你的收獲) ！Sum up what you have le