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1、第二組：記敘文第二組：記敘文(一)Dear Lucy, I would like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for Double Ninth Festival. It was the day for the elder people in our culture. (一)Dear Lucy,We will go and make dumplings and cake with the elderly people here. We will also spend s

2、ome fun time together play games, which we hope will make they happy. We should be back around 4:00 on the afternoon.We will go and make dumplings If you are able to come to with us, please let us know so we will wait for you at the school gate at 9:00 in the morning. Looking forward to your early r

3、eply. Yours, Li Hua If you are able to come t(一)Dear Lucy, I would like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for Double Ninth Festival. It was the day for the elder people in our culture. elderly is the(一)Dear Lucy, elderly is theWe will go and make dumplings

4、 and cake with the elderly people here. We will also spend some fun time together play games, which we hope will make they happy. We should be back around 4:00 on the afternoon. in them playing there cakes We will go and make dumplings If you are able to come to with us, please let us know so we wil

5、l wait for you at the school gate at 9:00 in the morning. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua and If you are able to come t(一)本文是李華寫給露西的邀請信，邀請她一同前往敬老院陪老人們過重陽節(jié)。1. 在Double Ninth Festival前加the 專有名詞前須加定冠詞the，特指重陽節(jié)(the Double Ninth Festival)。2. was is 客觀陳述規(guī)律性或習慣性的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時。3. elder elderly

6、修飾名詞people要用形容詞，elderly意為“上了年紀的”，符合文意；而elder意為“年紀較大的”，不符合文意；下文也有相同的表達。(一)本文是李華寫給露西的邀請信，邀請她一同前往敬老院陪老人4. cake cakes 因cake是可數(shù)名詞，要與dumplings并列，故要用復數(shù)。5. here there 根據(jù)上下文語境，此處應該是指“敬老院那兒”，而不是“這兒”。6. play playing 由固定結構spend time (in) doing sth.意為“花費時間做某事”可知。7. they them 作賓語要用賓格。8. on in 表“在下午/上午”用in the aft

7、ernoon/morning；而表“在具體的某天上/下午”用介詞on。9. 去掉come后的to 此處come后并無賓語，故不需要介詞to。10. so and 表順承關系用并列連詞and。4. cake cakes 因cake是可數(shù)名詞，要與daround adj. 大約 reply n. 答復nursing home 敬老院 invite sb. to do sth. 邀請某人做某事around adj. 大約 (二) Ill spend this summer holiday in the countryside. Although the city is modern and conv

8、enience, therere still some problems, such as airs pollution, crowdedness and noise. In the countryside I can enjoy comfortable and quiet life. (二) Ill spend this summer There, the air is fresh but the water is clean. Trees are green and birds is singing. I can go to boating, fishing and swimming in

9、 the lake. Whats worse, I can climb the hills. There, the air is fresh but thAll this will be interesting and good for your health. Above all, I can learn more about nature. So I wanted to go to the countryside for a change. Im looking forward to the come of my summer holiday.All this will be intere

10、sting a(二) Ill spend this summer holiday in the countryside. Although the city is modern and convenience, therere still some problems, such as airs pollution, crowdedness and noise. In the countryside I can enjoy comfortable and quiet life. aair convenient (二) Ill spend this summer There, the air is

11、 fresh but the water is clean. Trees are green and birds is singing. I can go to boating, fishing and swimming in the lake. Whats worse, I can climb the hills. more are and There, the air is fresh but thAll this will be interesting and good for your health. Above all, I can learn more about nature.

12、So I wanted to go to the countryside for a change. Im looking forward to the come of my summer holiday. coming want my All this will be interesting a(二)本文講述作者想去鄉(xiāng)村度假的原因。1. convenience convenient 作表語要用形容詞形式。2. airs air 因air是不可數(shù)名詞。3. 在enjoy后加a 由固定結構enjoy/live/lead alife意為“享受/過著的生活”可知。4. but and 表順承關系用并

13、列連詞and。5. is are 因主語birds是復數(shù)，故謂語也要用復數(shù)形式。6. 去掉go后的to 由固定搭配go boating意為“(去)劃船”可知。(二)本文講述作者想去鄉(xiāng)村度假的原因。7. worse more 根據(jù)上下文語境可知，此處理應表“此外”，故要用what more。(注意：whats worse意為“更糟糕的是”)8. your my 根據(jù)上下文語境可知，應當是對作者的健康有利，應用第一人稱物主代詞my。9. wanted want 因全文主體時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。10. come coming 固定短語look forward to的to為介詞，其后要接名詞或動名詞。7.

14、 worse more 根據(jù)上下文語境可知，此處理應crowdedness n. 擁擠 above all 尤其重要的是learn more about 更多地了解 for a change 換換環(huán)境crowdedness n. 擁擠 (三) What should you do when your parents become angrily? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them about it. Remembering not to shout at them. (三) What should you

15、 do wheThey usually will try to change. But they will take some times to change because they always get angry, and that is all they know. You might have to change for your method a couple of times. They usually will try to changDo any nice things for your parents that they dont expectlike cooking, d

16、oing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors. If this doesnt work, bring in friend that you feel comfortable with, or have him or her help you.Do any nice things for your pa(三) What should you do when your parents become angrily? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them

17、 about it. Remembering not to shout at them. Remember get angry (三) What should you do wheThey usually will try to change. But they will take some times to change because they always get angry, and that is all they know. You might have to change for your method a couple of times. time it They usuall

18、y will try to changDo any nice things for your parents that they dont expectlike cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors. If this doesnt work, bring in friend that you feel comfortable with, or have him or her help you. and acleaning some Do any nice things for your pa(三)本文講述

19、父母生氣的時候，你應該怎么做。1. angrily angry 作表語要用形容詞形式。2. got get 因本文的主體時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。3. Remembering Remember 祈使句要用動詞原形開頭。4. they it 因it在此作形式主語，后面的不定式才是真正的主語。(三)本文講述父母生氣的時候，你應該怎么做。5. times time 因time作“時間”理解時，是不可數(shù)名詞。6. 去掉change后的for 因change是及物動詞，其后可直接接賓語。7. any some 肯定句中用some，意為“一些”。8. clean cleaning 和前面的doing, washi

20、ng并列。9. 在bring in后加a 因friend是可數(shù)名詞，此處意為“一個朋友”，表泛指。10. or and 表順承關系用并列連詞and。5. times time 因time作“時間”理解時，expect vt. 預料 shout at 對大喊a couple of times 好幾次 do the dishes 洗碗bring in 帶來 have a conversation with 和談一談expect vt. 預料 (四)One of my favorite hobbies are backcountry hiking. However, after I go hikin

21、g, I make sure to have all of the proper necessities. First, I wore proper clothing and hiking shoes. (四)One of my favorite hobbies This may include taking water shoes if I have plans for hiking through streams and rivers or a reliable jacket to keep warmly. Next, I get my family and friends to know

22、 I will be going and when I would return. This may include taking water In addition to these item, I take plenty of the food and water. Finally, I always pack emergency supplies include a lighter. You never know when you will be in need for these things.In addition to these item, I t(四)One of my fav

23、orite hobbies are backcountry hiking. However, after I go hiking, I make sure to have all of the proper necessities. First, I wore proper clothing and hiking shoes. wear before is (四)One of my favorite hobbies This may include taking water shoes if I have plans for hiking through streams and rivers

24、or a reliable jacket to keep warmly. Next, I get my family and friends to know I will be going and when I would return. where warm will This may include taking water In addition to these item, I take plenty of the food and water. Finally, I always pack emergency supplies include a lighter. You never

25、 know when you will be in need for these things. of including items In addition to these item, I t(四)本文講述作者徒步旅行前要做的準備。1. are is 因主語是one，故謂語動詞用單數(shù)。2. after before 根據(jù)上下文意思可知是“在我去徒步旅行前”。3. wore wear 全文的主體時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。4. warmly warm 作系動詞keep的表語，用形容詞。5. 在to know后加where 引導賓語從句。句意：讓家人和朋友知道我去哪里。(四)本文講述作者徒步旅行前要做的

26、準備。6. would will 根據(jù)上下文語境和前面的I will be going可知此處是指“我將什么時候回來”，故用一般將來時。7. item items 由前面的these可知要用復數(shù)。8. 去掉plenty of后的the 此處并沒有表特指，無需定冠詞。9. include including 因including是介詞，介詞并無形式變化。10. for of 由固定短語in need of意為“需要”可知。6. would will 根據(jù)上下文語境和前面的I wbackcountry n. 邊遠地區(qū) stream n. 小溪item n. 項目；條款 lighter n. 打火機

27、pack vt. 裝；打包 proper necessities 適當?shù)谋匦杵穒n addition to 除了之外 emergency supplies 應急物資plenty of 許多 go hiking 去遠足；去徒步旅行backcountry n. 邊遠地區(qū) (五) My hometown is Brighton where isnt a very big town. Its in the coast about 50 miles from London and has a population of 300,000. Certainly it isnt as interested a

28、s London. So the air is a lot of cleaner because theres little pollution here. (五) My hometown is Brighton Therere few factories in Brighton, but not many. So, it isnt easy to find a job there. My father used to working in a factory which shuts down a year ago and my father lost his job. Therere few

29、 factories in BrigTherere many hotels and languages schools in the town. In summer the town is full of travelers. My father has decided to open a small gift shop.Therere many hotels and langu(五) My hometown is Brighton where isnt a very big town. Its in the coast about 50 miles from London and has a

30、 population of 300,000. Certainly it isnt as interested as London. So the air is a lot of cleaner because theres little pollution here. But interesting on which/that (五) My hometown is Brighton Therere few factories in Brighton, but not many. So, it isnt easy to find a job there. My father used to w

31、orking in a factory which shuts down a year ago and my father lost his job. shut work here aTherere few factories in BrigTherere many hotels and languages schools in the town. In summer the town is full of travelers. My father has decided to open a small gift shop. language Therere many hotels and l

32、angu(五)本文作者介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)Brighton。1. where which/that 引導定語從句，并在從句中充當主語。2. in on 由固定短語on the coast意為“在海岸線上”可知。3. interested interesting 主語是it，故用interesting。4. So But 根據(jù)上下文邏輯關系可知此處顯然存在轉折關系，故用But。5. 去掉a lot后的of 此處并不是表“很多”，而a lot放在比較級前表“得多”的意思，故去掉of。(五)本文作者介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)Brighton。6. 在few前加a 根據(jù)后面的but not many可知此處應該是指

33、“有一些”，而不是“few(幾乎沒有)”，故在few前加a。7. there here 作者是介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)，要用here才符合邏輯。8. working work 由固定詞組used to do意為“過去曾經”可知。9. shuts shut 由后面的a year ago可知要用過去時。10. languages language 通常名詞作定語不用復數(shù)形式。6. 在few前加a 根據(jù)后面的but not many可coast n. 海岸 used to 過去曾經shut down 倒閉 gift shop 禮品店lose ones job 失業(yè) has a population of 有人

34、口coast n. 海岸 (六)Dear dad and mum, I have been very happy in the school. I work hardly in the school every day. After class, I play with my classmates. I spend a lot time doing my homework. (六)Dear dad and mum,After lunch, I play the ping-pong with my friends. Then, I spend some time read my English

35、note. At six oclock, I have my evening class. After that, I had some spare time. At eight oclock, I go to bed. After lunch, I play the ping-pThis is a day in the school. Mum, you always tell us “Happiness is vital of our life.” And I want to be happy every day. If you are not happy, call me please o

36、r if I am not happy, I will call you either. Yours, LauraThis is a day in the school. M(六)Dear dad and mum, I have been very happy in the school. I work hardly in the school every day. After class, I play with my classmates. I spend a lot time doing my homework. of hard (六)Dear dad and mum,of hard A

37、fter lunch, I play the ping-pong with my friends. Then, I spend some time read my English note. At six oclock, I have my evening class. After that, I had some spare time. At eight oclock, I go to bed. have notes reading After lunch, I play the ping-pThis is a day in the school. Mum, you always tell

38、us “Happiness is vital of our life.” And I want to be happy every day. If you are not happy, call me please or if I am not happy, I will call you either. Yours, Laura too So in me This is a day in the school. M(六) Laura給自己的父母寫信，談到在學校的學習和生活情況。1. hardly hard 根據(jù)語境可知，此處理應是指“努力學習”，hard本身就是副詞，意為“努力地”，而har

39、dly意為“幾乎不”，顯然不符合上下文邏輯。2. 在a lot后加of 由固定短語a lot of意為“很多”可知。3. 去掉ping-pong前的the 在表示“打球”時，在球類名詞前不加任何冠詞。4. read reading 由固定結構spend time (in) doing sth.意為“花費時間做某事”可知。(六) Laura給自己的父母寫信，談到在學校的學習和生活情5. note notes 因note是可數(shù)名詞，此處應用復數(shù)，意為“筆記”。6. had have 因此處講的是“規(guī)律性的動作”，故用一般現(xiàn)在時。7. us me 根據(jù)上下文邏輯可知，此處應該是指“你經常告訴我”，故

40、用me。8. of in 因表“在生活當中”常用介詞in。9. And So 根據(jù)兩句間的邏輯關系可知，此處顯然存在因果關系，故用So。10. either too 在肯定句中用too，表“我也”。5. note notes 因note是可數(shù)名詞，此處應vital adj. 至關重要的 after that 之后spare time 空閑時間 spend time (in) doing sth. 花費時間做某事vital adj. 至關重要的 (七)Tommy has a little dog. Her name is Goldier.She is pretty and interested.

41、 Tommy loved her very much. The other day, Goldier was out walking with Tommy. (七)Tommy has a little dog. HerShe cut her paw on a piece of glasses. When they arrived at home, Tommys mother thought that the cut was deeply. He asked Tommy to take Goldier the vet. She cut her paw on a piece of The vet

42、was very kind, but he gave her a injection. Then he stitched up(縫合) the cut and put on a bandage. Goldier looks so funny as she walks on three legs, holds her paw as if she has been to war!The vet was very kind, but he (七)Tommy has a little dog. Her name is Goldier.She is pretty and interested. Tomm

43、y loved her very much. The other day, Goldier was out walking with Tommy. loves interesting (七)Tommy has a little dog. HerShe cut her paw on a piece of glasses. When they arrived at home, Tommys mother thought that the cut was deeply. He asked Tommy to take Goldier the vet. to She deep glass She cut

44、 her paw on a piece of The vet was very kind, but he gave her a injection. Then he stitched up(縫合) the cut and put on a bandage. Goldier looks so funny as she walks on three legs, holds her paw as if she has been to war!holding an and The vet was very kind, but he (七)本文介紹了Tommy的一只可愛的小狗(Goldier)。1. i

45、nterested interesting 形容小狗(是物)有趣，用interesting。2. loved loves 主語是Tommy，謂語要用第三人稱單數(shù)。3. glasses glass 因glass作“玻璃”理解時是不可數(shù)名詞。4. 去掉arrived后的at 此處home是副詞，arrived后面不加at。5. deeply deep 作表語要用形容詞。(七)本文介紹了Tommy的一只可愛的小狗(Goldier)6. He She 此處指Tommys mother，故要用she。7. 在the vet前加to 由固定搭配taketo意為“把帶去”可知。8. but and 表順承關

46、系用并列連詞and。9. a an 句中injection以元音音素開頭，前面的不定冠詞要用an。10. holds holding 分析句子成分可知，此處hold是非謂語，與邏輯主語Goldier存在主動關系，故要用現(xiàn)在分詞，作伴隨狀語。6. He She 此處指Tommys mother，paw n. 爪子 cut n. 傷口vet n. 獸醫(yī) injection n. 注射；打針put on a bandage 綁上繃帶 has been to war 參加過戰(zhàn)爭paw n. 爪子 (八)Long ago people used bells more than they did toda

47、y. The postmen was used to ring a hand bell when they delivered letters. Fire engines had bells instead sirens(警笛). (八)Long ago people used bells People which sold things came past houses, rang a bell and shouting what was for sale. In many country, bells were hung around thenecks of animals. The bells helped owners find lost cows or sheep. People which sold things came Today, at India, animals still wear bells. Now bells are used less because various modern sound-makers have taken it