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1、13號(hào)復(fù)盤：Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job, but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.Youth unemploymenthas become a serious problem, and it is important for young people to make the r

2、ight decision on thecareer path. I would argue that they should have freedom to choose the job they like, although they should also pay attention to the potential benefits of this job, such as pay andworking conditions.If they choose jobs freely,they are likely tohave a fulfilling career.They may ch

3、oose to do some jobs contributing to society or jobs that they specialise in.They willdevote time and energiesto their favourite jobs.This means that they work hard,undergo traininginfree time andshow determinationwhenfacing challenges.All these actions can lead tocareer success, which enables them

4、togain high payas well as asense of achievement.On the other hand, it is argued that young job-seekers should keep somepractical considerationsin mind.It is not easy tosecure a job andcover living expenseswith abasic salarytoday.For this reason, young people should consider a wide range of factors,

5、including income and opportunities for promotions, when theypursue a career.For example,students frombusiness schoolscan choose to work for banks and other highly profitable organisations, instead of NGOs.They are able to improve living standards with thiscareer choice.From my personal perspective,

6、young adults can choose whatever jobs they like.They maytake up different jobsand have avaried career.With such experience, they can become well-rounded individuals and have a better understanding of what jobs they can fit into and how toachieve their potential.They can thus choose a job thatsuits t

7、heir skills andpersonality.in conclusion, I believe that young people should be encouraged to choose their favourite jobs, which can contribute to theircareer achievement.復(fù)盤的要求：1所謂的復(fù)盤，就是不看課堂的范文，自己按照ABC寫一次?？梢允褂迷~伙，也可以不使用，自己寫出來2確定至少兩種拓展方法（按照我上課的方式）3規(guī)定時(shí)間（大概8分鐘一段）寫完后，對(duì)照范文，關(guān)注：1范文在哪里出現(xiàn)了關(guān)鍵詞或者關(guān)鍵詞的替換詞去扣題？2范文使

8、用了什么拓展的方式？在哪里拓展？3范文使用了什么代詞增加句子聯(lián)系？4范文使用了什么詞伙去避免中國(guó)式表達(dá)？和你的表達(dá)有什么不同？5范文的句子結(jié)構(gòu)是如何變化的？使用了什么連接詞？什么從句？14號(hào)寫全文：Children spend long time studying in school and after school. What are the positive or negative effects on children and society they live in?簡(jiǎn)單20141110精品20150312精品選擇不準(zhǔn)確或者不恰當(dāng)?shù)挠^點(diǎn)A孩子花大量時(shí)間在課上和課下學(xué)習(xí)，學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)提高，進(jìn)

9、入理想大學(xué)B孩子長(zhǎng)時(shí)間在校內(nèi)校外學(xué)習(xí)，沒時(shí)間運(yùn)動(dòng)和參加課外活動(dòng)，對(duì)身體健康產(chǎn)生威脅C孩子長(zhǎng)時(shí)間在校內(nèi)校外學(xué)習(xí)，孩子發(fā)展不全面，情商低，將來很難與人相處并融入社會(huì)D長(zhǎng)時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)占用了學(xué)生大部分時(shí)間課外活動(dòng)匱乏，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)產(chǎn)生厭惡，感到疲憊把學(xué)習(xí)看負(fù)擔(dān)E學(xué)生長(zhǎng)時(shí)間在校學(xué)習(xí)和課外學(xué)習(xí)，更容易培養(yǎng)出專業(yè)精英，為社會(huì)各行各業(yè)的發(fā)展輸送人才答案：選ABCD。這些觀點(diǎn)都可以，但是最后最好要討論一下對(duì)“society they live in”的影響，確?？垲}。學(xué)生作業(yè)自我評(píng)分的要點(diǎn)語法 出現(xiàn)謂語動(dòng)詞的錯(cuò)誤、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)和冠詞的錯(cuò)誤，5.5分 句子成分（譬如說主謂賓等）不懂，句子缺成分，5.5分 單詞詞性不懂（譬如說

10、形容詞和副詞混淆、連詞和介詞混淆）等，5.5分 多動(dòng)詞沒有連詞或者從句，5.5分如果上面的語法問題都沒有，恭喜你，你已經(jīng)是6分的同學(xué)了，如果你處理好下面兩個(gè)扣題的細(xì)節(jié)扣題 中心句沒有題目關(guān)鍵詞或者關(guān)鍵詞的替換表達(dá) 主體段如果出現(xiàn)兩句話表達(dá)的意思類似，就是重復(fù) 論述過程中有沒有多注意解釋原因、解釋名詞和給例子，多闡述結(jié)果14號(hào)練習(xí)小作文：圖的類型：靜態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)思路提示：主體段落1：1 polystyrene cups用的steam最多，然后對(duì)比paper cups的steam；2 paper cups的主要原料是wood，而polystyrene cups不用木材；3兩個(gè)杯子都用很多的p

11、etroleum主體段落2：對(duì)比剩下的三種材料，polystyrene cups除了chemicals多之外，其他材料都少15號(hào)練習(xí)寫著三篇的ABC：Some people believe that the range of technology available to individuals today is increasing the gap between the poor people and the rich people, while some others say this has an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give

12、 your opinion.Developments of technology are causing environmental problems. Some people think the solution is that everyone acceptsa simpler life, while others believe that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.Some people think music plays an important role

13、in society. Others think it is only a form of individual entertainment. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion.此外我發(fā)現(xiàn)很多同學(xué)基本句子寫不好，請(qǐng)大家閱讀下面這個(gè)文章關(guān)于13大基本句型的幾個(gè)常見問題的總結(jié)1 enable/allow somebody to do something,后面一般都是接比較正面的東西。錯(cuò)誤的例子：smoking enables people to suffer from lung disease.（生病不是什么

14、好事）改正：smoking is responsible for lung disease.2 make it possible/ easy for somebody to do something,后面一般都是接比較正面的東西錯(cuò)誤的例子：advertisements make it possible for people to squander money. (浪費(fèi)錢不是什么好事)3 provide somebody with opportunities to do something,后面一般都是接比較正面的東西錯(cuò)誤的例子：the lack of education provides yo

15、ung people with opportunities to drop out of school. (退學(xué)是不好的事情)4 it is easy for somebody to do something是指做一個(gè)事情很“簡(jiǎn)單”，不是指“有可能”做一個(gè)事情。錯(cuò)誤的例子：it is easy for young people to watch TV long hours. (長(zhǎng)時(shí)間看電視不是什么簡(jiǎn)單的事情)改正：many young people are likely to watch TV long hours.5 pose a threat to, give importance to,

16、 cause damage to, have a beneficial effect on, play a vital role in這些短語的最后一個(gè)詞都是介詞，一般加名詞比較多，很少加動(dòng)名詞，加動(dòng)詞肯定錯(cuò)。錯(cuò)誤的例子：Education has a beneficial effect on finding good jobs.改正：education has a beneficial effect on ones job prospect.6很多同學(xué)都喜歡用make, let，其實(shí)都不是很恰當(dāng)，MAKE很多時(shí)候用強(qiáng)迫的意思，LET是允許的意思，可以使用enable, allow替換。7人沒

17、有難易之分, people are easy或者people are difficult to 都是錯(cuò)的錯(cuò)誤的例子：people without computer literacy are hard to seek employment改正：It is difficult for people without computer literacy to find employment錯(cuò)誤的例子：people with computer skills can be easy to find jobs.改正：people with computer skills can find jobs easi

18、ly.8 it makes it possible to do something也是錯(cuò)的9 something is helpful to do something or something is beneficial/important/useful to do something都是錯(cuò)的。因?yàn)橹挥衖t is important to do something或者something is important to something大家喜歡寫something is important to do something是因?yàn)檫@是中文的直譯可以改成something can help some

19、body do something.翻譯：旅游業(yè)有助于提高人們的生活。錯(cuò)誤的表達(dá)：Tourism is helpful to improve peoples living standards.準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)：Tourism can help improve peoples living standards.10 it is important to do something的意思“做什么事情很重要”，而不是表示“前面某事對(duì)這個(gè)事情很重要”如果什么東西對(duì)什么重要，是something is important to something.看看這個(gè)例子：It is important to improv

20、e young peoples job skills. These skills are important to their job prospect.注意翻譯：提高年輕人的工作技能是重要的。這些技能對(duì)他們的工作前景很重要。明白了？前者是一個(gè)建議，后者是一個(gè)因果關(guān)系。11 lead to, result in后面只能加名詞，不能加動(dòng)詞，動(dòng)名詞也很少見。錯(cuò)誤的例子：Poor education can lead to children behave badly (這是個(gè)句子).改正：Poor education can lead to behavioural problems.12 it is helpful to do something并不是“什么東西有