2022-2023學(xué)年新教材高中英語Unit5IntothewildSectionⅣWritingananimalfactfile學(xué)案外研版必修第一冊

1、 Section Writing an animal fact fileStep 文本研讀.框架建構(gòu)：整體理解Skim an animal fact file and youll find that it is usually described on the basis of _ as a clue.文本剖析：細(xì)節(jié)探究An animal fact fileAppearance(外貌)one of the largest cranes in the world, standing at about 1._ tallfeatures: as 2._ as snow, except for som

2、e black ones on the face, neck and wingsunique feature: the 3._ on the top of its headHabitat(棲息地)in 4._， Russia, Mongolia, Japan and the Korean PeninsulaMigration(遷徙)When the weather gets cold, it will 5._ to warm places.Diet(飲食)6._： fish, snails and water plantsSymbolic meaning(象征意義)a symbol of lo

3、ng life and good luck.語言點(diǎn)except for除了His composition is good except for some spelling mistakes.他的作文比較好，除了幾個(gè)拼寫錯(cuò)誤。unique feature獨(dú)有的特征redcrowned crane丹頂鶴Step Writing篇章結(jié)構(gòu)描寫動物有以下幾種寫作方法：(1)總分結(jié)合法采用總分結(jié)合法描寫動物時(shí)，要注意總述與分述之間的關(guān)系。分述部分要緊緊圍繞總述的內(nèi)容來寫，包括動物的外表、棲息地、食物等方面。此外，分述要有一定的順序。(2)特征說明法采用特征說明法描寫動物時(shí)，一般先介紹動物的某一特征，再說明

4、該特征的作用或說明為什么會具有這樣的特征。接著用同樣的方式介紹動物的其他特征。(3)重點(diǎn)突出法采用重點(diǎn)突出法描寫動物時(shí)，首先要仔細(xì)觀察此動物，找出它與眾不同的地方加以描述。在描述動物最主要的特點(diǎn)時(shí)，可采用比喻、擬人等修辭手法，使重點(diǎn)更加突出，給讀者留下深刻的印象。常用表達(dá).is an animal that/which lives in the mountains.是一種生活在山里的動物。It feeds/lives on.它靠為生。As forests are constantly being cut down, its habitat is becoming smaller and sma

5、ller.隨著森林被不斷砍伐，它的棲息地變得越來越小。To protect the., measures should be taken to set up some nature reserves.為了保護(hù)，應(yīng)該采取措施建立一些自然保護(hù)區(qū)。Its our eager hope that more people will lend us a hand to help save them.我們熱切地希望有更多的人能幫助我們拯救它們。If we dont protect them, they will probably die out soon.如果我們不保護(hù)它們，它們可能很快就會滅絕。Final

6、ly, we should let people know the importance of protecting endangered animals.最后，我們應(yīng)該讓人們知道保護(hù)瀕危動物的重要性。實(shí)踐應(yīng)用根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容，寫一篇有關(guān)瀕危動物金絲猴的短文。1外貌：金黃色或者灰色；尾巴幾乎和身體一樣長。2棲息地：主要在中國，海拔在1 5003 300米的森林中。3生活習(xí)性：群居，吃樹葉、果子。4瀕危動物，呼吁大家保護(hù)金絲猴。注意：詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。第一步謀篇布局第二步遣詞造句完成句子1金絲猴是一種可愛的動物。The golden monkey is _2它們的毛是金黃色或灰色的。Their fur

7、 _3它們居住在森林里。_4處于海拔1 5003 300米的地方。The altitude _5我們的政府已經(jīng)建立了一些自然保護(hù)區(qū)來保護(hù)它們。Our government _6越來越多的人意識到保護(hù)它們的重要性。More and more people _句式升級7用whose引導(dǎo)的定語從句改寫句1和句2。_8用where引導(dǎo)的定語從句改寫句3和句4。_9用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)合并句5和句6。_第三步完美成篇用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇英語短文。_Section Writing an animal fact file寫作精析技能提升Step 文本研讀.框架建構(gòu)：整

8、體理解information of an animal.文本剖析：細(xì)節(jié)探究1150 cm2.white3.bright red skin4.China5.migrate6foodStep Writing第二步1a kind of lovely animal2is golden or gray3They live in the forests.4is 1，5003，300 metres high5has set up some nature reserves to protect them6realize the importance of protecting them7The golden

9、monkey is a kind of lovely animal, whose fur is golden or gray.8They live in the forests, where the altitude is 1，5003，300 metres high.9With our government setting up some nature reserves, more and more people realize the importance of protecting them.第三步 The golden monkey is a kind of lovely animal

10、, whose fur is golden or gray. Their tails are almost as long as their bodies. Golden monkeys mainly live in China. They live in the forests, where the altitude is 1，5003，300 metres high. Besides, they like to live in groups and eat fruit, tree leaves, and so on. Nowadays, the number of the golden monkey is decreasing. So our government has taken measures to control this. With our government setting up some