年高二英語(yǔ)學(xué)考寫(xiě)作之評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及寫(xiě)作提綱課件

高二英語(yǔ)學(xué)考寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練之

評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及寫(xiě)作提綱evaluationcriteria&writingoutlines

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在成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程中，我們總是對(duì)木來(lái)的職業(yè)充滿懂候。近期你班將以“MyDreamCareer”為題舉行演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要求寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的理想職業(yè)2.選擇它的理由；3.實(shí)現(xiàn)的途徑。注意：1.100詞左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連費(fèi)。MyDreamCareerGoodmorning,everyone!Today,pleaseallowmetodeliverabriefspeechonthecareerIwilltakeupinthefuture.Undoubtedly,Ihavegreatexpectationsforthefuturejobaseveryoneelsedoes.Mydreamcareeristobeatourguide.Sincemyearlyage,Ihavebeenadmiringtourguideswhotravelworldwide,enjoyingthespectacularscenery,appreciatingdifferentculturesandenrichingtheirlifeexperienceatthesametime.Besides,thiscareerisfinanciallyrewardingaswellsothatIcanliveabetterlife.Additionally,Iwillhavemoreopportunitiestomeetpeoplefromallwalksoflife,whichisbothchallengingandinteresting.

Tobeagoodguideisnoeasyjob,foritrequiresyearsofpracticeandcontinuallearning.Itisthewiderangeofknowledge,professionalismanddedicationthatmakeahighlyqualifiedtourguide.Therefore,mydreamcan'tbefulfilledwithoutindustriousworktopavetheway.

Thankyouforlistening!YouwillbeanEnglishteacher.Whichkindofcompositiondoyoulikebest?ABCDEF優(yōu)秀作文要點(diǎn)齊全內(nèi)容充實(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)合理銜接流暢表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確語(yǔ)言豐富字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo)書(shū)寫(xiě)美觀實(shí)用三段結(jié)構(gòu)Para.1Beginning闡述寫(xiě)作目的，引出主題。(2至3行)Para.2Body寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，分點(diǎn)論述。(5至7行)Para.3Ending總結(jié)概括/希望祝愿。(1到2行)Para.1

開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山：寫(xiě)信目的/話題引入Para.2

主體部分Para.3總結(jié)/希望/祝愿寫(xiě)作提綱構(gòu)思(關(guān)鍵詞+句式)提綱Tobeginwith/Firstofall...Inaddition/What'smore...Lastbutnotleast...應(yīng)用文常用開(kāi)頭☆寒暄問(wèn)候☆寫(xiě)作背景1.Hello,everyone.2.Howareyou(doing)?/How'severythinggoing?1.Ihavelearned

(fromtheinternet/news/post)that...2.It'ssaidthat.../Youtoldmethat.../Recently...3.Knowing/Learningthat...+主句☆寫(xiě)作目的1.Iamwritingtoexpress/invite/askfor/share/tellyou...2.Itismyhonor/pleasuretogiveaspeechon...3.Iwantto/wouldliketosay/advise...應(yīng)用文常用結(jié)尾☆

總結(jié)/概括Allinall/Insummary/Inshort/Fromabove...☆

希望/期待☆

祝愿/感謝1.Ilookforwardtoyourreply./Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.2.Iwouldappreciateitif.../Itwouldbeappreciatedif...3.Ihope/believethat...1.Bestwishes./Iwishyouallthebest/happiness.2.May+sb.+V.原形/n.(例：Mayyousucceed/greatsucess.)3.Thankyou/Manythanks/I'msogratefulfor...請(qǐng)為下列作文快速擬定開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾假設(shè)你是李華。暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，已寫(xiě)好申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷(resume）。給外教Ms.Jenkins寫(xiě)信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。(2016年全國(guó)1卷）DearJenkins,Howareyou?Iplantoapplyforapart-timejobinaforeign-capitalenterpriseduringthissummervacation.Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelp.......I'dappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmemodifytheexpressionsandformat.Bestwishes.Lookingforwardtoyourreplay.請(qǐng)為下列作文快速擬定開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他暑假將來(lái)北京參加“外國(guó)人唱中國(guó)歌大賽”，希望你為他推薦一首中文歌曲。請(qǐng)給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦曲目；2.推薦理由；3.你的祝愿。DearJim,How'severything?Hearingthatyou'regoingtotakepartinaforeignerssingingChinesesongscompetition,IwouldliketorecommendaChinesesong,Molihua,toyou.......Ihopemyrecommendationwillbeofhelp.Mayyousucced.Bestwishes.Para.2

Body作文主體提綱構(gòu)思(關(guān)鍵詞+句式)Tobeginwith/Firstofall...Inaddition/What'smore...Lastbutnotleast...寫(xiě)作提綱注意事項(xiàng):1.要點(diǎn)齊全，確定時(shí)態(tài)；2.無(wú)需整句，標(biāo)注單詞或句式即可；3.善用序數(shù)詞及邏輯連詞；4.1個(gè)要點(diǎn)配1到2句拓展。應(yīng)用文常用序數(shù)詞&邏輯連詞1）first,second,third,last2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3）thefirst,thesecond,thethird,thelast4）inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace...lastly5）tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally6）tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally7）firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast8）mostimportantofall,moreover,finally9）ontheonehand,ontheotherhand10）foronething,foranotherthing

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假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Mike發(fā)來(lái)郵什，說(shuō)因?yàn)樾鹿诜窝?COV1D-19）需要居家自我隔離（selfisolarion），導(dǎo)致他情緒低落。為此，他向你尋求建議。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括1.表示理解。2.你的看法和建議3.表達(dá)信心。

注意：1.100詞左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連費(fèi)。understandable；challengingP.1

P.2

P.3寫(xiě)作提綱(關(guān)鍵詞+句式)提綱理解理解；難self-isolation;prevent...fromgettinginfected;slowdown;reflect看法建議自我隔離→預(yù)防感染

→慢感生活利用時(shí)間→做自己事→鍛煉；閱讀

setasidetime;takeexercise;readbooksGreeting.abeliefthat;getthrough;Bestwishes.信心；祝愿DearMike,

Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Knowingthatyou’reundergoingatoughtime,I’mwritingtogiveyoumysupportandsuggestions.

Itisquiteunderstandabletofeeldownduringsuchanchallengingtime.Butstayingathomeisthebestwaytopreventyouandyourfamilyfromgettinginfected.Thoughself-isolationmaybehard,itpresentopportunityforyoutoslowdown,pauseandreflect.Inaddition,youcansetasidesomeregulartimeeverydaytotakeexerciseorreadbooks,whichwillhelpyoucheerupandkeephealthy.Ihaveastrongbeliefthatyouandyourcountrycangetthroughthedifficultiesandthego