(新高考)高考英語二輪專題讀后續(xù)寫精讀精煉（七）（含答案解析）

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫精讀精煉（七）一：原文重現(xiàn)In1945,a12-year-oldboysawabeautifulbrooch（胸針）inashopwindowthatsethisheartracing.Buttheprice—fivedollars—wastoohighforReubenEarle.Fivedollarswouldbuyalmostaweek'sfoodforhisfamily.【來源：21·世紀(jì)·教育·網(wǎng)】Reubencouldn’taskhisfatherforthemoney.Everythinghisfathermadethroughfishingwenttohismother,Dora.Slimandbeautiful,shewasthecenterofthehomeandthegluethatheldittogether.Thehouseworkwasnever-ending,andshestruggledtofeedandclothetheirfivechildren,butshewashappyasherfamilyandtheirwell-beingwereallshecaredabout.Nevertheless,heopenedtheshop'sdoorandwentinside.Standingproudlyandstraightinhisflour-sack（面粉袋改做的）shirtandwashed-outtrousers,hetoldtheshopkeeperwhathewanted,adding,“ButIdon'thavethemoneyrightnow.Canyoupleaseholditformeforsometime?”"I'lltry,”theshopkeepersmiled."Peoplearoundheredon'tusuallyhavethatkindofmoneytospendonthings.Itshouldkeepforawhile."21*cnjy*comReubenrespectfullytouchedhisworncapandwalkedout.Hewouldraisethemoneyandnottellanybody,forhethoughtMumwouldgetsurprisedwhenshesawthatbrooch.Onhearingthesoundofhammering（捶打）fromasidestreet,Reubensuddenlyhadanideathathecouldraisemoneybysellingtheusednailbags.PeoplebuilttheirownhomesinBayRoberts,usingnailsboughtinbagsfromalocalfactory.Sometimestheusedbagswerethrownawayattheconstructionsite,andReubenknewhecouldsellthembacktothefactoryforfivecentsapiece.Thatdayhesoldtwonailbagsandhidthemoneyinarustysodatin.21教育名師原創(chuàng)作品注意：1,續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan..Paragraph2:Finally,thetimecame!_______________________________________________________________________________.二：文本解析情節(jié)分析：本文主要講述了一個(gè)小故事：12歲男孩Reuben想為自己的母親買一枚胸針，可手頭沒有足夠的錢，他找到店主，店主答應(yīng)為他保留一段時(shí)間，而Reuben開始撿釘子來籌錢購買胸針。21世紀(jì)教育網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：每天放學(xué)后，Reuben就開始他的計(jì)劃。本段開頭提到Reuben已經(jīng)開始進(jìn)行籌錢計(jì)劃，后文可以講述他的籌錢過程以及最終結(jié)果，可以具體描寫一下籌錢過程中Reuben付出的努力。第二段開頭是：終于，是時(shí)候了！本段開頭暗示Reuben己經(jīng)籌到了足夠的錢，后文就可以描寫他買下胸針的激動(dòng)心情以及將胸針?biāo)徒o母親Dora的過程。另外，母親收到胸針后開心、感動(dòng)的反應(yīng)也可以是描寫的重點(diǎn).文章的主人公無疑是小男孩Reuben,但次要人物Dora是不能忽略的，需要通過媽媽來襯托兒子。那么看看文章對(duì)媽媽的描述：Slimandbeautiful,shewasthecenterofthehomeandthegluethatheldittogether.Thehouseworkwasnever-ending,andshestruggledtofeedandclothetheirfivechildren,butshewashappyasherfamilyandtheirwell-beingwereallshecaredabout.如果結(jié)尾只是說媽媽很開心，就非常遺憾了，還必須和這個(gè)描寫照應(yīng)：對(duì)生活的樂觀和對(duì)孩子的熱愛。媽媽的開心：Wearingthebeautifulbroochandknowingthestorybehindit,Dorawastoooverjoyedtoutteraword.媽媽的疼愛：Shejustthrewherarmstightlyaroundherbelovedson.對(duì)話：“MerryChristmas,mom"，thesonannouncedproudly."Youtoo."theproudmotherechoed.主題升華：Well,nodreamisoutofreachforawillingheart.三：續(xù)寫單句訓(xùn)練每天放學(xué)后，魯本都開始了他的計(jì)劃。又冷又餓，魯本四處閑逛，小心地從一條街到另一條街尋找指甲袋。為了節(jié)省更多的錢，這個(gè)下定決心的男孩甚至決定在一大早就送文件。他贏的每枚硬幣都去了蘇打罐，他珍貴的“銀行”，然后所有的疲倦都神奇地消失了每次他經(jīng)過商店櫥窗里的胸針時(shí)，都會(huì)提醒他，他做了什么是值得的。一天比一天地，他的蘇打水錫變得越來越重了。六個(gè)星期過去了，他才知道。然后走到了平安夜。終于，時(shí)間到了！魯本偷偷走進(jìn)他的房間，小心翼翼地拿出蘇打罐，把所有的硬幣都倒出來，開始數(shù)。5美元二十美分！他第二次數(shù)了一遍，毫無差錯(cuò)。他的努力工作最終得到了回報(bào)！魯本緊緊地拿著蘇打錫，立刻沖進(jìn)了商店。朵拉戴著漂亮的胸針，知道背后的故事，欣喜若狂，一句話也說出來。她只是伸出雙臂緊緊地?fù)ё×怂膼鄣膬鹤印！笆フQ快樂，媽媽，”兒子驕傲地宣布。“你自己也是如此?！彬湴恋哪赣H也著。嗯，沒有夢(mèng)想是無法不到的。四：佳作展現(xiàn)Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,thetimecame!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五：課后練筆AlexwasveryexcitedbecausetheNewYearEvewasapproaching.Suddenly,hesawhisgrandfathersittingalonelookingveryAlexwenttohimandasked,“Grandpa,whyareyousittingalone?Isthereanythingwrongwithyou?”【版權(quán)所有：21教育】Hisgrandfatherreplied,“No,Iamfine.Ijustfeellikesittingalone.”“Grandpa,youknowtheNewYearisnear,soareyoupreparingforit?”askedAlexexcitedly.“Nodear,Iamnot.Withthepassageoftime,theworldhascompletelychangedandIdon’tseeanypointincelebratingtheworldIseetoday,”answeredhisgrandfatherdisappointedly.“Iknowsomethingiswrongwithyouandyouarenottellingme.Pleasetellmewhattheproblemis.”Alexsaid.“IfeelIamastrangerintheworldIamlivingin.ItisnotthesameasIhaveknown.Noweveryoneisbusywiththeirownwork.Yourfatherisbusywithbusiness,yourbrotherisbusyonthecomputer,yoursisterisbusystudyingabroadandyourmumisbusywithhouseholdwork.Idon’tknowhowtopassmydays,”saidhisgrandfathersadly.“Grandpa,youhaveme!”saidAlex.Hisgrandfathersmiledandsaid,“Yeah,youarehere,butwhataboutothers?Inourdays,wehadafixedtimeeachdaywhenthewholefamilysattogetherandtalked,sharedproblemsandlaughedtogether.”ThatnightAlexthoughtaboutwhathisgrandfatherhadsaidandanideaflashedthroughhismind.HedecidedtohaveasurpriseNewYearpartyathisownhomeandmakeeveryonecometogetherthatday.AsNewYear’sEvegotnearer,Alexgotbusypreparingfortheparty.Hekeptitasecretfromhisgrandfatherandaskedeveryonenottolethimknowaboutitinordertosurprisehim.ItwasDecember31andeveryonewasbusywiththeirownwork.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Alexsawhisgrandfatherlookingveryhappywhiletalkingwiththefamilymembers.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六：?jiǎn)尉溆?xùn)練那是12月31日，每個(gè)人都在忙著自己的工作。亞歷克斯的祖父坐在他的房間里看書。晚上8點(diǎn)。每個(gè)人都開始聚集在客廳里，亞歷克斯去給他的祖父打電話。他驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)所有人都在那里?！敖裉欤覀儾蝗?，只是為你享受派對(duì)！”亞歷克斯說。全家都為忙于生活而道歉。然后他們吃了一頓豐盛的晚餐，一起聊天，分享問題，一起大笑。亞歷克斯在和家人交談時(shí)看到他的祖父看起來很開心。他們回顧了過去，為未來做了計(jì)劃?！拔蚁Ｍ覀儾粫?huì)再被分開了。所有家庭成員在一起的地方永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)改變。亞歷克斯看著他年邁的祖父說。其他人也同意了，并確定了全家定期聚會(huì)的時(shí)間。爺爺感動(dòng)了，希望和大家一起享受生活。盡管外面很冷，但全家還是暖和不過了。參考答案三：?jiǎn)尉溆?xùn)練Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.Coldandhungry,Reubenwanderedaround,searchingfornailbagscarefullyfromonestreettoanother.Tosavemoremoney,thedeterminedboyevendecidedtodeliverpapersontheearlymorning.21·世紀(jì)*教育網(wǎng)Everycoinhewonwenttoasodatin,histreasured“bank"，andthenallthetirednessdisappearedmagically.www-2-1-cnjy-comEachtimehepassedbythebroochintheshopwindowwouldremindhimwhathedidwasworthwhile.2-1-c-n-j-yDaybyday,hissodatinbecameheavierandheavier.【來源：21cnj*y.co*m】Sixweekspassedbeforeheevenknewit.ThenapproachedtheChristmasEve.Finally,thetimecame!Reubenstoleintohisroomandcautiouslytookoutthesodatin,pouredallthecoinsoutandbegantocount.【出處：21教育名師】Fivedollarsandtwentycents!Hecounteditasecondtime,andnomistake.Hishardworkeventuallypaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshopwithoutasecond'sdelay.Wearingthebeautifulbroochandknowingthestorybehindit,Dorawastoooverjoyedtoutteraword.21教育網(wǎng)Shejustthrewherarmstightlyaroundherbelovedson.“MerryChristmas,mom"，thesonannouncedproudly."Youtoo."theproudmotherechoed.21*cnjy*comWell,nodreamisoutofreachforawillingheart.2·1·c·n·j·y六：?jiǎn)尉溆?xùn)練ItwasDecember31andeveryonewasbusywiththeirownwork.Alex’sgrandfatherwassittinginhisroom,readingabook.Whentheclockstruck8pm.everyonestartedgatheringinthelivingroomandAlexwenttocallhisgrandfather.21·cn·jy·comHewassurprisedtofindeveryonethere.“Today,wearenotgoinganywherebutenjoythepartyforyou!”Alexsaid.Thewholefamilyapologizedforbeingbusywiththeirlives.Thentheyhadawonderfuldinnertalking,sharingproblemsandlaughingtogether.Alexsawhisgrandfatherlookingveryhappywhiletalkingwiththefamilymembers.Theylookedbackontheolddaysandplannedforthefuture.“Ihopewewon’tbeseparatedagain.Itneverchangesthathomeiswhereallfamilymembersaretogether.”Alexsaid,lookingathisageinggrandfather.Othersagreedandfixedatimewhenthewholefamilywouldgettogetherregularly.Grandpawasmovedtotears,wishingtoenjoylifewitheveryone.Despitethecoldoutside,thewholefamilycouldn’tbewarmer.四：佳作展現(xiàn)（一）Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.Coldandhungry,Reubenwanderedaround,searchingfornailbagscarefullyfromonestreettoanother.Tosavemoremoney,thedeterminedboyevendecidedtodeliverpapersontheearlymorning.Everycoinhewonwenttoasodatin,histreasured“bank"，andthenallthetirednessdisappearedmagically.Eachtimehepassedbythebroochintheshopwindowwouldremindhimwhathedidwasworthwhile.Daybyday,hissodatinbecameheavierandheavier.Sixweekspassedbeforeheevenknewit.ThenapproachedtheChristmasEve.Finally,thetimecame!Reubenstoleintohisroomandcautiouslytookoutthesodatin,pouredallthecoinsoutandbegantocount.Fivedollarsandtwentycents!Hecounteditasecondtime,and