高考寫作-p高考英語寫作

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考

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作如何拿高分？看標(biāo)準(zhǔn)高考英語作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1．按5個檔次給分。2．評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3．詞數(shù)少于要求，從總分中減去2分。4．評分時，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。5．拼寫與標(biāo)點符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個方面，評分時，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫詞匯用法均可接受。6．如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。分數(shù)檔文章內(nèi)容語法詞匯詞匯和語法錯誤連貫整體效果第五檔21—25分覆蓋所有要點。較多有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高詞匯所致；具備較強的語言運用能力有效使用銜接手段，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。完全達到

預(yù)期的寫作目的第四檔16-20分雖漏掉1

、2

個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。能滿足任

務(wù)要求?；緶?zhǔn)確，些許錯誤主要因嘗試較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。應(yīng)用了簡單的連接成分，是的全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第三檔11—15分雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。能基本滿

足任務(wù)要求。有些錯誤，但不影響理解應(yīng)用了簡單的連接成分，使得全文內(nèi)容連貫?；具_到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第二檔6~10分漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容有一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容語法結(jié)構(gòu)

單調(diào)，所用詞匯有限。有錯誤，影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。較少使用語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。信息未能清楚的傳達給讀者。第一檔1~5分明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)的內(nèi)容，可能未理解試題要求語法結(jié)構(gòu)

單調(diào)，所用詞匯有限。較多錯誤，影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。缺乏語句間的鏈接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。信息未能傳達給讀者。0分未能傳達給讀者任何信息：內(nèi)容太少，無法評判；寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所寫內(nèi)容無法看清。更重要的是？高考閱卷特點：閱卷時間短；閱卷的速度快；閱卷老師的心理狀態(tài)：給分中庸高考卷其余部分是標(biāo)準(zhǔn)化計分；平均分：峰值：約15分17~19分最吃虧學(xué)生群：中等左右學(xué)生表達是提高平均分最大的潛力股字體為王原則第三檔

13分7第五檔

25分手寫印刷體第五檔(21--25)：*完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。-覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點。-應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。-語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。-有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。*完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。標(biāo)準(zhǔn)內(nèi)容:覆蓋全部要點語言:多詞匯，多句型連貫:有句子內(nèi)連接成份分數(shù)檔文章內(nèi)容語法詞匯詞匯和語法錯誤連貫整體效果第五檔21—25分覆蓋所有要點。較多有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高詞匯所致；具備較強的語言運用能力有效使用銜接手段，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。完全達到

預(yù)期的寫作目的第四檔16-20分雖漏掉1

、2

個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。能滿足任

務(wù)要求?；緶?zhǔn)確，些許錯誤主要因嘗試較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。應(yīng)用了簡單的連接成分，是的全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第三檔11—15分雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。能基本滿

足任務(wù)要求。有些錯誤，但不影響理解應(yīng)用了簡單的連接成分，使得全文內(nèi)容連貫。基本達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第二檔6~10分漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容有一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容語法結(jié)構(gòu)

單調(diào)，所用詞匯有限。有錯誤，影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。較少使用語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。信息未能清楚的傳達給讀者。第一檔1~5分明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)的內(nèi)容，可能未理解試題要求語法結(jié)構(gòu)

單調(diào)，所用詞匯有限。較多錯誤，影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。缺乏語句間的鏈接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。信息未能傳達給讀者。0分未能傳達給讀者任何信息：內(nèi)容太少，無法評判；寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所寫內(nèi)容無法看清。寫作評分首末句原則關(guān)注，閱卷老師，所看的地方。每段首句，每段末句。高考16年來英語表達題年

代

形

式

內(nèi)

容介紹自己，申請工作描述一件交通違章事件某中學(xué)參觀農(nóng)場用兩幅不同的畫介紹學(xué)校變化以組織者

通知音樂周活動根據(jù)表格寫簡歷看圖寫話看圖寫話看圖寫信通知看圖寫話根據(jù)表格寫回信一起交通事故有關(guān)減負前后的變化公園是否收門票19961997199819992000春2000夏20012002

根據(jù)表格給報社寫信2003

看圖寫回信介紹為其所租的房子高考17年來英語 表達題年

代

形

式

內(nèi)

容2004

給 朋友寫信 告知舉辦才藝大賽2005 根據(jù)網(wǎng)上的一則旅游 ，寫電子郵件詢問旅游事宜2006 根據(jù)兩幅圖的描繪，給英國朋友寫信，介紹你校

館2007 給外籍教師寫信尋求筆友，內(nèi)容是描述理想中的筆友2008

給 哥動物園 寫信，詢問大熊貓

和她母親白云的情況2009

回 朋友的 ，介紹改建后前門大街的情況2010 給某大學(xué)外籍教師寫信，聘請她做英語 比賽的評委2011 （要點提綱）

書信：本人間接

求助解決學(xué)習(xí) 、預(yù)約。16年高考

表達題四大特征以記敘文、應(yīng)用文為主，形式為寫信看圖7次，表格3次，寫信12

次以第1人稱為主，每篇10句左右以國內(nèi)生活、主要以學(xué)校生活為背景體現(xiàn)交際性圖畫式漫畫式提綱式語言篇文章寫不出來怎么辦？基礎(chǔ)語言關(guān)找—先寫出來造句子：??主謂賓主系表主謂賓主系表動詞賓語系動詞0121+adjAdj.簡單句died.

I

killed

himmake

me

unhappy.

I

gave

him

臭豆腐is

handsome.

簡單句系動詞替換原則主謂賓主系表主系表系動詞is實意動詞killb敢e想動，詞持么續(xù)？系動詞有哪些？系動詞狀態(tài)be持續(xù)變化結(jié)果感官像e,

grow,

get,

turn,

fall,

gocontinue,

remain,

stay,結(jié)果prove

turn

out感官feel,smell,look,sound,taste像 seem,

appear29.Thewater

cool

when

I

joinedinto

the

pool

for

morning

exercise.2006全國卷一A.

was

felt B.

is

felt C.felt D.

feels

（1）

Herforehead

hot.

I’mafraid

she

is

ill.B.

felt.feelsA.

is

feelingC.

isfe

（2）

The

new

school

has

beencompleted.It

very

beautiful.A.

is

lookedC.

has

lookedB.

lookedD.

looks（3）

Thedish

nice,

but

the

milk

sour.B.

is

smelt,D.

smells,

smells

A.

is

smelt,

is

smeltsmellsC.

smells,

is

smelt（4）

Thestoryofhislife

interesting.A.

is

soundedC.

has

soundedB.

is

soundingD.

sounds簡單句一定簡單么？the

failure

of

the

aspirations

of

the

1960shas

led,

in

the

decade

since

then,

toperhaps

the

most

self-centered

Dream

inAmerican

Society.基本句型拓展原則基本句型拓展原則一級補充：

方式、原因、目的二級補充：

地點、時間人：

條件，感情方式

---

by

ng1.relaxI

will

relax

myself.方式→I

will

relax

myself

by

swimming.地點→I

will

relax

myself

by

swimming

in

abeautiful

lakenear

my

grandparents’house.時間→I

will

relax

myself

by

swimming

in

abeautiful

lake

near

my

grandparents’housewhen

the

weather

is

fine.2011浙江寧波作為學(xué)生，對學(xué)校、老師提出建議范文（節(jié)選）：I

hope

our

school

will

open

the

librarymore

often.I

think

our

school

can

organize

moreafter-class

activities.I

suggest

our

school

should

organizefewer

exams

as

well.高分作文：范文原句+目的/原因I

hope

our

school

will

open

the

library

moreoften

to

make

us

gain

more

knowledge

onthe

Internet.I

think

our

school

can

organize

more

after-classactivities

because

students

need

to

bephysically

and

mentally

healthy.I

suggest

our

school

should

organize

fewerexams

as

well

in

order

to

make

us

lessstressed

and

enjoy

life

better.Since

we

cannot

experience

everything

all

by

ourselves,

we

alsoacquire

knowledge

byreading

books,

magazines

and

newspapers.Being

of

the

same

age,

children

find

it

easier

to

communicate

with

theirgeneration

than

with

their

parents.

As

a

result,

they

learn

more

fromtheir

peers

than

from

their

parents.In

fact,

it

is

difficult

to

determine

the

impact

of

humans

on

theenvironment

as

we

only

have

been

ing

weather

changes

forthe

last

hundred

years.Sometimes

new

information

contradicts

our

old

ideas.

This

happens

topeople

of

all

ages

because

learning

is

a

lifelongprocess.The

IT

industry

is

highly

competitive；

thus,

even

the

slightestadvantage

gives

a

company

a

substantial

edge

over

its

rivals.Habitual

exercise

reduces

stress,

prevents

weight

gain

and

improvesacademic

performance

；

therefore,

exercise

should

be

made

a

part

ofany

school's

curriculum.In

the

conventional

classroom,

most

lessons

are

aimed

at

themiddle

level

of

ability.

Thus,some

students

are dragged

along

much

faster

than

is

good

for

them.句式：The

reason

for/why...is

that...(……的原因是……)部分大學(xué)為什么

下降：部分大學(xué)辦學(xué)質(zhì)量差、學(xué)生上學(xué)學(xué)費高、畢業(yè)生就業(yè)難等。The

reason

why

some

colleges

have

eless

attractive

thise

tehdautcational

qualityof

some

colleges

is

poor,

the

tuition

fee

ishigh

and

it’s

hard

for

college

graduates

toget

jobs.或Due

to the

poor

educational

quality

ofsome

colleges,

high

tuition

fees

and

difficultemployment

for

college

graduates,

somecolleges

have e

less

attractive.目的句型用謂語表達：aim/intend

to

dosth(目的是,旨在)用狀語表達：so

asto/in

order

to/in

an

effort

to

do...(為了做某事)with

the

purpose

of ng

sth(帶著……的目的,為了)in

hopes/the

hopeof(懷著……的希望)with

dreams

ofwith

the

goal

ofng(帶著……的夢想)ng

sth(目的是)3.

用不定式作表語表達：The

purpose

of ng

sth

is

to

do...(做某事的目的是)Our

goal

is

to

do...(

的目標(biāo)/的是)The

aim

is

to

do...(目的是)4.

用從句表達：so

that...(以便)in

order

that...(為了)in

the

hopethat...(懷著……的希望)[典型例題]信息點：目標(biāo)：所有室內(nèi)公共場所無煙實施時間：

起(2010

)信息表達：This

decision,

which

aims

tomake

allindoor

public

places

smoke-free,

will

come

intoeffect

from

the day

of

2011.或This

decision,aiming

to

make

all

indoor

publicplaces

smoke-free,will

becarriedout

from

January

1,

2011.[課堂練習(xí)]1.翻譯：為實現(xiàn)目標(biāo)要采取的措施：努力學(xué)習(xí)考上理想的大學(xué)。(2010

)trymy

best

to

pass

the

collegeentrance

examination

and

enteragood

university.In

order

to

reach

th,e

goal

I

must2.翻譯：這課的目的是為了體驗中山大學(xué)的生活,我充分感覺到做大學(xué)生的美妙。The

aim

of

theclass

was

to

experience

lifeat

Zhongshan

University.

I

fully

feltthe

sweetness

of

being

a

collegestudent.3.

信息點：“無車日”(Car-freeDay)是一項節(jié)能環(huán)保的活動活動時間：每年9月22日參與者：

108個城市活動目的：提高人們節(jié)約能源與保護環(huán)境的意識信息表達：energy-saving

and

environmentalprotectionToraise

public

awareness

of

,

Car-free

Day

is

launched

in

108cities

in

China

on

September

22

everyyear.常用引導(dǎo)詞:when特殊引導(dǎo)詞:thesecond???the

minute,the

moment,the

dayThe

children

ran

away

from

the

orchard(果園)————they

saw

the

guard.the

moment,

the

minute,

the

second,the

instant時間短語Five

hours

before

the

meeting.雙重地點常用引導(dǎo)詞：where特殊引導(dǎo)詞：wherever,

anywhere,everywhere雙重介賓短語使用。

you

go,

you

should

work

hard.條件Be

sure

to

write

down

what

you

hearduring

the

lecture,

otherwise

you'll

forgetthe

details.He's e

to

come

along,

providedthat

he

behaves

himself.寫單句出現(xiàn)的問題1.任何一個簡單句中只有一個動詞。2.

任何一個簡單句都要有主語謂語。3.

如果要表示多個動詞，非謂語動詞b.從句4.任何一個可數(shù)名詞前要么冠詞要么復(fù)數(shù)。作文句子很像怎么辦英漢區(qū)別漢語表達特點：曲折，委婉英文表達特點：明確，直接。I

love

you圍巾重心前移法則英語主干，狀語，定語在后。狀語：時間，地點定語：(1.

介詞短語作定語）(2.

動詞不定式作定語）(3.

分詞作定語)(4.

定語從句作定語）注意漢英差異：狀語e.g.她一周有三個下午在一家百貨公司做兼職。She

does

a

part

time

jobin

a

department

storethree

afternoons

a

week.主謂不缺法則漢語，主語謂語可有可無，英語主謂不能缺少。唐

詩作者嫁得瞿塘賈，朝朝誤期。早知潮有信，嫁與弄潮兒。譯文Since

I

married

the

merchant

ofQutang,He

has

failed

each

day

to

keep

hisword…Had

I

know

how

regular

the

tide

is,I

might

have

chosen

a

river

boy.(Translated

by

Bynner)靜夜思床前明月光疑是地上霜舉頭望明月低頭思故鄉(xiāng)Before

my

bed

apool

of

light---Can

itbe

hoarfrost

on

theground?Looking

up,

Ifind

themoonbright;Bowing,

in

homesickness

I

‘mdrowned.At

noon

they

hoe

upweeds;Theirsweat drips

on

the

soil.Who

knows

the

rice

thatneedsIsthe

fruit

of

hard

toil!作文框架怎么寫？寫作像

怎么辦2007年

卷表達（滿分25分）假定你是 ，希望通過外籍教師Peter找一個英語筆友。請寫一封，描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣的筆友。具體條件包括：1.2.3.；；（旅游、運動、寵物等）。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開頭語已為你寫好。DearPeter,I

am

writing

to

ask

whether

you

are

able

to

do

me

a

favor.Bestregards,Li

Hua100憫農(nóng)鋤禾日當(dāng)午,汗滴禾下土。誰知盤中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。120表示主張，觀點的文字提純出一個

句①歸納要點②提煉概括性的話句原則句句1┌─第一段─┤開頭第二段─├─支持1---細節(jié)├─支持2---細節(jié)├─支持3—細節(jié)總結(jié)└─擴展句句9第一段，點名第二段，分點說明第三段，總結(jié)引申Dear

Peter,I’m

writing

to

ask

whether

youare

able

to

do

me

a

favor.I

want

to

have

a

pen

friend,

hopefully

a

girl

in

herearlytwenties,

and

with

interests

similar

to

mine.In

my

mind,

she

issomeone

who

is

interested

intraveling,swimming,

and

playing

table

tennis.

Besides,

it

would

bebetter

for

her

tohave

apet

dog

as

I

have

kept

one

at

homeforsome

time.

With

such

a

pen

friend,I

think

I

can

share

withher

our

traveling

experiences,

taking

care

of

pets,

or

whateverwe

have

in

common.AndI

believe

I

will

improve

my

English

by ng

so

and

learn

more

about

her

country.I

look

forward

to

hearing

from

you

soon.Bestregards,Li

Huaevision

presents

a

vivid

world

in

front

of

us.(1)(

句)Through

TV,wecan

learn

what

is

happening

half

way

across

the

world.(2)(擴展句)evision

also

plays

an

important

educationalrole

in

our

daily

life.

(3)(句)For

one

thing,the

TV

university

provides

an

opportunity

for

many

youngmen

who

can

not

go

to

formal

universities.(4)(擴展句)For

another,childrencan

broaden

their

scope

of

knowledge

by

watching

such

popular

programsas"The

Animal

World",and"The

Mickey

Mouse

and

Duck

Donald".(5)(擴展句)Besides,women

can

learn

about

the

latest

fashion

of

dresses

and

thebest

recipe

for

making

fruit

cakes.(6)(擴展句)Furthermore,we

learn

manyworld

advanced

technologies

from

TV

programs

such

as

computer

andmunication.(7)(擴展句)And

also

we

can

learn

singing,dancing

andng

physical

exercises

in

some

special

TV

training

courses.ing

more(8)(擴展句)In

short,the

effect

of

TV's

educational

role

isand

moreobvious.(9)(擴展句)Having

viewed

these

several

aspects,

and

with

many

more

TV

programbeing

produced,I

believe

that

our

life

will e

even

more

significant.(10)(總結(jié)句)拓展句子如何連接？一二三原則1）2）3）the,

second,

third,

lastly,

secondly,

thirdly,

finally,

the

second,

the

third,

the

last4）in

the place,

in

the

second

place,in

the

third

place,

lastlyInitially/to

begin

with,

then,

furthermore,finallyto

start

with,

next,

in

addition,

finally

and

foremost,

besides,

last

but

notleastmost

important

of

all,

moreover,

finallyon

the

one

hand,on

the

other

hand（適用于兩點的情況）for

one

thing,

for

another

thing（適用于兩點的情況）連接詞副詞替換原則連接副詞的用法：高

?？歼B接副詞，實際上是

對句子邏輯關(guān)系的。Though

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，表前后分句同時發(fā)生Moreover，“另外”承接表遞進？？However：“然而”表讓步轉(zhuǎn)折。Besides“另外”還有，表遞進。Instead，“相反“前后分句相反。。注意，時間關(guān)系與因果關(guān)系的區(qū)別，漢語常把時間關(guān)系和因果關(guān)系的關(guān)系The es

of

skilled

workers

went

up。

,unskilled

workers

saw

theirearnings

fall.(2009.浙江)A

Moreover

B

Therefore

C

meanwhile Dotherwise前半句：技術(shù)工人的收入增加了，

后半句：非技術(shù)工人的收入下降了。Meanwhile,與此同時，符合題意94Not

only….but

also?記倒裝。96公式：簡單句+并列連詞+簡單句People e

nearer

by

using

theInternet,

meanwhile,

they

alsoe

far

away

from

theirfriends.基礎(chǔ)寫作7原則定語從句什么時候用？怎么用？The

girl

is

Mary.

We

saw

heryesterday.The

girl

that

/who

we

saw

yesterday

isMary將第二個公因式，改成who或which，將第二個句子放在第一個公因式之后1.

She

is

the

new

student.

I

want

to

introduce

her

to

you.She

is

the

new

student

whom

I

want

to

introduce

to

you

.2.Please

pass

me

thebook.It

is

lying

on

the

table.Please

pass

me

the

book

which

is

lying

on

the

tabl3.The

professor

is

Dr.

Williams.His

daughter

teaches

you

English.The

professor

whose

daughter

teaches

you

English

is

Dr.

Williams4.

He

studies

hard

at

school

when

he

was

young.It leads

to

his

successin

hislater

life.Hestudies

hardat

school

when

he

was

young,which

leads

to

his

success

in

his

later

life

.改寫句子“I

see

manyrunning

creatures.

They are

made

of

metaland

glass.

Theirfeet are

round.

They

have

four

eyes.Two

of

the

four

eyes

are

red.

Inside

I

see

soft

shapes.They

can

move.”I

see

many

runningcreatures

which

/

that

aremade

ofmetalandglass.

Their

feet

are

roundandthey

have

four

eyes,

two

of

whichare

red.Inside

I

see

soft

shapesthat

can

move.改寫句子I

see

many

running

creatures.

Theyare

made

ofmetal

and

glass.

Their

feet

are

round.

Theyhavefour

eyes.

Two

of

the

four

eyes

are

red.

Inside

Isee

soft

shapes.

They

can

move.I

see

many

running

creatures

which/thatare

madeof

metal

and

glass.

Their

feet

are

roundand

they

havefour

eyes,

Two

of

which

are

red.Inside

I

see

softshapes

that

can

move.Our

class

is

a

big

family;

it

consists

of

12

girlsand

50

boys.

Most

of

them

are

mainly

fromtheCountryside.

Zhang

Qiang

is

a

kind-heartedboy.

He

is

always

ready

to

help

others.

He

is

sucha

good

boythatwe

all

like

him.Our

class

is

a

big

family

which

consists

of

12girlsand

50

boys,

most

of

whom

are

mainly

fromthecountryside.

ZhangQiang

is

a

kind-heartedboy,

who

is

always

ready

to

help

others.

He

isa

good

boy

whom

we

all

like.句子擴展Contribute

A

to

BMr.

Qian

contributed

a

lot

to

our

country.Mr.

Qian

contributed

a

lot

to

our

country

inbuilding

the

missiles.Mr.

Qian,

who

studied

in

the

US

and

returnedto

his

motherland

during

the

hardest

years,contributed

a

lot

to

our

country

in

building

themissiles.句子擴展Mr.

Qian

contributed

a

lot

to

our

country

inbuilding

the

missiles.Mr.

Qian

studied

in

the

usMr.

Qian

returned

to

his

mother

landduring

the

hardest

yearts.Mr.

Qian,

who

studied

in

the

US

and

returnedto

his

motherland

during

the

hardest

years,contributed

a

lot

to

our

country

in

building

themissiles.practice當(dāng)句子中出現(xiàn)三個公因式，將2，3公因式變成who，將2，3兩句話用and連接放在第一個公因式后practiceThe

girl

issinging

asong.China

is

abig

country.With

a

large

population,

China,

which

has

a

longhistory,

is

a

big

country

that

sits

on

the

south-eastof

Asia.The

girl,

Catherine,

a

successful

business

woman,who

graduated

from

Cambridge

University

eightyears

ago,

learning

Chinese

and

Spanish

in

HarvardUniversity

at

present,

is

singing

a

fine-soundingsongwhich

was

written

for

her

25-year-old

birthdayby

her

handsome

and

gentle

boyfriend.了很大的Those

who高的效率.e

the

Internet

hold

that

itbrings

us

great

convenience

and

efficiency.Those

who

~~~（...的人...）須考慮的另一個因素是,電視在我們的日常生活中起到了教育的作用.Anotherfactor

we

must

consider

is

that

evplays

an

educational

role

in

our

daily

life.n.+

attributive

clause

+is

that/vt.那些擁護互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的人認為,它給

帶來Translation不努力學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)生是不會通過考試的.她上周買的房子非常好看.這就是他

工作的地方.已經(jīng)取得了很大的進步,這使老師非常高興.眾所周知,他是一個好學(xué)生的首都,它是一座美麗的城市.的原名(real

name)是

,在他的一生中他寫了很多的小說和散文(prose).,他在學(xué)校已經(jīng)學(xué)習(xí)了3年,,而且中文也講得8.Jack來自他不僅經(jīng)常幫助很不錯.Students

who

don’t

study

hard

will

notpassthe

exam.

The

house,

which

she

bought

last

week,

isvery

nice.This

is

the

place

where

his

father

works.akes

You

havemade

great

progress,

whiyour

teacher

very

happy.As

is

knownto

all,

he

is

a

good

student.

Beijing,

which

is

the

capital

city

of

China,

is

abeautiful

city.

Luxun,

whose

real

name

is

ZhouShuren,wrote

many

novels

and

proses

in

his

wholelife.8.

Jack

is

a

student

of

our

school,

whocomes

from

Canada.

He

has

studied

inour

school

for

three

years.

He

oftenhelps

us

learn

English,

and

he

speaksChinese

very

well.Jacks

comes

from

Canada.

He

is

astudent

from

our

school

where

he

hasstudied

for

3

years.

Not

only

does

heoften

help

us

learn

English

but

also

hespeaks

Chinese

fluently

as

well.定語從句的

原則？That

在定語從句作賓語省略，這是在生活中出現(xiàn)的同時又給

提示：當(dāng)句子出現(xiàn)兩個名詞，第二是定語從句定語從句As，which

代指一句話意味意味著什么？1.評論前一句話，用which2.表時間先后，before

which3.表原因，

due to

which4.

表條件We

study

hard

to

realize

our

dream,……

◆高級定語從句：若定語從句中的動詞帶有介詞，只需將介詞移至先行詞后。

We

came

to

a

place

to

which

they

hadnever

paid

a

visit

before.狀語從句1.時間狀語從句常用引導(dǎo)詞:when特殊引導(dǎo)詞:thesecond???the

minute,the

moment,the

dayThe

children

ran

away

from

the

orchard(果園)————they

saw

the

guard.the

moment,

the

minute,

the

second,the

instant2．地點狀語從句常用引導(dǎo)詞：where特殊引導(dǎo)詞：wherever,

anywhere,everywhere雙重介賓短語使用。

you

go,

you

should

work

hard.條件4.目的狀語從句常用引導(dǎo)詞：so

that,

in

order

thatin

case特殊引導(dǎo)詞：on

purpose

thatTheteacherraisedhisvoice

the

studentsin

the

back

could

hear

more

clearly.5．結(jié)果狀語從句常用引導(dǎo)詞：so…that,

such…that,Hegotup

early

that

he

caught

the

bus.It’s

a

good

chance

that

we

must

not

miss

it.1.

so 2.

such6．條件狀語從句常用引導(dǎo)詞：if,unless特殊引導(dǎo)詞：oncondition

that（在…情況下）as

long

a

s?Youwillcertainlysucceed

you

keep

on

trying.8．比較狀語從句常用引導(dǎo)詞：than特殊引導(dǎo)詞：A

is

to

B

what

/as

X

is

to

Y;as….asFood

is

to

men

what

oil

is

to

machine.9.方式狀語從句常用引導(dǎo)詞：as,as

if(好像，似乎)She

behaved

as

if

she

were

the

boss.That’s

why->

soSo

no

medicine

is

found

for

it.That’s

why

no

medicine

is

found

for

it.

Cultural

integration

is

extremelysignificant,

SO

IT should

be

encouraged.Cultural

integration

is

extremelysignificant,

and

that’s

why

should

beencouraged.非謂語動詞非謂語動詞分句主語和主句主語一致，主句不變從句去掉分句主語，連詞和時態(tài)主動ing，

ed，目的to

do時間The

children

ran

away

from

the

orchard(果園)when

they

saw

the

guard.Seeing

the

guard,the

children

ran

away

fromthe

orchard(果園).原因Because

he

is

no

more

than

12

yearsold,his

height

of

1.80

m

is

quite

remarkable.Being

no

more

than

12

years

old,

hisheight

of

1.80

m

is

quite

remarkable.條件狀語

You

will

certainly

succeed

if

you

keep

ontrying.kee on

trying,

you

will

certainly

succeed.伴隨狀語He

comes

back

from

the

USA

and

hebrings

his

wife

and

son.He

comes

back

from

the

USA,

bringinghis

wife

and

son.1.

When

they

heard

the

news

,

theyimmedia y

set

off

for

Shanghai.Hearing

the

news,

theyimmedia

yset

off

for

Shanghai.改寫句子：,

he,

he2.

After

he

finished

hiswatched

TV

for

a

while.Having

finished

his

watched

TV

for

a

while.3.

When

the

library

is

completed,itwill

be

open

to

the

public

pleted,

the

library

will

be

opento

thepublic

nextyear.4.

Although

I

admit

what

she

hassaid,

Istill

think

that

she

hasn’ttried

her

best

.盡管承認她所說的話，但我仍然認為她沒有盡最大的努力。Admitting

what

she

has

said,

I

stillthink

that

she

hasn’t

tried

her

best.5.If

you

work

hard,

you’llsucceed.Working

hard,

you’ll

succeed.6.

She

stoodby

the

window

andwatched

thesunsets.She

stood

by

thewindowwatching

thesunsets.7.

Our

English

teacher

speakslouderin

order

that

he

canmake

himselfheard.Our

English

teacher

speaks

louderto

make

himself

heard.8.

She

walked

out

of

the

classroom

andmany

students

followed

her.She

walked

out

of

the

classroom，followed

by

many

students.She

walked

out

of

the classroom

andshe

is

followed

by

many

students.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：非謂語（時間/原因/條件等狀語），S+V+其它.S+V+其它，非謂語（結(jié)果/伴隨等狀語）第一屆世博會在倫敦舉辦，有158年的光輝歷史2010年 世博會將歷時184天，將吸引國內(nèi)外200多個國家。世博會的主旨：關(guān)注對新的生活觀念的探索。4.：Better

City,Better

Life,參與國將展示他們在城市文明方面的成就。5.

世博會被譽為經(jīng)濟和文化的 盛會，對主辦國有著深遠的影響。第一屆世博會在倫敦舉辦，有158年的光輝歷史。The

WorldExpowas held

inLondon,

and

it

has

a

proudhistory

of158

years.The

World

Expo

was heldinLondon,

having

aproud

history

of158

years.2010年

世博會將歷時184天，將吸引國內(nèi)外200多個國家。World

Expo

2010

Shanghai

will

beheld

for184

days,

and

will

attractmore

than

200

countries

from

homeand

abroad.World

Expo

2010

Shanghai

will

beheld

for

184

days,attracting

morethan

200

countries

from

home

andabroad.One

day,

I

broke

my

mother’s

favoritevase,ran

away

and

hid

in

her

house

for

fearof

the

punishment,

but

when

she

found

out

what

happened,

she

didn’t

help

me

to

cover

the

secret.

She

persuaded

me

to

behonest

and l

my

mom

the

truth

instead.

Atlast,

my

mom

forgave

me

due

to

myhonesty.Finding

out

what

happened,shedidn’t

help

me

tocover

the

secret.如果主語不一致怎么辦保留主語其他照舊現(xiàn)在分詞獨立主格When

he

broke

windows,

he

waspunished

by

mother.Breaking

windows,

he

was

punished

bymother.Although

his

brother

broke

windows,

he

waspunished

by

motherHis

brother

Breaking

windows,

he

waspunished

by

mother.冬天來了，天氣越來越冷了。Winter

coming,

weather

gets

colder

andcolder.雨已經(jīng)停了，他出去散步。The

rain

having

stopped,

he

went

out

for

awalk.定語從句變非謂語動詞The

girl

who

wrote

good

compositionsis

spoken

highly

of.The

girl

writing

good

compositions

isspoken

highly

of.過去分詞短語做定語The

book

sells

well.

The

girl

wrote

it.The

book

which

is

written

by

the

girlsells

well.The

book

written

by

the

girl

sells

well.使用不定式疑問詞＋不定式結(jié)構(gòu)疑問詞who,

what,

which,

when,

where,whether,how加to

do

在句中作主語、賓語、表語。When

to

leave

for

London

has

not

beendecided

yet.（不定式在句子中做主語）②Mr.

Smith

didn't

know

whether

to

leave

orstay

there.

（不定式在句子中做賓語）③I

asked

Professor

Xu

how

to

learn

Englishwell.（不定式在句子中做間接賓語）④The

question

was

where

to

get

themedicine

needed.（不定式在句子中表語）With

結(jié)構(gòu)原則With表擁有：I

want

to

have

a

pen

friend,hopefully

agirl

in

her

early

twenties,

and

withinterests

similar

to

mine.（2007

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