初中中考英語沖刺作文書寫思路詳細講解優(yōu)質(zhì)公開課課件

中考英語作文快速提分

中考英語作文快速提分

1英語作文有多難？難于上青天？！英語作文有多難？難于上青天？！2初三學(xué)生英語作文調(diào)查問卷

1:你的英語作文得分通常是：A.≥18

B.15~17C.10~13

D.5~10E.<102：你覺得英語作文

A.難B.還好

C.簡單D.很難E.很簡單3：你最常用的句子有哪些？Asweallknow，Itis+adj.+forsb+todosthif條件句Ithink...so…that…4：你最常用到的形容詞有哪些？beautifulwonderfulgoodhappyimportanteasypopularcareful5：你最常用的動詞有哪些？thinklearnhelphavebelikelovemakewatchreadknowgetplaysee

初三學(xué)生英語作文調(diào)查問卷

1:你的英語作文得分通常是：36：你最常用的的邏輯詞是哪些？優(yōu)秀：Therefore,because,although,however,furthermore,Inaword中等：because,but,if,or,and,so,first,next,after,then7：你的作文中用到過名言警句嗎？如果有，用過哪些？有：Failureisthemotherofsuccess.Goodmedicinetastesbad.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Practicemakesperfect.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.AllroadsleadtoRome.8：你希望獲得寫作中哪些方面的幫助？優(yōu)秀：句型、易錯點、結(jié)構(gòu)中等：句型、詞匯、邏輯稍差：句型、6：你最常用的的邏輯詞是哪些？4內(nèi)容：扣分制（8分）1.記敘文：6w+時態(tài)2.議論文：分清要求寫的是How？還是Why？語言：扣分制（8分）1.拼寫：每錯扣0.5分，同一錯誤不重復(fù)計數(shù)。

2.語法：每錯扣0.5分，同上

3.標(biāo)點：每兩處錯誤扣0.5分，但扣分總和不超過1分。4.大小寫：每兩處錯誤扣0.5分，但扣分總和不超過1分。

5.詞數(shù)：50-59詞之間者,每少5個詞扣0.5分，詞不成句不給分。

組織結(jié)構(gòu)（4分）

8+8+3~48+7+2~37+7+1~26+6+0.5~1.56+5+0分值分布內(nèi)容：扣分制（8分）分值分布5作文表達：在娛樂和獲取信息的方式多種多樣的今天,我們還有必要閱讀嗎?書本會消失在人類歷史發(fā)展的長河嗎?作文表達：6

開頭第1句：開門見山，表明觀點。There’snodoubtthat

beoneofthe+a.最高級+n.復(fù)數(shù)+狀語（毫無疑問…）e.g.There’snodoubtthatreadingisoneofthemostimportantthingsintheworld.Thereisnodenyingthat+S.+V.

(不可否認

)e.g.Thereisnodenyingthatreadingisoneofthemostimportantthingsintheworld.開頭第1句：開門見山，表明觀點。7第2句：簡單明了，引出話題。1.不用說……

Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…eg：Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthereisnoendtolearning2.我認為，Inmyopinion，=Frommypointofview，eg:Frommypointofview，readingcanneverdisappeareventhoughthesocietyhasdevelopedsofastinrecentyears.3.我個人認為，AsfarasIamconcerned,readingcanneverdisappearwiththefastdevelopmentofsociety.第2句：簡單明了，引出話題。8邏輯清晰，層次漸進。正文邏輯清晰，層次漸進。正文9邏輯過渡詞⑴排序關(guān)系firstofall;secondly;lastbutnotleast,⑵并列關(guān)系and;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwith...⑶舉例關(guān)系forexample;forinstance;like;suchas，⑷轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系but;however;while;though;onthecontrary，⑸因果關(guān)系because;since;thanksto;asaresult;thus;therefore，⑹歸納總結(jié)inaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusion,⑺遞進關(guān)系asaconsequence;what’sworse;worsestill;furthermore；moreover；inaddition邏輯過渡詞⑴排序關(guān)系firstofall;second10Firstofall,readinggivesussomeplacestogowhenwehavetostaywhereweare.Themorepagesyouread,theharderitistoshutthebook.觀點1，另辟蹊徑。Firstofall,

觀點1（ving作主語）.

展開

Firstofall,readinggivesus11Wecanwalktoschoolinsteadoftakingabus.第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworld一天一蘋果，醫(yī)生遠離我。第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworld勤奮的hard-working—diligent第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworld立即immediatelyPracticemakesperfect.標(biāo)點：每兩處錯誤扣0.注意focus—payattentiontodoingsthAsaresult,withreadingmore,wewouldgrowintoabetterperson.能夠can—beabletodosth復(fù)數(shù)+狀語（毫無疑問…）大小寫：每兩處錯誤扣0.AllroadsleadtoRome.有：Failureisthemotherofsuccess.Theythemselvesshould.=Christmassongsareusedtomakeusmorecarelesswithourmoneyduringthefestiveseason.開心的happy—delightful21觀點2，升華高度

What’smore,

觀點2（被動語態(tài)）.

展開eg:What’smore,it'sgenerallyconsideredthatreadingdoalotofbenefittoourstudents.itnotonlycanmakeourafter-schoollifemoremeaningful,butalsoitcanexpandourhorizons.Asaresult,withreadingmore,wewouldgrowintoabetterperson.

Wecanwalktoschoolinstead1221前后照應(yīng)萬能呼應(yīng)結(jié)尾21前后照應(yīng)結(jié)尾1331結(jié)尾第一句：Tosumup,onlybydoingcanwe…第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworldwillbecomemuchmorepeacefulandharmonious.31結(jié)尾第一句：Tosumup,onlybydoi14化妝篇技巧1：妙用形容詞技巧2：妙用副詞技巧3：妙用動詞化妝篇技巧1：妙用形容詞技巧2：妙用副詞技巧3：妙用動詞15技巧4：被動語態(tài)技巧5：妙用從句技巧6：名言警句技巧7：學(xué)霸句型技巧4：被動語態(tài)技巧5：妙用從句技巧6：名言警句技巧7：16技巧1：妙用形容詞勤奮的hard-working—diligent聰明的clever—intelligent重要的important—essential美麗的beautiful—attractive開心的happy—delightful有害的bad—beharmfulto有意義的meaningful獨立的independent有責(zé)任的responsible有效果的effective有效率的efficient技巧1：妙用形容詞17技巧2：妙用副詞

幾乎almost尤其especially立即immediately寧靜地peacefully完全地completely

耐心地patiently有效果地effectively令我驚訝的是Tomysurprise技巧2：妙用副詞

幾乎almost18技巧3：妙用動詞

知道know—cometorealize/understand

解決solve—dealwith

給give—providewith

提高improve—makeprogress期待expect—lookforwardtodoingsth.能夠can—beabletodosth滿意satisfy—besatisfiedwith使用use—makefulluseof扮演act—playanimportantpartin注意focus—payattentiontodoingsth做到succeedindoingsth采取措施takemeasurestodosth技巧3：妙用動詞知道know—cometorea19技巧4：被動語態(tài)SomeshopownersuseChristmassongsduringthefestiveseasontomakeusmorecarelesswithourmoney.=Christmassongsareusedtomakeusmorecarelesswithourmoneyduringthefestiveseason.技巧4：被動語態(tài)SomeshopownersuseC20Heinterviewedsomeneighborsofhersinordertogetinformation.=Heinterviewedsomeneighborsofherssothathecangetinformation.Hewassoexcitedthatherealizedhisfatherarrangedthisforhim.技巧5：妙用從句

Heinterviewedsomeneighbors21健康：Oneappleaday,keepsthedoctoraway.

一天一蘋果，醫(yī)生遠離我。友情：Afiendinneedisafriendindeed.

患難見真情。學(xué)習(xí)：Nevertoooldtolearn.

活到老，學(xué)到老。毅力：Practicemakesperfect.

熟能生巧。方法：AllroadsleadtoRome.

條條道路通羅馬。Asanoldsayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者，事竟成。.”技巧6：格言警句健康：Oneappleaday,keepsthe224211.妙用插入語

Luckily,infact，,asIseeit,,forexample,

,however,,whichissoessentialforus,

技巧7：學(xué)霸句型2.妙用同位語

Hehimself...

Theythemselvesshould...

Westudentsshouldconcentrateon...

Weteenagersmustdo...4211.妙用插入語

Luckily,infact，23213.妙用倒裝句

Onlybydoing…canwedosth

4.主語從句

WhatIhavelearntisthatnothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.

Whatattractmemostisthat

5.定語從句HeisthemosthonestpersonthatIhaveeverseen.

213.妙用倒裝句

Onlybydoing…canwe24補妝:修改瑕疵拼寫正確動詞時態(tài)名詞單復(fù)標(biāo)點無誤書寫美觀補妝:修改瑕疵拼寫正確25

TheWaytoKeepHealthy

It'simportantforustobehealthyinourlife.Wecan'tstudyorworkwellwithout

ahealthybody.

There'remanywaystokeephealthy.

Firstofall,

weshouldkeeptaking

exerciseeveryday.Wecanwalktoschool

insteadoftakingabus.Afterschool,wecanspendanhourplayingballgames.Ifwelive

inahigh-rise,wecanwalkupstairsordownstairs.Secondly,weshouldhavea

balanced

diet.Finally,

wemustremember:Earlytobed,earlytoriseisthewaytokeephealthy,wealthyandwise.

TheWay26Thankyou!Thankyou!27

中考英語作文快速提分

中考英語作文快速提分

28英語作文有多難？難于上青天？！英語作文有多難？難于上青天？！29初三學(xué)生英語作文調(diào)查問卷

1:你的英語作文得分通常是：A.≥18

B.15~17C.10~13

D.5~10E.<102：你覺得英語作文

A.難B.還好

C.簡單D.很難E.很簡單3：你最常用的句子有哪些？Asweallknow，Itis+adj.+forsb+todosthif條件句Ithink...so…that…4：你最常用到的形容詞有哪些？beautifulwonderfulgoodhappyimportanteasypopularcareful5：你最常用的動詞有哪些？thinklearnhelphavebelikelovemakewatchreadknowgetplaysee

初三學(xué)生英語作文調(diào)查問卷

1:你的英語作文得分通常是：306：你最常用的的邏輯詞是哪些？優(yōu)秀：Therefore,because,although,however,furthermore,Inaword中等：because,but,if,or,and,so,first,next,after,then7：你的作文中用到過名言警句嗎？如果有，用過哪些？有：Failureisthemotherofsuccess.Goodmedicinetastesbad.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Practicemakesperfect.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.AllroadsleadtoRome.8：你希望獲得寫作中哪些方面的幫助？優(yōu)秀：句型、易錯點、結(jié)構(gòu)中等：句型、詞匯、邏輯稍差：句型、6：你最常用的的邏輯詞是哪些？31內(nèi)容：扣分制（8分）1.記敘文：6w+時態(tài)2.議論文：分清要求寫的是How？還是Why？語言：扣分制（8分）1.拼寫：每錯扣0.5分，同一錯誤不重復(fù)計數(shù)。

2.語法：每錯扣0.5分，同上

3.標(biāo)點：每兩處錯誤扣0.5分，但扣分總和不超過1分。4.大小寫：每兩處錯誤扣0.5分，但扣分總和不超過1分。

5.詞數(shù)：50-59詞之間者,每少5個詞扣0.5分，詞不成句不給分。

組織結(jié)構(gòu)（4分）

8+8+3~48+7+2~37+7+1~26+6+0.5~1.56+5+0分值分布內(nèi)容：扣分制（8分）分值分布32作文表達：在娛樂和獲取信息的方式多種多樣的今天,我們還有必要閱讀嗎?書本會消失在人類歷史發(fā)展的長河嗎?作文表達：33

開頭第1句：開門見山，表明觀點。There’snodoubtthat

beoneofthe+a.最高級+n.復(fù)數(shù)+狀語（毫無疑問…）e.g.There’snodoubtthatreadingisoneofthemostimportantthingsintheworld.Thereisnodenyingthat+S.+V.

(不可否認

)e.g.Thereisnodenyingthatreadingisoneofthemostimportantthingsintheworld.開頭第1句：開門見山，表明觀點。34第2句：簡單明了，引出話題。1.不用說……

Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…eg：Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthereisnoendtolearning2.我認為，Inmyopinion，=Frommypointofview，eg:Frommypointofview，readingcanneverdisappeareventhoughthesocietyhasdevelopedsofastinrecentyears.3.我個人認為，AsfarasIamconcerned,readingcanneverdisappearwiththefastdevelopmentofsociety.第2句：簡單明了，引出話題。35邏輯清晰，層次漸進。正文邏輯清晰，層次漸進。正文36邏輯過渡詞⑴排序關(guān)系firstofall;secondly;lastbutnotleast,⑵并列關(guān)系and;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwith...⑶舉例關(guān)系forexample;forinstance;like;suchas，⑷轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系but;however;while;though;onthecontrary，⑸因果關(guān)系because;since;thanksto;asaresult;thus;therefore，⑹歸納總結(jié)inaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusion,⑺遞進關(guān)系asaconsequence;what’sworse;worsestill;furthermore；moreover；inaddition邏輯過渡詞⑴排序關(guān)系firstofall;second37Firstofall,readinggivesussomeplacestogowhenwehavetostaywhereweare.Themorepagesyouread,theharderitistoshutthebook.觀點1，另辟蹊徑。Firstofall,

觀點1（ving作主語）.

展開

Firstofall,readinggivesus38Wecanwalktoschoolinsteadoftakingabus.第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworld一天一蘋果，醫(yī)生遠離我。第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworld勤奮的hard-working—diligent第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworld立即immediatelyPracticemakesperfect.標(biāo)點：每兩處錯誤扣0.注意focus—payattentiontodoingsthAsaresult,withreadingmore,wewouldgrowintoabetterperson.能夠can—beabletodosth復(fù)數(shù)+狀語（毫無疑問…）大小寫：每兩處錯誤扣0.AllroadsleadtoRome.有：Failureisthemotherofsuccess.Theythemselvesshould.=Christmassongsareusedtomakeusmorecarelesswithourmoneyduringthefestiveseason.開心的happy—delightful21觀點2，升華高度

What’smore,

觀點2（被動語態(tài)）.

展開eg:What’smore,it'sgenerallyconsideredthatreadingdoalotofbenefittoourstudents.itnotonlycanmakeourafter-schoollifemoremeaningful,butalsoitcanexpandourhorizons.Asaresult,withreadingmore,wewouldgrowintoabetterperson.

Wecanwalktoschoolinstead3921前后照應(yīng)萬能呼應(yīng)結(jié)尾21前后照應(yīng)結(jié)尾4031結(jié)尾第一句：Tosumup,onlybydoingcanwe…第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworldwillbecomemuchmorepeacefulandharmonious.31結(jié)尾第一句：Tosumup,onlybydoi41化妝篇技巧1：妙用形容詞技巧2：妙用副詞技巧3：妙用動詞化妝篇技巧1：妙用形容詞技巧2：妙用副詞技巧3：妙用動詞42技巧4：被動語態(tài)技巧5：妙用從句技巧6：名言警句技巧7：學(xué)霸句型技巧4：被動語態(tài)技巧5：妙用從句技巧6：名言警句技巧7：43技巧1：妙用形容詞勤奮的hard-working—diligent聰明的clever—intelligent重要的important—essential美麗的beautiful—attractive開心的happy—delightful有害的bad—beharmfulto有意義的meaningful獨立的independent有責(zé)任的responsible有效果的effective有效率的efficient技巧1：妙用形容詞44技巧2：妙用副詞

幾乎almost尤其especially立即immediately寧靜地peacefully完全地completely

耐心地patiently有效果地effectively令我驚訝的是Tomysurprise技巧2：妙用副詞

幾乎almost45技巧3：妙用動詞

知道know—cometorealize/understand

解決solve—dealwith

給give—providewith

提高improve—makeprogress期待expect—lookforwardtodoingsth.能夠can—beabletodosth滿意satisfy—besatisfiedwith使用use—makefulluseof扮演act—playanimportantpartin注意focus—payattentiontodoingsth做到succeedindoingsth采取措施takemeasurestodosth技巧3：妙用動詞知道know—cometorea46技巧4：被動語態(tài)SomeshopownersuseChristmassongsduringthefestiveseasontomakeusmorecarelesswithourmoney.=Christmassongsareusedtomakeusmorecarelesswithourmoneyduringthefestiveseason.技巧4：被動語態(tài)SomeshopownersuseC47Heinterviewedsomeneighborsofhersinordertogetinformation.=Heinterviewedsomeneighborsofherssothathecangetinformation.Hewassoexcitedthatherealizedhisfatherarrangedthisforhim.技巧5：妙用從句

Heinterviewedsomeneighbors48健康：Oneappleaday,keepsthedoctoraway.

一天一蘋果，醫(yī)生遠離我。友情：Afiendinneedisafriendindeed.

患難見真情。學(xué)習(xí)：Nevertoooldtolearn.

活到老，學(xué)到老。毅力：Pract