高三英語(yǔ)寫作課件

英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)

英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)1BeautifyyourComposition高考作文的華麗變身遇難心不慌，遇易心更細(xì)。BeautifyyourComposition高考作文的2全國(guó)Ⅰ卷—2012年作文（25分）假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)((theInternet)上得知一個(gè)國(guó)際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營(yíng)，歡迎各國(guó)學(xué)生參加。請(qǐng)寫一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加。內(nèi)容主要包括:1.自我介紹(包括英語(yǔ)能力);2.參加意圖(介紹中國(guó)、了解其他國(guó)家);3.希望獲準(zhǔn)。注意:1.數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好.

DearSirorMadam,________________________________________Regards,LiHua全國(guó)Ⅰ卷—2012年作文（25分）3DearSirorMadam,I'mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.IreadtheannouncementofthesummercampthatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.IknowthatyouwelcomestudentsfromdifferentcountriesandI'dliketotakepartinit.

I'vebeenlearningEnglishfor10years,andspeakfluentEnglish.Whatismore,I’llbeabletotellstudentsfromothercountriesaboutChinaandlearnabouttheircountriesaswell.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyoursummercamp.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Regards,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,4評(píng)分原則

①評(píng)分時(shí)先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。②詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。③評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。④拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。⑤如書寫較差以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。評(píng)分原則5高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（21-25）：完全完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的，覆蓋所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用了豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，語(yǔ)法與高級(jí)詞匯有少些錯(cuò)誤，全篇流暢，連詞使用較好。第四檔（16-20）：完全完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的，寫漏了一兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)法和詞匯基本正確，有少些錯(cuò)誤，主要是想使用高級(jí)詞匯與復(fù)雜句子所致。高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（21-25）：完全完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)6第二檔（6-10）：未適當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，有要點(diǎn)，但表達(dá)不清晰，只有一些句子可讀。第一檔（1-5）：未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，只是一些字詞的堆積，不成句，讓讀者根本不明白寫什么。0分：空白，或者抄寫一些無關(guān)的東西。第三檔（11-15）：大錯(cuò)（時(shí)態(tài)、句子結(jié)構(gòu)等）超過五六處，不能及格，寫漏了一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋了主要要點(diǎn)，基本上讓人能夠看懂，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期目的。第二檔（6-10）：未適當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，有要點(diǎn)，7Whatmakes

agoodessay?DiscussionWhatmakesDiscussion8contentstructurelanguagefaithfulness信expressiveness達(dá)elegance雅準(zhǔn)確，完整緊湊，連貫高級(jí)，多變contentstructurelanguagefaithf9Content人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，體裁要點(diǎn)faithfulness準(zhǔn)確完整Content人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，體裁要點(diǎn)faithfulness準(zhǔn)10Structure三段式：總-分-總＼開頭-主體-結(jié)尾段與段，句與句的銜接expressiveness緊湊連貫Structure三段式：總-分-總＼開頭-主體-結(jié)尾段與11

BethoughtfulBeingthoughtful(體諒人）simplymeansthinkingofothersbeforeyourself.Whatyousayordowillhaveaneffectonothers._______,itisimportantthatyouthinkbeforeyousayordoanything._______,youcanavoidhurtingothers’feelings._______,athoughtlessactorremarkcanspoil(損害)aperfectrelationship.Remembertheserules.Ifyoudon’thaveanythingnicetosay,don’tsayanything.Ifyouthinkwhatyoudowillhurtothers,don’tdoit._______,whatgoesaroundcomesaround.(種什么因，得什么果）_______,wetrytobeapersonwhoisthoughtful.

therefore,inaword,moreover,inthisway,afterallThereforeInthiswayMoreoverAfterallInawordBethoughtfulBeingtho12Language

詞匯句式elegance高級(jí)多變Language詞匯句式elegance高級(jí)多變13詞匯使用的原則人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝

1、詞組優(yōu)先原則2、地道原則。3、避免重復(fù)原則4、后、高、長(zhǎng)原則—后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長(zhǎng)詞匯。四項(xiàng)原則詞匯使用的原則人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝1、詞組優(yōu)先原則2、地道原14

1、詞組優(yōu)先原則［原文］Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.［修正］Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.2、地道原則［原文］Throughtraveling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.［修正］Throughtraveling,Igained／obtainedalotofknowledge.1、詞組優(yōu)先原則［原文］Anewrailwayis15

4、后高長(zhǎng)原則—后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長(zhǎng)詞匯。原詞替換詞harddiligentlyveryratherextremelypayattentiontoattachimportancetohappydelightedenjoyablemoreandmoretheincreasingnumberof3、避免重復(fù)原則［原文］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.［修正］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.4、后高長(zhǎng)原則—后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長(zhǎng)詞匯。3、避免重復(fù)原則16Adj.聰明的、腦筋好的clever→smart→wise→bright→intelligentAdj.聰明的、腦筋好的17電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Cputersareofgreatimportanceinourlife.電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。18強(qiáng)調(diào)句倒裝句

with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)advancedsentences定語(yǔ)從句名詞性從句非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞常用諺語(yǔ)被動(dòng)句…強(qiáng)調(diào)句倒裝句with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)advanced定語(yǔ)從句名詞性從19一、肯定不如雙否好二、陳述不如倒裝妙三、主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧四、從句不如分詞傲高級(jí)句式使用的原則：抓住高考閱卷老師的心理的秘訣四“不如”謄寫規(guī)范不要少一、肯定不如雙否好二、陳述不如倒裝妙三、主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧四、從20一、肯定不如雙否好Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.

.Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.一、肯定不如雙否好Icouldn’thavemade211.Onlywhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectioncanwesolvetheproblemofpollution.2.Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.3.Diligentashewas,hefailedinpassingtheexam.4.Bynomeansshouldteenagersgetintothehabitofsmoking.二、陳述不如倒裝妙1.Onlywhenwerealizeth22每次可以借五本書最多借十天.Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.哪種表達(dá)法分?jǐn)?shù)會(huì)更高？三、主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧每次可以借五本書最多借十天.Wecanborrowfi23幾乎所有的狀語(yǔ)從句都可以變成獨(dú)立主格或分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，四、從句不如分詞傲主語(yǔ)一致就用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，主語(yǔ)不一致就用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)。即(n\pron)+doing\done代替從句作狀語(yǔ)。幾乎所有的狀語(yǔ)從句都可以變成獨(dú)立主格或分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，四、從句不如24[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.[修正]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.[原文]

Ifeverythingistakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.[修正]Everythingtakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’the25SummarycontentagoodessaystructurelanguagefaithfulnessexpressivenesseleganceSummarycontentagoodessaystru26Let'stry!Let'stry!27假如你是李明，你的加拿大網(wǎng)友John準(zhǔn)備出國(guó)旅游，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫封信，希望對(duì)他的海外旅游有所幫助：1.閱讀旅游手冊(cè)；2.留意天氣變化；3.備好地圖；4.與家人或朋友保持聯(lián)系。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.參考詞匯：guidebook旅游手冊(cè)。DearJohn,__________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiMing假如你是李明，你的加拿大網(wǎng)友John準(zhǔn)備出國(guó)旅游，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下28Onwriting----詞匯選擇與銜接詞運(yùn)用Onwriting29Section1:上下文的連貫性一篇好的書面表達(dá)，應(yīng)該行文連貫流暢，具有“邏輯美”。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊，使文章更為地道，更具“英語(yǔ)味”。記得使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,如以下的幾類。1。表增加的過渡詞：andthen,inaddition,furthermore,moreover,again,another,first,second2.表時(shí)間順序的過渡詞：afterwards,earlier,later,immediately,soon,next,suddenly,finallySection1:上下文的連貫性1。表增加的過渡詞：a303.表空間順序的過渡詞：near(to),far(from),infrontof,behind,beside,beyond4.表比較的過渡詞：inthesameway,justlike,justas5.表對(duì)照的過渡詞：but,still,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,inspiteof,eventhough6.表結(jié)果和原因：because,since,asaresult,therefore,thus,hopefully,otherwise7.表目的的過渡詞：forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat3.表空間順序的過渡詞：near(to),far(318。表強(qiáng)調(diào)的過渡詞：infact,indeed,surely,necessarily,certainly,withoutanydoubt,truly,aboveall,themostimportantofall,9.表解釋說明的過渡詞：forexample,inthiscase,forinstance10.表總結(jié)的過渡詞：finally,atlast,inconclusion,asIhaveshown,inotherwords,inbrief,ashasbeenstatedabove,8。表強(qiáng)調(diào)的過渡詞：infact,indeed,32Wehavebeenpreparingforthepastfewyears.Webelievethe29thOlympicswillbeagreatsuccess.Wehavebeenpreparingforthepastfewyears.Hopefully,the29thOlympicswillbeagreatsuccess.2.Heisrunninghisownresearchcompanyandhehasservedasavolunteer.Heisrunninghisownresearchcompany.In

addition,hehasservedasavolunteer.高三英語(yǔ)寫作課件333.Theboycomesfromapoorfamily.Theboydoesverywellinhisstudies.Theboyplanstoworkhiswaythroughcollege.Eventhoughhecomesfromapoorfamily,theboydoesverywellinhisstudies;furthermore,heplanstoworkhiswaythroughcollege.4.YaoMingisasuccessfulbasketballplayerandheisacommercialstar.YaoMingisasuccessfulbasketballplayerin

additionto/apartfrombeingacommercialstar.3.Theboycomesfromapoorf345.Youwillsucceedinyourtraining.Youworkhardandnevergiveup.Solongasyouworkhard,youwillsucceedinyourtraining.6.LastnightIhadadream.Iwasrunningonthetrack,competingwithLiuXiang.LastnightIhadadreamthat/whereIwasrunningonthetrack,competingwithLiuXiang.5.Youwillsucceedinyourtr357.Whenhereturnedtothemountain,hefoundthegold.Hebecamearichman.Whenhereturnedtothemountain,hefoundthegold.Asaresult,hebecamearichman.8.Apersonwithoutfriendsmightbelonelyandselfish.Onewhohasalargenumberoffriendsmustbewarm-heartedandfriendly.Apersonwithoutfriendsmightbelonelyandselfish.Onthecontrary,onewhohasalargenumberoffriendsmustbewarmheartedandfriendly.7.Whenhereturnedtothemou362.適當(dāng)利用短語(yǔ)取代單詞1）WeallthinkChenZhongheisagreatcoach.Weall____________ChenZhonghe.2)TheresultoftheOlympicswillbegood.TheOlympicswill_________tobeasuccessfulone.3)IamgoingtoBeijingtoattendtheopeningceremony.IamgoingtoBeijing________________attendingtheopeningceremony.thinkhighlyof

turnoutforthepurposeof2.適當(dāng)利用短語(yǔ)取代單詞thinkhighlyof374).Therearefiveringsrepresentingfivepartsoftheworld.TheOlympicRings____________fiveringsrepresentingfivepartsoftheworld.5)SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.Agoodidea________tome.Agoodideasuddenly_________me.SuddenlyI__________withagoodidea.consistofoccurred

struckcameup

4).Therearefiveringsrepres386)Foreignathleteswillfindthewayeasilywiththehelpofvolunteers.Foreignathleteswill________________findingthewaywiththehelpofvolunteers.7)Everyoneshoulddohisorherbest.Everyoneis_________dohisorherbest.havenotroublesupposedto

6)Foreignathleteswillfindt398)FormostforeignersanswersinChinesecannotbeunderstood.FormostforeignersanswersinChinesedon’t__________________.9)Whatyoudowillbeveryimportant.Whatyoudowill______________makeadifference.makesenseatall8)Formostforeignersanswers40available,confusing,belocated,thinkhighlyof,turnout,forthepurposeof,consistof,occurtosb.,strikesb.,comeupwith,havenotroublein,besupposedto,makesense,solution,possessthesameopportunity,explore,cheeks,treasure,getaflattire,hangupthephone,makesense,makeadifference,available,confusing,belocat41

逗號(hào)的作用：

凡逗號(hào)出現(xiàn)的場(chǎng)合無不體現(xiàn)英語(yǔ)的使用習(xí)慣或固定的表達(dá)方式,也與“為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯,具有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力”,以及實(shí)現(xiàn)“上下文的連貫性,即有效地使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言的得體性”這些重要的考試要求相關(guān)。以逗號(hào)為主線,研讀流暢、精采表達(dá)的各種方式,有可能使得寫作快速步上新的臺(tái)階,從而收到事半功倍的效果。

逗號(hào)的作用：

凡逗號(hào)出現(xiàn)的場(chǎng)合無不體現(xiàn)英語(yǔ)的42例句：

1.Itis,afterall,duetohisnegligence.2.Sheis,asIhavetoldyoubefore,veryfondofcollectingstamps.

3.Iam,therefore,verycarefulwhencrossingtheroad.

4.They,Mr.andMrs.White,willbethereinBeijingtomorrow.

5.Heis,tobeexact,sixteenyearsoldandisnotoldenoughtojointhearmy.例句：43(taskforsection2)一家賓館新開業(yè),希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為其寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1。地點(diǎn)：位于白山入口處500米。2。房間及價(jià)格：?jiǎn)稳碎g（20間），100元/天雙人間（15間），150元/天3。餐飲：中西餐，茶，咖啡4。游泳池：全天免費(fèi)開放。5。歡迎預(yù)定（bookinadvance)

BaishanMountainHotelisnowopenforbusiness…(taskforsection2)44BaishanMountainHotelisnowopenforbusiness.Ourhotelislocated500metersawayfromtheentrancetoBaishanMountain.Ithas20singleroomsand15doublerooms,allwithhotshowers.Asingleroomis100yuanandadoubleroom150yuanforonenight.Chinesefoodandwesternfoodarebothavailable.Youcanalsoenjoyyourselfatthecafédrinkingteaorcoffeeintheevening.Wealsohaveaswimmingpool,whichisopenalldayandfreeofcharge.Bookinginadvanceisrecommended.Allarewelcome!BaishanMountainHotelis45英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)

英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)46BeautifyyourComposition高考作文的華麗變身遇難心不慌，遇易心更細(xì)。BeautifyyourComposition高考作文的47全國(guó)Ⅰ卷—2012年作文（25分）假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)((theInternet)上得知一個(gè)國(guó)際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營(yíng)，歡迎各國(guó)學(xué)生參加。請(qǐng)寫一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加。內(nèi)容主要包括:1.自我介紹(包括英語(yǔ)能力);2.參加意圖(介紹中國(guó)、了解其他國(guó)家);3.希望獲準(zhǔn)。注意:1.數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好.

DearSirorMadam,________________________________________Regards,LiHua全國(guó)Ⅰ卷—2012年作文（25分）48DearSirorMadam,I'mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.IreadtheannouncementofthesummercampthatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.IknowthatyouwelcomestudentsfromdifferentcountriesandI'dliketotakepartinit.

I'vebeenlearningEnglishfor10years,andspeakfluentEnglish.Whatismore,I’llbeabletotellstudentsfromothercountriesaboutChinaandlearnabouttheircountriesaswell.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyoursummercamp.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Regards,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,49評(píng)分原則

①評(píng)分時(shí)先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。②詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。③評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。④拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。⑤如書寫較差以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。評(píng)分原則50高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（21-25）：完全完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的，覆蓋所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用了豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，語(yǔ)法與高級(jí)詞匯有少些錯(cuò)誤，全篇流暢，連詞使用較好。第四檔（16-20）：完全完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的，寫漏了一兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)法和詞匯基本正確，有少些錯(cuò)誤，主要是想使用高級(jí)詞匯與復(fù)雜句子所致。高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（21-25）：完全完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)51第二檔（6-10）：未適當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，有要點(diǎn)，但表達(dá)不清晰，只有一些句子可讀。第一檔（1-5）：未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，只是一些字詞的堆積，不成句，讓讀者根本不明白寫什么。0分：空白，或者抄寫一些無關(guān)的東西。第三檔（11-15）：大錯(cuò)（時(shí)態(tài)、句子結(jié)構(gòu)等）超過五六處，不能及格，寫漏了一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋了主要要點(diǎn)，基本上讓人能夠看懂，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期目的。第二檔（6-10）：未適當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，有要點(diǎn)，52Whatmakes

agoodessay?DiscussionWhatmakesDiscussion53contentstructurelanguagefaithfulness信expressiveness達(dá)elegance雅準(zhǔn)確，完整緊湊，連貫高級(jí)，多變contentstructurelanguagefaithf54Content人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，體裁要點(diǎn)faithfulness準(zhǔn)確完整Content人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，體裁要點(diǎn)faithfulness準(zhǔn)55Structure三段式：總-分-總＼開頭-主體-結(jié)尾段與段，句與句的銜接expressiveness緊湊連貫Structure三段式：總-分-總＼開頭-主體-結(jié)尾段與56

BethoughtfulBeingthoughtful(體諒人）simplymeansthinkingofothersbeforeyourself.Whatyousayordowillhaveaneffectonothers._______,itisimportantthatyouthinkbeforeyousayordoanything._______,youcanavoidhurtingothers’feelings._______,athoughtlessactorremarkcanspoil(損害)aperfectrelationship.Remembertheserules.Ifyoudon’thaveanythingnicetosay,don’tsayanything.Ifyouthinkwhatyoudowillhurtothers,don’tdoit._______,whatgoesaroundcomesaround.(種什么因，得什么果）_______,wetrytobeapersonwhoisthoughtful.

therefore,inaword,moreover,inthisway,afterallThereforeInthiswayMoreoverAfterallInawordBethoughtfulBeingtho57Language

詞匯句式elegance高級(jí)多變Language詞匯句式elegance高級(jí)多變58詞匯使用的原則人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝

1、詞組優(yōu)先原則2、地道原則。3、避免重復(fù)原則4、后、高、長(zhǎng)原則—后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長(zhǎng)詞匯。四項(xiàng)原則詞匯使用的原則人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝1、詞組優(yōu)先原則2、地道原59

1、詞組優(yōu)先原則［原文］Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.［修正］Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.2、地道原則［原文］Throughtraveling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.［修正］Throughtraveling,Igained／obtainedalotofknowledge.1、詞組優(yōu)先原則［原文］Anewrailwayis60

4、后高長(zhǎng)原則—后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長(zhǎng)詞匯。原詞替換詞harddiligentlyveryratherextremelypayattentiontoattachimportancetohappydelightedenjoyablemoreandmoretheincreasingnumberof3、避免重復(fù)原則［原文］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.［修正］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.4、后高長(zhǎng)原則—后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長(zhǎng)詞匯。3、避免重復(fù)原則61Adj.聰明的、腦筋好的clever→smart→wise→bright→intelligentAdj.聰明的、腦筋好的62電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Cputersareofgreatimportanceinourlife.電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。63強(qiáng)調(diào)句倒裝句

with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)advancedsentences定語(yǔ)從句名詞性從句非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞常用諺語(yǔ)被動(dòng)句…強(qiáng)調(diào)句倒裝句with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)advanced定語(yǔ)從句名詞性從64一、肯定不如雙否好二、陳述不如倒裝妙三、主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧四、從句不如分詞傲高級(jí)句式使用的原則：抓住高考閱卷老師的心理的秘訣四“不如”謄寫規(guī)范不要少一、肯定不如雙否好二、陳述不如倒裝妙三、主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧四、從65一、肯定不如雙否好Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.

.Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.一、肯定不如雙否好Icouldn’thavemade661.Onlywhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectioncanwesolvetheproblemofpollution.2.Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.3.Diligentashewas,hefailedinpassingtheexam.4.Bynomeansshouldteenagersgetintothehabitofsmoking.二、陳述不如倒裝妙1.Onlywhenwerealizeth67每次可以借五本書最多借十天.Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.哪種表達(dá)法分?jǐn)?shù)會(huì)更高？三、主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧每次可以借五本書最多借十天.Wecanborrowfi68幾乎所有的狀語(yǔ)從句都可以變成獨(dú)立主格或分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，四、從句不如分詞傲主語(yǔ)一致就用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，主語(yǔ)不一致就用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)。即(n\pron)+doing\done代替從句作狀語(yǔ)。幾乎所有的狀語(yǔ)從句都可以變成獨(dú)立主格或分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，四、從句不如69[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.[修正]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.[原文]

Ifeverythingistakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.[修正]Everythingtakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’the70SummarycontentagoodessaystructurelanguagefaithfulnessexpressivenesseleganceSummarycontentagoodessaystru71Let'stry!Let'stry!72假如你是李明，你的加拿大網(wǎng)友John準(zhǔn)備出國(guó)旅游，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫封信，希望對(duì)他的海外旅游有所幫助：1.閱讀旅游手冊(cè)；2.留意天氣變化；3.備好地圖；4.與家人或朋友保持聯(lián)系。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.參考詞匯：guidebook旅游手冊(cè)。DearJohn,__________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiMing假如你是李明，你的加拿大網(wǎng)友John準(zhǔn)備出國(guó)旅游，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下73Onwriting----詞匯選擇與銜接詞運(yùn)用Onwriting74Section1:上下文的連貫性一篇好的書面表達(dá)，應(yīng)該行文連貫流暢，具有“邏輯美”。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊，使文章更為地道，更具“英語(yǔ)味”。記得使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,如以下的幾類。1。表增加的過渡詞：andthen,inaddition,furthermore,moreover,again,another,first,second2.表時(shí)間順序的過渡詞：afterwards,earlier,later,immediately,soon,next,suddenly,finallySection1:上下文的連貫性1。表增加的過渡詞：a753.表空間順序的過渡詞：near(to),far(from),infrontof,behind,beside,beyond4.表比較的過渡詞：inthesameway,justlike,justas5.表對(duì)照的過渡詞：but,still,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,inspiteof,eventhough6.表結(jié)果和原因：because,since,asaresult,therefore,thus,hopefully,otherwise7.表目的的過渡詞：forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat3.表空間順序的過渡詞：near(to),far(768。表強(qiáng)調(diào)的過渡詞：infact,indeed,surely,necessarily,certainly,withoutanydoubt,truly,aboveall,themostimportantofall,9.表解釋說明的過渡詞：forexample,inthiscase,forinstance10.表總結(jié)的過渡詞：finally,atlast,inconclusion,asIhaveshown,inotherwords,inbrief,ashasbeenstatedabove,8。表強(qiáng)調(diào)的過渡詞：infact,indeed,77Wehavebeenpreparingforthepastfewyears.Webelievethe29thOlympicswillbeagreatsuccess.Wehavebeenpreparingforthepastfewyears.Hopefully,the29thOlympicswillbeagreatsuccess.2.Heisrunninghisownresearchcompanyandhehasservedasavolunteer.Heisrunninghisownresearchcompany.In

addition,hehasservedasavolunteer.高三英語(yǔ)寫作課件783.Theboycomesfromapoorfamily.Theboydoesverywellinhisstudies.Theboyplanstoworkhiswaythroughcollege.Eventhoughhecomesfromapoorfamily,theboydoesverywellinhisstudies;furthermore,heplanstoworkhiswaythroughcollege.4.YaoMingisasuccessfulbasketballplayerandheisacommercialstar.YaoMingisasuccessfulbasketballplayerin

additionto/apartfrombeingacommercialstar.3.Theboycomesfromapoorf795.Youwillsucceedinyourtraining.Youworkhardandnevergiveup.Solongasyouworkhard,youwillsucceedinyourtraining.6.LastnightIhadadream.Iwasrunningonthetrack,competingwithLiuXiang.LastnightIhadadreamthat/whereIwasrunningonthetrack,competingwithLiuXiang.5.Youwillsucceedinyourtr807.Whenhereturnedtothemountain,hefoundthegold.Hebecamearichman.Whenhereturnedtothemountain,hefoundthegold.Asaresult,hebecamearichman.8.Apersonwithoutfriendsmightbelonelyandselfish.Onewhohasalargenumberoffriendsmustbewarm-heartedandfriendly.Apersonwithoutfriendsmightbelonelyandselfish.Onthecontrary,onewhohasalargenumberoffriendsmustbewarmheartedandfriendly.7.Whenhereturnedtothemou812.適當(dāng)利用短語(yǔ)取代單詞1）WeallthinkChenZhongheisagreatcoach.Weall____________ChenZhonghe.2)TheresultoftheOlympicswillbegood.TheOlympicswill_________tobeasuccessfulone.3)IamgoingtoBeijingtoattendtheopeningceremony.IamgoingtoBeijing________________attendingtheopeningceremony.thinkhighlyof

turnoutforthepurposeof2.適當(dāng)利用短語(yǔ)取代單詞thinkhighlyof824).Therearefiveringsrepresentingfivepartsoftheworld.TheOlympicRings____________fiveringsrepresentingfivepartsoftheworld.5)SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.Agoodidea________tome.Agoodideasuddenly_________me.SuddenlyI__________withagoodidea.cons