四六級作文評析

六級作文評析

六級作文題型：六級作文題目出現(xiàn)的形式主要是論說文（解決問題型作文；分析利弊型作文；正反闡釋型作文），書信和圖表作文交替出現(xiàn)。(書信及圖表是解決問題型作文的一種子題型，把握好這類論說文就可以舉一反三、觸類旁通地攻克圖表及書信作文)。

評析六級作文范文PartIWriting(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheImportanceofReadingClassics.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1、閱讀經(jīng)典書籍對人的成長至關(guān)重要2、現(xiàn)在愿意閱讀經(jīng)典的人越來越少，原因是……3、我們大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做這道作文題是典型的“解決問題型”，這一類文章的寫作思路就是描述現(xiàn)狀－分析原因－提出解決方案，文章采用“三段總分式”展開?？梢钥闯觯}目給出的三點提綱其實很好地契合了這個思路。第一段，簡要提出經(jīng)典的重要性。如：1.Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthatreadingclassicsplaysanimportantroleinthegrowthofpeople.2.Nowadays,somepeople,especiallytheelderly,areoftheviewthatclassicsplayasignificantroleinourlife.之后展開說明閱讀經(jīng)典是如何影響成長的，可以用幾本名著來輔證自己的觀點。第二段，先總的說一下現(xiàn)在愿意閱讀經(jīng)典的人越來越少了，切忌lessandless這樣的惡俗語言。緊接著分析原因，可以想到的原因有很多，比如現(xiàn)代人的生活節(jié)奏越來越快，以致于忙得沒有時間靜下心來讀書；新興的媒體，比如網(wǎng)絡(luò)對于人們閱讀習(xí)慣的改變；現(xiàn)代社會快餐式文化產(chǎn)品的興起對經(jīng)典的沖擊，等等。

最后一段寫大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。分點分層次寫總是最簡單的方法，可以說大學(xué)生首先自己要閱讀經(jīng)典，同時可以鼓勵和影響身邊的人閱讀經(jīng)典；也可以說政府文化部門應(yīng)該做什么，大學(xué)應(yīng)該做什么來鼓勵閱讀經(jīng)典，然后大學(xué)生本身要提高對經(jīng)典的重視程度，等等。

1、閱讀經(jīng)典書籍對人的成長至關(guān)重要

Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthatreadingclassicsplaysanimportantandbeneficialroleinourdevelopmentandgrowth.Personally,eversincemychildhood,nothinghasbeenmoreattractivethanreadingtheclassicmasterpieces.Takingalookaround,wecanfindclassicsfromwhichpeoplehugelybenefittoonumeroustolist:TheDreamintheRedChamber,TheLegendofThreeKingdoms,Bibleandthelike.2.現(xiàn)在愿意閱讀經(jīng)典的人越來越少，原因是……However,itiswidelyacknowledgedthatanincreasingnumberofpeoplearelosinginterestinclassics.Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthechange,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.Foronething,practicalreadinghasoccupiedthemarketandstudents’sparetimeinsuchamaterialpossessionorientedsociety.Foranother,theboomofinternetindustrygivesrisetothechangeinstudents’readinghabitwhichconsequently,incomparison,makesreadingclassicstime-consumingandlessentertaining.3.我們大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做

Inviewof/becauseoftheseriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.Tobeginwith,itisessentialthatcollegerulesandregulationsbeworkedoutandenforcedtoencouragecollegestudentstoreadclassicalworksandstartclassics-readingcampaignsoncampus.What’s

more,collegestudentsshouldenhancetheirawarenessofabsorbingtheessenceoftheclassicsinwhichourancestorslefttheirwisdomsandexperience.Withproperrulesandanalertpublic,itwillonlybeamatteroftimetoseethisproblembecomeathingofthepastinthenearfuture.IncreasedCollegeEnrollment1）.近年來大學(xué)入學(xué)率逐年上升2）.大學(xué)擴(kuò)招的益處及潛在問題3）.我對大學(xué)擴(kuò)招的看法這是一篇典型利弊兩分法的議論文。第一段引入主題：高校擴(kuò)招。第二段分析高校擴(kuò)招的益處：緩解了父母和高中生們的心理壓力；提高全國教育水平；培養(yǎng)更多有專長的人才。第三段擴(kuò)招造成的一些問題：造成大學(xué)里師資和教學(xué)設(shè)施短缺；使就業(yè)市場競爭更加激烈。第四段闡述我的觀點。Recentyearshaswitnessedasteadyincreaseincollegeenrollment.Tomanyhigh-schoolstudents,it’sdefinitelygoodnews，fortheywouldhavebetterchanceofreceivinghighereducation.Youdon’thavetolookveryfartofindouttheadvantagesoftheincreasedcollegeenrollment.Foronething,itlessenstheworriesofbothhighschoolgraduatesandtheirparents.Foranother，collegeenrollmentexpansioncancontributetoraisingtheeducationallevelofournation.What’smore,increasedcollegeenrollmentcanprovidemorestudentswithspecializedknowledge,thusservingourdevelopmentinapositiveway.Ontheotherhand,wecannotdenythattherearesomepotentialproblemsaboutincreasedcollegeenrollment.Tobeginwith,withtheincreasednumberofstudents,theshortageofteachingstaffandfacilitiesbecomesclearlyseen.Worstofall,increasedcollegeenrollmentleadstoincreasedcompetitioninthejobmarket.It’snotaneasytasktotellwhetherthetendencyshouldbeencouragedornot.Astome,it’slaudable/deservingpraisetograntmorestudentshighereducation.Butacollegedegreeisbynomeansaguaranteeforabetterjoborfuture.Tocastapromisingcareer,weneedalotmoreabilitieswhichwecannotlearnfromcollege.Direction:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1、有人做好事期望得到回報；2、有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該像雷鋒那樣做好事不圖回報；3、我的觀點。這是一篇典型的正反闡釋作文第一段總起說一句對于是否應(yīng)該期望得到回報這個話題有不同的看法，然后馬上接著說第一種觀點。Whenitcomestowhetheroneshouldexpectarewardwhendoingagooddeed,people’sopinionsdiffer.這個句子相信大家再熟悉不過。第二段直接寫第二種的對立觀點。最后一段寫我的觀點，可以贊同第一種，或者同意第二種觀點，也可以兩種都有條件地支持，實在覺得最后一段字?jǐn)?shù)寫不夠了，也可以說現(xiàn)在存在什么問題，并想出解決方法。LeiFeng,acommunistsoldier,who“devotedhislimitedlifetothelimitlesscauseofservingthepeople”,haslongbeensetasanoutstandingexampletoencourageustosparenoeffortstohelpthoseinneed；whereas,withthepassageoftime,peoplevoicedifferentopinionstowardsdoinggooddeeds.Someinsists“Agoodturndeservesanother”,astheoldsayinggoes,whichindicatesthatagooddeedoughttobringaboutareward,themotivationorthestimulusforthefavor.Meanwhile,

othersbelievegooddeedsbelongtovoluntarywork,purelyoutofwillingness,whichhasnothingtodowithexpectationforrewards.Astome,gooddeedsaresupposedto

resultfromspontaneousreactionconfrontedwithcertaincircumstances,rangingfromgivinguponeseattoasilver-hairedpassengeraboardthebus,donatingbloodtothedesignatedorganizationbyRedCross，totravelingtotheremoteandpoverty-strickenareastoserveasavolunteerforawholeyear.Inshort,rewardsarebynomeansthetriggerorpurposeforintentionofconductinggooddeeds,nomatterhowtrivialtheyare.高分作文的四句話基本準(zhǔn)則：

結(jié)構(gòu)合理三（四）段式；

中心突出主題句；

層次清晰導(dǎo)航語；

詞匯閃光亮點句。六級寫作必備句型“It”isusedasasubject:Itcannotbedeniedthat/mustbeadmittedthattheovergrowthoftourismmaydestroytheecologicalbalanceofsomescenicresorts.Itisknowntoallthatphysicalexercisescanimproveandenrichourphysicalandmentalwell-being.Itisobvious(evident,clear,undeniable,apparent)thatthesituationiscauseddirectlybyexcessivecommercialfishing.Itiscurrentlydifficultforauniversitystudenttofindanidealjobuponhisgraduation,especiallythosemajoringinfundamentalcoursessuchashistoryandmathematics.Itisimperativethatsomethingurgentbedonetocombatthewidespreaduseofillegaldrugsamongteenagers.Itishighlynecessaryforourgovernmenttostopthecorruptionofgovernmentofficials.

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Withthegrowingnumberofcollegegraduatesbeingturnedouteachyear,thesituationinthejobmarketisgettingtighterandtighter.Asthereformprocessofstateenterprisesspeedsup,moreandmoreworkersarelikelytobelaidoff,enteringthecompetitioninjobmarketAsindustryandagriculturedevelops,theproblemofwatershortagewillbemoreserious.therebe

Recently,therehasbeenastrongdebateonwhetherhumanbeingsshouldbecloned.Therearestillquiteanumberofchildrenwhocannotaffordtogotoschoolbecauseofpoverty.Thereisnoneedforpeopletoworryaboutthepossibleeffectsofdonatingblood.make＋object＋adj./make＋it+adj.＋forsb.todosthThewidespreadintroductionofinformationtechnologywillmakeourworkandlifemoreconvenientandmorebeautiful.

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…Theyaresoeagertomasternewskillsthattheycanbequalifiedtothejobmarket.Therearesomanypeople,bicycles,carsinthestreetsthatyouwillsometimesfeelitdifficulttomovealong.NonrestrictiveAttributiveClauseLakesandriversarebecomingseriouslypolluted,whichaggravates(worsens)theshortageoffreshwater.Theincreasinglyhighdivorceratewillcauseaseriesofproblems,whichdeservesgreatpublicattention.Participlephrase:People,notrealizingthatwaterresourcesontheeartharelimited,wasteagreatamountofwatereveryday.Withtheimprovementoflivingstandards,moreandmorepeoplebegintobuycarstomeettheneedsofworkandlife,therebyworseningthetrafficproblems.Contraststructure:Somepeoplebelievethatreadingselectivelyisagoodwayforustoenrichourknowledgewhilesomeothersinsistthatreadingextensivelyiswaytoobetter.Mostmenwouldliketheirspousestobeyoungandbeautifulwhereaswomenoftenputemphasisontheirspouses’character,education,profession,incomeorfamilybackground.Sentencestructureabout“reason”:Severalreasons/factorsareresponsiblefor/mayaccountfor/contributetothecomingbackofmanyChineseoverseasstudents.Itspopularityisdueto/resultsfrom/is

causedby/canbeattributedtothecleanandcomfortableenvironmentandtheexcellentservice.Asfor(asto);for…Thus,forsomestudents,cheating,thoughrisky,isabsolutelyashortcuttogetasatisfyingacademicevaluation.Asfor(asto)thesociety,the7-dayholidaywellservesthepurposeofstimulatingconsumptionandpromotingthedevelopmentoftourism.

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Asfarasindividualsareconcerned,nomatterwhatreasonsdrivethemtobuylotterytickets,theyactuallycontributetothesocietybylendingahelpinghandtounfortunatepeopleandtothedevelopmentofsportsinourcountry.Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…Admittedly/Undoubtedly,thereareadvancedresearchenvironmentandbetterlivingconditionsindevelopedcountries,andstudentsfromdevelopingcountriescannotresistthetemptationofearningmoresalaryinthewest.Noonecandenythat/ThereisnodenyingthefactthatE-economyhasgreatpotentialsandadvantagesinmanyaspects.Itisindisputablethat（無可爭辯）therearemillionsofpeoplewhostillhaveamiserablelifeandhavetofacethedangersofstarvationandexposure.Noonecandenythefact（沒有人能否認(rèn)）thataperson'seducationisthemostimportantaspectofhislife.Infact,wehavetoadmitthefact（我們必須承認(rèn)）thatthequalityoflifeisasimportantaslifeitselfWith…;Without…

Withprivatecars,peopleareabletoenjoytheirleisuretimetothefullbymakingtripsintheircarstothecountrysideorseasideattheweekends.Withoutadequatelatestinformationnecessaryinhiswork,onewillachievenosuccessinhiscareer.regard/thinkof…as…Inspiteofthesearguments,therearethosewhosee(view)itasahastydecision,whichhassomepotentialproblems.However,somepeopleconsidermankind’sexplorationintothespaceasawasteoftime,moneyandresources.Howtoexpressopinions:Therearedifferentopinionson(Peoplehavedifferentideasabout/Differentpeoplemayholddifferentviewsabout)whetherdrunkdrivingshouldbebanned.Recently,therehasbeenaheateddebate(discussion)overwhetherornotsportsstarscangotocollegeorgraduateschoolwithouttakingtheentranceexams.Viewsontheissueinquestionvarywidelyfrompersontoperson.Quitealotofpeoplehold/claim/argue/advocate/suggest/believethatowningprivatecarsisofgreatbenefit,whileothersassume/maintain/stressthattheremaybeproblemswiththeincreasingnumberofprivatecars/(butothersset/(putforthadifferentargumentabout/oppositiveviewsonthematterinquestion).Some(people)advocate/endorse/favor/arefor(或oppose/objectto/areagainst)...Yetothersstickto/holdonto/clingtotheoppositeviews/argument/points.Tosomepeople'smind/Fromsomepeople'spointofview/Intheeyesofsomepeople,thematterinquestionis/seems/shouldbe/means...Buttoothers'mind/fromothers'pointofview/inothers'eyes,itisjust/quitetheother/contrary/oppositewayaround(或theopposite/reverseisthecase/true.)Basedontheabovediscussion,Iholdtheopinionthatbothsidesoftheargumentarerightinsomeway.However,Iwouldliketotakeamoreneutralposition.Someotherimportantsentences:Theproblemofinternationaltourismhascausedwidepublicconcernovertherecentyears.(近些年引起了廣泛關(guān)注）Despitemanyobviousadvantagesof…,itisnotwithoutitsproblem.(但是它也存在問題)Althoughruralemigrantscontrib