Unit5Where did you go on vacation寫作課課件 魯教版英語(yǔ)七年級(jí)上冊(cè)

Writing&SelfCheckWheredidyougoonvacation?1.日期:星期在前，月日在后

3.時(shí)態(tài)：

____時(shí)態(tài)(日記主要記錄的是過(guò)去的活動(dòng))2.人稱:用_____人稱寫日記

4.寫作順序：

按照________或事情的經(jīng)過(guò)來(lái)寫Keypointsofadiary

第一過(guò)去時(shí)間順序TimeWeatherActivitiesFoodDescriptionwordshotandsunnyBeijingducktakesomephotos;buysomethingspecial;learnsomethingimportanttireddeliciousbeautifulinterestingAugustBeforecompletingtheentry,let'sreadthewordsandthenfillintheblanksfirst.寫作前可按寫作相關(guān)內(nèi)容分類羅列相關(guān)的詞匯，以便在寫作中能快速依據(jù)所寫內(nèi)容的線索，從“分類詞庫(kù)”中檢索自己所需詞匯。P39AugusthotandsunnyaBeijinghutonginterestingtooksomephotosIlearnedsomethingimportantBeijingduckdelicioustiredAnswerthequestionstomakenotesaboutavacationyoutook.Wheredidyougo?__________________2.Didyougowithanyone?_____________3.Howwastheweather?_______________4.Whatdidyoudoeveryday?__________________________________5.Whatfooddidyoueat?_____________6.Whatdidyoulikebest?_____________7.Didyoudislikeanything?____________8.Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?______3bP39【寫作任務(wù)】暑假期間李華和家人去了一趟南京,他們共同經(jīng)歷了一次愉快的旅行。假設(shè)你是李華，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示及要求寫一篇英語(yǔ)日記，介紹你們的南京之行。時(shí)間：暑假人物：李華和家人天氣：炎熱、潮濕活動(dòng)：第一天參觀中山陵(DrSunYat-sen’sMausoleum)和總統(tǒng)府(thePresidentialPalace)

第二天游覽玄武湖并拍照

第三天乘地鐵去新街口購(gòu)物；品嘗南京鹽水鴨(NanjingSaltedDuck)感受：這是一次愉快的旅行。要求:1.包含提示內(nèi)容,語(yǔ)句通順,行文連貫,語(yǔ)法正確,書寫規(guī)范；2.60詞左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

-01-謀篇布局本篇習(xí)作要求寫一篇英文日記。介紹自己在旅游過(guò)程中的所見(jiàn)、所聞、所感。旅行日記類的寫作屬于記敘文,寫作時(shí)需要按照一定的寫作順序展開(kāi),可以按照時(shí)間順序來(lái)寫,也可以按旅游景點(diǎn)的更換來(lái)寫,作文的結(jié)尾往往會(huì)表達(dá)自己的旅游感受。-02-思路點(diǎn)撥寫作提綱遣詞造句寫作提綱01提前了解和查詢旅游景區(qū)措施引出話題My______andItraveledtoNanjingduringthissummerholiday.旅游經(jīng)歷Weather:hotand___________The1stday:We________DrSunYat-sen'sMausoleumandthePresidentialPalace.The2ndday:Wewenttoafamous(著名的)lake，XuanwuLakeand__________there.The3rdday:WewenttoXinjiekouby_______togoshopping.We_______NanjingSaltedDuck.個(gè)人感受Whatanenjoyabletripitwas!familywetvisitedtookphotossubwaytried遣詞造句1.在我暑假期間,我和家人去南京旅游。Duringmy___________,IwentontoNanjingwithmyfamily2.我學(xué)到了許多歷史知識(shí)。I__________alot______history.3.那個(gè)公園如此美麗,以至于我們?cè)谀莾捍袅撕荛L(zhǎng)時(shí)間。Theparkwas_______

beautiful_______westayedthereforalongtime.4.最后一天,我們?nèi)ベ?gòu)物。Onthelastday,We____________.5.我們嘗了南京鹽水鴨,它很美味。We________NanjingSaltedDuck,andit__________.6.總之,這三天的旅行令人愉快。____________,the3-daytripwas__________.vacationlearnedaboutsothatwentshoppingtriedtasteddeliciousAllinallenjoyable知識(shí)拓展★fantastic極好的;了不起的☆unforgettable

難以忘懷的;令人難忘的★placesofinterest

名勝古跡☆gosightseeing去觀光★enjoyoneself玩得開(kāi)心☆befamousfor

以……聞名★takeatrip

去旅行☆Didyouenjoyyourvacation?你假期過(guò)得愉快嗎?★Whatkindoffooddidyoutaste?你品嘗了哪類食物?☆I(lǐng)spentaweekonthebeachduringmysummervacation.暑假時(shí)我在沙灘上玩了一個(gè)星期?！颳hatisthebesttimetovisitNanjing?去南京游玩的最佳時(shí)間是什么時(shí)候?☆I(lǐng)prefertakingvacationswithmygoodfriends.我更喜歡和好朋友一起度假。-03-自我展示自我展示MyparentsandItraveledtoNanjingduringthesummerholiday.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allinall,the3-daytripwasenjoyable!

Theweatherwashotandwet,

butwehadagreattime.Onthefirstday,wevisited

somesomeplacesofinterestlikeDrSunYat-sen’sMausoleum

andthePresidentialPalace.Theywereamazing/fantastic/unforgetableand

Ilearnedalotabouthistory.Wewenttoafamous

lakecalledXuanwuLakethenextday.Itwasso

beautifulthatwetookquiteafewphotos.Onthelast

day,wetookthesubwaytoXinjiekoutogoshopping.

Iboughtsomegiftsformyfriends.Afterthat,wetried

NanjingSaltedDuck.Ittasteddelicious.1.A:Did_______goonvacationwithyoulastmonth?B:Yes,myfamilywenttothecountrysidewithme.2.A:Didyourfamilygotothebeachwithyoulastweekend?B:No._______frommyfamilywent,butmyfriendwentwithme.3.A:Ididn’tbringbackanythingfromMalaysia.B:__________atall?Whynot?4.A:Didyoubuy________intheshoppingcenter?B:No,Ididn’t.___________wasveryexpensive.5.A:Howwasthevolleyballgameyesterday?B:Great!__________hadafuntime!anything,everything,nothing,anyone,everyone,nooneEveryoneanyoneNooneNothinganythingEverythingCompletetheconversationswiththecorrectwordsinthebox.1P40LastAugust,ourclass_____(do)somethingveryspecialonourschooltrip.We________(go)toMountTai.We_______(start)ourtripat12:00atnight.Everyoneonourclass______(take)abagwithsomefoodandwater.Afterthreehours,someonelookedatthemapand______(find)outwe________(be,not)anywherenearthetop.Mylegs______(be)sotiredthatIwantedtostop.Myclassmates________(tell)metokeepgoing,soI_______(go)on.At5:00a.m.,wegottothetop!Everyone_________(jump)upanddowninexcitement.Twentyminuteslater,thesun______(start)tocomeup.Itwassobeautifulthatwe_________(forget)aboutthelastfive