2020年全國I卷讀后續(xù)寫講評-高三英語一輪復習

讀后續(xù)寫思路框架-2020年全國新高考一卷讀后續(xù)寫講評讀后續(xù)寫基本流程（40m）1.讀（5-8M）：原文閱讀+信息梳理2.構思（5-8M）：情節(jié)預設，明確方向3.寫（20-25M）：初稿勾勒，正規(guī)眷寫詞數要求150詞，一段75詞左右比較合理七個不：1.不增加人物2.不增加旁支情節(jié)3.不用過多對話4.不用負能量結局5.不在文末設置懸念6.不偏離原文主題7.不違背邏輯常理三個原則，四個步驟三個原則：1.原文一致原則2.正能量原則3.曲折性原則四個步驟：1.通讀全文，理清脈絡2.抓住關鍵，思索框架3.增加細節(jié)，展開續(xù)寫4.檢查優(yōu)化，整潔眷寫讀后續(xù)寫步驟1.通讀全文，理清脈絡2.抓住關鍵，思索框架3.增加細節(jié)，展開續(xù)寫4.檢查優(yōu)化，整潔眷寫一點兩線：線索點，情感線，故事線邊讀邊劃：序號標出主要角色劃出形容詞劃出動作詞劃出線索點什么人？做了什么事？結果怎么樣？從中我們可以學到什么？續(xù)寫整體邏輯：承接上文+線索點加情節(jié)構思+總結升華句細讀兩段開頭提示，確定本段內容實踐練習---黃鼠狼與愛神

黃鼠狼愛上了一個相貌俊美的年輕人，祈求愛神把它變成一個女人。女神憐憫它的熱情，就把它變成了一個美麗的少女。就這樣，那個青年一見到她就愛上了，將她帶回自己家。他們在屋里坐下，愛神想知道黃鼠狼的身形變了，習性是不是也變了，于是——————黃鼠狼忘記了當時的情形———————————————————————————————————————女神很生氣————————————————————————————————————————黃鼠狼與愛神①黃鼠狼愛上了一個相貌俊美的年輕人，祈求愛神把它變成一個女人。②女神憐憫它的熱情，就把它變成了一個美麗的少女。就這樣，那個青年一見到她就愛上了，將她帶回自己家。他們在屋里坐下，愛神想知道黃鼠狼的身形變了，習性是不是也變了，于是便把一只老鼠放到屋子中央。黃鼠狼忘記了當時的情形，站起來去追捕那只老鼠，想吃掉它。女神見了很生氣，把黃鼠狼變回原來的樣子。同樣，有些人本性惡劣，即使相貌變了，他的的習性仍不會改變。主題升華什么人？結果怎么樣？存在問題1.書寫---衡水體一周兩頁2.偏題，情節(jié)不合理3.詞數不夠真題實踐TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.MrsMeredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemormingshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasmansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirittleboy.Thelittleboy--hisnamewasBernard--hadinterestedherverymuch."Iwishyoucouldseehim,"shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'tseewhathecando."Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard."Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,"saidClara."Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.""SodoI,"saidHarry."Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem."Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,"Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成).Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,.itwassuretobeagoodone."Itellyouwhatwecando,"saidJohn."YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit."試題講評who？Meredithfamily,kind;thoughtful;wanttohelpothersBernard,poor;struggle;needhelpwhat？TheMeredithfamilyhelpedBernard’sfamilythough.consequence？Bernardstartedoutonhisbusiness.And?我們能從中學到什么？（注意分析全文時態(tài)）準備工作：sellpopcornwhere？what？who?feeling?who?Bernardsellpopcornwhere？how？consequence？value？范文展示

WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.

So,theywenttothelocalsupermarkettogether.Theyboughtabagofcornandsomespecialbagsforpopcorn.Whentheygothome.theymadealotofpopcornandputitinthespecialbags.Withthepopcorn,theywenttoBernard'shome.TheytoldBernardhowtosellthepopcon.Bernardandhisparentswereverygrateful.AndtheMeredithfamilyalsofeltveryhappytohelpthisfamily.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.

Hetookthepopcornaroundtothehousesandsoldallhispopcorn.Heearnedalotofmoney.Then,hewantedtobeself-dependent.Therefore,heaskedMrs.Meredithtoteachhimhowtomakepopcorn.Afterthat,notonlydidhesellpopcorn,buthealsoaddedcreamandsalttothepopcorntomakeittastebetter.Bernardgrewuptobearemarkableman.HedidnotforgetthehelpofMeredith'sfamily,andhealsodidwhathecouldtohelpthoseinneed.范文剖析WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.So,theywenttothelocalsupermarkettogether.Theyboughtabagofcornandsomespecialbagsforpopcorn.Whentheygothome.theymadealotofpopcornandputitinthespecialbags.Withthepopcorn,theywenttoBernard'shome.TheytoldBernardhowtosellthepopcon.Bernardandhisparentswereverygrateful.AndtheMeredithfamily

alsofeltveryhappytohelpthisfamily.wherewhat？who？feelingfeelingWitheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Hetookthepopcornaroundtothehousesandsoldallhispopcorn.Heearnedalotofmoney.Then,hewantedtobeself-dependent.Therefore,heaskedMrs.Meredithtoteachhimhowtomakepopcorn.Afterthat,notonlydidhesellpopcorn,buthealsoaddedcream