專題二十話題2學(xué)校生活與語言學(xué)習(xí)

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專題二十：表2學(xué)校生活與語言學(xué)。校學(xué)生會就此對學(xué)生進行了采訪，請你根據(jù)下面提示為學(xué)校寫一篇短文該收：影響學(xué)生上的注意力100Toregulatetheuseof phonesinclass,ourschoolhasnnedtoaskteacherstocollect phonesfromstudentsbeforeclasseachday.【思路構(gòu)建【教師（本部分供教師備課使用，可酌情刪去或保留本篇寫作屬于漢語提綱類，這是高考表達使用較多題形式，一般來說有比較詳細的漢語提示，而近年高考表達的提示趨向于更精煉。就本題來說，考生可以從下（1）（2）贊成這一措施——會影響學(xué)生上的注意力對學(xué)習(xí)有影（此時可列舉現(xiàn)象考慮寫作中能夠用到的詞語、句式，如：react/respectto,takeourattentionawayfrom,aphonesuddenlyringsinthemiddleofclass,therefore,itgoeswithoutsayingthatweneedto…,ontheotherhand,expressadifferentopinion.【自我（本部分結(jié)合學(xué)生程度，可跳關(guān)（審題主要從面入手分析基本信息找出寫作要點和明確段落組織由教師帶領(lǐng)學(xué)邊分析邊勾劃，段落組織部分可用漢語口述并記錄關(guān)鍵點）題囗人囗第一人 時囗一般過去時囗一般現(xiàn)在時話囗日?；顒宇愢韺W(xué)校生活類囗。校學(xué)生會就此對學(xué)生進行了采訪，請你根據(jù)下面提示為學(xué)校寫一篇短文該收：影響學(xué)生上的注意力（1 keepintouch 答案：survey；affect；attention；alpossessions；keepintouch keepintouch 匯量的積累；高級詞匯連線完成不好的同學(xué)應(yīng)增加高級詞匯的拓展。2Thesurvey studentsfromallthree課堂上突然響 聲，真的是一件很煩人的事情It’sreally when phonesuddenlyringsin但是一些學(xué)生表達了他們不同的觀點，認(rèn)為是他們的私人物品Butsomeotherstudentsexpressedtheirdifferentopinions, 答案：covers;anannoyance;arguingthat phonesaretheir alpossessions..（連詞填空……Partofthestudentssaidthattheycanunderstandwhytheschoolhasdecidedtotakethemeasure,it’sreallyanannoyancewhena phonesuddenlyringsinclass.once phonehavebeencollectedbytheteacherbeforeclasseseachday,theclasswon’tbe（Butoncethephonehavebeencollectedbytheteacherbeforeclasseseachday,theclasswon’tbedisturbed.Partofthestudentssaidthattheycanunderstandwhytheschoolhasdecidedtotakethemeasure,becauseit’sreallyanannoyancewhena phonesuddenlyringsinclass.Butsomeotherstudentsexpressedtheirdifferentopinions,arguingthatphonesaretheiralpossessions,whichtheyneedtokeepintouchwiththeirparents.Aswehaveexpected,thesurvey,whichcoversstudentsfromallthreegrades,hasrevealeddifferentapproachestotheissue.答案：because第三關(guān)：考語法。Regulatetheuseofphonesinclass,ourschoolnnedtoaskteacherstocollectthephonesfromstudentsbeforeclasseachday.Gettingsomefirsthandmaterialsabouthowthestudentsreactit,wehavecarriedoutasurvey.Theircommentsmainlyhavetwocategory.Someofthemsaythatthestudentsphonewilltaketheirattentionawayfromhowtheteacheristeaching.What’smore,asuddenringofaphoneinclasswillmaketheteacheraswellusstudentsannoyed.Soitisagoodwaytocollectthembeforeclass.How,therearealsosomestudentswhoareagainstthepractice,sayingthatasphonesaretheirownpossessions,ononehastherighttotakethemaway.Inmyopinion,thismeasureisnecessarythatitcanensurethattheclasswillnotbesuddenly答案（Toregulate）theuseof phonesinclass,ourschool（hasnned）toaskteacherstocollectthe abouthowthestudentsreact（to）it,wehavecarriedoutasurvey.Theircommentsmainlyhavetwo（categories）.Someofthemsaythatthe（students’）phonewilltaketheirattentionaway（what）theteacheristeaching.What’smore,asuddenringofa phoneinclasswillmaketheteacheraswell（as）usstudentsannoyed.Soitisagoodwaytocollectthembeforeclass.（However）,therearealsosomestudentswhoareagainstthepractice,sayingthatas aretheirownpossessions,ononehastherighttotakethemaway.Inmyopinion,thismeasureisnecessary（in）thatitcanensurethattheclasswillnotbesuddenlyinterrupted.Toregulatetheuseof phonesinclass,ourschoolhasnnedtoaskteacherstocollect phonesfromstudentsbeforeclasseachday.答案不唯一教學(xué)提示：根據(jù)學(xué)生習(xí)作的完成情況，針對詞、句、篇、語法等方面的弱點進行查漏【范文賞析1Toregulatetheuseofphonesinclass,ourschoolhasnnedtoaskteacherstocollect phonesfromstudentsbeforeclasseachday.①Aswehaveexpected,thesurvey,whichcoversstudentsfromallthreegrades,hasrevealeddifferentapproachestotheissue.②Partofthestudentssaidthattheycanunderstandwhytheschoolhasdecidedtotakethemeasure,becauseit’sreallyanannoyancewhenaphonesuddenlyringsinclass.③Butoncethephonehavebeencollectedbytheteacherbeforeclasseseachday,theclasswon’tbedisturbed.④Butsomeotherstudentsexpressedtheirdifferentopinions,arguingthatphonesare alpossessions,whichtheyneedtokeepintouchwiththeirparents.⑤Theyfurthersaidthataslongastheydon’tusetheminclass,noonehastherighttotakethemaway.【亮點點評①Aswhich引導(dǎo)定語從句；reveal,approachto和coverwhy引導(dǎo)賓語從句，becausewhenoncedisturb④現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；whichpossessionkeepintouch⑤aslongasfurther【范文賞析2Toregulatetheuseof phonesinclass,ourschoolhasnnedtoaskteacherstocollect phonesfromstudentsbeforeclasseachday.①Togetsomefirsthandmaterialsabouthowthestudentsreacttoit,wehavecarriedoutasurvey.Theircommentsmainlyhavetwo②Someofthemsaythatthestudents’ phonewilltaketheirattentionawayfromwhattheteacheristeaching.③What’smore,asuddenringofa phoneinclasswillmaketheteacheraswellasusstudentsannoyed.Soitisagoodwaytocollectthembeforeclass.④However,therearealsosomestudentswhoareagainstthepractice,sayingthatas phonesaretheirownpossessions,ononehastherighttotakethemaway.⑤Inmyopinion,thismeasureisnecessaryinthatitcanensurethattheclasswillnotbesuddenlyinterrupted.【亮點點評①不定式作目的狀語直入，how引導(dǎo)賓語從；reactto,carryout保證了用詞的多樣性take…awayfromwhatWhat’smoreaswellasannoyed④However作為過渡詞銜接上下文，who引導(dǎo)定語從句，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，as引導(dǎo)狀語從⑤inthat【話題素材begettingonwellwithone’sstudies的學(xué)業(yè)進展順takeseveralcoursesatschoolsitfor參加（考試等failintheexampulsorycoursesoptional/elective/selectivecoursessciencecoursesartscoursesreferencebooksquit/dropacoursetakenotesmakeprogressstayuplatemakeuptheexam補考participatein/takepartin參加makesenseof理解，弄懂review/goover復(fù)習(xí)majorin…主修workouta（maths）problem解答出（數(shù)學(xué)）問題extra-curricularactivitiessurftheInternetadmiresb.forhisdevotiontothecauseofeducation欽佩對教育事業(yè)的敬業(yè)精trytoteachsb.goodstudyhabits努力教給好的慣makeone’slessonslivelyandinteresting使授課生動、有趣havethehabitof ngsth.有做某事的習(xí)慣havenotrouble/difficulty（in） ngsth.毫不費力地做了某事cancel/calloff取消postpone/putoff推遲showanearlyinterestin…很早就開始對……感putone’sheartinto/bedevotedinto/beabsorbedinconcentrateonbegoodat/dowellinbeweakin在……improveoneselfin…在……提升自己betiredof厭倦takeanactivepartin/beactiveinhaveagoodcommand/knowledgeoflayagood/solidfoundationin…在……奠定牢固的基礎(chǔ)devoteallone’stimetosth.把所有時間都投入到某事上Aslongasyoukeeppracticing,you’llsurelymakesteadyprogressinyourJustascanbeseenfromthechart,peopleholddifferentopinionsaboutmakingfriendsAsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshouldcetheirstudy,healthandsafetybeforeotherInthepastthreeyears,I’vebenefitedalotfrommyschooleducation,whichhelpsmegrowanindependentthinkerandanefficientlearner,andpreparefortheWeteenagersshouldmakethemostofourvaluabletimeathighschoolanddevelopourpotentialtothefullest.InresponsetotheSunshineSportsActiveslaunchedbyourschool,wehaveorganizedlong-distancerunninginthemorning.Youdonotlacktimetostudy;youarelackingtheSleepnow;dreamwillcomeout.Studynow,dreamwillcomeThenextday,myclassmatesandImadeawallpostertopresentwhatwehaddone,whichwouldsurelyinfluenceallthestudentsinourschool.我和我的第二天辦了一個墻報來展示我們的故事，這肯定會影響我們學(xué)校的全體學(xué)Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshoulddoourbittosay“No”tofoodwaste,andtrytodevelopthehabitofneverorderingmorethanwhatweneedsoastosaveourlimitedfoodresources,onwhichwedependforabetterlife.作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該杜物浪費，努力養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣，點的飯菜不要超過我們所需要的，F(xiàn)indingthatIfellbehindtheotherstudentsinmyclass,myEnglishteacherdidn’thesitatetohelpmeoutofthetrouble.英語老師發(fā)現(xiàn)我的英語成績在班里了，就毫不猶豫地幫助我解決這個AsfarasI’mconcerned,onlythroughstudyinghardcanIexpecttopasstheAsaSenior3student,Ihavebeenworkinghardatmylessonsandhavemanagedtogetfairlygoodgrades.作為高三學(xué)生，我學(xué)直很努力，也取得了好成績Inpreparationforthefestival,ourclasshasdecidedtoputonashortEnglishy.Andwe’remakingsteadyprogresswithit.Thecloserwearetothesociety,themoreexperiencewewillgetgaininourNotonlydobooksshowusabroadworldbutalsowecanbenefitfromthemallour書本不僅可以給我們展示一個廣闊的世界，而且還可以使我們受益Weshouldnotconfineourselvestotheclassmate.Weshouldgooutoftheclassroom,seetheworldandtalktoothersasmuchaswecan.Timeislimitedbutknowledgeisboundless.Astudentshouldknowhowtomakefulluseoftimeandstoreupasmuchasknowledgeaspossible.Onlythosewhohaveachievedgreatsuccessaftermanyfailuresarepraiseworthy.SomeofthemapproveoftheideathatitisgoodtostartlearningEnglishfrom他們中有一些人贊同從童年就開始很有益這一觀點ThereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobeAsiswellknown,booksteachustolearnlife,truthandscience,increaseourknowledgeandbroadenourhorizons.眾所周知，書我們學(xué)習(xí)人生、真理和科學(xué)，增長我們的知識，開闊我們的眼界Isn’titapleasuretohavegreatcalminmindwhileyouareWiththeworld ingaglobalvillage,Englishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant,whichiswhyIamsocrazyaboutlearningEnglish.隨著世界正在變成一個地球村，英語變得越來越重要，這就是我如此熱衷于的原因Everystudent,nomatterhowtalentedorhard-workingheorsheis,willcomeacrossdifficultiesinhisorherstudy.每位學(xué)生，不管他或她有多么聰明，多么努力，在學(xué)習(xí)中總會遇到SlowlyIbuiltupmyconfidencetoexpressmyselfduringourgroupItishonorabletoobeytheprinciplesandrulesofour【基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練（一年級不留式家庭作業(yè)，但是采訪中不少人認(rèn)為，不留作業(yè)根本辦不到。請以“ todoornottodo?”為題，談?wù)勀銓Υ说目捶ā?00,todoornotto（二本不想，控制不住自己100左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。stressmonthlyexamRecentlywefindthatquiteafewstudentscheatineverymonthlyexamalthoughourschoolstresseshonestyinexams.（三100DearI’mwritingtoaskifyoucouldhelptofindanEnglishteacherforI’mlookingforwardtoyourearly

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Li某校校園網(wǎng)準(zhǔn)備為高三畢業(yè)生開辟一個英語專欄，現(xiàn)向全校征稿。請你以“AnUnforgettableExperienceinMyHighSchool”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，記述自己高中課余生120參考詞匯：毛筆writing 書法AnUnforgettableExperienceinMyHighHowtimeflies!ItwillbeonlyamonthbeforeIgraduatefromhighschool.ButtherearesomeexperiencesIwillneverforget.HereI’dliketosharesomewithyou.（五針對目前高三學(xué)生壓力較大的現(xiàn)狀，有人以“EffectiveWaystoReleasetheStress”為題，100thepsychologicalconsultingofficeEffectiveWaystoReleasetheNowadaysmoreandmoreSeniorThreestudentsaregettingstressedintheir【基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練

（一,todoornottoysanimportantpartinthe education.Studentsdo whatthey’velearntinclassandmeanwhileprepareforthenewlessons.Buttoomuch isreallyaheavyburden.Theyhavelittletimetotakephysicalexerciseandsomewearthickglassesbecause takesupmostoftheirsparetime.Theyalsosufferpunishmentifworkisdonebadlyorlate.Afteryearsofbadexperiences,someofthemloseinterestinstudyandhateschoollife.SoIthink isnecessary,butitneedstobewelldesignedandshouldn’ttakeupallstudents’sparetime.Onlyinthiswaycanstudentsfindpleasureintheir moreinterestedinstudy.（二Recentlywefindthatquiteafewstudentscheatineverymonthlyexamalthoughourschoolstresseshonestyinexams.Somestudentsthinklowermarksmakethemlosefacesbeforeparents.Whileothersthinksometeachersarenotsostrictthattheycaneasilygetchancestocheat.Atthesametime,afewofthemsaythattheycan’tcontrolthemselvesinexamseventhoughtheydidn’tintendtodoso.Thereisnodoubtthatcheatingisbadforourstudy.Ontheonehand,itisunfairforeveryone;ontheotherhand,itmakesstudentsgetscoreseasilyand elazyinstudy,whichmayleadtoabadstudyatmosphere.Inmyopinion,studentsshouldtrytofinishtestpapersindependently.Meanwhile,teachersshouldimprovetheirworkandleavestudentsnochancestocheat.（三DearI’mwritingtoaskifyoucouldhelptofindanEnglishteacherforAsyouknow,IamlongingtoimprovemyspokenEnglish.Now,althoughIcandowellinEnglishexams,IfindIcan’tspeakEnglishcorrectlyandfluently,especiallywhenIamreadingmaterialsandtalkingwithaforeigner.Therefore,IwantanEnglishtutortohelpmewithmyspokenEnglish.Couldyouhelpmefindanativespeaker?Besides,awomanwhoispatientandkindismyfavorite.Ifavailable,itispreferableforustomeetinthemorningonweekends,from9:00toSorrytotroubleyouandthanksforyourhelp.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.（四AnUnforgettableExperienceinMyHigh

LiHowtimeflies!ItwillbeonlyamonthbeforeIgraduatefromhighschool.ButtherearesomeexperiencesIwillneverforget.HereI’dliketosharesomewithyou.Inrecentyears,theschoolclubsaredevelovigorouslyandIalsojoinedoneofthem,thewritingbrushcalligraphyinterestEveryThursdayafterschool,wegatherinours