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高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)媽媽的項(xiàng)鏈被小狗叼走了1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ErikaandtheNecklaceErikaandherlittlesisterBethsneakedintotheirmommy’sroom.“I’mjustgoingtotryonsomejewelry,”saidErika.Shetookanecklaceandtriedtoputitonherneck.“Oh,no,”saidBeth.“Mommydoesn’tlikeusplayingwithherstuff.”“Okay,youbethelookout,”instructedErika.“StandbythedoorandletmeknowifMommycomesupthestairs.”BeforeBethgottothedoor,Bouncer,thefamily’sBernedoodledog,boundedintotheroomandalmostknockedErikadown.Thenecklacewentflying.IthadbarelyhitthefloorwhenBouncerbititandracedoff.“Bouncer!Bouncer!”yelledErika.“Beth,helpmegetthenecklaceback.”ThegirlswerehotonBouncer’stail.“Stop!”theyyelled.Bouncerdasheddownthestairsandintothelivingroom.Hestoppedjustlongenoughforthegirlstogetclosetohim.Thenofhewent.“Stop!”yelledErika.“Beth,yougotheotherway.We’llcornerhiminthediningroom.”4續(xù)寫原文ErikametBethinthediningroom.Sureenough,Bouncerwastherewaitingforthem.Hewasdownlowonhisfrontlegswithhistailintheair,readytoplay.“Grabhim!”screamedErika.JustasBethwasabouttograbhim,Bouncertookoff.Hewhizzed(嗖地移動(dòng))byBethandErika.“Stop,youtroublemaker!”yelledErikaassheracedafterhim.Thegirlsweregettingcloseagain,butBouncerzoomeddownthebasementstairs.Thegirlsracedafterhim.“Idon’tseehim,”saidBeth.Erikascratchedherhead.“He’sgottobedownhere.He’shiding.”JustthenMomcalledtothegirls.“Erika,what’sallthenoise?What’swrong?Iheardyoufromtheyard.”“Uh,oh,”whisperedErika.“Uh..nothing’swrong,”sheshouted.Bethdashedupthestairs.ErikaheardhertellingMomeverything.“Thatblabbermouth(多嘴的人),”saidErikaunderherbreath.5段首句Para1：“ERIKA!”saidMom.“Uphererightnow.”

Para2：MomandBethfollowedherintothebasement(地下室),Erikacarryingthesnacks.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8本文以事情發(fā)展的順序?yàn)榫€索展開，講述了Erika和Beth偷偷溜進(jìn)媽媽的房間后，Erika偷偷拿了媽媽的項(xiàng)鏈戴在脖子上，Beth提醒她，媽媽不喜歡她們擺弄自己的東西，但是Erika沒有聽Beth的話。之后家里的狗Bouncer跑進(jìn)房間撞倒Erika，導(dǎo)致項(xiàng)鏈飛出去，被Bouncer叼到了，隨后它叼著項(xiàng)鏈跑開了。于是姐妹倆開始追Bouncer，要取回項(xiàng)鏈。期間追趕Bouncer發(fā)出的噪音引起了媽媽的注意，在媽媽詢問發(fā)生了什么事后，Beth將這件事告訴了媽媽。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：“ERIKA!”saidMom.“Uphererightnow.”由第一段首句內(nèi)容“‘ERIKA！’媽媽說，‘現(xiàn)在立刻上樓?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫Erika上樓后，媽媽問她狗現(xiàn)在在哪里，Erika告訴媽媽在地下室，并告訴媽媽她想出了一個(gè)如何將項(xiàng)鏈取下來的主意。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：MomandBethfollowedherintothebasement(地下室),Erikacarryingthesnacks.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“媽媽和Beth跟著Erika進(jìn)了地下室，Erika拿著零食。”可知，第二段可描寫Erika用零食將狗哄騙過來，從狗的脖子上拿下媽媽的項(xiàng)鏈，并向媽媽道歉。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索上樓——不安——媽媽詢問狗在哪里——回答媽媽——想出一個(gè)將項(xiàng)鏈取下的主意——來到地下室——給狗零食——取下項(xiàng)鏈——交還給媽媽——向媽媽道歉——媽媽原諒12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①找借口：findanexcuse/makeanexcuse②抓?。篻rab/catchholdof③道歉：apologize/makeanapology情緒類①微笑：smile/beam②內(nèi)疚：guilt/guiltyconscience13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1].NotdaringtolookintoMom’seyes,Erikajustpointedtothebasementasareply.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)[高分句型2].Headdrooping,Erikatriedtoovercometheimmenseguilt,whileBouncerwasnudginghertopethim.(運(yùn)用了獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu))14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)“ERIKA!”saidMom.“Uphererightnow.”Hurryingupstairs,Erikacouldfeelherbloodrushingtoherface.Whileshewastryinghardtofindanexcuse,Mom’svoicebrokein.“Whereishenow?”askedMom,witharmscrossed.NotdaringtolookintoMom’seyes,Erikajustpointedtothebasementasareply.Thethreeremainedsilent,wonderinghowtogetthenecklaceback.Suddenly,anideaflashedacrossErika’smind.Shewentstraighttothekitchencounterandtooksomesnacks.“Iknowwhattodo.Justcomewithme,”shesmiled.16范文呈現(xiàn)MomandBethfollowedherintothebasement,Erikacarryingthesnacks.“Bouncer,”calledErika,“I’vegotatreatforyou.”Lickety-split,BouncerwasatErika’sfeet,prickinguphisearsandwagginghistail.Justatthatmoment,Erikagrabbedhiscollarandpulledthenecklacefromhismouth.HandingthenecklacetoMom,Erikaapologized,“Sorry,Mom.Ishouldn’thavetouchedyourstuff.I’mthetroublemaker.”Headdrooping,Erikatriedtoovercometheimmenseguilt,whileBouncerwasnudginghertopethim.“Solongasyouadmityourfault,”saidMom,gentlypattinghergirlsandthelittle“troublemaker”.17范文譯文“埃里卡！”媽媽說?！艾F(xiàn)在就在這里?！卑鹂ù掖疑蠘?，能感覺到自己的血沖到臉上。當(dāng)她努力尋找借口時(shí)，媽媽的聲音突然響起?！八F(xiàn)在在哪里？”媽媽交叉雙臂問道。Erika不敢直視媽媽的眼睛，只是指著地下室回答。三人保持沉默，不知道如何取回項(xiàng)鏈。突然，一個(gè)想法在艾瑞卡的腦海中閃現(xiàn)。她直接走到廚房的柜臺(tái)前，拿了一些零食?！拔抑涝撛趺崔k。跟我來吧，”她笑著說。18范文譯文媽媽和貝絲跟著她進(jìn)入地下室，艾瑞卡拿著零食?！皬椞?，”艾瑞卡喊道，“我有一頓飯要給你?！碧蛑?，彈跳者站在艾瑞卡的腳邊，豎起耳朵，搖著尾巴