英語新教材人教版必修第二冊課件Unit4HistoryandTraditionsPeriod5

Unit4

HistoryandTraditionsPeriod5

ReadingforWriting(Ⅱ)寫作培優(yōu)課

寫作培優(yōu)課寫一篇游記(Writeajournal)【寫作指導】游記(journal):是對旅行進行記錄的一種文體,現(xiàn)在也多指記錄游覽經(jīng)歷的文章。游記分很多種類,有帶議論色彩的,有帶科學色彩的,有帶抒情色彩的?？蚣軜嫿↖ntroduction:makethereadereagertoreadBody:①Transitions

②Detailsandexamples(結尾:總—總結

)Ending:Letthereaderknowthatthepassageends.Helpthereaderrememberyourwriting.

【典題示例】去年暑假,你有機會參加一個去美國舊金山的夏令營,為期三天。請你寫一篇游記,介紹一下你在舊金山的所見、所聞和所感。詞數(shù)100個左右。Step1謀篇立意體裁:游記Tips?DayOneArideonacablecar;Fisherman’sWharf(thedistrictwhereItalianfishermenfirstcametoSanFrancisco)?DayTwoThecityandChinatown?DayThreeAngelIsland時態(tài):一般過去時人稱:第一人稱Step2語言支架1.坐上纜車到山頂鳥瞰舊金山灣和整座城市。①______________________坐纜車

②getawholeviewofthecity _____________③用不定式作目的狀語翻譯句子:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________takearideonacablecar鳥瞰整座城市TogetawholeviewofSanFranciscoBayandthewholecity,wetookarideonacablecarandgottothetopofthehill.

2.這是意大利漁民在十九世紀晚期首先到達舊金山并開創(chuàng)漁業(yè)的地方。

①_______________ 意大利漁民

②_____________________ 在十九世紀晚期

③_________________ 漁業(yè)

④用定語從句翻譯句子:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Italianfishermeninthelate19thcentury

thefishingindustryThisisthedistrictwhereItalianfishermenfirstcametoSanFranciscointhelate19thcenturyandbeganthefishingindustry.

3.完成句子:__________,wedidn’tfeellikedoinganythingelse.我們太累了,不想做其他任何事情。4.中國移民在十九世紀五十年代在這里定居。

①__________________中國移民

②___________ 在十九世紀五十年代

③___________________ 在這個城市定居

④翻譯句子:__________________________________________________ExhaustedChineseimmigrantsinthe1850ssettledowninthecityChineseimmigrantssettleddowninthecityinthe1850s.

5.我們看到了很多有趣的寺廟,很多市場,很多餐館還有包含文檔、照片的博物館。①______ 寺廟②anumberof/agreatmany

_____③補全句子:Wesaw_____interestingtemples,___________markets____________________restaurantsandmuseums__________documents_______________.

temple很多manyanumberofaswellasagreatmanycontainingandphotographs6.天使島是著名的移民站點,早期中國人在那里申請美國居住權。①_________________ 移民站點

②________ 申請

③_________________ 美國居住權

④用定語從句翻譯句子:_____________________________________________________________________________________________

immigrationstationapplyforrighttoliveinUSAAngelIslandwasafamousimmigrationstationwhereearlyChinesepeopleappliedforrighttoliveinUSA.7.1940年,民事當局改革了體系,以便更多的中國人能夠抓住機會在美國定居。①______________ 民事當局

②________________ 改革體系

③______________________ 抓住機會

④用含有sothat引導的目的狀語從句翻譯句子:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________civilauthoritiesreformthesystemgrasptheopportunity In1940thecivilauthoritiesreformedthesystemsothatmanymoreChinesepeoplewereabletograsptheopportunityofsettlingintheUSA.

Step3潤色組篇

SanFranciscoisalandofdiversityandanamazingcity.Everyonewhohaseverbeentherewillneverforgetit.TogetawholeviewofSanFranciscoBayandthewholecity,wetookarideonacablecarandgottothetopofthehill.It’ssospectacular.Downfromthehill,wewenttoFisherman’sWharf.ThisisthedistrictwhereItalianfishermenfirstcametoSanFranciscointhelate19thcenturyandbeganthefishingindustry.Exhausted,wedidn’tfeellikedoinganythingelse.Onthesecondday,wevisitedthecityandChinatown.Chineseimmigrantssettleddowninthecityinthe1850s.Wesawmanyinterestingtemples,anumberofmarketsaswellasagreatmanyrestaurantsandmuseumscontainingdocumentsandphotographs.AngelIslandwasafamousimmigrationstationwhereearlyChinesepeopleappliedforrighttoliveinUSA.In1940thecivilauthoritiesreformedthesystemsothatmanymoreChinesepeoplewereabletograsptheopportunityofsettlingintheUSA.SanFranciscoissuchanattractiveplacethatIamlongingtovisititagain.【善積累·獲新知】◆話題詞匯識記常用游記詞匯:diversity多元化 amazing令人驚奇的view景觀

spectacular壯觀的district地區(qū)

cablecar纜車exhausted疲勞的

temple寺廟settle定居

attractive吸引人的◆話題金句背誦1.Theworldisabook,butpeoplewhodonottravelreadonlyonepage.世界是一本書,而不旅行的人只讀了其中一頁。2.Ifyoudon’ttravel,youwillmissmorethanscenery.如果你不去旅行,你錯過的不只是風景。3.Lifeislikeajourney.Whatyoushouldcareaboutisnotthedestination,butthesceneryonthewayandyourmoodwhenyouseethescenery.人生就像一場旅行,你應該在乎的不是目的地,而是沿途的風景以及看風景時的心情。4.TheGreatWall,asasymbolofChinesepeople’swisdomandlabor,isatouristdestinationthattravellerscanneveraffordtomiss.長城,是中國人勤勞和智慧的象征,是旅行者不可錯過的景點。5.TheGreatWallinBeijingistheplaceIwanttovisitmostnotonlybecauseofitslonghistorybutalsobecauseofitsimportanthistoricalpositioninChineseculture.北京長城是我最想?yún)⒂^的地方,不僅是因為它的悠久歷史,而且因為它在中國文化中重要的歷史地位?！緦懽鼽c撥】游記該怎么寫?一、按游覽的順序?qū)憽Ｎ覀冊趨⒂^或游覽一個地方時,是隨著時間的推移、空間的轉移而進行的,因此,我們必須以游覽為線索,由先而后依次記述游覽過程中所見到的景物,這樣,讀者才會對你游覽的地方有一個清晰的、全面的印象。二、寫出景物的特點。大自然的景物各不相同,都有自身的特點,我們要認真回味游覽時的所見所感,選取自己印象最深刻的或最有特色的景物,作具體的描寫,并對重點部分進行生動細致的刻畫。運用聯(lián)想,采用比喻、擬人等方法,將景物的特點寫出來,使景物形象逼真,讓讀者宛如親眼所見一般。三、分清主次詳略。我們在寫游記時,面對繁多而又千姿百態(tài)的景點,美麗而又令人回味的山水,

寫什么好呢?這都必須根據(jù)文章的中心確定主次詳略,把最具代表性的、最使自己激動、最令自己難忘的景物,當作主要內(nèi)容,進行詳細描述。如景物怎樣美、怎樣奇,你和游人怎樣感嘆,你凝望著什么,展開怎樣的想象等;次要景物可略寫或不寫,這樣重點就突出,游記也就生動了。四、融入真情實感。在描寫景物的過程中,要把自己的思想感情融進文章的字里行間,做到既有所見所聞,又有所思所感,這樣可以豐富文章內(nèi)涵,深化習作主題,使文章更具感染力。詞匯清單重點句式認知詞匯：gallery,ensure,landscape,butter,honey;ancestor,position,courtyard,snack,county,feast;dot;cattle,roar,ocean,scent,pub,wine,beer,stew,custom拓展詞匯：announce→announcement→announcer；eager→eagerly→eagerness；crowd→crowded；generous→generously→generosity；poet→poem→poetry；greet→greeting；sensory→sense→sensitive→sensible；strik