讀后續(xù)寫我的寫作比賽優(yōu)秀例文6篇學(xué)案 高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

2023年新課標II卷英語讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodificultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.

So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:"BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis."Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.

IchosePaulRevere'shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(銀匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse'smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;,andunlikelytobeanyoneelse'schoice.

Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere'shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedoutahalf-dozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.

WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,"Great.Now,writeitagain."Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinally

finished,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.

梗概：一名以英語為第二語言的中學(xué)生在老師的鼓勵下參加寫作比賽并通過努力取得優(yōu)異成績的故事。

續(xù)寫第1段：在快忘記這個比賽的時候，傳來了消息，

續(xù)寫第2段：頒完獎后去了老師辦公室。試題分析和解題策略-

新課標卷讀后續(xù)寫所選文章講述一名英語為第二語言的中學(xué)生在老師的鼓勵下參加寫作比賽并通過努力取得優(yōu)異成績的故事，要求考生根據(jù)給定情節(jié)續(xù)寫兩段內(nèi)容。這些精心設(shè)計的試題情境使寫作形式更加靈活，更加強調(diào)對應(yīng)用性和創(chuàng)造性能力的考查，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生在語言學(xué)習(xí)過程中注重辨析語言和文化中的具體現(xiàn)象，從自己的視角正確評判周圍事物和不同觀念，創(chuàng)造性地表達自己的觀點和想法。第一段的續(xù)寫應(yīng)該呈現(xiàn)作者獲獎，考生的故事精彩程度與三個因素有關(guān)：與閱讀文章的關(guān)聯(lián)度、故事的合理性和曲折性、語言地道和豐滿的表達力。第二段的續(xù)寫側(cè)重與老師的互動，精彩之處應(yīng)該是主題的升華。主題可以是對于自己劣勢的新認知，比如愛上了寫作、克服了讀寫能力障礙，也可以是精神層面，付出必有回報、走出安逸圈等，只要合情合理，充滿正能量即可。下水文1Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Iwonthefirstplace!IjustcouldhardlybelievethatitwasIthatseizedthegold!Asenseofgaietyswallowedme.ExcitementchokedmywordswhenIwastoldtotakepartintheawardceremony.Myheartpoundedwildlywhilethepresenterwaspraisingmywork--humorous,detailedandextraordinary.Itookadeepbreathandsteppedforwardthestage,asifthehorseeventuallyarrivedintheLexington.Thunderousapplausewitnessedmyleavingfromthegloriousstage.Withtheprizeinmyhands,IfeltIwasintheseventhheaven.

Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Onopeningthedoor,mysocialstudiesteachergavemeabearhugandexclaimedindelight,“congratulations!Welldone,myboy!”Pattingmyshoulder,Hefondlytoldmethatheletmeenterthiscontestforthesakeofboostingmyconfidenceandtremendoussenseofachievementofwriting.Heutteredthathealwayslaughedafterreadingmyarticlejustbecauseofthehumorofmywords.Thankstohim,Iamnowafamouswriterwhopossessmanyfans.Iteventuallydawnedonmethatonceyoukeepgoinglikethishorse,youwilleventuallyarriveatyourpicturesquedestination!下水文2

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.ThethrillingnewsthatIwonfirstplaceandtheawardpresentationwouldbeheldthatafternoon.Excitedanddelighted,Ifeltmychestcouldhardlyholdmyracingheartwhichwasbouncingwildly.Itwastheexcruciatingwaitthatmadethatmorningaslongasayear,butfinallycametheawardwhichIowedtomyteacherthoroughly.

Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

Ihuggedhimwithallmystrength,tearsfloodingdownmycheeks.BeforeIannouncedthenews,hehadrealizedeverythingandscreamedastringofmerrycongratulations.Iextendedmygratitudeforhisencouragement,withoutwhichIwouldn’thavebeentheonewholaughedlast.Nevertheless,whathesaidthatdayshapedmeintowhatIamtoday:“Pursueyourdreamwithperseverance,andyouwillreachthebrightend.下水文3

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.

IwasinformedthatIhadgotthefirstprizeinthewritingcontest.Icouldn'tbelievemyears."Wasitme?thewinner?"Ithoughttomyself.Asenseofsurpriseandexcitementwellingupinmyheartsurgedthroughme.Threedayslatercametheawardpresentation.Standingattheplatform,Iheldtheprizemedal.Tearswithdelightrollingdownmyface,Icouldn'twaittosharethehonorwithmysocialstudiesteacher.

Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

Comingintotheoffice,Icaughtthebrightsmileonhisface."Congratulations！Goodboy,youhavedoneagoodjob.I'mquiteproudofyou."Hepattedmyshoulderandsaid."Ifithadn'tbeenyourencouragementandsupport,Iwouldn'thavemadesuchagreatachievement.Themedalgoestoyou."Iclutchedmyteachertightly.Fromthenon,Ibegantofallinlovewithwriting.Iowedthistomyteacher,whoisthebeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.下水文4Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.OnlearningthenewsthatIwonfirstplace,aflushofastonishmentsweptoverme.WasitI,whowaspooratEnglishanddidn’tlovewriting,thatwonfirstplaceinthewritingcontest?Itwastoogoodtobetrue!Andthesamewastrueformyclassmates.Theystaredatmeindisbeliefwiththeirjawsdropping.Incontrast,myteachertookitforgrantedandlaughedloudagain.Beforelong,anawardpresentationwasheld.NotuntiltheprizewaspresentedtomedidIbelieveit.

Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Totellthetruth,Ihadmydoubts.Lookingintomyeyes,myteacher,whoappearedtoknowwhatIwantedtosay,saidinasoftvoice,“Don’tjudgeabookbyitscover.Onlythroughdevotion,diligenceandperseverancecanyoufindyourself.Yourstoryisoriginal,creativeandinspiring,isn’tit？”Inoddedmyhead,tearswellingupinmyeyes.Fromthenon,Ibecameaddictedtowritingandbeganthejourneyofdiscoveringmyselfinavarietyoffields.Ifrequentlythoughtifithadnotbeenformysocialstudiesteacher,whatwouldIbelike？

下水文5Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.WordcamethatIhadwontheawardofExcellence.ThoughIdidn’tanticipateit,ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughme.Iwasinformedthatanawardpresentationwouldbeheldnextweek.Ijumpedatthechanceandmadefullpreparations,knowingthiswouldbeaninvaluablechanceformetoencounterotherwriters.Icouldn’tconcealmyexcitement.

Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.SothrillingIwasthatIcouldn’twaittosharethegoodnewswithmyteacher.Withtearsstreamingdownmycheeks,Isaidtohim,“Iwouldn’thaveachievedthiswithoutyourcontinuoushelpandencouragement”Wordsweretoopaletodescribemygratitudetohim.Eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears,hesteppedforwardandhuggedmegently,“Iknowfromthebeginningthatyouwillmakeit!”Welookedateachother,ourexpressionsofunderstandingandsupportmorepersuasivethanwords.Nowthisexperienceisstillfreshinmymind.NotonlydidIenhancemywritingcompetence,butIunderstandaboldattemptishalfsuccess,andtheobstaclesyouencounteredwillbethebadgeontheroadtosuccess.下水文6

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Iwastoldmystorywonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontest.andthatIwastoparticipateintheawardpresentationinthecityhallthenextday.Hearingthat,Icouldhardlyconcealmyexcitement.Iimmediatelygotdowntopreparingfortheceremony.Thenextday,Presentatthe