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"Ontheadditiontothemethodofmicroscopicresearchbyanewwayofproducingcolour-contrastbetweenanobjectanditsbackgoundorbetweendefinitepartsoftheobjectitself"標題太過冗長，沒有提供足量的信息，也沒有專業(yè)術(shù)語。與其說是標題，不如說是摘要，但遺憾的是，也不是一篇好的摘要TECH&BELIEFContactUs

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標題適宜長度：普通論文一般為10～15個漢字或12～22個英文單詞，學位論文可稍長一些。美國《新英格蘭醫(yī)學雜志》在稿約中規(guī)定：“必要時給目錄寫一個限制在75個字母之間的短題”。若能用1行文字表達，就盡量不要用2行（超過2行有可能會削弱讀者的印象）TECH&BELIEFContactUs

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DiscussiononSeveralAcademicProblemsintheBookTheModernHistoryofChinesePaperMoney

《中國近代紙幣史》中幾個學術(shù)問題的探討。SeveralQuestionsinModernHistoryofChineseBanknotes

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為確保題名的含義準確，應盡量避免使用非定量的、含義不明的詞，如"rapid"，"new"等；并力求用詞具有專指性，恰當反映所研究的范圍和深度。SuccinationofKeap1andActivationofNrf2-DependentAntioxidantPathwaysinFH-De?cientPapillaryRenalCellCarcinomaType2.（這里專指二型）AndrogenReceptorGeneExpressioninProstateCancerisDirectly（直接抑制，準確性）SuppressedbytheAndrogenReceptorThroughRecruitmentofLysine-Speci?cDemethylase1TECH&BELIEFContactUs

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ImportanceofSyntax標題結(jié)構(gòu)用詞特點詞序問題TECH&BELIEFContactUs

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學術(shù)文章的標題主要有三種結(jié)構(gòu)：名詞性標題(包括動名詞)介詞性標題名詞+介詞性標題TECH&BELIEFContactUs

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標題中較少出現(xiàn)動詞，如果出現(xiàn)動詞也多為分詞、動名詞的形式。ALargeIntergenicNoncodingRNAInduced（過去分詞）byp53MediatesGlobalGeneRepressioninthep53Response.Virus-inducedgenesilencing（動名詞）inplantsTECH&BELIEFContactUs

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Thetitleofapaperisalabel.Itnormallyisnotasentence.由于題名比句子簡短,并且無需主、謂、賓,因此詞序就也變得尤為重要。如果詞語間的修飾關(guān)系使用不當,就會影響讀者正確理解題名的真實含意。FaultywordorderTECH&BELIEFContactUs

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resectionsurvivalrate.這種簡單的名詞堆砌很容易引起歧義Factorsinfluencingsurvivalrateafterresectionofprimarylivercancer.TECH&BELIEFContactUs

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在題名中使用垂懸分詞（如using等）時應十分小心。其潛在的主語應是研究者,而不是研究對象。Isolationofantigensfrommonkeys

usingcomplement-fixationtechniques.猴子使用了補體結(jié)合技術(shù)。Usingcomplement-fixationtechniquesinisolationofantigensfrommonkeys。利用補體結(jié)合技術(shù)分離猴抗原。TECH&BELIEFContactUs

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會展示強烈的主張。Thep21Cdk-interactingproteinCip1isapotentinhibitorofG1cyclin-dependentkinasesp21Cdk作用蛋白是G1細胞周期依賴性蛋白激酶的強抑制劑。Cell199375(4):805-816被引3247次.TECH&BELIEFContactUs

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題目應該能夠反映出文章所闡述的側(cè)重點：Validationandcomparisonofmodelstopredictnon-sentinellymphnodemetastasisinbreastcancerpatients.側(cè)重于表明研究目的和內(nèi)容研究結(jié)論TECH&BELIEFContactUs

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假設(shè)：在一個新概念產(chǎn)生的初期，文章的標題傾向于用全稱。隨著概念的普及，在標題中使用縮略語的比例會上升。TECH&BELIEFContactUs

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HangingTitle內(nèi)容層次很多的情況下，如果難以簡短化，最好采用主、副題名相結(jié)合的方法，副題名起補充、闡明作用，可起到很好的效果。Importanceofreplication